Run: 2026-05-10-01KR92AEWXE1N9JXG97RGM1HTA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.000716
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bike's engine sputtered and died, leaving a silence so thick it pressed against Aurora's eardrums. She kicked the stand down. The gravel of Richmond Park crunched beneath her boots, a harsh sound in the dead air of midnight. She shifted the weight of the thermal delivery bag on her shoulder. The order was for a private residence on the furthest edge of the park, a location the customer had insisted upon with an urgency that bordered on panic. Yu-Fei had frowned at the address, but the tip promised on the app had been enough to make them both ignore the oddity of a dinner delivery to a wooded clearing. The moonlight filtered through the canopy in jagged shards, painting the forest floor in shades of bruised purple and charcoal. Aurora checked her phone. No signal. She stepped off the path. The grass felt too lush, springing back with a rhythmic elasticity that didn't match the dry autumn air of London. A scent hit her—cloying and sweet, like lilies left to rot in a vase of stagnant water. The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt flared. A sudden prick of heat bloomed against her chest, the crimson gem pulsing like a slow, heavy heartbeat. "Just a few more minutes," she whispered. Her voice didn't echo. The woods swallowed the sound instantly, leaving a void where the noise should have bounced. She pushed through a thicket of ferns. The foliage felt waxy, clinging to her jeans with a static grip. Ahead, the trees peeled away to reveal a circle of ancient oak standing stones. They rose from the earth like broken teeth, grey and pitted with age. This was the Fae Grove. The wildflowers here bloomed in defiance of the season. Neon blues and iridescent whites shimmered in the gloom, their petals vibrating despite the lack of wind. Aurora stopped at the perimeter. The air shifted. It grew heavy, tasting of copper and ozone. She scanned the clearing. No one waited for the food. No lights flickered from a nearby cabin. Just the stones and the oppressive weight of the silence. A snap echoed from the tree line. Aurora spun around. The shadows between the oaks seemed to thicken, coalescing into shapes that defied the geometry of the forest. A flicker of movement caught her eye—a long, pale limb sliding behind a trunk. It moved with a fluid, jointless grace. She gripped the strap of the delivery bag. "Hello?" The word felt small. From the opposite side of the clearing, a low hum began. It wasn't a sound so much as a vibration in the marrow of her bones. She stepped back, her heel catching on a protruding root. As she steadied herself, she noticed the flowers. The iridescent petals were turning. They weren't following the moon; they were tilting toward her. A soft, wet slithering sound emerged from the darkness to her left. It sounded like a heavy cloth being dragged through mud. Aurora backed away toward the standing stones. The Heartstone pendant was no longer pulsing; it was burning. The heat seeped through her clothes, warning her of a proximity that her eyes couldn't yet confirm. Something breathed. The sound came from directly behind her. A ragged, rattling inhalation that smelled of old earth and wet fur. She lunged forward, spinning around to face the source. Nothing. Only the towering oak and the silvered grass. But as she stared, she saw a footprint pressing into the soft loam. The grass flattened under an invisible weight. Then another print appeared. Then another. Something unseen was walking toward her. Aurora's breath came in shallow hitches. She didn't run. Running invited a chase. She stood her ground, her bright blue eyes darting across the clearing, searching for a break in the periphery. The hum grew louder, evolving into a dissonant choir of whispers. The voices weren't human; they lacked consonants, sounding instead like wind whistling through a graveyard of flutes. "I have your order," she called out, her voice trembling. A giggle erupted from the canopy above. It was a high, brittle sound that cracked like dry glass. Aurora looked up. Perched on a thick limb was a figure. At first, it looked like a woman in a tattered white gown, but the proportions were wrong. The arms were too long, the fingers ending in tapered, obsidian needles that dug deep into the bark. The face was a smooth, featureless expanse of pale skin, save for a wide, lipless mouth that stretched from ear to ear. The creature didn't move. It simply hung there, upside down, its hair cascading upward like ink in water. Aurora stepped back, her heart hammering against the Heartstone. The pendant glowed a fierce, warning red. The slithering sound returned, this time from three different directions. The perimeter of the grove was closing in. The shadows were no longer just shapes; they were voids, holes in the world that drifted closer with every blink of her eyes. She turned to flee, but the path she had taken was gone. In its place stood a wall of thorns, the briars weaving themselves together in real-time, knitting a fence of jagged spikes. The thing in the tree dropped. It didn't fall; it descended with a slow, drifting lightness, landing silently a few feet away. It stood tall, its spine curving in an unnatural arch. The mouth opened, revealing rows of needle-thin teeth that shimmered with a translucent slime. The creature tilted its head, a sharp, mechanical snap of the neck. "Is it warm?" the thing asked. The voice didn't come from the mouth. It echoed inside Aurora's skull, a cold vibration that made her teeth ache. Aurora shifted the bag. "Who is this for?" The creature stepped closer. It didn't walk so much as glide, its long limbs twitching in rhythmic spasms. The other shadows emerged from the tree line—pale, spindly things with hollow sockets for eyes and elongated jaws. They circled her, their movements synchronized, a slow-motion dance of predators. The one in front of her reached out a long, grey finger. It didn't touch her skin; it hovered an inch from the Heartstone pendant. "The stone," the voice vibrated in her mind. "The stone remembers the heat." Aurora felt a sudden, freezing draft. The temperature in the grove plummeted. Her breath turned to mist. The wildflowers began to wither, turning black and curling into ash as the creatures drew closer. The circle tightened. The void-like shadows merged with the pale figures, blending into a singular, oppressive wall of wrongness. One of the creatures leaned in, its lipless mouth hovering just beside her ear. It didn't breathe, but she felt a coldness radiating from its skin that threatened to numb her blood. "You brought the feast," it whispered. Aurora looked down at the delivery bag. The thermal lining was leaking a dark, viscous fluid that hadn't been there before. The smell of lilies intensified, now mixed with the metallic tang of fresh blood. She hadn't opened the bag since she left the restaurant. The creature's fingers twitched. "Open it, little bird."
created_at"2026-05-10T13:48:10.533Z" 5/10/2026, 1:48:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1184
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"cascading"
count1
12
word"mechanical"
count1
13
word"synchronized"
count1
14
word"dance"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"rhythmic"
3"echo"
4"shimmered"
5"gloom"
6"scanned"
7"flickered"
8"oppressive"
9"echoed"
10"flicker"
11"cascading"
12"mechanical"
13"synchronized"
14"dance"
15"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1181
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1149
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heartstone4
Fae1
Grove1
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Heartstone"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
globalScore0.978
windowScore1
91.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a heavy cloth being dragged t"
1"looked like a woman in a tattered white g"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1181
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean23.62
std17.37
cv0.736
sampleLengths
039
171
226
342
425
57
619
746
85
942
1027
117
1242
138
141
154
1659
1722
1834
192
2019
2144
226
2332
2428
2510
2618
273
2865
2918
3016
3141
3233
336
3440
3512
366
3720
388
3947
4025
4113
4233
4319
4432
456
4635
4710
484
494
99.05% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"being dragged"
1"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs196
matches
0"were turning"
1"were tilting"
2"weren't following"
3"was burning"
4"was walking"
5"was closing"
6"was leaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences117
ratio0.077
matches
0"A scent hit her—cloying and sweet, like lilies left to rot in a vase of stagnant water."
1"A flicker of movement caught her eye—a long, pale limb sliding behind a trunk."
2"They weren't following the moon; they were tilting toward her."
3"The Heartstone pendant was no longer pulsing; it was burning."
4"The voices weren't human; they lacked consonants, sounding instead like wind whistling through a graveyard of flutes."
5"The shadows were no longer just shapes; they were voids, holes in the world that drifted closer with every blink of her eyes."
6"It didn't fall; it descended with a slow, drifting lightness, landing silently a few feet away."
7"The other shadows emerged from the tree line—pale, spindly things with hollow sockets for eyes and elongated jaws."
8"It didn't touch her skin; it hovered an inch from the Heartstone pendant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1156
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.029411764705882353
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005190311418685121
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean10.09
std5.83
cv0.578
sampleLengths
016
15
218
312
428
531
620
74
82
95
1020
1117
127
1318
147
154
1615
177
1812
1914
2013
215
229
2317
245
253
268
274
286
297
3010
317
323
3318
3414
357
368
371
384
3911
4015
4110
428
435
4410
4512
4610
477
4810
4917
37.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.26495726495726496
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners31
93.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"Just the stones and the"
1"Only the towering oak and"
2"Then another print appeared."
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences107
matches
0"She kicked the stand down."
1"She shifted the weight of"
2"She stepped off the path."
3"Her voice didn't echo."
4"She pushed through a thicket"
5"They rose from the earth"
6"It grew heavy, tasting of"
7"She scanned the clearing."
8"It moved with a fluid,"
9"She gripped the strap of"
10"It wasn't a sound so"
11"She stepped back, her heel"
12"They weren't following the moon;"
13"It sounded like a heavy"
14"She lunged forward, spinning around"
15"She didn't run."
16"She stood her ground, her"
17"she called out, her voice"
18"It was a high, brittle"
19"It simply hung there, upside"
ratio0.28
25.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences107
matches
0"The bike's engine sputtered and"
1"She kicked the stand down."
2"The gravel of Richmond Park"
3"She shifted the weight of"
4"The order was for a"
5"Yu-Fei had frowned at the"
6"The moonlight filtered through the"
7"Aurora checked her phone."
8"She stepped off the path."
9"The grass felt too lush,"
10"A scent hit her—cloying and"
11"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
12"A sudden prick of heat"
13"Her voice didn't echo."
14"The woods swallowed the sound"
15"She pushed through a thicket"
16"The foliage felt waxy, clinging"
17"They rose from the earth"
18"This was the Fae Grove."
19"The wildflowers here bloomed in"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The grass felt too lush, springing back with a rhythmic elasticity that didn't match the dry autumn air of London."
1"A ragged, rattling inhalation that smelled of old earth and wet fur."
2"The face was a smooth, featureless expanse of pale skin, save for a wide, lipless mouth that stretched from ear to ear."
3"The mouth opened, revealing rows of needle-thin teeth that shimmered with a translucent slime."
4"It echoed inside Aurora's skull, a cold vibration that made her teeth ache."
5"It didn't breathe, but she felt a coldness radiating from its skin that threatened to numb her blood."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called out, her voice trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.667
74.6089%