Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91XDK7V97YPPYJHVMMTBVY

Run Details

Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.002665
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign hummed, a persistent, electric buzz that bled into the damp London air. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the atmosphere tasted of stale hops and the ghost of woodsmoke. Aurora wiped the condensation from a glass, her movements rhythmic, practiced. She didn't look up when the heavy oak door swung open, dragging a smear of rain across the floorboards. The bell gave a single, hollow toll. Silas leaned against the mahogany, his silver ring catching the dim light as he polished a row of glasses. His left leg dragged just enough to notice, a rhythmic thud against the brass rail. Aurora set the glass down, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. The wood grain felt rough beneath her skin. She had spent months trying to forget the feel of Cardiff stone, the way the rain felt different there, colder and heavier. A man peeled himself away from the shadows near the entrance. He wore a coat that cost more than her rent, the wool pressed crisp, defying the humidity. He scanned the bar with the ease of someone accustomed to rooms where people hid things. When his gaze landed on her, the air in the room shifted, growing thick and claustrophobic. Rory? The name hit the back of her throat like bile. She didn't turn at first. She gripped the edge of the counter, the wood groaning under her knuckles. She looked at Silas, but he was staring at the man with a cold, analytical stillness. The stranger moved forward, his shoes clicking with a sharp, expensive precision that silenced the low hum of the ceiling fans. You should have stayed where the sunlight actually hits the pavement. She turned then, meeting the eyes she had spent years deleting from her memory. Evan looked older, the sharpness of his jaw blurred by a trace of vanity, but his posture held the same predatory poise. He stood too close, invading the space she had carefully constructed behind the bar. He smelled of damp wool and cold ambition, a scent that pulled her back to a flat that felt like a cage. I found my own sun, Evan. It burns a lot brighter than your shadow. The smirk he offered was a jagged thing, devoid of warmth. He reached for a stool, his frame sprawling across the leather as if he still owned the furniture, the room, and the woman behind the counter. He didn't look at Silas, just kept his focus on the way her breath hitched, a tiny hitch she couldn't suppress. Legal career didn't take, then? Or did you just get tired of being the brightest mind in a room filled with people who couldn't spell justice? She poured a finger of rye into a lowball glass and slid it across the wood. It hit his hand with a dull thud. Silas watched the exchange from the corner of his eye, his hand hovering near the shelf of antique maps. He didn't intervene, but his posture shifted, the predator sensing a shift in the territory. Law was a costume I outgrew. The fabric was too itchy, and the stitching always came undone when I moved too fast. Evan laughed, a short, sharp sound that didn't reach his eyes. He took a sip of the rye, his throat working in a slow, deliberate rhythm. He looked around the Nest, his gaze lingering on the faded maps and the grainy photographs of men who hadn't walked the earth in decades. He seemed to be cataloging the rust, the decay, the way this place held on to things that should have been buried. You always were a fan of the wreckage, Rory. You gravitate toward broken things. Even in this, this dump, you’ve managed to find a man who looks like he’s running from his own shadow. Silas stepped forward, the floorboard under his bad leg popping. He didn't raise his voice, yet the sound carried over the dying hum of the neon sign. Broken things provide the clearest view of the cracks, son. And in London, the cracks are where the interesting people hide. Evan turned his head slowly, his eyes narrowing as he took in the grey-streaked hair and the signet ring. He offered a tight, polite nod, the kind of gesture meant to minimize an opponent. He didn't acknowledge the insult. He turned back to Aurora, his intensity rising like a tide. We had plans. Real ones. Before you decided that running was the better part of valor. You left a lot of loose ends in Cardiff. My father still asks about the papers you took. The ones you were never supposed to touch. She leaned over the counter, the scent of the bar—bitter, aged, and real—filling her lungs. She felt the weight of the years she had shed, the identity she had carved out with blood and sweat. She wasn't the girl who had been afraid to speak in a courtroom anymore. She was a ghost who had chosen her own haunting. I didn't take your father's papers, Evan. I discovered the truth of them. There is a distinction, even if your ego is too large to parse the difference. And I didn't run. I escaped. There is a difference between a prisoner bolting the gate and a bird returning home. He leaned in, the shadows stretching across his face, carving hollows into his cheeks. The air between them grew heavy, charged with the static of old arguments and the wreckage of a life left behind. You think you’re hidden here? A delivery girl. A barmaid in Soho. You think the distance of a few hundred miles changes what you owe? She reached under the counter to the hidden compartment, her fingers brushing the cold steel of the equipment Silas kept for emergencies. She felt the reassuring weight of reality, a sharp contrast to the hollow threats spilling from Evan’s lips. She looked at him, not with the fear that had once paralyzed her, but with a cold, clear assessment of his limitations. I don't owe anything to a man who measures his worth by how much he can shrink others. Leave. The drink was on the house. Consider it a severance package for a connection that expired six years ago. Evan stared at her, his jaw tightening until the muscle pulsed. He glanced at Silas, then back at her, his eyes searching for the flicker of weakness he had counted on. He didn't find it. He rose from the stool, his movements fluid and rehearsed. He smoothed the front of his coat, the fabric settling into perfect creases. Everything has a price, Aurora. You just haven't seen the bill yet. He turned toward the door, the bell chiming a mocking farewell as he stepped back into the rain. The silence that rushed back into the room felt cavernous. Silas moved to the door, locking it with a heavy thud, then turned the sign to closed. He walked back to the bar, his gait uneven, and picked up the glass Evan had left behind. He’s going to be a problem, isn't he? Aurora stood still, listening to the rain begin to lash against the windows, a rhythmic drumming that drowned out the city’s distant roar. She looked at her wrist, the scar a thin, pale crescent under the harsh interior light. He’s just a man who forgot how to grow. He thinks the world is the same size it was when we were twenty. She picked up the rag and began to scrub the spot where he had sat, the motion repetitive and grounding. The wood wasn't clean yet, but she continued to work, digging into the grain, erasing the ghost of his presence from the bar.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"constructed"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"rhythmic"
2"tracing"
3"scanned"
4"constructed"
5"warmth"
6"predator"
7"intensity"
8"weight"
9"charged"
10"pulsed"
11"flicker"
12"perfect"
13"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
57.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
2"begin to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1294
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1294
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
London2
Raven1
Nest2
Cardiff2
Silas8
Evan8
Rory2
Aurora5
Soho1
You7
persons
0"Silas"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Aurora"
4"You"
places
0"London"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a cage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.773
wordCount1294
matches
0"not with the fear that had once paralyzed her, but with a cold, clear assessment of his limitations"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"decided that running"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean41.74
std21.47
cv0.514
sampleLengths
068
178
260
31
465
511
672
714
858
926
1058
1122
1273
1334
1427
1521
1650
1742
1859
1949
2035
2125
2262
2338
2458
2512
2663
278
2839
2923
3043
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"been buried"
1"hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was staring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences100
ratio0.01
matches
0"She leaned over the counter, the scent of the bar—bitter, aged, and real—filling her lungs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1298
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.02773497688751926
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0023112480739599386
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.94
std6.15
cv0.475
sampleLengths
016
115
211
319
47
519
615
714
88
922
1011
1117
1216
1316
141
1510
165
1713
1816
1921
2011
2114
2222
2314
2422
256
268
2711
2826
2921
305
3121
3216
338
3419
3515
366
3716
3811
3915
4025
4122
429
435
4420
4510
4617
4710
4811
4919
28.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.28
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences96
matches
0"She didn't look up when"
1"His left leg dragged just"
2"She had spent months trying"
3"He wore a coat that"
4"He scanned the bar with"
5"She didn't turn at first."
6"She gripped the edge of"
7"She looked at Silas, but"
8"You should have stayed where"
9"She turned then, meeting the"
10"He stood too close, invading"
11"He smelled of damp wool"
12"I found my own sun,"
13"It burns a lot brighter"
14"He reached for a stool,"
15"He didn't look at Silas,"
16"She poured a finger of"
17"It hit his hand with"
18"He didn't intervene, but his"
19"He took a sip of"
ratio0.583
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences96
matches
0"The green neon sign hummed,"
1"Aurora wiped the condensation from"
2"She didn't look up when"
3"The bell gave a single,"
4"Silas leaned against the mahogany,"
5"His left leg dragged just"
6"Aurora set the glass down,"
7"The wood grain felt rough"
8"She had spent months trying"
9"A man peeled himself away"
10"He wore a coat that"
11"He scanned the bar with"
12"The name hit the back"
13"She didn't turn at first."
14"She gripped the edge of"
15"She looked at Silas, but"
16"The stranger moved forward, his"
17"You should have stayed where"
18"She turned then, meeting the"
19"Evan looked older, the sharpness"
ratio0.875
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"Even in this, this dump,"
1"Before you decided that running"
ratio0.021
70.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The green neon sign hummed, a persistent, electric buzz that bled into the damp London air."
1"The stranger moved forward, his shoes clicking with a sharp, expensive precision that silenced the low hum of the ceiling fans."
2"He reached for a stool, his frame sprawling across the leather as if he still owned the furniture, the room, and the woman behind the counter."
3"Or did you just get tired of being the brightest mind in a room filled with people who couldn't spell justice?"
4"He looked around the Nest, his gaze lingering on the faded maps and the grainy photographs of men who hadn't walked the earth in decades."
5"She looked at him, not with the fear that had once paralyzed her, but with a cold, clear assessment of his limitations."
6"Aurora stood still, listening to the rain begin to lash against the windows, a rhythmic drumming that drowned out the city’s distant roar."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4326%