Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91SC3RKA6RXC219V1BDBB0

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.000710
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate of Richmond Park groaned, a rusted shriek that tore through the heavy stillness of the midnight air. Aurora gripped the handlebars of her bicycle, her knuckles white against the rubber grips. The streetlights from the main road faded behind her, swallowed by a mist that clung to the damp grass like a shroud. She pedaled harder, the chain rattling a rhythmic, metallic protest. The air grew thick, tasting of crushed violets and wet earth. It wasn't the usual London smog; it was cloying, heavy with a scent that felt ancient. The path narrowed. To her left and right, the shadows of oaks stretched across the gravel, long, skeletal fingers reaching for her tires. She reached up, her fingers brushing the silver chain around her neck. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her collarbone, its deep crimson surface unnaturally warm against her skin. A dull throb emanated from the gemstone. It pulsed in time with her racing heart. She stopped the bike near the boundary of the ancient oak standing stones. The stones rose from the dirt like broken teeth, jagged and moss-covered. They stood in a circle, marking a threshold she had only heard whispered about in the darkest corners of the city. The silence here didn't feel empty. It felt occupied. Aurora stepped off the bike, her boots crunching too loudly on the gravel. She froze. The sound echoed, bouncing off the stones, but a second later, a faint, secondary crunch drifted from the treeline. She spun around. Nothing moved. The wildflowers that carpeted the clearing shouldn't have bloomed in this season, yet they swayed in a wind she couldn't feel, their petals glowing with a sickly, pale luminescence. "Is anyone there?" Her voice sounded thin, stripped of its usual confidence. The silence swallowed the words whole. She adjusted the strap of her bag, her eyes scanning the perimeter. A movement flickered at the edge of her vision—a flash of something pale and spindly darting behind a thick trunk. She blinked, and the shadow merged back into the dark bark. She moved toward the center of the stones, the heat from the pendant intensifying. It wasn't just warm now; it felt hot, a branding iron against her chest. The crimson glow of the stone cast long, dancing shadows across the grass, making the wildflowers look like grasping hands. A soft, wet sound drifted from the darkness. *Slap. Slap. Slap.* It sounded like bare feet on mud. Aurora backed away, her breath coming in shallow, jagged bursts. She gripped her flashlight, the beam cutting a frantic arc through the mist. The light hit the oaks, revealing nothing but gnarl and knot. "I'm leaving. I'm done." She turned toward her bicycle, but the path looked different. The gravel trail seemed to twist, the trees leaning inward as if to constrict the space. The mist swirled, thickening into shapes that mimicked tall, distorted figures. The slapping sound returned, faster this time. It came from behind the standing stones. She swung the flashlight toward the noise. The beam landed on a patch of wildflowers. One of them, a large, bell-shaped bloom, jerked violently. Something moved beneath the petals, a rhythmic heaving, as if something breathed within the flower itself. She stumbled back, her heel catching on a protruding root. She fell hard, the breath rushing out of her lungs. The pendant flared. A sudden, violent burst of crimson light erupted from her chest, illuminating the clearing for a split second. In that flash, she saw them. They weren't people. They were silhouettes made of tangled briars and pale, translucent skin, standing perfectly still just beyond the reach of her light. Dozens of them. They stood among the trees, their limbs elongated, their heads tilted at impossible, broken angles. They didn't have faces, only indentations where eyes should be. Aurora scrambled to her feet, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. She didn't look back. She lunged for the bike, her hands trembling so violently she nearly dropped the keys. The air around her turned frigid. The warmth of the Heartstone vanished, replaced by a biting, unnatural chill that seeped into her bones. The slapping sound was no longer distant. It was right behind her. She grabbed the handlebars and swung her leg over the seat, her eyes fixed on the dark path ahead. A twig snapped. Not a small crack, but the heavy, splintering sound of a limb being crushed. She pedaled. The wheels whined, cutting through the gloom. Every time she glanced over her shoulder, the mist seemed to pulse, a rhythmic expansion and contraction like a giant lung. The shadows stretched. They didn't follow the laws of light anymore. They drifted across the path, independent of the trees, sliding toward her like spilled ink. She reached the standing stones. The transition felt like walking through a wall of gelatin. The air thickened, the scent of violets becoming an overwhelming, suffocating perfume. The light from her flashlight flickered. The beam stuttered, dying into a dim, sickly yellow. "Please," she whispered, though she didn't know who she was asking. A hand—or something shaped like one—brushed against her shoulder. It felt like dry parchment, cold and unnervingly smooth. Aurora screamed, the sound swallowed by the sudden, deafening roar of the wind that tore through the grove. She didn't stop pedaling. She drove the bike through the thicket, the branches clawing at her jacket, tearing at her skin. The ground beneath her tires felt soft, yielding like flesh. She skidded to a halt as the path abruptly ended at a wall of ancient, interlocking thorns. The bike slid out from under her, crashing into the dirt. She scrambled backward on her hands and knees, her eyes wide, searching the darkness. The silence returned, heavier than before. Then, from the darkness directly in front of her, a voice drifted out. It wasn't a voice of vocal cords and breath; it sounded like the rustle of dead leaves, a dry, scraping imitation of speech. "You brought the light." The crimson pendant on her chest began to pulse, not with warmth, but with a frantic, rhythmic strobe that illuminated the clearing in jagged intervals. With every flash, the things in the trees were closer. They were no longer standing still. They were mid-stride, frozen in terrifying, contorted poses, caught in the strobe of the stone. They were ten feet away. Five feet. They didn't move when the light went dark. They only moved when the light failed. Aurora reached for the pendant, her fingers fumbling with the silver chain. A shadow fell over her, blotting out the moon. It didn't come from a tree. It came from above.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count4
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"racing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count2
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"throb"
2"pulsed"
3"racing"
4"silence"
5"echoed"
6"scanning"
7"flickered"
8"dancing"
9"warmth"
10"chill"
11"gloom"
12"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences104
matches
0"t with warmth"
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1115
ratio0.003
matches
0"Slap. Slap. Slap."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1103
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Aurora6
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like bare feet on mud"
1"felt like walking through a wall of gel"
2"felt like dry parchment, cold and unner"
3"sounded like the rustle of dead leaves, a"
20.63% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.794
wordCount1115
matches
0"Not a small crack, but the heavy, splintering sound of a limb being crushed"
1"not with warmth, but with a frantic, rhythmic strobe"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean22.76
std13.97
cv0.614
sampleLengths
056
137
251
315
446
59
634
73
831
93
1015
1143
1248
1311
147
1534
164
1737
1814
1940
2020
2121
226
2342
2410
2534
2623
2712
2819
2917
3030
3126
3227
3315
3411
3518
3639
3710
3828
3914
406
4136
424
4325
4410
4528
4615
4712
4819
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was cloying"
1"was asking"
9.35% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences107
ratio0.047
matches
0"It wasn't the usual London smog; it was cloying, heavy with a scent that felt ancient."
1"A movement flickered at the edge of her vision—a flash of something pale and spindly darting behind a thick trunk."
2"It wasn't just warm now; it felt hot, a branding iron against her chest."
3"A hand—or something shaped like one—brushed against her shoulder."
4"It wasn't a voice of vocal cords and breath; it sounded like the rustle of dead leaves, a dry, scraping imitation of speech."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1109
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"large, bell-shaped bloom,"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.032461677186654644
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013525698827772768
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.42
std6.05
cv0.58
sampleLengths
020
114
222
310
411
516
63
720
812
916
107
118
1213
1312
1421
156
163
1713
182
1919
203
212
2229
233
249
256
2612
2720
2811
2914
3014
3120
328
331
341
351
367
3710
3813
3911
404
4110
4216
4311
447
457
467
478
489
4916
31.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.21495327102803738
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners23
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Then, from the darkness directly"
ratio0.01
34.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences97
matches
0"She pedaled harder, the chain"
1"It wasn't the usual London"
2"She reached up, her fingers"
3"It pulsed in time with"
4"She stopped the bike near"
5"They stood in a circle,"
6"It felt occupied."
7"She spun around."
8"Her voice sounded thin, stripped"
9"She adjusted the strap of"
10"She blinked, and the shadow"
11"She moved toward the center"
12"It wasn't just warm now;"
13"It sounded like bare feet"
14"She gripped her flashlight, the"
15"She turned toward her bicycle,"
16"It came from behind the"
17"She swung the flashlight toward"
18"She stumbled back, her heel"
19"She fell hard, the breath"
ratio0.464
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences97
matches
0"The iron gate of Richmond"
1"Aurora gripped the handlebars of"
2"The streetlights from the main"
3"She pedaled harder, the chain"
4"The air grew thick, tasting"
5"It wasn't the usual London"
6"The path narrowed."
7"She reached up, her fingers"
8"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
9"A dull throb emanated from"
10"It pulsed in time with"
11"She stopped the bike near"
12"The stones rose from the"
13"They stood in a circle,"
14"The silence here didn't feel"
15"It felt occupied."
16"Aurora stepped off the bike,"
17"The sound echoed, bouncing off"
18"She spun around."
19"The wildflowers that carpeted the"
ratio0.938
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"To her left and right,"
ratio0.01
55.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The streetlights from the main road faded behind her, swallowed by a mist that clung to the damp grass like a shroud."
1"It wasn't the usual London smog; it was cloying, heavy with a scent that felt ancient."
2"The wildflowers that carpeted the clearing shouldn't have bloomed in this season, yet they swayed in a wind she couldn't feel, their petals glowing with a sickl…"
3"Something moved beneath the petals, a rhythmic heaving, as if something breathed within the flower itself."
4"Aurora screamed, the sound swallowed by the sudden, deafening roar of the wind that tore through the grove."
5"She drove the bike through the thicket, the branches clawing at her jacket, tearing at her skin."
6"The crimson pendant on her chest began to pulse, not with warmth, but with a frantic, rhythmic strobe that illuminated the clearing in jagged intervals."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
71.6601%