Run: 2026-05-10-01KR92CC7B0XQX4VX4NJP9JW0E

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.002898
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park grew thick, tasting of ozone and crushed mint. Aurora reached into her jacket pocket, fingers brushing against the cold, flat surface of the Fae-forged blade. Beside her, Nyx drifted, a jagged smudge of charcoal against the vibrant green of the ferns. The shade’s violet eyes flickered as they neared the circle of ancient oaks. Stones, weathered to smooth, gray nubs, poked from the soil like broken teeth. Watch your footing. The earth shifts here. Aurora stepped over a moss-covered root. The forest floor groaned under her boots, a low, tectonic vibration that echoed in her teeth. She looked back at Nyx, then forward into the dark, tangled thicket between the stones. "Don't worry, I've got this." She pushed through a curtain of hanging moss. Light, not gold or white but a strange shimmering pearl-gray, swallowed them. The temperature plummeted. It didn't feel like a London evening anymore; the weight of the air pressed against her chest like deep-sea pressure. Inside the Grove, the world didn't just bloom; it breathed. Giant, bioluminescent lilies unfurled upward, their stems thick as marble pillars. Pale lavender petals carpeted the path, yet when Aurora planted her feet, the flowers didn't crush. They yielded, pulsing with a rhythmic, heartbeat-like glow that rippled outward once she moved past. "Look at the sky." Nyx pointed a long, tapering finger toward the canopy. There was no sun, no clouds, only a swirling tapestry of shifting auroras that mirrored the pattern of the lilies below. The oaks were massive, their bark etched with glowing runes that bled soft indigo light. Aurora felt the Heartstone pendant under her shirt. It grew hot, vibrating against her sternum, a frantic SOS in the silence. "It feels like we're walking inside a lung." She touched the rough, warm bark of a nearby oak. A hum thrummed back, a vibration that made her fingertips ache with a phantom cold. She pulled her hand away, glancing at her left wrist, at the thin, white crescent scar she’d carried since she was six. It stood out pale against the darkening tan of her skin. "This isn't just a garden. It's a lung, a heart, a trap." "An oracle's cage," Nyx whispered. The silhouette of the shade rippled, becoming almost translucent. They glided over a stream that flowed upward, the water twisting in defiance of gravity, sparkling like liquid diamond. Aurora watched a silver fish leap from the stream, its body turning into a flurry of moths before it hit the air, scattering into nothingness. "Isolde?" Aurora’s voice sounded flat, swallowed instantly by the vastness of the grove. The trees didn't echo. They absorbed everything. The silence was heavy, filled with the scent of ozone and something cloyingly sweet, like rotting peaches. They reached a central clearing marked by a dais of obsidian. Isolde Varga stood there, silver hair cascading to her feet like a river of moonlight. She didn't turn. She stared at a floating sphere of water suspended in the center of the dais. "The traveler brings iron and shadow to a place of breath." "I brought what I was told to bring, Isolde." Aurora adjusted the strap of her bag. She didn't let her hand stray far from the hilt of the blade, though the air here made her joints feel heavy, like she was submerged in honey. Every step toward the dais felt like a battle against the atmosphere itself. "The Seer offers no greeting to a ghost and a girl?" Nyx stopped at the edge of the obsidian dais. Their form solidified, the edges of their silhouette sharp enough to cut the air. The violet glow in their eyes deepened into a bruised, dangerous shade. Isolde turned. Her face was a masterwork of porcelain and starlight, untouched by the passage of three centuries. When she moved, she didn't walk; she drifted, the grass beneath her remaining perfectly upright. "A ghost who seeks a home and a girl who seeks to stop the bleeding of the Veil. Both are paths that lead to the same cliff." Aurora stepped up onto the obsidian. The stone was impossibly cold, shocking against the soles of her boots. She shivered, her breath hitching in the sudden chill. "The Veil is tearing, isn't it? My pendant hasn't stopped humming since I passed the oaks." "The Heartstone knows the hunger of Dymas. Prince Belphegor grows impatient with the lack of new delicacies." Isolde raised a hand. The sphere of water in front of her flattened into a mirror. In the reflection, Aurora saw a vision of London—but it was gray, crumbling, the streets clogged with swirling, amber-tinted smoke that tasted of charred sugar. People reached for the sky, their fingers grasping at thin air as shadows crawled up their legs, turning flesh to ash and greed. Aurora reached for the pendant, pulling the crimson stone clear of her shirt. It surged with heat, the light within it turning from a soft pulse to a blinding, rhythmic flare. "Is this why I'm here? To watch the world burn?" "You are here because you are the key that fits the lock." Isolde gestured toward the far end of the clearing, where the standing stones stood in a tighter, more jagged configuration. There, the air rippled—a faint, iridescent distortion that made Aurora’s head throb. It was the Veil, thin enough that she could see the distorted, amber hues of a different world pressing against it like a frantic hand. "The gate isn't meant to hold forever. Nothing of earth stays fixed." "I am not a soldier, Isolde. I’m a delivery person." "You deliver death to demons and hope to fools." Nyx stepped closer, the shadows around them lashing out like whips. The shade’s presence made the glowing runes on the oaks pulse faster, a panicked, chaotic rhythm that echoed the thudding in Aurora’s ears. "Tell us what we need, Seer. Spare the riddles before the Dymasian rot finds the scent of us." Isolde’s pale lavender eyes locked onto Aurora’s. There was no malice there, only a terrifying, clinical indifference. "The blade of moonsilver cannot cut a tear that has become a doorway. You need to mend, not sever. The ingredients for the stitch reside in the heart of the feast, where the glutton prince keeps his most precious, stolen breath." Aurora felt the weight of the dagger at her hip. It felt useless now, a toy for a fight she hadn't realized was a construction task. "Dymas. You want me to walk into the feast?" "I want you to survive it." A sudden howl ripped through the glade—not the sound of a wolf, but the sound of something metallic and starved, shattering the unnatural silence. The bioluminescent lilies shriveled, their graceful stems snapping as the ground beneath them began to smoke. The amber ripple at the edge of the grove intensified, turning into a jagged, glowing gash. Something heavy slammed into the field behind them. The impact sent a shockwave through the dais, knocking Aurora to her knees. She grabbed the edge of the obsidian to steady herself, her knuckles turning white. Beside her, Nyx vanished into a dark mist, their form stretching and snapping outward to meet the incoming shadow. "The feast begins, Aurora Carter. Do not choke on the first course."
created_at"2026-05-10T13:49:13.331Z" 5/10/2026, 1:49:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"marble"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"tapestry"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"cascading"
count1
10
word"porcelain"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count2
13
word"throb"
count1
14
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"echoed"
2"weight"
3"marble"
4"rhythmic"
5"tapestry"
6"etched"
7"silence"
8"echo"
9"cascading"
10"porcelain"
11"chill"
12"pulse"
13"throb"
14"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1215
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount952
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-forged1
Nyx7
London2
Grove1
Aurora15
Heartstone1
Varga1
Veil1
Isolde5
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Varga"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.712
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a battle against the atmosphe"
35.39% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.646
wordCount1215
matches
0"not gold or white but a strange shimmering pearl-gray, swallowed them"
1"not the sound of a wolf, but the sound of something metallic"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean27.61
std20.17
cv0.73
sampleLengths
072
17
237
35
443
552
64
766
88
958
1012
115
1253
131
1436
1544
1611
179
1848
1911
2035
2133
2227
2327
2416
2517
2664
2731
2810
2912
3057
3112
3210
339
3434
3518
3617
3741
3826
399
406
4156
4254
4312
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"was submerged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences94
ratio0.064
matches
0"It didn't feel like a London evening anymore; the weight of the air pressed against her chest like deep-sea pressure."
1"Inside the Grove, the world didn't just bloom; it breathed."
2"When she moved, she didn't walk; she drifted, the grass beneath her remaining perfectly upright."
3"In the reflection, Aurora saw a vision of London—but it was gray, crumbling, the streets clogged with swirling, amber-tinted smoke that tasted of charred sugar."
4"There, the air rippled—a faint, iridescent distortion that made Aurora’s head throb."
5"A sudden howl ripped through the glade—not the sound of a wolf, but the sound of something metallic and starved, shattering the unnatural silence."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount960
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.021875
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.93
std6.61
cv0.511
sampleLengths
013
117
216
313
413
53
64
76
816
915
105
118
1212
133
1420
1510
1611
1716
1815
194
209
2121
2215
238
2413
258
2610
2715
2822
2911
3012
315
329
3319
3425
351
3612
374
383
3917
4011
4115
423
4315
4411
459
467
4728
4813
4911
52.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3404255319148936
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences71
matches
0"She looked back at Nyx,"
1"She pushed through a curtain"
2"It didn't feel like a"
3"They yielded, pulsing with a"
4"It grew hot, vibrating against"
5"She touched the rough, warm"
6"She pulled her hand away,"
7"It stood out pale against"
8"They glided over a stream"
9"They absorbed everything."
10"They reached a central clearing"
11"She didn't turn."
12"She stared at a floating"
13"She didn't let her hand"
14"Their form solidified, the edges"
15"Her face was a masterwork"
16"She shivered, her breath hitching"
17"It surged with heat, the"
18"It was the Veil, thin"
19"It felt useless now, a"
ratio0.296
37.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Aurora reached into her jacket"
2"The shade’s violet eyes flickered"
3"Stones, weathered to smooth, gray"
4"The earth shifts here."
5"Aurora stepped over a moss-covered"
6"The forest floor groaned under"
7"She looked back at Nyx,"
8"She pushed through a curtain"
9"The temperature plummeted."
10"It didn't feel like a"
11"They yielded, pulsing with a"
12"Nyx pointed a long, tapering"
13"The oaks were massive, their"
14"Aurora felt the Heartstone pendant"
15"It grew hot, vibrating against"
16"She touched the rough, warm"
17"A hum thrummed back, a"
18"She pulled her hand away,"
19"It stood out pale against"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The forest floor groaned under her boots, a low, tectonic vibration that echoed in her teeth."
1"They glided over a stream that flowed upward, the water twisting in defiance of gravity, sparkling like liquid diamond."
2"Aurora watched a silver fish leap from the stream, its body turning into a flurry of moths before it hit the air, scattering into nothingness."
3"In the reflection, Aurora saw a vision of London—but it was gray, crumbling, the streets clogged with swirling, amber-tinted smoke that tasted of charred sugar."
4"People reached for the sky, their fingers grasping at thin air as shadows crawled up their legs, turning flesh to ash and greed."
5"There, the air rippled—a faint, iridescent distortion that made Aurora’s head throb."
6"The shade’s presence made the glowing runes on the oaks pulse faster, a panicked, chaotic rhythm that echoed the thudding in Aurora’s ears."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.091
78.3403%