| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "amidst" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "navigated" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "electric" | | 15 | "crystalline" | | 16 | "predator" | | 17 | "unreadable" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "echoed" | | 20 | "unwavering" | | 21 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 11.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1264 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1093 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 17 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.722 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like liquid diamond" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them" | | 2 | "sounded like a heavy branch snapping, but" | | 3 | "quite shadows either" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1264 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 21.79 | | std | 19.04 | | cv | 0.874 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 81 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 48 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | |
| 68.32% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence of the grove wasn't an absence of sound, but a presence of its own—a heavy, expectant quiet that made the blood drum in her ears." | | 1 | "The light didn't come from a sun; it emanated from the flora itself, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them." | | 2 | "It didn't shimmer; it burned with a steady, unwavering intensity that made her eyes ache." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1099 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "massive, moss-covered ridge" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.02183803457688808 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004549590536851683 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 10.99 | | std | 5.98 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 31.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2956521739130435 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a swirling nebula of" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Their footfalls made no sound" | | 1 | "She blinked, waiting for her" | | 2 | "They shimmered with an iridescent" | | 3 | "It sounded distant, coming from" | | 4 | "They crested the ridge and" | | 5 | "She pulled her hand back," | | 6 | "It sounded like a heavy" | | 7 | "They began to move again," | | 8 | "It didn't come from any" | | 9 | "It felt as though the" | | 10 | "It didn't shimmer; it burned" | | 11 | "She pointed toward the light." | | 12 | "They weren't quite solid, but" | | 13 | "They were voids, moving with" | | 14 | "It moved with a sickening," |
| | ratio | 0.174 | |
| 23.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones loomed" | | 1 | "Aurora gripped the hilt of" | | 2 | "Aurora turned to Nyx." | | 3 | "The Shade stood amidst the" | | 4 | "Violet light flickered deep within" | | 5 | "Nyx stepped forward." | | 6 | "Their footfalls made no sound" | | 7 | "The familiar scent of wet" | | 8 | "Aurora stepped through." | | 9 | "The transition hit her like" | | 10 | "The air grew heavy, sweet," | | 11 | "She blinked, waiting for her" | | 12 | "Aurora stared down." | | 13 | "The blades beneath her boots" | | 14 | "They shimmered with an iridescent" | | 15 | "Every time she moved, the" | | 16 | "Nyx drifted toward a cluster" | | 17 | "The petals curled and uncurled" | | 18 | "Aurora reached for the Heartstone" | | 19 | "The crimson gem pulsed against" |
| | ratio | 0.872 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade stood amidst the long shadows of the oaks, their form a silhouette that swallowed the moonlight." | | 1 | "Instead, a swirling nebula of lavender and gold drifted through a canopy of trees that grew far too tall, their branches interlocking like the fingers of a tita…" | | 2 | "Every time she moved, the vegetation hummed, a low-frequency vibration that traveled up her legs and settled in her teeth." | | 3 | "Aurora followed, her boots sinking into moss that felt more like velvet cushions than vegetation." | | 4 | "The light didn't come from a sun; it emanated from the flora itself, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them…" | | 5 | "Aurora knelt by a cluster of glowing ferns, her fingers hovering just above the fronds." | | 6 | "It didn't shimmer; it burned with a steady, unwavering intensity that made her eyes ache." | | 7 | "Nyx stepped in front of her, their form expanding, the edges of their silhouette blurring into the surrounding darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |