| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.094 | | leniency | 0.188 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.90% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "shared breath" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "marble" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "ensuring" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "shared breath" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "constructed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1245 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.30% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 937 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Marseille | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Lucien | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Marseille" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 0.913 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 13.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an insult" | | 1 | "felt like pushing against a marble pill" | | 2 | "sounded like the man who had once held her" |
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| 39.36% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.606 | | wordCount | 1245 | | matches | | 0 | "not as an invitation, but to keep from slamming the door in his face" | | 1 | "not enough to hurt, but enough to anchor her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 23.49 | | std | 19.98 | | cv | 0.851 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 83 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 48 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 48 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 60 | | 45 | 58 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 22.56% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber eye searched her face; the other, a void of black, seemed to swallow the light of the hallway." | | 1 | "The memory of it hit her—the rain in Marseille, the taste of salt and desperation, the way he had looked at her as if she were a puzzle he couldn't solve and a fire he couldn't put out." | | 2 | "He didn't kiss her; he waited, a silent challenge, letting the tension coil between them like a spring." | | 3 | "The world outside—the noise of Brick Lane, the demands of the Golden Empress, the shadow of her father's expectations—ceased to exist." |
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| 99.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 319 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.04075235109717868 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009404388714733543 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.11 | | std | 7.7 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 37.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.22105263157894736 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 53.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he reached out, his" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 7.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't move, didn't smile," | | 1 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 2 | "He glided inside, the tip" | | 3 | "He didn't wait for a" | | 4 | "He surveyed the small room," | | 5 | "He stopped near the window," | | 6 | "He turned, his expression a" | | 7 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 8 | "She saw his eyes flick" | | 9 | "He moved toward her, closing" | | 10 | "He stopped just inches away." | | 11 | "He smelled of rain and" | | 12 | "It felt like pushing against" | | 13 | "He didn't budge." | | 14 | "He closed the gap." | | 15 | "His hand didn't touch her," | | 16 | "She turned away, pacing the" | | 17 | "She looked at him, really" | | 18 | "He didn't use the polished" | | 19 | "He sounded like the man" |
| | ratio | 0.532 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The lock clicked, the door" | | 1 | "Lucien stood there, a charcoal" | | 2 | "He didn't move, didn't smile," | | 3 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 4 | "The scent of cedar and" | | 5 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 6 | "Rory stepped back, not as" | | 7 | "He glided inside, the tip" | | 8 | "He didn't wait for a" | | 9 | "He surveyed the small room," | | 10 | "He stopped near the window," | | 11 | "He turned, his expression a" | | 12 | "Rory felt the familiar heat" | | 13 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 14 | "She saw his eyes flick" | | 15 | "The mask slipped for a" | | 16 | "He moved toward her, closing" | | 17 | "He stopped just inches away." | | 18 | "The height difference forced her" | | 19 | "He smelled of rain and" |
| | ratio | 0.952 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't move, didn't smile, just leaned on that ivory-handled cane with a grace that felt like an insult." | | 1 | "Instead, he reached out, his fingers hovering just shy of her jawline, the heat from his skin radiating against her cold cheek." | | 2 | "The memory of it hit her—the rain in Marseille, the taste of salt and desperation, the way he had looked at her as if she were a puzzle he couldn't solve and a …" | | 3 | "His touch was a brand, a searing reminder of a connection that defied logic and species." | | 4 | "She reached up, her fingers digging into the expensive fabric of his lapels, bunching the charcoal wool in her fists." | | 5 | "The kiss was a collision, a desperate clash of teeth and tongue that tasted of old wounds and untapped hunger." | | 6 | "He shifted, his hand sliding up to cup the back of her head, pulling her back into another kiss that felt less like a greeting and more like a reclamation." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.063 | | leniency | 0.125 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |