| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.03% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "raced" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "kaleidoscope" | | 11 | "synchronized" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "normalcy" | | 14 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1046 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1046 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | Blitz | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Met | 1 | | London | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Met" | | 4 | "Police" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it hadn't been opened since t" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1046 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 47.55 | | std | 25.59 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 94 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 40 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "been opened" | | 1 | "been transformed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain didn't just fall in Camden; it hammered, turning the asphalt into a black mirror that fractured every neon sign into a thousand shivering shards." | | 1 | "Twenty yards ahead, the suspect—a wiry man in a charcoal duster—was a blurring smudge of grey against the gloom." | | 2 | "She didn't shout for him to stop; she didn't want to alert him to exactly how close she was until she had him pinned." | | 3 | "As she rounded the corner, the suspect didn't stop; he leaped over a pile of discarded crates and sprinted toward a rusted iron gate that looked like it hadn't been opened since the Blitz." | | 4 | "She felt the phantom weight of a memory—the smell of ozone and sulfur from three years ago, the sight of DS Morris disappearing into a void that shouldn't have existed, the silence that had followed his screams." | | 5 | "The obsession that had fueled her for three years—the need to understand what had taken Morris—overrode the instinct for self-preservation." | | 6 | "The air here was different; it was thick, tasting of copper and ancient dust, carrying a current of electricity that made the salt-and-pepper hair on her neck stand on end." | | 7 | "Some had skin the color of bruised plums; others possessed eyes that reflected light like cats." | | 8 | "A dozen pairs of pupils—slitted, gold, and multifaceted—swiveled toward her." | | 9 | "He didn't look afraid anymore; he looked pitying." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1059 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.016052880075542966 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007554296506137866 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 13.76 | | std | 8.24 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 31.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.27631578947368424 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 41.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Her lungs burned, the cold" | | 1 | "He moved with a frantic," | | 2 | "She didn't shout for him" | | 3 | "She glanced down at the" | | 4 | "He pressed the object into" | | 5 | "He vanished inside." | | 6 | "She stared at the gate," | | 7 | "She stepped forward and picked" | | 8 | "It wasn't a key." | | 9 | "It was a piece of" | | 10 | "She felt the phantom weight" | | 11 | "They had called it a" | | 12 | "She had seen the things" | | 13 | "She looked back toward the" | | 14 | "She was a decorated detective" | | 15 | "She believed in evidence, in" | | 16 | "It was a career-ending move." | | 17 | "It was potentially a suicide" | | 18 | "She looked at the bone" | | 19 | "She didn't call for backup." |
| | ratio | 0.446 | |
| 14.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain didn't just fall" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn lunged forward," | | 2 | "Her lungs burned, the cold" | | 3 | "He moved with a frantic," | | 4 | "Quinn kept her center of" | | 5 | "She didn't shout for him" | | 6 | "She glanced down at the" | | 7 | "The man pivoted sharply, diving" | | 8 | "Quinn followed, her sharp jaw" | | 9 | "Quinn surged forward, her brown" | | 10 | "He pressed the object into" | | 11 | "He vanished inside." | | 12 | "Quinn skidded to a halt," | | 13 | "She stared at the gate," | | 14 | "There, lying in a puddle" | | 15 | "She stepped forward and picked" | | 16 | "It wasn't a key." | | 17 | "It was a piece of" | | 18 | "A cold thrill, one that" | | 19 | "She felt the phantom weight" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Just as she reached the" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 11.66% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "He moved with a frantic, jagged energy, weaving through the late-night crowds of the market street with a desperation that bordered on the manic." | | 1 | "The man pivoted sharply, diving into a narrow alleyway that smelled of rotting cardboard and old grease." | | 2 | "She felt the phantom weight of a memory—the smell of ozone and sulfur from three years ago, the sight of DS Morris disappearing into a void that shouldn't have …" | | 3 | "The obsession that had fueled her for three years—the need to understand what had taken Morris—overrode the instinct for self-preservation." | | 4 | "She found herself at the top of a concrete staircase that spiraled downward into the gut of an abandoned Tube station." | | 5 | "The air here was different; it was thick, tasting of copper and ancient dust, carrying a current of electricity that made the salt-and-pepper hair on her neck s…" | | 6 | "The light didn't come from bulbs, but from floating spheres of pale luminescence and jars of glowing bioluminescent fungi that cast long, distorted shadows agai…" | | 7 | "Some had skin the color of bruised plums; others possessed eyes that reflected light like cats." | | 8 | "They traded in things that would have made a forensics team recoil: vials of shimmering, iridescent liquids, bound books wrapped in human skin, and crates of hu…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |