| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Herrera said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 89.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.03% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "sinister" | | 5 | "raced" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "t with fear" | | 1 | "was terrified" |
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| 69.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1407 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1351 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 3 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Met | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Seville | 1 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Saint" | | 6 | "Christopher" | | 7 | "Tomás" | | 8 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Metropolitan" | | 2 | "Police" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Seville" |
| | globalScore | 0.945 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it belonged to a defunct ware" | | 1 | "parchment that seemed to write themselves in a language that made Quinn’s eyes ache" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.711 | | wordCount | 1407 | | matches | | 0 | "not with fear, but with a weary, professional curiosity" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 46.9 | | std | 25.63 | | cv | 0.546 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 105 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 87 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 21 |
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| 76.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "been pushed" | | 1 | "was involved" | | 2 | "been taught" | | 3 | "been stretched" | | 4 | "were piled" | | 5 | "was pinned" | | 6 | "was rolled" | | 7 | "was terrified" |
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| 51.19% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was losing" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was heading" | | 3 | "was holding" | | 4 | "wasn't just chasing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t run; she pursued." | | 1 | "Ten yards ahead, the suspect—a jittery informant who had spent the last hour stuttering about things that didn't exist—was losing his nerve." | | 2 | "He didn't turn toward the main road; instead, he slammed his shoulder into a heavy steel door that looked like it belonged to a defunct warehouse." | | 3 | "She recognized the layout from her surveillance files—the dimly lit bar in Soho that served as a hub for the city's more eccentric fringes." | | 4 | "The suspect hadn't gone into the main bar; he had slipped through the bookshelf." | | 5 | "As she descended, the sound of the city above faded entirely, replaced by a distant, cacophonous roar—the sound of a crowd." | | 6 | "DS Morris had been chasing a lead just like this—a lead that had led him into a blind alley and left him missing, presumed dead, with no body to recover and no evidence of a struggle." | | 7 | "Everything she had been taught—the protocols of the Met, the logic of forensic science, the reliability of a witness statement—stopped here." | | 8 | "She was no longer in a basement; she was in an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, though the geometry felt warped, as if the tunnels had been stretched and folded like origami." | | 9 | "He wasn't a monster; he was a human with olive skin and short, curly dark brown hair." | | 10 | "The man, Tomás Herrera, looked at the suspect—who was now shaking uncontrollably—and then back to Quinn." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1362 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.02569750367107195 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011013215859030838 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 14.07 | | std | 7.59 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 28.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Her stride was a matter" | | 1 | "He slipped on a slick" | | 2 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 3 | "She had spent eighteen years" | | 4 | "She knew every dead end," | | 5 | "He didn't turn toward the" | | 6 | "He disappeared inside, the door" | | 7 | "She didn't waste time with" | | 8 | "She stepped back, pivoted, and" | | 9 | "She stepped inside, her hand" | | 10 | "She found herself in the" | | 11 | "She recognized the layout from" | | 12 | "She moved through the corridor," | | 13 | "She passed a heavy oak" | | 14 | "She knew about the hidden" | | 15 | "She had suspected for months" | | 16 | "It was a stairwell." | | 17 | "Her mind raced back to" | | 18 | "He had seen something that" | | 19 | "He had seen something that" |
| | ratio | 0.436 | |
| 7.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain didn't fall so" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t run;" | | 2 | "Her stride was a matter" | | 3 | "He slipped on a slick" | | 4 | "Quinn didn't break her pace." | | 5 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 6 | "The city was breathing in" | | 7 | "She had spent eighteen years" | | 8 | "She knew every dead end," | | 9 | "The suspect was heading toward" | | 10 | "He didn't turn toward the" | | 11 | "He disappeared inside, the door" | | 12 | "Quinn reached the door and" | | 13 | "She didn't waste time with" | | 14 | "She stepped back, pivoted, and" | | 15 | "The door groaned, the latch" | | 16 | "She stepped inside, her hand" | | 17 | "The interior was a jarring" | | 18 | "The roar of the rain" | | 19 | "She found herself in the" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 53.19% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "To cross this line was" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Her stride was a matter of military precision, a rhythmic, relentless drive that ignored the water soaking through her wool coat and the sting of the wind again…" | | 1 | "Ten yards ahead, the suspect—a jittery informant who had spent the last hour stuttering about things that didn't exist—was losing his nerve." | | 2 | "He disappeared inside, the door clanging shut behind him with a finality that echoed through the narrow passage." | | 3 | "She recognized the layout from her surveillance files—the dimly lit bar in Soho that served as a hub for the city's more eccentric fringes." | | 4 | "She passed a heavy oak bookshelf that looked out of place in a service hallway, its spine leaning slightly as if it had been pushed frequently." | | 5 | "The air grew colder, thick with a scent that reminded her of wet earth and ancient copper." | | 6 | "DS Morris had been chasing a lead just like this—a lead that had led him into a blind alley and left him missing, presumed dead, with no body to recover and no …" | | 7 | "She was no longer in a basement; she was in an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, though the geometry felt warped, as if the tunnels had been stretched and …" | | 8 | "The ceiling was a vaulted cavern of soot-stained brick, lit by thousands of floating lanterns that cast a sickly, amber glow over the chaos below." | | 9 | "Tables were piled high with rusted blades that hummed with a low frequency, and scrolls of parchment that seemed to write themselves in a language that made Qui…" | | 10 | "The sound was an intrusion, a rhythm of authority in a place that recognized no law." | | 11 | "He wore a stained medical apron and a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the amber light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn shouted, her voice echoing off the vaulted ceiling" | | 1 | "Herrera said softly, his voice carrying a warning" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |