| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1307 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "magnetic" | | 11 | "disrupt" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "desire" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "profound" | | 17 | "tracing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | | 0 | "think know" | | 1 | "think" | | 2 | "know" |
| | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tend to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1301 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 11.36% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Oh, she said, the syllable barely audible." | | 1 | "I go where the information takes me, he replied, his voice a smooth, low baritone that seemed to vibrate in the hollow o…" | | 2 | "You think you know me so well, she muttered, moving a step closer until their foreheads almost touched." | | 3 | "I expect nothing, he said, his hand coming up to hover near her cheek, his touch hesitant, almost terrified of breaking …" | | 4 | "Then start talking, she said, her voice little more than a ghost of a whisper." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1289 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 | | Eva | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Thames | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Avaros | 2 | | You | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Thames" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach his eyes" | | 1 | "baritone that seemed to vibrate in the hollow of her chest" | | 2 | "And apparently, where the trail of" | | 3 | "parchment that seemed to close in on him" | | 4 | "felt like a confession" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1301 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.78% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "tender that it" | | 1 | "heard that you" |
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| 89.46% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 54.21 | | std | 25.1 | | cv | 0.463 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 100 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 82 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 78 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 79 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 71 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.52% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't expecting" | | 1 | "was jarring" | | 2 | "were looking" | | 3 | "were asking" | | 4 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 28.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "One of his eyes, a piercing liquid amber, scanned her with a clinical intensity that made her breath hitch, while the other—that unsettling, void-like black—seemed to be reading the frayed ends of her patience before she even spoke." | | 1 | "He took a heavy breath, the scent of expensive sandalwood and something sharper—something metallic, like ozone—filling the small room." | | 2 | "The fabric was cold, but the heart beating beneath it—or whatever resided in his chest—felt remarkably human." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 136 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.029411764705882353 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014705882352941176 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 17.35 | | std | 9.95 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 48.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.38666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Even back then." | | 1 | "Especially back then." | | 2 | "Then what am I?" | | 3 | "Then start talking, she said," |
| | ratio | 0.056 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been expecting Eva," | | 1 | "He stood in the narrow" | | 2 | "He looked as though he" | | 3 | "His charcoal suit was impeccable," | | 4 | "It was less a greeting" | | 5 | "His lips quirked, a faint," | | 6 | "I trust I’m not interrupting" | | 7 | "My apologies for the lack" | | 8 | "She stared at him, acutely" | | 9 | "You’re a long way from" | | 10 | "I go where the information" | | 11 | "He made a move to" | | 12 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 13 | "He moved through the cramped" | | 14 | "she asked, shutting the door" | | 15 | "He stopped near the small" | | 16 | "He turned, the amber eye" | | 17 | "I heard you were looking" | | 18 | "I’m not looking for anything" | | 19 | "I’m just living my life," |
| | ratio | 0.592 | |
| 51.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts on the" | | 1 | "Aurora stood on the threshold," | | 2 | "She had been expecting Eva," | | 3 | "He stood in the narrow" | | 4 | "He looked as though he" | | 5 | "His charcoal suit was impeccable," | | 6 | "It was less a greeting" | | 7 | "His lips quirked, a faint," | | 8 | "I trust I’m not interrupting" | | 9 | "My apologies for the lack" | | 10 | "Rory braced a hand against" | | 11 | "She stared at him, acutely" | | 12 | "You’re a long way from" | | 13 | "Brick Lane isn't exactly the" | | 14 | "I go where the information" | | 15 | "He made a move to" | | 16 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, darted" | | 17 | "Lucien paused, his demeanor softening" | | 18 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 19 | "The transition from the hallway’s" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Or, more accurately, I heard" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 2.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts on the front door of the flat clicked back in a discordant sequence, the final one sliding home with a heavy, metallic thud that vibrated th…" | | 1 | "Aurora stood on the threshold, her black hair slightly mussed from the wind that swept through Brick Lane, the small crescent scar on her left wrist stark again…" | | 2 | "One of his eyes, a piercing liquid amber, scanned her with a clinical intensity that made her breath hitch, while the other—that unsettling, void-like black—see…" | | 3 | "I go where the information takes me, he replied, his voice a smooth, low baritone that seemed to vibrate in the hollow of her chest." | | 4 | "Stacks of research notes and crumbling scrolls teetered on every surface, forming a labyrinth of parchment that seemed to close in on him." | | 5 | "He moved through the cramped space with a grace that felt out of place among the towers of books, his cane tapping rhythmically against the floor." | | 6 | "I’m just living my life, working my shifts, and keeping my head down." | | 7 | "He wasn't looking at her as an antagonist, but with a raw, unfiltered intensity that mirrored the chaos of the flat around them." | | 8 | "His voice had lost its veneer of professional detachment, dropping into a register that felt like a confession." | | 9 | "I expect nothing, he said, his hand coming up to hover near her cheek, his touch hesitant, almost terrified of breaking her." | | 10 | "She looked at him, searching for the mask, the fixer, the cold-blooded creature from the realm of Avaros, but all she found was the man who had looked at her li…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |