| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "enigmatic" | | 6 | "structure" | | 7 | "churned" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "marble" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "intricate" | | 14 | "maw" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "gloom" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "churn" | | 19 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1128 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 988 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.741 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like crushed velvet" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to originate from inside Aurora's own skull" | | 2 | "appeared beside her, a sudden void in the golden light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 25.64 | | std | 17.59 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 58 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 48 | | 43 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "was vibrating" | | 1 | "wasn't drowning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant was no longer pulsing; it was vibrating, a constant, high-frequency tremor that pointed toward the spire." | | 1 | "The gold didn't flow like water; it churned like molten wax, thick and sluggish." | | 2 | "Things moved beneath the surface—pale, elongated shapes that brushed against the underside of the bridge, sending tremors through the bone." | | 3 | "He wasn't drowning; he was part of the current." | | 4 | "\"Contracted for their palates. Prince Belphegor doesn't just want the best chefs; he wants the best ingredients.\"" | | 5 | "She felt a sudden, sharp craving for something—anything—from the world above." | | 6 | "The obsidian walls of the tower weren't smooth; they were carved with intricate reliefs of feasts, depicting monsters and men tearing into one another with silver forks and golden knives." | | 7 | "It wasn't just a guide anymore; it was a key." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 994 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.028169014084507043 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007042253521126761 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 12.67 | | std | 6.28 | | cv | 0.496 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 39.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.29213483146067415 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "It tugged her forward, pulling" | | 1 | "They emerged into a world" | | 2 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 3 | "They stood on the edge" | | 4 | "She didn't leave a single" | | 5 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 6 | "She looked at the vast" | | 7 | "They began to trek toward" | | 8 | "She turned a slow circle," | | 9 | "She focused on the Heartstone." | | 10 | "They crossed a bridge made" | | 11 | "It was a man, his" | | 12 | "He wasn't drowning; he was" | | 13 | "They entered a grove of" | | 14 | "She felt a sudden, sharp" | | 15 | "It wasn't just a guide" | | 16 | "She didn't look at them." | | 17 | "She kept her eyes on" |
| | ratio | 0.24 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against" | | 1 | "It tugged her forward, pulling" | | 2 | "Nyx followed, a smudge of" | | 3 | "They emerged into a world" | | 4 | "The sky held no sun," | | 5 | "Aurora staggered, her boots sinking" | | 6 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 7 | "Nyx’s voice drifted through the" | | 8 | "The Shade shifted, their form" | | 9 | "They stood on the edge" | | 10 | "The air tasted of burnt" | | 11 | "Isolde stared toward a distant" | | 12 | "She didn't leave a single" | | 13 | "Aurora stepped toward one of" | | 14 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 15 | "Nyx appeared beside her, a" | | 16 | "A translucent tendril of shadow" | | 17 | "The grape shivered, then suddenly" | | 18 | "Aurora recoiled, her heart hammering." | | 19 | "She looked at the vast" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade shifted, their form elongating, stretching upward to survey the horizon." | | 1 | "Heavy, syrup-like sap dripped from the vines, pooling into iridescent ponds that mirrored the amber sky." | | 2 | "Flowers with petals like shards of stained glass leaned toward them, humming a low, vibrating frequency that rattled Aurora’s teeth." | | 3 | "Things moved beneath the surface—pale, elongated shapes that brushed against the underside of the bridge, sending tremors through the bone." | | 4 | "Every few yards, a golden platter sat on a pedestal, laden with delicacies that shimmered with an unnatural glow." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |