Run: 2026-05-10-01KR920VNTNYVBQNPCMZ6G9AK3

Run Details

Duration:
6.9s
Cost:
$0.002374
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the asphalt, turning the Soho streets into slick, obsidian mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered the pavement, the rhythmic thudding obscured only by the roar of thunder rolling across the London skyline. Her salt-and-pepper hair plastered against her forehead, droplets tracing deep furrows down her cheeks. Ahead, the hooded figure ducked into a narrow alley, a shadow dissolving into the gloom. Quinn rounded the corner, her hand resting heavy on the holster at her hip. She scanned the darkness, searching for the telltale glint of a knife or the frantic motion of a fleeing target. Her eyes, sharp and restless, caught a slight scuff on the brickwork. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, checking the time. Precision meant everything. Too long in the rain and the trail drifted away like smoke. The suspect surged forward, feet skidding on wet cobblestones, racing toward the rusted iron grate of a long-abandoned Tube station. A faint, impossible hum vibrated through the ground, rattling Quinn’s teeth. She lunged, her fingers brushing the hem of a dark jacket, but the figure slipped through the jagged opening in the fence. "Stop right there, Herrera. You aren't getting away this time." Tomás paused just inside the darkness, the faint light of a streetlamp illuminating the scar on his forearm. He looked back, his warm brown eyes wide, pulsing with a light that didn't belong to the city. He touched the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat, his knuckles white with tension. "You have no idea what you are stepping into, Detective. Turn back before the threshold swallows you whole." She didn't answer. She climbed the fence, wire biting into her palms, and dropped into the abyss. The air below tasted of ozone, copper, and ancient, rotting earth. Stone stairs stretched into a throat of black, slick with oily slime. The hum grew into a low-frequency drone that rattled Quinn’s ribs, a physical presence pressing against her chest like a weighted vest. As she descended, the darkness began to knit itself together, forming the edges of the Veil Market. Stalls lined the rotted platform, draped in moth-eaten velvet and pulsing, bio-luminescent moss. Figures hooded in rags crouched over jars of trapped lightning and vials of shifting, iridescent fluid. The smell of scorched feathers and sweet decomposition hung heavy in the stagnant tunnel air. Herrera vanished behind a stack of rusted barrels, his footsteps echoing in a hollow, rhythmic beat. Quinn kept her eyes locked on his retreating back, ignoring the guttural whispers drifting from the stalls. A merchant with eyes like obsidian shards leaned forward, holding out a jagged, yellowed bone token, its surface etched with glyphs that seemed to writhe atop the ivory. "You bring the Law into the Market, traveler? Careful. The gates have a hunger for iron badges." She pushed past stalls overflowing with clinking chains and shadow-glass, her leather boots muffling her approach. The cavernous expanse of the station stretched for miles, the tracks vanishing into a tunnel that defied the laws of city transit. Herrera reached a makeshift archway constructed of rib cages and iron scrap, his hand hovering over the threshold. "There is no sanctuary for you in the shadows, Tomás. I’ve lived with ghosts for three years. You’re just another one." He stopped, his shoulders sagged, and he turned to face her, the flickering torchlight of the Market casting long, distorted shadows across his olive skin. He looked exhausted, the weight of the supernatural world pulling his features into a permanent mask of strain. "Morris didn't die because of a simple case, and you know it. You saw what happened that night. You felt the cold." Quinn halted ten feet away, her breath hitching. The name tore through her professional veneer, a jagged blade of memory. She planted her feet wide, military stance firm against the damp grit of the platform. "Don't mention his name. You don't have the right. You deal in the dirt that killed him, and that makes you part of the debris I’m clearing." "I am the only one holding the line, Harlow. This place, this market, it's the only thing keeping the rot from spilling into the streets where you walk. You want to save the city? Then stop looking at me and start looking at the gaps between the buildings." Herrera stepped backward, his form beginning to flicker and distort like a frame of damaged film. He pulled a heavy, iron key from his pocket, pressing it into a lock in the center of the rib-cage arch. The metal groaned with the sound of a dying beast. "If you cross this line, there is no coming back to the Metropolitan Police. You’ll be a ghost, just like the man you're chasing. Do you really want to lose yourself to this darkness?" Quinn studied the archway. Beyond it, she saw a swirling vortex of deep violet mist, shifting and folding into impossible geometries. The hum grew deafening, vibrating behind her eyes with the intensity of a scream held behind teeth. She felt the weight of her service weapon, the cool steel a comfort against her hip, a tether to a life of warrants and paperwork. She looked at her watch. The second hand ticked, steady and relentless. It looked absurdly small in such a vast, warping space. The choice narrowed down to a single heartbeat of resolve. She took a step forward, the dry crunch of something brittle under her boot marking the start of a path she couldn't account for on a police report. "Whatever waits on the other side, it's coming with me. Move." Herrera shook his head, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips, before he pivoted and vanished into the violet haze. The air inside the archway felt like liquid ice, searing her skin as she reached out a hand, her fingers brushing the edge of the mist. She stared into the shifting colors, eyes burning, her knuckles whitening as she gripped her weapon. The city above was a distant memory, a flicker of neon and rain, while here, the architecture of the world itself hung suspended, waiting for her to strike. She inhaled, the scent of stagnant ozone and ancient magic filling her lungs, and shoved herself into the light. The platform behind her dissolved into a swarm of static as the market’s true nature tore through the veil of reality. The station vanished. She stood in a corridor of shifting stars, the floor beneath her feet soft like moss, and before her, the faint, flickering silhouette of Herrera awaited, his back to her, watching the horizon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"constructed"
count1
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
14
word"weight"
count2
15
word"flicker"
count2
16
word"intensity"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count1
18
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"tracing"
2"gloom"
3"scanned"
4"glint"
5"racing"
6"vibrated"
7"tension"
8"velvet"
9"footsteps"
10"echoing"
11"etched"
12"constructed"
13"sanctuary"
14"weight"
15"flicker"
16"intensity"
17"resolve"
18"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1105
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount897
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn7
London1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
Market2
Herrera5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"glyphs that seemed to writhe atop the ivory"
1"felt like liquid ice, searing her skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1105
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
92.79% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean46.04
std21.86
cv0.475
sampleLengths
064
174
253
310
450
518
662
761
861
917
1056
1121
1243
1322
1435
1527
1648
1747
1834
1963
2060
2111
2292
2376
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.012154696132596685
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0033149171270718232
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean17
std7.83
cv0.461
sampleLengths
013
122
214
315
414
520
612
713
83
912
1020
1111
1222
1310
1418
1518
1614
1718
183
1914
2011
2112
2222
2317
2413
2516
2615
2716
2817
2928
3017
3116
3222
3318
3421
3525
3618
3722
388
3912
4015
4127
4248
4316
4421
4510
4634
474
4817
4917
61.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4153846153846154
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners27
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Too long in the rain"
ratio0.018
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair plastered against"
1"She scanned the darkness, searching"
2"Her eyes, sharp and restless,"
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"She lunged, her fingers brushing"
5"He looked back, his warm"
6"He touched the Saint Christopher"
7"She didn't answer."
8"She climbed the fence, wire"
9"She pushed past stalls overflowing"
10"He stopped, his shoulders sagged,"
11"He looked exhausted, the weight"
12"She planted her feet wide,"
13"He pulled a heavy, iron"
14"She felt the weight of"
15"She looked at her watch."
16"It looked absurdly small in"
17"She took a step forward,"
18"She stared into the shifting"
19"She inhaled, the scent of"
ratio0.375
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences56
matches
0"Rain lashed against the asphalt,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair plastered against"
3"Quinn rounded the corner, her"
4"She scanned the darkness, searching"
5"Her eyes, sharp and restless,"
6"She adjusted the worn leather"
7"Precision meant everything."
8"The suspect surged forward, feet"
9"A faint, impossible hum vibrated"
10"She lunged, her fingers brushing"
11"Tomás paused just inside the"
12"He looked back, his warm"
13"He touched the Saint Christopher"
14"She didn't answer."
15"She climbed the fence, wire"
16"The air below tasted of"
17"Stone stairs stretched into a"
18"The hum grew into a"
19"Stalls lined the rotted platform,"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The hum grew into a low-frequency drone that rattled Quinn’s ribs, a physical presence pressing against her chest like a weighted vest."
1"A merchant with eyes like obsidian shards leaned forward, holding out a jagged, yellowed bone token, its surface etched with glyphs that seemed to writhe atop t…"
2"The cavernous expanse of the station stretched for miles, the tracks vanishing into a tunnel that defied the laws of city transit."
3"The air inside the archway felt like liquid ice, searing her skin as she reached out a hand, her fingers brushing the edge of the mist."
4"She stared into the shifting colors, eyes burning, her knuckles whitening as she gripped her weapon."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.4175%