Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91XQYTX08825Z4MMP0EB48

Run Details

Duration:
1m 52s
Cost:
$0.001337
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked, the door swung inward, and the air in the narrow hallway vanished. Lucien stood there, a charcoal silhouette against the dim amber glow of the landing. He didn't move, didn't smile, just leaned on that ivory-handled cane with a grace that felt like an insult. "The security in this building remains a joke." Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles white. The scent of cedar and expensive tobacco rolled off him, cutting through the smell of stale beer and frying oil that drifted up from Silas’ bar below. "You have a lot of nerve showing up here." He shifted his weight, the platinum blond hair slicked back without a single strand out of place. One amber eye searched her face; the other, a void of black, seemed to swallow the light of the hallway. "I heard you were delivering noodles in a city that eats people alive. I wondered if you’d finally run out of places to hide." Rory stepped back, not as an invitation, but to keep from slamming the door in his face. He glided inside, the tip of his cane tapping a rhythmic, metallic beat against the hardwood. He didn't wait for a welcome. He surveyed the small room, his gaze lingering on the stacked law textbooks she no longer opened and the discarded delivery jacket thrown over a chair. "Still living in a shoebox. Some things never change." "Get out, Lucien." He stopped near the window, the moonlight catching the sharp line of his jaw. He turned, his expression a mask of cool indifference, though a muscle jumped in his cheek. "I can't do that. Not until we settle the matter of the ledger." Rory felt the familiar heat rise in her chest. She crossed her arms, the sleeve of her oversized sweater sliding up to reveal the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She saw his eyes flick toward it. The mask slipped for a fraction of a second, a flash of something raw and jagged crossing his features before the ice returned. "The ledger is gone. I told you that six months ago." "You told me it was gone. You never proved it." He moved toward her, closing the distance with a predatory slow-motion stride. He stopped just inches away. The height difference forced her to tilt her head back. He smelled of rain and old money. "You always did lie when you were scared, Laila." "Don't call me that." Rory shoved his chest. It felt like pushing against a marble pillar. He didn't budge. Instead, he reached out, his fingers hovering just shy of her jawline, the heat from his skin radiating against her cold cheek. "Your eyes are still the color of a winter storm. I forgot how much I hated that." "I hate you more." "Liar." He closed the gap. His hand didn't touch her, but the proximity made the fine hairs on her arms stand up. The silence stretched, heavy and suffocating, filled with the ghost of every word they hadn't said the night he walked out of her life. The memory of it hit her—the rain in Marseille, the taste of salt and desperation, the way he had looked at her as if she were a puzzle he couldn't solve and a fire he couldn't put out. Rory broke the gaze first. She turned away, pacing the small perimeter of the room. "What do you actually want? Because if it's just the ledger, you're wasting your time. I have nothing left from that life." "You have me." The words were quiet, stripped of his usual theatricality. Rory stopped. She looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the exhaustion etched into the corners of his eyes. The impeccably tailored suit couldn't hide the tension in his shoulders. "You don't get to do that. You don't get to vanish for half a year and then walk into my flat and claim some kind of kinship." Lucien leaned his cane against the wall and stepped closer. He didn't use the polished words of an information broker now. He sounded like the man who had once held her until dawn while she cried over a life she didn't want. "I didn't vanish. I cleared the path." "You left me in the dark." "The dark was the only place you were safe." He reached for her again, this time his fingers brushing the skin of her wrist, right over the scar. Rory flinched, but she didn't pull away. His touch was a brand, a searing reminder of a connection that defied logic and species. "You think I enjoyed the silence?" "I think you enjoyed the control." Lucien’s grip tightened, not enough to hurt, but enough to anchor her. He pulled her toward him, his voice dropping to a low, dangerous vibrate. "I have spent every hour of every day ensuring that the people who hunted you forgot your name. Do not mistake my absence for indifference." Rory felt the wall she had built around herself crack. The anger was still there, but beneath it was a void that only he knew how to fill. She reached up, her fingers digging into the expensive fabric of his lapels, bunching the charcoal wool in her fists. "I didn't ask for a protector." "I know. You've always been too proud for your own good." He leaned down, his breath warm against her lips. He didn't kiss her; he waited, a silent challenge, letting the tension coil between them like a spring. Rory could see the heterochromatic contrast of his eyes, the amber flame and the black abyss, both focused entirely on her. "Tell me to leave," he whispered. "Tell me you don't want me here, and I will vanish again. I'll walk out that door and you will never see my face again." Rory's breath hitched. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. She looked at the door, then back at the man who had broken her heart and saved her life in the same breath. "I hate you," she breathed. "I know." He closed the remaining inch. The kiss was a collision, a desperate clash of teeth and tongue that tasted of old wounds and untapped hunger. He backed her into the wall, the thud of her shoulders against the plaster echoing in the small room. His hands slid from her wrist to her waist, hoisting her up until her feet dangled. Rory wrapped her legs around his hips, pulling him closer, needing to erase every millimeter of space between them. The world outside—the noise of Brick Lane, the demands of the Golden Empress, the shadow of her father's expectations—ceased to exist. There was only the pressure of his body against hers and the jagged rhythm of their shared breath. Lucien pulled back just far enough to look at her, his expression fierce. "You are a disaster, Aurora Carter." "And you're an arrogant prick." He laughed, a short, sharp sound, and buried his face in the crook of her neck, his lips grazing the pulse point that beat wildly for him. "I missed this." "Don't get sentimental. It doesn't suit you." He shifted, his hand sliding up to cup the back of her head, pulling her back into another kiss that felt less like a greeting and more like a reclamation. The ivory cane lay forgotten against the wall, the only piece of his carefully constructed persona left untouched.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.188
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"marble"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"tension"
count2
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"ensuring"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"shared breath"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"familiar"
3"marble"
4"silence"
5"etched"
6"tension"
7"searing"
8"reminder"
9"ensuring"
10"echoing"
11"shared breath"
12"pulse"
13"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1245
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount937
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Marseille1
Rory11
Brick1
Lane1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.913
windowScore1
13.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like an insult"
1"felt like pushing against a marble pill"
2"sounded like the man who had once held her"
39.36% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.606
wordCount1245
matches
0"not as an invitation, but to keep from slamming the door in his face"
1"not enough to hurt, but enough to anchor her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean23.49
std19.98
cv0.851
sampleLengths
048
18
237
39
437
524
665
79
83
930
1013
1160
1211
1310
1434
159
164
1737
1817
194
201
2183
2215
2322
243
2541
2627
2742
287
296
309
3142
326
336
3425
3525
3648
376
3811
3948
4031
4138
425
432
4460
4558
4613
476
485
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
22.56% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences95
ratio0.042
matches
0"One amber eye searched her face; the other, a void of black, seemed to swallow the light of the hallway."
1"The memory of it hit her—the rain in Marseille, the taste of salt and desperation, the way he had looked at her as if she were a puzzle he couldn't solve and a fire he couldn't put out."
2"He didn't kiss her; he waited, a silent challenge, letting the tension coil between them like a spring."
3"The world outside—the noise of Brick Lane, the demands of the Golden Empress, the shadow of her father's expectations—ceased to exist."
99.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount319
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.04075235109717868
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.009404388714733543
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.11
std7.7
cv0.588
sampleLengths
015
114
219
38
410
527
69
717
820
924
1017
1116
126
1326
149
153
1614
1716
1813
199
2021
217
2223
2311
2410
2512
265
2710
287
299
304
314
328
333
3422
3517
364
371
384
3917
4024
4138
425
4310
4422
453
469
472
4819
4911
37.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.22105263157894736
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners21
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Instead, he reached out, his"
ratio0.016
7.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences62
matches
0"He didn't move, didn't smile,"
1"He shifted his weight, the"
2"He glided inside, the tip"
3"He didn't wait for a"
4"He surveyed the small room,"
5"He stopped near the window,"
6"He turned, his expression a"
7"She crossed her arms, the"
8"She saw his eyes flick"
9"He moved toward her, closing"
10"He stopped just inches away."
11"He smelled of rain and"
12"It felt like pushing against"
13"He didn't budge."
14"He closed the gap."
15"His hand didn't touch her,"
16"She turned away, pacing the"
17"She looked at him, really"
18"He didn't use the polished"
19"He sounded like the man"
ratio0.532
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"The lock clicked, the door"
1"Lucien stood there, a charcoal"
2"He didn't move, didn't smile,"
3"Rory gripped the edge of"
4"The scent of cedar and"
5"He shifted his weight, the"
6"Rory stepped back, not as"
7"He glided inside, the tip"
8"He didn't wait for a"
9"He surveyed the small room,"
10"He stopped near the window,"
11"He turned, his expression a"
12"Rory felt the familiar heat"
13"She crossed her arms, the"
14"She saw his eyes flick"
15"The mask slipped for a"
16"He moved toward her, closing"
17"He stopped just inches away."
18"The height difference forced her"
19"He smelled of rain and"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He didn't move, didn't smile, just leaned on that ivory-handled cane with a grace that felt like an insult."
1"Instead, he reached out, his fingers hovering just shy of her jawline, the heat from his skin radiating against her cold cheek."
2"The memory of it hit her—the rain in Marseille, the taste of salt and desperation, the way he had looked at her as if she were a puzzle he couldn't solve and a …"
3"His touch was a brand, a searing reminder of a connection that defied logic and species."
4"She reached up, her fingers digging into the expensive fabric of his lapels, bunching the charcoal wool in her fists."
5"The kiss was a collision, a desperate clash of teeth and tongue that tasted of old wounds and untapped hunger."
6"He shifted, his hand sliding up to cup the back of her head, pulling her back into another kiss that felt less like a greeting and more like a reclamation."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.125
73.7990%