Run: 2026-05-10-01KR92HNFDZFYD2BJ6AMA1PYS0

Run Details

Duration:
2m 46s
Cost:
$0.000948
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver chain bit into the nape of Rory’s neck. The Heartstone pendant rested heavy against her collarbone, pulsing a rhythmic, dull heat that mirrored her own heartbeat. She stepped past the threshold of the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that felt too plush, too vibrant for a Richmond Park midnight. The Fae Grove didn't welcome her; it merely tolerated her. The air tasted of crushed mint and ozone. Overhead, the canopy of interlocking branches knitted together a ceiling of charcoal leaves, blotting out the moon. Only the wildflowers provided light—luminescent petals of violet and pale gold that clung to the gnarled roots of trees. They didn't sway. There was no wind, yet the leaves above whispered. Rory gripped the strap of her delivery bag. She had come for a drop-off, a request from a client who insisted on this specific, impossible coordinates. The payment offered had been triple her usual rate, enough to cover three months of rent for the flat above Silas' bar. She stopped. A sound sliced through the silence: a wet, rhythmic slapping. It sounded like a bare foot hitting damp clay. Rory spun around. The grove stretched back into a blur of indigo shadows. The standing stones she had just passed looked like jagged teeth biting into the horizon. Nothing moved. The sound had stopped the instant she turned. "Hello?" The word felt heavy, falling flat in the thick air. No echo returned. She walked forward, her eyes scanning the periphery. A flash of movement darted behind a wide-trunked cedar—something pale and spindly, moving with a jerky, unnatural cadence. It didn't run; it shifted, sliding from one shadow to the next without disturbing a single blade of grass. The Heartstone pulsed. The warmth shifted to a searing prickle. Rory reached up to touch the crimson gem. It glowed with a faint, inner light, casting a bloody hue over her knuckles. The heat intensified as she moved deeper into the clearing. The fragrance of the flowers changed, the minty sweetness curdling into the scent of stagnant water and old copper. A twig snapped to her left. She jerked her head toward the sound. A cluster of white lilies bowed low, as if something heavy had just brushed past them. But the lilies didn't spring back. They remained pressed to the earth, flattened by an invisible weight. Rory stepped back, her heel catching on a root. She steadied herself, her breath hitching. The silence had returned, but it wasn't the absence of noise. It was a predatory stillness, the kind that preceded a strike. "I have your package." She raised the bag, her voice trembling. From the darkness beyond a curtain of weeping willow branches, a voice replied. It didn't sound human. It sounded like several voices layered atop one another—a child's giggle, a woman's sigh, and the guttural rasp of a dying animal. "Leave it on the stone." Rory looked at the center of the grove. A flat, slate-grey slab rose from the earth, stained with dark, concentric circles. She walked toward the altar, her pace quickening. Every few steps, she felt a prickle on the back of her neck, the unmistakable sensation of eyes tracking the line of her spine. She refused to look back. The periphery of her vision played tricks—pale, elongated fingers gripping the edges of tree trunks, disappearing the moment she focused her gaze. The Heartstone was now vibrating against her skin, the warmth turning into a warning. As she reached the slate slab, she noticed the footprints. They weren't her own. Wide, three-toed impressions were pressed into the moss, circling the altar in a perfect, tight ring. The prints were fresh, the dew still pooling in the depressions. They led toward her. Rory set the bag down on the cold stone. She didn't let go of the handle. "Payment is via the app," she murmured. The layered voice drifted closer, no longer coming from the willows but from the air directly behind her. "We do not use... apps." A cold draft swept past her, smelling of wet earth and ancient rot. Rory lunged forward, tearing her hand away from the bag and sprinting back toward the standing stones. She didn't look back, but she heard it. The slapping sound returned, faster now. It wasn't one set of feet. It was dozens. A frantic, wet scrambling that echoed from every direction, closing the circle. The luminescence of the flowers began to fade, the violet and gold bleeding into a sickly, bruised grey. The grove was dimming, the shadows stretching long, hungry fingers across the path. Rory vaulted over a fallen log, her lungs burning. To her right, a pale face flickered between the trees. It had no nose, only two vertical slits, and eyes that were nothing more than milky, iridescent spheres. It didn't scream; it opened a mouth far too wide for its head and let out a low, vibrating hum that rattled the teeth in Rory's skull. The Heartstone flared a brilliant, blinding crimson. The hum intensified, turning into a screech that tore through the stillness. Rory saw a shape lunge from the canopy above—a blur of grey skin and needle-like claws. She dove forward, rolling through the damp moss, the creature's talons whistling through the air where her head had been a second before. She scrambled to her feet, her heart hammering against her ribs. The standing stones were only twenty yards away, their jagged silhouettes cutting through the gloom. The forest had changed. The trees seemed to have shifted, the path she had taken now blocked by a wall of interlocking thorns that hadn't been there minutes ago. "Let me out!" The chorus of voices erupted from the brush, no longer hiding. "Stay. The stone is paid. The debt is flesh." Rory backed away from the thorns, her eyes darting. The pale creatures were emerging now, stepping out of the shadows in a slow, synchronized glide. They were spindly things, their limbs too long, their joints bending in directions that defied anatomy. They didn't walk so much as twitch, their bodies snapping into new positions with every heartbeat. They didn't attack. They simply circled. One of them tilted its head, a wet click sounding in its throat. It raised a hand, pointing a long, translucent finger at the Heartstone pendant. The gem pulsed violently, the heat now a burning brand against her chest. Rory looked at the stones, then at the wall of thorns. The creatures were closing the gap, their movements becoming more fluid, their milky eyes locked on the crimson light. The one in front leaned in, its breath smelling of old graves. It didn't speak, but the voice echoed inside her mind, a thousand whispers overlapping into a single, distorted command. "Give it to us."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1139
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1139
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"searing"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"synchronized"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"silence"
2"echo"
3"scanning"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"searing"
7"weight"
8"perfect"
9"echoed"
10"flickered"
11"gloom"
12"synchronized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences95
matches
0"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1134
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1096
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Heartstone5
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.907
windowScore1
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a bare foot hitting damp clay"
1"looked like jagged teeth biting into the"
2"sounded like several voices layered atop o"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.882
wordCount1134
matches
0"no longer coming from the willows but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean24.13
std18.52
cv0.768
sampleLengths
055
110
256
348
42
519
638
71
813
945
1010
1151
126
1340
1437
154
167
1739
185
1921
2059
2114
2241
234
2416
257
2618
275
2830
298
3027
3131
3264
337
3451
3526
3629
373
3811
399
4057
416
4226
4313
4430
4531
464
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"were pressed"
93.05% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was dimming"
1"were emerging"
2"were closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences102
ratio0.078
matches
0"The Fae Grove didn't welcome her; it merely tolerated her."
1"Only the wildflowers provided light—luminescent petals of violet and pale gold that clung to the gnarled roots of trees."
2"A flash of movement darted behind a wide-trunked cedar—something pale and spindly, moving with a jerky, unnatural cadence."
3"It didn't run; it shifted, sliding from one shadow to the next without disturbing a single blade of grass."
4"It sounded like several voices layered atop one another—a child's giggle, a woman's sigh, and the guttural rasp of a dying animal."
5"The periphery of her vision played tricks—pale, elongated fingers gripping the edges of tree trunks, disappearing the moment she focused her gaze."
6"It didn't scream; it opened a mouth far too wide for its head and let out a low, vibrating hum that rattled the teeth in Rory's skull."
7"Rory saw a shape lunge from the canopy above—a blur of grey skin and needle-like claws."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount190
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.02631578947368421
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.12
std6.11
cv0.549
sampleLengths
010
118
227
310
48
517
619
73
89
98
1018
1122
122
1310
149
153
1610
1715
182
198
201
2110
223
238
2418
2519
263
277
288
2914
3010
3119
326
337
3416
356
3611
379
386
3911
4011
414
427
4313
444
4522
465
478
4813
498
32.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.2549019607843137
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners26
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Only the wildflowers provided light—luminescent"
ratio0.011
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences92
matches
0"She stepped past the threshold"
1"They didn't sway."
2"She had come for a"
3"It sounded like a bare"
4"She walked forward, her eyes"
5"It didn't run; it shifted,"
6"It glowed with a faint,"
7"She jerked her head toward"
8"They remained pressed to the"
9"She steadied herself, her breath"
10"It was a predatory stillness,"
11"She raised the bag, her"
12"It didn't sound human."
13"It sounded like several voices"
14"She walked toward the altar,"
15"She refused to look back."
16"They weren't her own."
17"They led toward her."
18"She didn't let go of"
19"She didn't look back, but"
ratio0.348
14.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences92
matches
0"The silver chain bit into"
1"The Heartstone pendant rested heavy"
2"She stepped past the threshold"
3"The Fae Grove didn't welcome"
4"The air tasted of crushed"
5"They didn't sway."
6"Rory gripped the strap of"
7"She had come for a"
8"The payment offered had been"
9"A sound sliced through the"
10"It sounded like a bare"
11"Rory spun around."
12"The grove stretched back into"
13"The standing stones she had"
14"The sound had stopped the"
15"The word felt heavy, falling"
16"She walked forward, her eyes"
17"A flash of movement darted"
18"It didn't run; it shifted,"
19"The Heartstone pulsed."
ratio0.891
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"To her right, a pale"
ratio0.011
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant rested heavy against her collarbone, pulsing a rhythmic, dull heat that mirrored her own heartbeat."
1"She stepped past the threshold of the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that felt too plush, too vibrant for a Richmond Park midnight."
2"Only the wildflowers provided light—luminescent petals of violet and pale gold that clung to the gnarled roots of trees."
3"She had come for a drop-off, a request from a client who insisted on this specific, impossible coordinates."
4"A cluster of white lilies bowed low, as if something heavy had just brushed past them."
5"A frantic, wet scrambling that echoed from every direction, closing the circle."
6"It didn't scream; it opened a mouth far too wide for its head and let out a low, vibrating hum that rattled the teeth in Rory's skull."
7"She dove forward, rolling through the damp moss, the creature's talons whistling through the air where her head had been a second before."
8"They were spindly things, their limbs too long, their joints bending in directions that defied anatomy."
9"The creatures were closing the gap, their movements becoming more fluid, their milky eyes locked on the crimson light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.25
77.2371%