| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1621 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1621 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "shared breath" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fleeting" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "electric" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "unraveling" | | 9 | "echoes" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "shared breath" | | 14 | "resolved" | | 15 | "echo" | | 16 | "traced" | | 17 | "glistening" | | 18 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1621 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.72% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1560 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.03 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Aurora | 16 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Flor | 8 | | Unease | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Flor" | | 6 | "Unease" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.987 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 79.91% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like crushed citrus mixed with ear" | | 1 | "othing altered visibly, yet the pendant fl" | | 2 | "appeared ordinary until she touched it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.617 | | wordCount | 1621 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sky but swirling colors from the blooms" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 62.35 | | std | 22.15 | | cv | 0.355 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 73 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 83 | | 10 | 93 | | 11 | 81 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 95 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 80 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 68 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 80 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 269 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1126 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04262877442273535 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012433392539964476 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 12.76 | | std | 6.04 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 47.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.2755905511811024 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes flared" | | 1 | "Then Isolde spoke, voice layered" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned her head as" | | 1 | "She felt the change in" | | 2 | "It felt cool and slightly" | | 3 | "She straightened and kept moving." | | 4 | "She brushed debris away to" | | 5 | "She felt drawn closer, her" | | 6 | "She pulled back as the" | | 7 | "They passed beneath an arch" | | 8 | "She paused at the edge" | | 9 | "She rose and gestured ahead." | | 10 | "They moved onward together through" | | 11 | "It began as wind through" | | 12 | "Her quick mind catalogued the" | | 13 | "They pressed deeper." | | 14 | "She called back without turning" | | 15 | "She withdrew with a shake" | | 16 | "Her riddle filled the space" | | 17 | "She felt lighter on the" | | 18 | "She stepped over carefully." | | 19 | "She reached toward one leaf." |
| | ratio | 0.18 | |
| 21.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 107 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the ancient" | | 1 | "The air shifted around her" | | 2 | "She turned her head as" | | 3 | "Isolde waited ahead with her" | | 4 | "The half-Fae lifted one hand" | | 5 | "Nyx slipped forward next, their" | | 6 | "A whisper rode the wind" | | 7 | "The group should keep close." | | 8 | "The boundaries here twist more" | | 9 | "Flor shrugged her pack higher" | | 10 | "Aurora nodded, tightening the silver" | | 11 | "The deep crimson gemstone pressed" | | 12 | "She felt the change in" | | 13 | "The clearing opened wider as" | | 14 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 15 | "Blues spilled into indigos, reds" | | 16 | "Aurora bent to touch one" | | 17 | "It felt cool and slightly" | | 18 | "She straightened and kept moving." | | 19 | "Branches above twisted in slow" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the ancient oak stones, her boots sinking into soft earth that gave no resistance." | | 1 | "Silver light trickled between twisted branches overhead, casting pale lavender pools across wildflowers that bloomed underfoot despite the winter season." | | 2 | "She felt the change in pressure underfoot first, a faint ache in her arches that eased into something lighter, as if gravity itself loosened its hold." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in layers of color that shifted under their gaze." | | 4 | "It felt cool and slightly electric against her fingertip, sending a quick current up her arm that faded before she could name it." | | 5 | "Branches above twisted in slow spirals, their bark laced with veins of faint silver that glowed in patterns resembling veins carrying light rather than sap." | | 6 | "She felt drawn closer, her blue eyes fixed on the symbols that rearranged themselves under her gaze." | | 7 | "Light here filtered through shifting patterns overhead, sometimes catching on invisible motes that danced and reformed into shapes resembling distant stars." | | 8 | "The surface showed her face distorted into something older, lines etched around her eyes that vanished when she blinked." | | 9 | "The trees thickened, trunks wider and bark carved with faint flowing lines that mirrored the earlier sigils." | | 10 | "Wonder rose again in her chest, mixing with the unease that kept her hand near the Fae-Forged Blade strapped at her hip." | | 11 | "She felt lighter on the far side, as if part of her density had traded places with the grove itself." | | 12 | "Nyx's passage left a trail of brief shadow mist that dissipated above the flowers." | | 13 | "Deeper still the wildflowers gave way to low ferns glistening with dew that reflected moving lights." | | 14 | "The musical notes followed, fading and returning as though carried on unseen currents." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |