Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91VXR5MH85YP70Y299HRP5

Run Details

Duration:
7.3s
Cost:
$0.002551
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked back in quick succession, a heavy rhythm echoing into the cramped hallway. Rory swung the door open, the scent of old paper and lukewarm tea rushing out to meet the landing. She gripped the edge of the frame, her knuckles turning bone-white against the wood. Lucien stood in the shadows of the stairwell. His charcoal suit absorbed the dim light of the flickering hallway bulb, and his platinum hair looked silver against the gloom. One amber eye locked onto hers, the other a void of pure black. He leaned his weight onto the ivory handle of his cane, his posture effortless despite the tension thickening the air between them. You have a lot of nerve showing up here after six months of silence. He stepped over the threshold without waiting for an invitation, his shoes clicking sharply against the worn floorboards. He took in the precarious stacks of research notes and the overflow of books that clogged the living area. A faint smirk touched his lips, though his eyes remained unreadable. Professional courtesy dictates that I return what belongs to the owner, especially when it carries such potential for catastrophic outcomes. Rory blocked his path, her boots planted firmly. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit she had not managed to break since childhood. Her bright blue eyes burned as she looked up at him, refusing to yield an inch of the narrow space. You call that a return? You abandoned the deal in Paris and left me to navigate the fallout with local authorities alone. He didn't blink. He lowered his cane, tapping the floor with a rhythmic, impatient sound. The air in the flat felt heavy, vibrating with the static of his unnatural origins. I navigated the fallout in ways you couldn't comprehend, Rory. Keeping the Avaros relic out of the hands of the council required sacrifices that had little room for sentimentality or travel companions. She let out a sharp, incredulous laugh. She stepped toward him, pushing the personal space back into his territory. He held his ground, the scent of expensive tobacco and ozone clinging to his coat. Sacrifice is a convenient word for you. It implies you lost something. The only thing missing from my life after Paris was the basic dignity of being treated like a partner rather than a delivery vessel. He turned his head to look at Ptolemy, who watched them from the back of a tattered armchair. The tabby cat hissed, ears flattening against its head. Lucien held out a long, slender hand, his movements fluid, though he made no real effort to touch the animal. I never viewed our association in such reductive terms. If you felt small, perhaps it was only because you failed to see the scale of the game we were playing. Rory shoved a pile of scrolls off the sofa to make room, her face tight. She reached for the kettle, ignoring the way her hands trembled. The game ended for me when I boarded that train to London. I finished my degree, I pay my rent, and I deliver noodles for a living. I traded the supernatural underworld for a quiet existence above a curry house. You should have kept walking when you hit Brick Lane. He moved across the room, his stride predatory. He stopped beside the narrow window, looking out at the rain-streaked glass. The streetlights of London threw flickering patterns over his sharp cheekbones. You were never meant for quiet lives. You have the look of someone who keeps a blade hidden under the floorboards of her own conscience. I checked your flat building, you know. Three deadbolts won't stop the things that come hunting for what you took from that vault in Marseille. She slammed a mug onto the kitchen counter, the ceramic clattering against the laminate. She turned to face him, the small kitchen feeling miles away from the life she had scraped together with Eva. Then go. Leave. If I'm such a target, you should be miles away to ensure your own survival. That was always the Lucien Moreau way, wasn't it? Protect the asset or cut the losses before the collapse. He turned back then. The amber eye glowed with a sudden, fierce intensity that made her breath hitch. In two strides, he stood within arm's reach of her. The smell of his coat—cold leather and something metallic—invaded her senses, dragging her back to moments she had spent months suppressing. I didn't come here to offer protection. I came here because it has been six months, and not a single night has passed where I didn't see you standing in that square in Paris, blue eyes wide, daring me to bet against your survival. The words hung in the air, stripped of their usual polish. His hand hovered near her shoulder, his fingers twitching as if he struggled to maintain a tether on his own impulses. He looked exhausted, the perfection of his suit failing to disguise the fraying threads of his composure. I didn't ask for you to watch me. I didn't ask for you to think of me. She stared at the knot of his silk tie, refusing to look into that duality of his gaze. She felt the heat radiating from him, the sheer physical intensity of his presence turning the room into a furnace. Yet you kept my cane. He gestured to the corner, where the ivory handle peeked out from behind a stack of law textbooks. Rory felt the burn of a blush rising to her cheeks. She had kept it not as a souvenir, but because the cold weight of the blade inside acted as a singular anchor against her own insomnia. It was useful. It was stolen, Rory. Much like you stole my pulse the first night we crossed the border. He didn't wait for her to answer. He reached forward, his fingers brushing the sharp line of her collarbone. The contact sent a jolt of electricity through her, raw and undeniable. She leaned back against the counter, trapped by his sudden proximity. Tell me to leave. Say the words and verify the lie to my face. She looked up, her gaze clashing with his. The hatred, the hurt, and the months of simmering loneliness crystallized in the space between her lungs. She reached out, her fingers catching the front of his jacket, pulling him down until their foreheads rested against one another. The air in the flat felt too thin, too electrified. She felt the steady, rhythmic pulse of his heart against her own—a tempo that didn't belong to any language he spoke, but one she understood with terrifying clarity. You are a headache that never fades, Lucien. You are a migraine with a charcoal suit. He laughed against her skin, a low, vibrating sound that resonated in her chest. His hand moved from her shoulder to the small of her back, pressing her closer until there was no distance left to navigate. Then let me be the ache you refuse to treat. She didn't pull away. She leaned into the touch, her past in Cardiff and her future in London dissolving into the singular, volatile reality of him. She closed her eyes, letting the frantic, chaotic history of their time together silence the room. Outside, the rain continued to pelt the brick, but inside, the only sound was the jagged, desperate rhythm of two people who had spent too long pretending they weren't burning to touch again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1259
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1259
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"effortless"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"potential"
count1
8
word"firmly"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count2
11
word"rhythmic"
count2
12
word"navigated"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"ensure"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count2
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count2
18
word"simmering"
count1
19
word"crystallized"
count1
20
word"resonated"
count1
21
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"gloom"
2"weight"
3"effortless"
4"tension"
5"silence"
6"unreadable"
7"potential"
8"firmly"
9"traced"
10"navigate"
11"rhythmic"
12"navigated"
13"trembled"
14"ensure"
15"intensity"
16"silk"
17"pulse"
18"simmering"
19"crystallized"
20"resonated"
21"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1256
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1256
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Paris3
Rory6
Avaros1
Ptolemy1
London3
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Eva1
Lucien4
Moreau1
Cardiff1
You8
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"You"
places
0"Paris"
1"Ptolemy"
2"London"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Marseille"
6"Moreau"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.796
wordCount1256
matches
0"not as a souvenir, but because the cold weight of the blade inside acted as a singu"
59.14% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"call that a"
1"boarded that train"
2"into that duality"
90.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean34.89
std16.33
cv0.468
sampleLengths
049
164
214
348
420
547
622
730
832
934
1036
1147
1230
1326
1450
1531
1650
1734
1837
1949
2044
2149
2217
2338
245
2555
263
2717
2842
2914
3046
3138
3216
3337
3410
3575
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"being treated"
1"was stolen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"were playing"
1"weren't burning"
81.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences93
ratio0.022
matches
0"The smell of his coat—cold leather and something metallic—invaded her senses, dragging her back to moments she had spent months suppressing."
1"She felt the steady, rhythmic pulse of his heart against her own—a tempo that didn't belong to any language he spoke, but one she understood with terrifying clarity."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1261
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.022997620935765267
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004758128469468675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.51
std6.76
cv0.501
sampleLengths
016
119
214
38
421
513
622
714
818
919
1011
1120
128
1319
1420
155
1617
173
1812
1915
2010
2122
227
2312
2415
257
265
2724
2818
299
3020
319
3221
3315
3411
3512
3615
3713
3810
398
4012
4111
427
4318
447
4518
4614
4720
482
491
32.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2903225806451613
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners27
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then let me be the"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences91
matches
0"She gripped the edge of"
1"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
2"He leaned his weight onto"
3"You have a lot of"
4"He stepped over the threshold"
5"He took in the precarious"
6"She traced the crescent scar"
7"Her bright blue eyes burned"
8"You call that a return?"
9"You abandoned the deal in"
10"He didn't blink."
11"He lowered his cane, tapping"
12"I navigated the fallout in"
13"She let out a sharp,"
14"She stepped toward him, pushing"
15"He held his ground, the"
16"It implies you lost something."
17"He turned his head to"
18"I never viewed our association"
19"She reached for the kettle,"
ratio0.615
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences91
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked back"
1"Rory swung the door open,"
2"She gripped the edge of"
3"Lucien stood in the shadows"
4"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
5"He leaned his weight onto"
6"You have a lot of"
7"He stepped over the threshold"
8"He took in the precarious"
9"A faint smirk touched his"
10"Rory blocked his path, her"
11"She traced the crescent scar"
12"Her bright blue eyes burned"
13"You call that a return?"
14"You abandoned the deal in"
15"He didn't blink."
16"He lowered his cane, tapping"
17"The air in the flat"
18"I navigated the fallout in"
19"She let out a sharp,"
ratio0.857
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"If you felt small, perhaps"
1"If I'm such a target,"
ratio0.022
10.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"He stepped over the threshold without waiting for an invitation, his shoes clicking sharply against the worn floorboards."
1"He took in the precarious stacks of research notes and the overflow of books that clogged the living area."
2"Keeping the Avaros relic out of the hands of the council required sacrifices that had little room for sentimentality or travel companions."
3"You have the look of someone who keeps a blade hidden under the floorboards of her own conscience."
4"The amber eye glowed with a sudden, fierce intensity that made her breath hitch."
5"The smell of his coat—cold leather and something metallic—invaded her senses, dragging her back to moments she had spent months suppressing."
6"His hand hovered near her shoulder, his fingers twitching as if he struggled to maintain a tether on his own impulses."
7"She felt the heat radiating from him, the sheer physical intensity of his presence turning the room into a furnace."
8"She reached out, her fingers catching the front of his jacket, pulling him down until their foreheads rested against one another."
9"She felt the steady, rhythmic pulse of his heart against her own—a tempo that didn't belong to any language he spoke, but one she understood with terrifying cla…"
10"He laughed against her skin, a low, vibrating sound that resonated in her chest."
11"Outside, the rain continued to pelt the brick, but inside, the only sound was the jagged, desperate rhythm of two people who had spent too long pretending they …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.2351%