Run: 2026-05-10-01KR925YF197513Z5KEKX4S7VD

Run Details

Duration:
3m 38s
Cost:
$0.000908
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy iron gate of Richmond Park groaned, a metallic shriek that sliced through the midnight damp. Aurora stepped inside, the lock clicking shut behind her with a finality that vibrated in her teeth. She gripped the handlebars of her delivery bike, the thermal bag strapped to the rack smelling of ginger and soy. The park stretched before her, a void of ink and charcoal. Fog rolled in thick, white ribbons that swallowed the gravel path. She checked her phone. The GPS pinpointed a location deep in the brush, far beyond the paved trails, marked only as a private residence. The client had paid a premium for the midnight drop-off, but the silence here felt heavy, like wet wool pressed against her face. She pedaled. The rhythmic click-clack of the chain echoed, too loud, sounding like a second set of footsteps following a fraction of a second behind. Aurora glanced over her shoulder. Nothing but the skeletal reaches of ancient oaks and the shifting grey mist. The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt pulsed. A sudden, sharp prick of heat bloomed against her sternum. She slowed, her breath frosting in the air. The warmth wasn't a flicker; it was a rhythmic throb, syncing with the beat of her heart. The path vanished. In its place, a circle of weathered standing stones rose from the earth, their surfaces slick with iridescent moss. Wildflowers—vibrant, unnatural violets and deep crimsons—bloomed in the frozen soil, petals shimmering under a moon that looked too large, too pale. She had reached the Fae Grove. Aurora dismounted, the kickstand sinking into the loam. The air changed. The scent of damp earth evaporated, replaced by the cloying, sweet aroma of rotting peaches and ozone. She stepped toward the center of the clearing, her boots making no sound on the grass. "Hello?" The word didn't echo. It fell flat, absorbed by the stillness. She looked around for the residence. There was no house. Only the stones and a single, massive oak whose branches twisted into agonized spirals. The silence deepened, becoming a physical pressure in her ears. Then, a sound broke through—a wet, sliding noise, like a slab of raw meat being dragged across stone. Aurora froze. The sound came from behind the largest standing stone to her left. She shifted her weight, her eyes scanning the periphery. A flash of movement flickered—a pale, spindly limb retreating behind a trunk. It moved with a jerky, unnatural cadence, skipping frames of motion. "I have your order," she called out. Her voice sounded thin, distant. A soft giggle drifted from the canopy above. It wasn't a human laugh; it sounded like a recording played backward, a warble of high-pitched frequencies that set her nerves on fire. Aurora looked up. The branches were empty, but the leaves shivered violently despite the lack of wind. She backed away, her hand instinctively clutching the Heartstone. The crimson gem was now searing, a coal pressed against her skin. The warmth had turned to a warning. A snap of a dry branch sounded directly behind her. She spun around. The clearing was empty. But the wildflowers she had walked past were now crushed, as if something heavy had stepped on them in the heartbeat she had turned her head. The impressions in the grass weren't footprints. They were long, dragging gouges. "This isn't funny." A voice answered, though no mouth moved. The sound didn't come from the air; it vibrated inside her skull, a wet whisper that tasted of copper. *Stay a while, Rory.* Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. She didn't fall, but the sudden movement triggered a reaction. From the shadows between the stones, something emerged. It didn't step out so much as unfold. It was tall, its limbs too long for its torso, skin the color of a drowned corpse. It had no face—only a smooth, taut expanse of pale flesh where eyes and a nose should be, stretched tight over a protruding jaw. It didn't attack. It simply stood there, tilting its head at a ninety-degree angle. Aurora scrambled for her bike, her fingers fumbling with the grip. The creature mirrored her movement, shifting its weight in a synchronized, mocking dance. Every time she blinked, the thing was closer. Blink. It stood ten feet away. Blink. Five feet. The smell of rotting peaches intensified, now laced with the stench of an open grave. Aurora lunged for the bike, swinging her leg over the frame. As she pushed off, she felt a cold, damp pressure wrap around her ankle. She looked down. A translucent, fingerless hand had sprouted from the soil, its grip like a vice. The skin was translucent, revealing black veins that pulsed in time with the Heartstone. She kicked violently, her boot connecting with something that felt like wet cartilage. The hand recoiled, dissolving into a swarm of pale moths that fluttered upward and vanished into the fog. Aurora pedaled with every ounce of strength in her lungs, the bike swaying wildly. She didn't look back, but she could hear it. The sliding sound was back, faster now, accompanied by the rhythmic clicking of joints popping in rapid succession. The standing stones blurred past. The Heartstone screamed against her chest, a blinding heat that felt like it was melting through her clothes. Just as she reached the perimeter of the grove, a pale hand slammed onto the handlebars. The grip was freezing, a sudden plunge into ice that numbed her arm instantly. The creature didn't pull her back; it simply held her, its faceless head leaning over her shoulder. The backward-recorded giggle whispered directly into her ear. *You forgot the change.* Aurora wrenched the handlebars with a guttural scream, throwing her entire weight to the right. The creature's grip slipped, its fingers leaving streaks of iridescent slime on the metal. She burst through the boundary of the stones, the air snapping back to the familiar, biting chill of a London midnight. She didn't stop. She pedaled until her thighs burned and her lungs felt like they were filled with glass. She didn't slow down until she reached the iron gates of the park, the city lights of Richmond flickering in the distance like distant stars. She stopped, gasping for air, and looked down at her ankle. A bruise was forming in the shape of a hand, the skin there a deep, necrotic purple. Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone had gone cold, leaving behind a faint, crescent-shaped burn on her skin that mirrored the scar on her wrist.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1094
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"vibrated"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count3
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"weight"
count3
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"synchronized"
count1
16
word"dance"
count1
17
word"grave"
count1
18
word"fluttered"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count1
20
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"silence"
2"rhythmic"
3"echoed"
4"footsteps"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"flicker"
8"throb"
9"echo"
10"weight"
11"scanning"
12"flickered"
13"searing"
14"whisper"
15"synchronized"
16"dance"
17"grave"
18"fluttered"
19"familiar"
20"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords1089
ratio0.007
matches
0"Stay a while, Rory."
1"You forgot the change."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1081
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Heartstone5
Fae1
Grove1
Aurora10
London1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like a recording played backward,"
1"felt like wet cartilage"
2"felt like it was melting through her cl"
3"felt like they were filled with glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1089
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean29.43
std19.77
cv0.672
sampleLengths
054
169
243
342
443
56
644
71
811
952
1014
1132
1212
1348
1428
1510
1645
173
1826
194
2076
2114
2232
236
243
2540
2631
2731
2841
2923
3047
318
324
3350
3444
3511
3641
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"being dragged"
1"were filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was freezing"
1"was forming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences98
ratio0.082
matches
0"The warmth wasn't a flicker; it was a rhythmic throb, syncing with the beat of her heart."
1"Wildflowers—vibrant, unnatural violets and deep crimsons—bloomed in the frozen soil, petals shimmering under a moon that looked too large, too pale."
2"Then, a sound broke through—a wet, sliding noise, like a slab of raw meat being dragged across stone."
3"A flash of movement flickered—a pale, spindly limb retreating behind a trunk."
4"It wasn't a human laugh; it sounded like a recording played backward, a warble of high-pitched frequencies that set her nerves on fire."
5"The sound didn't come from the air; it vibrated inside her skull, a wet whisper that tasted of copper."
6"It had no face—only a smooth, taut expanse of pale flesh where eyes and a nose should be, stretched tight over a protruding jaw."
7"The creature didn't pull her back; it simply held her, its faceless head leaning over her shoulder."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"translucent, revealing black veins"
1"faint, crescent-shaped burn"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.027472527472527472
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011904761904761904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.11
std6.45
cv0.581
sampleLengths
017
117
220
311
411
54
620
723
82
923
105
1113
127
1310
148
1517
163
1719
1821
196
208
213
2217
2316
241
254
267
276
284
2914
3010
3118
322
3312
349
3512
3611
377
385
398
4023
413
4214
439
4412
457
4610
473
484
4926
33.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2755102040816326
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners27
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Only the stones and a"
1"Then, a sound broke through—a"
ratio0.022
83.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences91
matches
0"She gripped the handlebars of"
1"She checked her phone."
2"She slowed, her breath frosting"
3"She had reached the Fae"
4"She stepped toward the center"
5"It fell flat, absorbed by"
6"She looked around for the"
7"She shifted her weight, her"
8"It moved with a jerky,"
9"she called out"
10"Her voice sounded thin, distant."
11"It wasn't a human laugh;"
12"She backed away, her hand"
13"She spun around."
14"They were long, dragging gouges."
15"She didn't fall, but the"
16"It didn't step out so"
17"It was tall, its limbs"
18"It had no face—only a"
19"It didn't attack."
ratio0.341
14.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences91
matches
0"The heavy iron gate of"
1"Aurora stepped inside, the lock"
2"She gripped the handlebars of"
3"The park stretched before her,"
4"Fog rolled in thick, white"
5"She checked her phone."
6"The GPS pinpointed a location"
7"The client had paid a"
8"The rhythmic click-clack of the"
9"Aurora glanced over her shoulder."
10"Nothing but the skeletal reaches"
11"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
12"A sudden, sharp prick of"
13"She slowed, her breath frosting"
14"The warmth wasn't a flicker;"
15"The path vanished."
16"Wildflowers—vibrant, unnatural violets and deep"
17"She had reached the Fae"
18"Aurora dismounted, the kickstand sinking"
19"The air changed."
ratio0.89
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just as she reached the"
ratio0.011
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora stepped inside, the lock clicking shut behind her with a finality that vibrated in her teeth."
1"Wildflowers—vibrant, unnatural violets and deep crimsons—bloomed in the frozen soil, petals shimmering under a moon that looked too large, too pale."
2"It wasn't a human laugh; it sounded like a recording played backward, a warble of high-pitched frequencies that set her nerves on fire."
3"But the wildflowers she had walked past were now crushed, as if something heavy had stepped on them in the heartbeat she had turned her head."
4"The creature mirrored her movement, shifting its weight in a synchronized, mocking dance."
5"She kicked violently, her boot connecting with something that felt like wet cartilage."
6"The hand recoiled, dissolving into a swarm of pale moths that fluttered upward and vanished into the fog."
7"The Heartstone screamed against her chest, a blinding heat that felt like it was melting through her clothes."
8"Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone had gone cold, leaving behind a faint, crescent-shaped burn on her skin that mirrored the scar on her wrist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.3811%