| 94.74% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "He pulled back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "pounding" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "testament" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "measured" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "electric" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "rhythmic" | | 17 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1241 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 894 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.67 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Lucien | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 55.66% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like an ink-wash painting dropped" | | 1 | "felt like a physical invasion" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.806 | | wordCount | 1241 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a knock this time, but the sound of wood splintering under the weight of a shoulder" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 28.86 | | std | 19.37 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was staring" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—swept over the cramped space of the flat with the detached interest of an appraiser before landing squarely on my face." | | 1 | "Before him, my life—books piled on the floor, research notes taped to the walls, and Ptolemy the tabby cat weaving dangerously between my ankles—stood as a chaotic testament to the last six months of avoiding his orbit." | | 2 | "My heart thudded against my ribs—a frantic, uneven rhythm." | | 3 | "He moved closer, his scent hitting me—cold steel, expensive cologne, and the sharp, ozonic tang of the supernatural realm he called home." | | 4 | "I looked up, caught in the duality of his eyes—the amber fire and the black void." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 905 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "thin, razor-sharp blade" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.030939226519337018 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012154696132596685 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 14.6 | | std | 8.46 | | cv | 0.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 34.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.29411764705882354 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "I pulled the door open," | | 1 | "He wore a crisp, tailored" | | 2 | "His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one" | | 3 | "I didn't move from the" | | 4 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 5 | "He stepped inside, his polished" | | 6 | "He held his ivory-handled cane" | | 7 | "He glanced at a stack" | | 8 | "He lifted his gaze, meeting" | | 9 | "I stepped back, finally giving" | | 10 | "He leaned against the cluttered" | | 11 | "He looked like an ink-wash" | | 12 | "He pushed off the shelf," | | 13 | "He was taller than I" | | 14 | "My heart thudded against my" | | 15 | "I shifted my weight, feeling" | | 16 | "he murmured, his voice dropping" | | 17 | "My father hadn't spoken to" | | 18 | "He moved closer, his scent" | | 19 | "He was a creature of" |
| | ratio | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "I pulled the door open," | | 2 | "Lucien stood there, looking far" | | 3 | "He wore a crisp, tailored" | | 4 | "His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one" | | 5 | "I didn't move from the" | | 6 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 7 | "He stepped inside, his polished" | | 8 | "He held his ivory-handled cane" | | 9 | "He glanced at a stack" | | 10 | "He lifted his gaze, meeting" | | 11 | "I stepped back, finally giving" | | 12 | "He leaned against the cluttered" | | 13 | "He looked like an ink-wash" | | 14 | "He pushed off the shelf," | | 15 | "He was taller than I" | | 16 | "My heart thudded against my" | | 17 | "I shifted my weight, feeling" | | 18 | "he murmured, his voice dropping" | | 19 | "My father hadn't spoken to" |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Before him, my life—books piled" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 43.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien stood there, looking far too composed for someone who had just threatened the structural integrity of my front door." | | 1 | "He wore a crisp, tailored charcoal suit that made my oversized hoodie feel like rags." | | 2 | "He was taller than I remembered, his presence filling the gaps between my furniture like rising mercury." | | 3 | "The contact was electric, a searing bolt of memory that bypassed my brain and settled deep in my stomach." | | 4 | "The history between us was a tangled, thorny mess of attraction and survival, a cycle of rescues and betrayals that had left me perpetually breathless." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "he murmured, his voice dropping an octave" | | 1 | "he said, his breath hitching just enough to be noticeable" | | 2 | "He drew, the blade clicking outward with a soft, ominous rasp" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "I whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.132 | | leniency | 0.263 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |