Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91HV5AX3VFWD5WF2HAP24F

Run Details

Duration:
56.7s
Cost:
$0.002772
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the asphalt, turning the Soho streets into a slick, obsidian mirror. Harlow Quinn pushed through the deluge, her heavy coat absorbing the cold weight of the London night. Her breath hitched, sharp and rhythmic, as she tracked the erratic silhouette darting ahead. Herrera kept his head down, shoulders hunched, his pace desperate enough to rattle the shadows. "Stop running, Tomás. The badge isn't for show." The detective’s voice cut through the hum of the city, but the man didn't flinch. He swerved into a narrow alleyway, his boots splashing in viscous puddles. Harlow tightened her grip on her sidearm, the cold steel biting into her palm. She matched his speed, her stride mirroring the military precision that defined her eighteen years on the force. She watched the way he favored his left arm—a protective instinct shielding that jagged scar—and cursed the distance growing between them. They surged past the flickering green neon of The Raven’s Nest. The bar’s light cast long, distorted shapes across the brickwork. Herrera didn't look back. He scrambled over a rusted chain-link fence, landing on the other side with a muffled grunt. Harlow crested the barrier a heartbeat later, landing in a crouch as the scent of ozone and damp earth assaulted her senses. He led her toward Camden, away from the warmth of the pubs and into the skeletal remains of the industrial district. The suspect slowed, his movements erratic, like a moth pulled toward a light he didn't understand. He reached into his pocket and produced something small, white, and unmistakably brittle. "You’re entering a cycle you can’t arrest your way out of." Herrera stood at the mouth of an abandoned Tube station entrance, the iron gates mangled and peeled back like a rusted wound. He turned, his face illuminated by a distant streetlamp reveal. His brown eyes were wide, darting toward the darkness of the subterranean stairs. "I've seen the files, Tomás. I know about the patients. I know about the 'unauthorized' care you're providing." "The files don't account for what breathes in the dark, Detective. You follow me down there, and you stop being a cop. You become prey." He didn't wait for a rebuttal. He pressed the bone token against the iron grating, and the stale air suddenly shifted, smelling of metallic decay and ancient, suffocating spice. The darkness beneath the stairs seemed to pulse, a living thing retracting its tongue. Herrera vanished into the throat of the station, his footfalls swallowed instantly by the depth. Harlow gripped the rusted railing, the iron cold and biting against her skin. Below, the silence wasn't empty; it hummed with the scrape of unseen movement and the low, dissonant chanting of things that had no business walking on two legs. She glanced at the worn leather watch on her wrist. The second hand ticked with agonizing slowness. Behind her, the city was mundane, safe, and governed by the laws she understood. Before her, the Veil Market waited—a sprawl of forbidden commerce and impossible architectures that defied the physics of the Metropolitan Police rulebook. "Morris never came back from the depths, did he?" She threw the question into the dark, wanting the confirmation that would shatter her resolve. "He saw the market. He realized that the badge is just a thin layer of paint over a crack in the world." The man's voice echoed back, hollow and fading, as if he were already blocks away in some impossible expanse. Harlow looked back at the street. The rain continued to fall, steady and indifferent, masking the sins of the city above. She stared down into the shaft. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm that felt more like a warning than a pulse. This was the place that claimed her partner three years ago. The reports remained sealed, the logs redacted, the truth buried somewhere in the wet, suffocating gloom of tunnels that shouldn't exist. She took a step down. The metal stairs vibrated, shedding flakes of rust that drifted into the black like snow. "I'm not here for the law, Tomás. I'm here for the truth you’re hiding behind that saint’s trinket around your neck." "The truth cuts deeper than a knife, Detective. Are you prepared to bleed in places no surgeon can reach?" She didn't answer. She pulled her torch, the beam cutting a violent white hole in the suffocating black. The architecture shifted, the familiar tiled walls of the London Underground warping into jagged, carved obsidian blocks. The air grew thicker, heavy with the scent of sulfur and old, stagnant blood. She was descending into a space that existed between heartbeats. Every muscle in her body screamed for her to turn, to run back to the surface and bury herself in the mundane grind of paperwork and patrol cars. But the memory of her partner’s empty office, the way the light hit the dust on his chair, pushed her forward. She reached the landing, where the tunnel widened into a cavernous expanse. The space stretched wide, glowing with the luminescence of trapped ghosts and lanterns burning with violet fire. Stalls lined the jagged walls, selling wares that pulsed with their own rhythmic light—vials of shimmering liquid, masks carved from bone, and obsidian blades that hummed with a low, predatory threat. The crowd was a blur of shadows and shifting features. Some looked like people, others wore hoods that hid entire landscapes of twisted anatomy. They moved with a fluidity that shouldn't be human, their voices a discordant symphony of languages she didn't recognize. Harlow kept her finger resting against the trigger guard of her weapon, the cold weight of it providing the only anchor to her own identity. She spotted a flicker of movement near a stall draped in moth-eaten velvet. Herrera stood hunched over, his hands trembling as he bartered with a figure whose outline shimmered like heat haze. She moved through the throng, her presence like a stone dropped in a pond, parting the creatures that drifted through the aisles. They didn't strike, but they watched, their eyes wide and lidless, tracking her progress with the clinical interest of predators measuring the worth of a stray. "Leave the goods, Herrera." She stepped into the glow of the violet lantern. The figure behind the stall tilted its head, a motion that sounded like grinding glass. Herrera froze, his hand pulling away from a small, pulsating satchel. "You really don't know when to stop, do you?" "I know when I'm being led into a slaughterhouse. Where is he?" Herrera didn't look at her. He kept his gaze locked on the shimmering entity, his face pale, his breath rattling in his chest. The entity let out a sound—a soft, wet clicking that seemed to vibrate directly inside Harlow's jaw. "He isn't in the market anymore, Detective. He chose the bargain. You’re just looking for scraps in a graveyard that has already forgotten his name." Harlow stepped closer, the pressure in the room intensifying until the air felt solid. The market around them went quiet, the stalls ceasing their hum, every creature turning its gaze toward the intruder in the trench coat. She felt the weight of a thousand secrets pressing against her skin, the crushing reality of a world she had spent nearly two decades denying. "Tell me where he went, or this deal ends with you in cuffs." She reached out, grabbing his sleeve. The fabric felt wrong—not like wool, but like dried, brittle skin. Herrera turned, his warm brown eyes now darkened into pitch-black voids. He leaned in, his voice a whisper that felt like a serrated edge against her ear. "The market doesn't trade in information, Harlow. It only trades in debts. And you just walked onto the floor with a massive one."
created_at"2026-05-10T13:34:43.892Z" 5/10/2026, 1:34:43 PM
model"google/gemini-3.1-flash-lite-20260507"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency539
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time56525
tokens_prompt1140
tokens_completion2000
native_tokens_prompt1042
native_tokens_completion1674
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"STOP"
service_tier"standard"
usage0.0027715
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"237af107-d2e9-46c7-b146-c74d75980dee"
id"dIkAatO4BrGJz7IP2OP1oQQ"
is_byokfalse
latency539
model_permaslug"google/gemini-3.1-flash-lite-20260507"
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1778420083-APRfzzRTHjkW3lP5DzBN"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1778420083-eIycL1N93LsjIV505Ou2"
upstream_id"dIkAatO4BrGJz7IP2OP1oQQ"
total_cost0.0027715
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"symphony"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"velvet"
count1
15
word"shimmered"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"depths"
6"resolve"
7"echoed"
8"gloom"
9"vibrated"
10"familiar"
11"pulsed"
12"symphony"
13"flicker"
14"velvet"
15"shimmered"
16"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
82.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1297
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1078
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn1
London2
Raven1
Nest1
Camden1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Underground1
Harlow8
Herrera8
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Market"
3"Underground"
4"Harlow"
5"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.75% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like people, others wore hoods tha"
1"sounded like grinding glass"
2"clicking that seemed to vibrate directly inside Harlow's jaw"
3"felt like a serrated edge against her e"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.771
wordCount1297
matches
0"not like wool, but like dried, brittle skin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean40.53
std28.39
cv0.7
sampleLengths
060
18
280
363
450
511
645
718
825
958
1094
119
1215
1322
1496
1520
1621
1719
1887
1981
2068
2180
224
2335
249
2512
2640
2725
2862
2913
3044
3123
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was descending"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences85
ratio0.071
matches
0"She watched the way he favored his left arm—a protective instinct shielding that jagged scar—and cursed the distance growing between them."
1"Below, the silence wasn't empty; it hummed with the scrape of unseen movement and the low, dissonant chanting of things that had no business walking on two legs."
2"Before her, the Veil Market waited—a sprawl of forbidden commerce and impossible architectures that defied the physics of the Metropolitan Police rulebook."
3"Stalls lined the jagged walls, selling wares that pulsed with their own rhythmic light—vials of shimmering liquid, masks carved from bone, and obsidian blades that hummed with a low, predatory threat."
4"The entity let out a sound—a soft, wet clicking that seemed to vibrate directly inside Harlow's jaw."
5"The fabric felt wrong—not like wool, but like dried, brittle skin."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"own rhythmic light—vials"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017479300827966882
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005519779208831647
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean15.26
std6.19
cv0.405
sampleLengths
014
117
214
315
48
515
612
714
818
921
1011
1110
124
1316
1422
1521
1616
1713
1811
1922
2010
2113
2218
2325
246
2523
2614
2715
2813
2928
3010
317
3214
3322
349
3515
3622
3719
386
3915
406
4118
4211
4321
445
4515
4621
4719
483
4915
45.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.27058823529411763
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences71
matches
0"Her breath hitched, sharp and"
1"He swerved into a narrow"
2"She matched his speed, her"
3"She watched the way he"
4"They surged past the flickering"
5"He scrambled over a rusted"
6"He led her toward Camden,"
7"He reached into his pocket"
8"He turned, his face illuminated"
9"His brown eyes were wide,"
10"He didn't wait for a"
11"He pressed the bone token"
12"She glanced at the worn"
13"She threw the question into"
14"She stared down into the"
15"Her heart hammered against her"
16"She took a step down."
17"She didn't answer."
18"She pulled her torch, the"
19"She was descending into a"
ratio0.423
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rain lashed against the asphalt,"
1"Harlow Quinn pushed through the"
2"Her breath hitched, sharp and"
3"Herrera kept his head down,"
4"The detective’s voice cut through"
5"He swerved into a narrow"
6"Harlow tightened her grip on"
7"She matched his speed, her"
8"She watched the way he"
9"They surged past the flickering"
10"The bar’s light cast long,"
11"Herrera didn't look back."
12"He scrambled over a rusted"
13"Harlow crested the barrier a"
14"He led her toward Camden,"
15"The suspect slowed, his movements"
16"He reached into his pocket"
17"Herrera stood at the mouth"
18"He turned, his face illuminated"
19"His brown eyes were wide,"
ratio0.944
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Before her, the Veil Market"
ratio0.014
49.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She matched his speed, her stride mirroring the military precision that defined her eighteen years on the force."
1"Below, the silence wasn't empty; it hummed with the scrape of unseen movement and the low, dissonant chanting of things that had no business walking on two legs…"
2"Before her, the Veil Market waited—a sprawl of forbidden commerce and impossible architectures that defied the physics of the Metropolitan Police rulebook."
3"The man's voice echoed back, hollow and fading, as if he were already blocks away in some impossible expanse."
4"The reports remained sealed, the logs redacted, the truth buried somewhere in the wet, suffocating gloom of tunnels that shouldn't exist."
5"Stalls lined the jagged walls, selling wares that pulsed with their own rhythmic light—vials of shimmering liquid, masks carved from bone, and obsidian blades t…"
6"They moved with a fluidity that shouldn't be human, their voices a discordant symphony of languages she didn't recognize."
7"He leaned in, his voice a whisper that felt like a serrated edge against her ear."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.8289%