| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "flicked" | | 16 | "vibrated" | | 17 | "oppressive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 21 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1081 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.74% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1010 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 15 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | globalScore | 0.757 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 28.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like bone striking stone" | | 1 | "sounded like dry leaves scraping on paveme" | | 2 | "as if feeling for a curtain" | | 3 | "felt like wet parchment" |
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| 14.99% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.85 | | wordCount | 1081 | | matches | | 0 | "Not one source, but three" | | 1 | "not fabric, but layers of shed skin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 20.02 | | std | 14.05 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 48 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | |
| 51.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "They didn't bend under her weight; they snapped with the sound of breaking glass." | | 1 | "The figure didn't walk; it glided, the hem of its garment skimming the flowers without disturbing a single petal." | | 2 | "The heat was no longer a warning; it was a beacon." | | 3 | "The entity didn't recoil; it absorbed the blow, its yellow eyes widening." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1013 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "dense, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.028627838104639685 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008884501480750246 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 8.65 | | std | 4.76 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 28.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 27 | | diversityRatio | 0.232 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 31.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a whisper brushed her" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the Heartstone Pendant." | | 1 | "They didn't bend under her" | | 2 | "She scanned the treeline." | | 3 | "She pivoted, her blue eyes" | | 4 | "She backed away, her gaze" | | 5 | "It vanished the moment she" | | 6 | "It came from directly behind" | | 7 | "It sounded like bone striking" | | 8 | "She stepped backward, her heel" | | 9 | "She stumbled, her palm slapping" | | 10 | "She scrambled backward, her breath" | | 11 | "She didn't see a face," | | 12 | "It resonated inside Aurora's skull." | | 13 | "She scrambled to her feet," | | 14 | "It didn't reach for her." | | 15 | "It reached for the air" | | 16 | "Its face remained a blur" | | 17 | "It leaned down, its jaw" | | 18 | "They drifted, closing the circle" | | 19 | "It dropped from the branch," |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crossed the boundary of" | | 1 | "The humid air of the" | | 2 | "The silence settled over the" | | 3 | "She gripped the Heartstone Pendant." | | 4 | "The crimson gem pressed against" | | 5 | "The words sounded flat." | | 6 | "The air swallowed the sound" | | 7 | "Aurora stepped deeper into the" | | 8 | "They didn't bend under her" | | 9 | "A sharp crack echoed from" | | 10 | "She scanned the treeline." | | 11 | "Shadows stretched long and jagged" | | 12 | "The pendant warmed." | | 13 | "The pulse quickened." | | 14 | "Silence returned, but it felt" | | 15 | "The air grew dense, pressing" | | 16 | "A wet, sliding sound drifted" | | 17 | "She pivoted, her blue eyes" | | 18 | "A branch swayed." | | 19 | "She backed away, her gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.943 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.07% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure didn't walk; it glided, the hem of its garment skimming the flowers without disturbing a single petal." | | 1 | "Aurora swung her arm, her fist connecting with something that felt like wet parchment." | | 2 | "The trees seemed to lean inward, their branches twisting like skeletal fingers reaching for her throat." | | 3 | "The Heartstone responded to her terror, erupting in a blinding flash of crimson that pushed the fog back ten feet." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |