| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1198 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1198 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "searing" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "crystalline" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "maw" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "structure" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "glistening" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "intensity" | | 19 | "gloom" | | 20 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1195 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.82% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1108 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 14 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.868 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like inverted bells made of velvet" | | 1 | "felt like walking on a living tongue" | | 2 | "as if searching for a seam" | | 3 | "feasts that seemed to move" | | 4 | "sounded like breaking glass, and the vines" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 26.56 | | std | 20.34 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 59 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 34 |
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| 97.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "were lined" | | 1 | "were draped" |
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| 83.72% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't following" | | 1 | "was digesting" | | 2 | "wasn't just growing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "They reached out a shadow-hand toward a low-hanging fruit—a pear-shaped thing that shimmered with a metallic sheen." | | 1 | "The sound wasn't melodic; it was a low, guttural hum that vibrated in her teeth." | | 2 | "The flowers didn't just move; they pulsed." | | 3 | "From the depths of the structure came the sound of laughter—heavy, wet, and devoid of joy—interspersed with the clatter of silver plates and the splashing of wine." | | 4 | "The moss wasn't just growing; it was digesting the remnants of the guests, absorbing the very essence of their presence." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1121 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02408563782337199 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0053523639607493305 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 12.45 | | std | 6.52 | | cv | 0.524 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 48.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3229166666666667 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the silver chain," | | 1 | "She didn't leave a footprint" | | 2 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 3 | "They stepped through the shimmer." | | 4 | "She gasped, her lungs filling" | | 5 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 6 | "It flowed with the consistency" | | 7 | "They reached out a shadow-hand" | | 8 | "She reached out to touch" | | 9 | "She jumped back, the Fae" | | 10 | "She looked closer." | | 11 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 12 | "Her own shadow, cast by" | | 13 | "It lingered a second too" | | 14 | "She stepped away from her" | | 15 | "They reached the edge of" | | 16 | "It wasn't a building so" | | 17 | "She gripped the silver chain," | | 18 | "She led the way into" | | 19 | "It had grown up the" |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 20.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson stone against Aurora’s" | | 1 | "She gripped the silver chain," | | 2 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 3 | "She didn't leave a footprint" | | 4 | "Aurora shifted the weight of" | | 5 | "The moonsilver hilt remained biting" | | 6 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 7 | "The Shade stood as a" | | 8 | "Nyx whispered, the voice a" | | 9 | "They stepped through the shimmer." | | 10 | "The transition hit Aurora like" | | 11 | "The scent of ozone vanished," | | 12 | "She gasped, her lungs filling" | | 13 | "Isolde gestured toward the horizon." | | 14 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 15 | "Vineyards stretched for miles, the" | | 16 | "Orchards of trees with silver" | | 17 | "Aurora descended the slope, her" | | 18 | "A stream cut through the" | | 19 | "It flowed with the consistency" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the silver chain, the heat pulsing in sync with a heartbeat that wasn't her own." | | 1 | "They stood on a ridge of iridescent violet grass that crunched like glass under Aurora’s boots." | | 2 | "Orchards of trees with silver bark twisted upward, their branches sagging under the weight of fruit that resembled faceted rubies and sapphires." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted closer to the honey-stream, their form flickering, momentarily becoming incorporeal before solidifying." | | 4 | "They reached out a shadow-hand toward a low-hanging fruit—a pear-shaped thing that shimmered with a metallic sheen." | | 5 | "The sound wasn't melodic; it was a low, guttural hum that vibrated in her teeth." | | 6 | "The path beneath them shifted from glass-grass to a plush, crimson moss that felt like walking on a living tongue." | | 7 | "It lingered a second too long, its fingers stretching toward the crimson moss, probing the ground as if searching for a seam." | | 8 | "Mountains of iridescent fish, cakes that floated inches above gold platters, and carafes of liquid that shifted colors from deep violet to burning orange." | | 9 | "Fine silk robes and velvet doublets were draped over the chairs, perfectly arranged as if the wearers had simply evaporated mid-meal." | | 10 | "Something large shifted in the greenery, a shape that mimicked the curves of a human but possessed too many joints." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora noted, her voice tight" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes scanning the horizon" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora noted (note)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |