| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1332 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1332 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "effortless" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "calculated" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "magnetic" | | 12 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1323 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 964 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Avarosian | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Aurora | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite shake" | | 1 | "not quite regret, but a flicker of the old, guarded warmth that used to make her feel like the only person in the room" | | 2 | "felt like a precursor to a storm" | | 3 | "felt like home" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.756 | | wordCount | 1323 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite regret, but a flicker of the old, guarded warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.48% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 44.1 | | std | 19.96 | | cv | 0.453 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 81 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 77 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 76 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 65 |
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| 88.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "was pierced" | | 1 | "was slicked" | | 2 | "was etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "was actually making" | | 1 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand remained frozen on the doorframe, her thumb brushing against the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she couldn't quite shake." | | 1 | "Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one a warm, liquid amber, the other a void of impenetrable black—searched her face." | | 2 | "There was a trace of something in his tone—not quite regret, but a flicker of the old, guarded warmth that used to make her feel like the only person in the room." | | 3 | "He was looking at her the way he used to look at a difficult piece of information—with intense, calculated scrutiny." | | 4 | "The scent of him—the sandalwood and the cold night air—was overwhelming in the cramped space." | | 5 | "The weight of the underworld, the secrets he brokered, the half-demon blood that made him an outsider in every room—it was etched into the set of his shoulders." | | 6 | "It was the same pull that had drawn her to him in the beginning—the intellectual spark, the shared sense of being out of place, the magnetic tension that had always felt like a precursor to a storm." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 975 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.035897435897435895 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010256410256410256 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 17.41 | | std | 9.21 | | cv | 0.529 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 47 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 61.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.40789473684210525 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, as the door swung" | | 1 | "Even the ivory handle of" | | 2 | "Instead, he let his forehead" |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 23.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "His charcoal suit was impeccably" | | 1 | "Her hand remained frozen on" | | 2 | "His voice was a low," | | 3 | "she whispered, the lie tasting" | | 4 | "They hadn't spoken in months," | | 5 | "He didn't offer an apology," | | 6 | "He simply waited, leaning slightly" | | 7 | "She watched him cross the" | | 8 | "He was looking at her" | | 9 | "She crossed her arms, trying" | | 10 | "He stopped beside a stack" | | 11 | "He turned his head, the" | | 12 | "He was taller than her," | | 13 | "he said, his voice dropping" | | 14 | "she countered, her voice trembling" | | 15 | "He reached out, his hand" | | 16 | "He looked older." | | 17 | "she asked, her anger giving" | | 18 | "she reminded him" | | 19 | "he said, stepping closer again," |
| | ratio | 0.491 | |
| 30.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts clicked back" | | 1 | "Aurora gripped the handle, expecting" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 3 | "His charcoal suit was impeccably" | | 4 | "Aurora didn’t move." | | 5 | "Her hand remained frozen on" | | 6 | "His voice was a low," | | 7 | "she whispered, the lie tasting" | | 8 | "They hadn't spoken in months," | | 9 | "Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes—one a warm," | | 10 | "He didn't offer an apology," | | 11 | "He simply waited, leaning slightly" | | 12 | "Aurora stepped back, a reflexive" | | 13 | "She watched him cross the" | | 14 | "Every surface of the flat" | | 15 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, rose" | | 16 | "Lucien said, his gaze sweeping" | | 17 | "He was looking at her" | | 18 | "Aurora said, closing the door" | | 19 | "She crossed her arms, trying" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 27.03% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice was a low, melodic baritone, smoothed by the effortless cadence of a man who spoke the world's languages as easily as breathing." | | 1 | "He simply waited, leaning slightly on his cane, his presence expanding to fill the narrow corridor." | | 2 | "Every surface of the flat was an obstacle: stacks of ancient scrolls, yellowing research notes, and piles of books that leaned precariously against the walls." | | 3 | "The weight of the underworld, the secrets he brokered, the half-demon blood that made him an outsider in every room—it was etched into the set of his shoulders." | | 4 | "It was the same pull that had drawn her to him in the beginning—the intellectual spark, the shared sense of being out of place, the magnetic tension that had al…" | | 5 | "She reached out, her fingers grazing the fine wool of his sleeve, her thumb catching on the cuff of his shirt." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien said, his gaze sweeping over her" | | 1 | "Rory snapped, though her heart hammered against her ribs" | | 2 | "he said, his voice dropping an octave" | | 3 | "she countered, her voice trembling despite her best efforts" | | 4 | "she asked, her anger giving way to a hollow, aching curiosity" | | 5 | "Lucien said, his expression hardening into the mask of the fixer" | | 6 | "he replied, a ghost of a smile touching his lips," |
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| 16.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |