Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91Q7M7Q5GH9GHQ2DHMDDDM

Run Details

Duration:
9.2s
Cost:
$0.002719
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy deadbolt slid back with a metallic screech that echoed down the hallway. I pulled the door open, ready to hit whoever had been pounding on my wood for the last three minutes with my heavy delivery flashlight. Lucien stood there, looking far too composed for someone who had just threatened the structural integrity of my front door. He wore a crisp, tailored charcoal suit that made my oversized hoodie feel like rags. His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—swept over the cramped space of the flat with the detached interest of an appraiser before landing squarely on my face. "You look like you've been sleeping in an alley," he said. "And you look like you're lost. The city's upscale district is miles west, Lucien." I didn't move from the threshold. Behind him, the dimly lit stairwell smelled of old dust and the lingering spice from the curry house below. Before him, my life—books piled on the floor, research notes taped to the walls, and Ptolemy the tabby cat weaving dangerously between my ankles—stood as a chaotic testament to the last six months of avoiding his orbit. He didn't wait for an invite. He stepped inside, his polished oxfords clicking against the floorboards, and the room felt a sudden, sharp lack of oxygen. He held his ivory-handled cane casually, the silver pommel catching the yellow light from my desk lamp. "I assume you're finished with your little sabbatical?" He glanced at a stack of university transcripts near the door, his lip quirking in that familiar, condescending way that used to drive me to distraction. "I haven't gone anywhere. I just stopped answering your calls." "Clearly." He lifted his gaze, meeting my bright blue eyes with an intensity that made the chill in the room feel entirely internal. "The silence was noted. Quite tedious, actually." "I have a job, Lucien. I deliver food to people who don't ask me to hunt down cursed objects in the middle of the night." I stepped back, finally giving him space, though my hand tightened around the flashlight. He leaned against the cluttered bookshelf, ignoring the way a stack of papers slid precariously under his shoulder. He looked like an ink-wash painting dropped into a bargain bin. "And yet, you’re still living above a bar, smelling of cheap takeout and fear." "It's a living." "It's a trap." He pushed off the shelf, closing the distance between us in two measured strides. He was taller than I remembered, his presence filling the gaps between my furniture like rising mercury. My heart thudded against my ribs—a frantic, uneven rhythm. I shifted my weight, feeling the small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist pulse with a phantom ache, a reminder of the night we’d barely escaped the Avaros rift. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Brendan Carter made an inquiry," he murmured, his voice dropping an octave. I stiffened. My father hadn't spoken to me in months, not since I left Cardiff. Hearing his name on Lucien’s lips felt like a physical invasion. "My father doesn't know you." "Your father doesn't know many things." Lucien reached out, his gloved thumb tracing the edge of my collarbone before stopping at the hollow of my throat. The contact was electric, a searing bolt of memory that bypassed my brain and settled deep in my stomach. "He is terrified for his daughter. He thinks she has gone missing. I told him she was merely... difficult." "I am not missing. I am hiding. There's a difference." "Hiding requires a lack of witnesses. I am a remarkably persistent witness." He moved closer, his scent hitting me—cold steel, expensive cologne, and the sharp, ozonic tang of the supernatural realm he called home. He was a creature of thresholds and secrets, and every time I let him near, I felt my walls crumbling. I ducked under his arm, distancing myself by the width of the kitchen counter. "Evan is still out there, isn't he? That's why you're here. You’re not checking on me. You’re checking on your leverage." Lucien tapped his cane against the floor. A sharp, rhythmic *clack-clack* that mimicked the beat of my pulse. "Evan is a nuisance. A minor ripple in the fabric. I’m here because the ripple is widening." "And you need a human with out-of-the-box instincts to plug the hole." "I need someone who isn't afraid to get their hands dirty," he countered, stepping toward me again, his eyes darkening. He caught my wrist, his fingers cool against my skin, and pulled me into the small, narrow space between the counter and the door. "You haven't been 'delivered' in weeks, Rory. The shop owner says you walked away from your shift." "I quit." "Because you were being watched." It wasn't a question. I didn't answer. I couldn't. I looked at the ivory handle of his cane, imagining the thin, razor-sharp blade hidden inside. "I have a lead on a package," he said, his breath hitching just enough to be noticeable. "A box stolen from the vault in Marseille. It’s leaking energy. The kind of energy that attracts things far worse than your ex-boyfriend." "Find it yourself." "I can't. It's keyed to a bloodline signature." He leaned in closer, his lips inches from my ear, his tone dropping to a whisper that made tiny hairs on my neck stand up. "Your bloodline, Aurora." The room seemed to tilt. I looked up, caught in the duality of his eyes—the amber fire and the black void. The history between us was a tangled, thorny mess of attraction and survival, a cycle of rescues and betrayals that had left me perpetually breathless. "Why my blood?" "Because you were never just a delivery girl from Cardiff." He pulled back, his fingers sliding from my wrist to tuck a stray black hair behind my ear. His touch lingered, a dangerous promise mapped in skin. "You were always the lock. I’m simply the one trying to make sure the key doesn't snap." "You used me," I whispered. My voice sounded thin, devoid of the sharp edge I usually carried like a shield. "I preserved you." He drew the cane upward, the blade clicking outward with a soft, ominous rasp. "And we are going to find out who else knows what you are." A sudden, sharp thud echoed from the hallway outside. Not a knock this time, but the sound of wood splintering under the weight of a shoulder. The heavy deadbolt shook, the metal frame groaning as the door buckled inward. Lucien swiveled, his body going rigid, the sword held low and steady in his hand. He wasn't looking at me anymore. He was staring at the door, where the shadows in the hallway seemed to be pooling, thick and viscous, pressing against the cracks in the wood. "They're early," he remarked, the predatory stillness of his posture giving nothing away. I grabbed the heavy crowbar I kept behind the door, my knuckles turning white. The wood cracked again, a jagged splinter flying across the room and embedding itself in my desk. "How many?" I asked, shifting my stance. Lucien’s smile was sharp, devoid of humor, and entirely terrifying. "Enough to make you wish you’d answered my calls." The door frame gave way with a deafening, final roar of splintering timber. The light from the hallway died, plunged into a sudden, suffocating darkness that spilled into the room like black ink, and the first shadow stepped through the frame.
created_at"2026-05-10T13:37:40.503Z" 5/10/2026, 1:37:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"I stepped back [back]"
1"He pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.105
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"testament"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pounding"
2"chaotic"
3"testament"
4"familiar"
5"intensity"
6"chill"
7"silence"
8"measured"
9"weight"
10"pulse"
11"reminder"
12"tracing"
13"electric"
14"searing"
15"stomach"
16"rhythmic"
17"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
49.18% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1241
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack-clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount894
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy1
Avaros1
Cardiff1
Lucien6
persons
0"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like an ink-wash painting dropped"
1"felt like a physical invasion"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.806
wordCount1241
matches
0"Not a knock this time, but the sound of wood splintering under the weight of a shoulder"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.86
std19.37
cv0.671
sampleLengths
039
161
211
314
462
543
634
710
830
939
1043
113
123
1369
145
1512
1631
1764
1810
1912
2042
2135
2235
2312
2461
252
265
2725
2840
293
3036
3146
323
3354
3420
3530
3639
3747
3813
3931
407
4119
4241
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs148
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences85
ratio0.059
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—swept over the cramped space of the flat with the detached interest of an appraiser before landing squarely on my face."
1"Before him, my life—books piled on the floor, research notes taped to the walls, and Ptolemy the tabby cat weaving dangerously between my ankles—stood as a chaotic testament to the last six months of avoiding his orbit."
2"My heart thudded against my ribs—a frantic, uneven rhythm."
3"He moved closer, his scent hitting me—cold steel, expensive cologne, and the sharp, ozonic tang of the supernatural realm he called home."
4"I looked up, caught in the duality of his eyes—the amber fire and the black void."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"thin, razor-sharp blade"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.030939226519337018
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012154696132596685
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.6
std8.46
cv0.579
sampleLengths
014
125
220
315
426
511
614
76
819
937
106
1120
1217
1334
1410
1523
167
1739
1818
1911
2014
213
223
2314
2417
259
2629
275
2812
292
3013
3111
325
3326
3419
3519
3610
3712
3822
3920
4014
4121
427
4311
4417
4512
4620
4724
4817
492
34.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences57
matches
0"I pulled the door open,"
1"He wore a crisp, tailored"
2"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one"
3"I didn't move from the"
4"He didn't wait for an"
5"He stepped inside, his polished"
6"He held his ivory-handled cane"
7"He glanced at a stack"
8"He lifted his gaze, meeting"
9"I stepped back, finally giving"
10"He leaned against the cluttered"
11"He looked like an ink-wash"
12"He pushed off the shelf,"
13"He was taller than I"
14"My heart thudded against my"
15"I shifted my weight, feeling"
16"he murmured, his voice dropping"
17"My father hadn't spoken to"
18"He moved closer, his scent"
19"He was a creature of"
ratio0.667
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences57
matches
0"The heavy deadbolt slid back"
1"I pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien stood there, looking far"
3"He wore a crisp, tailored"
4"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one"
5"I didn't move from the"
6"He didn't wait for an"
7"He stepped inside, his polished"
8"He held his ivory-handled cane"
9"He glanced at a stack"
10"He lifted his gaze, meeting"
11"I stepped back, finally giving"
12"He leaned against the cluttered"
13"He looked like an ink-wash"
14"He pushed off the shelf,"
15"He was taller than I"
16"My heart thudded against my"
17"I shifted my weight, feeling"
18"he murmured, his voice dropping"
19"My father hadn't spoken to"
ratio0.93
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Before him, my life—books piled"
ratio0.018
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien stood there, looking far too composed for someone who had just threatened the structural integrity of my front door."
1"He wore a crisp, tailored charcoal suit that made my oversized hoodie feel like rags."
2"He was taller than I remembered, his presence filling the gaps between my furniture like rising mercury."
3"The contact was electric, a searing bolt of memory that bypassed my brain and settled deep in my stomach."
4"The history between us was a tangled, thorny mess of attraction and survival, a cycle of rescues and betrayals that had left me perpetually breathless."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he murmured, his voice dropping an octave"
1"he said, his breath hitching just enough to be noticeable"
2"He drew, the blade clicking outward with a soft, ominous rasp"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.105
72.8248%