| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1184 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1184 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "cascading" | | 12 | "mechanical" | | 13 | "synchronized" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1181 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1149 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.978 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 91.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a heavy cloth being dragged t" | | 1 | "looked like a woman in a tattered white g" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 23.62 | | std | 17.37 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 65 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 99.05% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "were turning" | | 1 | "were tilting" | | 2 | "weren't following" | | 3 | "was burning" | | 4 | "was walking" | | 5 | "was closing" | | 6 | "was leaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "A scent hit her—cloying and sweet, like lilies left to rot in a vase of stagnant water." | | 1 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a long, pale limb sliding behind a trunk." | | 2 | "They weren't following the moon; they were tilting toward her." | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant was no longer pulsing; it was burning." | | 4 | "The voices weren't human; they lacked consonants, sounding instead like wind whistling through a graveyard of flutes." | | 5 | "The shadows were no longer just shapes; they were voids, holes in the world that drifted closer with every blink of her eyes." | | 6 | "It didn't fall; it descended with a slow, drifting lightness, landing silently a few feet away." | | 7 | "The other shadows emerged from the tree line—pale, spindly things with hollow sockets for eyes and elongated jaws." | | 8 | "It didn't touch her skin; it hovered an inch from the Heartstone pendant." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1156 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.029411764705882353 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005190311418685121 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 10.09 | | std | 5.83 | | cv | 0.578 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 37.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.26495726495726496 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 93.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the stones and the" | | 1 | "Only the towering oak and" | | 2 | "Then another print appeared." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "She kicked the stand down." | | 1 | "She shifted the weight of" | | 2 | "She stepped off the path." | | 3 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 4 | "She pushed through a thicket" | | 5 | "They rose from the earth" | | 6 | "It grew heavy, tasting of" | | 7 | "She scanned the clearing." | | 8 | "It moved with a fluid," | | 9 | "She gripped the strap of" | | 10 | "It wasn't a sound so" | | 11 | "She stepped back, her heel" | | 12 | "They weren't following the moon;" | | 13 | "It sounded like a heavy" | | 14 | "She lunged forward, spinning around" | | 15 | "She didn't run." | | 16 | "She stood her ground, her" | | 17 | "she called out, her voice" | | 18 | "It was a high, brittle" | | 19 | "It simply hung there, upside" |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 25.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "The bike's engine sputtered and" | | 1 | "She kicked the stand down." | | 2 | "The gravel of Richmond Park" | | 3 | "She shifted the weight of" | | 4 | "The order was for a" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei had frowned at the" | | 6 | "The moonlight filtered through the" | | 7 | "Aurora checked her phone." | | 8 | "She stepped off the path." | | 9 | "The grass felt too lush," | | 10 | "A scent hit her—cloying and" | | 11 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 12 | "A sudden prick of heat" | | 13 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 14 | "The woods swallowed the sound" | | 15 | "She pushed through a thicket" | | 16 | "The foliage felt waxy, clinging" | | 17 | "They rose from the earth" | | 18 | "This was the Fae Grove." | | 19 | "The wildflowers here bloomed in" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass felt too lush, springing back with a rhythmic elasticity that didn't match the dry autumn air of London." | | 1 | "A ragged, rattling inhalation that smelled of old earth and wet fur." | | 2 | "The face was a smooth, featureless expanse of pale skin, save for a wide, lipless mouth that stretched from ear to ear." | | 3 | "The mouth opened, revealing rows of needle-thin teeth that shimmered with a translucent slime." | | 4 | "It echoed inside Aurora's skull, a cold vibration that made her teeth ache." | | 5 | "It didn't breathe, but she felt a coldness radiating from its skin that threatened to numb her blood." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |