| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1115 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1103 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like bare feet on mud" | | 1 | "felt like walking through a wall of gel" | | 2 | "felt like dry parchment, cold and unner" | | 3 | "sounded like the rustle of dead leaves, a" |
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| 20.63% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.794 | | wordCount | 1115 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a small crack, but the heavy, splintering sound of a limb being crushed" | | 1 | "not with warmth, but with a frantic, rhythmic strobe" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 22.76 | | std | 13.97 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "was cloying" | | 1 | "was asking" |
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| 9.35% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the usual London smog; it was cloying, heavy with a scent that felt ancient." | | 1 | "A movement flickered at the edge of her vision—a flash of something pale and spindly darting behind a thick trunk." | | 2 | "It wasn't just warm now; it felt hot, a branding iron against her chest." | | 3 | "A hand—or something shaped like one—brushed against her shoulder." | | 4 | "It wasn't a voice of vocal cords and breath; it sounded like the rustle of dead leaves, a dry, scraping imitation of speech." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1109 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "large, bell-shaped bloom," |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.032461677186654644 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013525698827772768 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 10.42 | | std | 6.05 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 31.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.21495327102803738 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 34.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from the darkness directly" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 34.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She pedaled harder, the chain" | | 1 | "It wasn't the usual London" | | 2 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 3 | "It pulsed in time with" | | 4 | "She stopped the bike near" | | 5 | "They stood in a circle," | | 6 | "It felt occupied." | | 7 | "She spun around." | | 8 | "Her voice sounded thin, stripped" | | 9 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 10 | "She blinked, and the shadow" | | 11 | "She moved toward the center" | | 12 | "It wasn't just warm now;" | | 13 | "It sounded like bare feet" | | 14 | "She gripped her flashlight, the" | | 15 | "She turned toward her bicycle," | | 16 | "It came from behind the" | | 17 | "She swung the flashlight toward" | | 18 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 19 | "She fell hard, the breath" |
| | ratio | 0.464 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 91 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora gripped the handlebars of" | | 2 | "The streetlights from the main" | | 3 | "She pedaled harder, the chain" | | 4 | "The air grew thick, tasting" | | 5 | "It wasn't the usual London" | | 6 | "The path narrowed." | | 7 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 8 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 9 | "A dull throb emanated from" | | 10 | "It pulsed in time with" | | 11 | "She stopped the bike near" | | 12 | "The stones rose from the" | | 13 | "They stood in a circle," | | 14 | "The silence here didn't feel" | | 15 | "It felt occupied." | | 16 | "Aurora stepped off the bike," | | 17 | "The sound echoed, bouncing off" | | 18 | "She spun around." | | 19 | "The wildflowers that carpeted the" |
| | ratio | 0.938 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left and right," |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 55.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The streetlights from the main road faded behind her, swallowed by a mist that clung to the damp grass like a shroud." | | 1 | "It wasn't the usual London smog; it was cloying, heavy with a scent that felt ancient." | | 2 | "The wildflowers that carpeted the clearing shouldn't have bloomed in this season, yet they swayed in a wind she couldn't feel, their petals glowing with a sickl…" | | 3 | "Something moved beneath the petals, a rhythmic heaving, as if something breathed within the flower itself." | | 4 | "Aurora screamed, the sound swallowed by the sudden, deafening roar of the wind that tore through the grove." | | 5 | "She drove the bike through the thicket, the branches clawing at her jacket, tearing at her skin." | | 6 | "The crimson pendant on her chest began to pulse, not with warmth, but with a frantic, rhythmic strobe that illuminated the clearing in jagged intervals." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |