Run: 2026-05-10-01KR92XQ14Q1HPG15GHFN6DH7T

Run Details

Duration:
10m 2s
Cost:
$0.001904
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Emerald light from the neon sign bled through the front window, staining the mahogany bar in streaks of radioactive green. Shadows clung to the corners of The Raven's Nest, where old maps of forgotten borders peeled from the walls. Silas polished a highball glass, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light with every rhythmic circle. Rory sat on a leather stool, her shoulders hunched. She traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a habit that surfaced whenever the silence of the bar grew too heavy. The scent of stale hops and expensive tobacco lingered in the air, mixing with the dampness of the London rain clinging to the patrons' coats. The door creaked open, admitting a gust of cold air and a man who looked entirely out of place in Soho. He wore a charcoal wool overcoat tailored to a sharp edge, and his polished oxfords clicked with precision against the grit of the floor. He stopped mid-stride, his gaze sweeping the room before locking onto the woman at the bar. The man froze. His eyes, a pale, searching grey, widened. Rory stiffened. She didn't look up, but the rhythm of her thumb against her wrist stopped. "Aurora?" The voice carried the cadence of the valleys, a ghost of Cardiff that had no business echoing in a basement bar in London. Rory finally turned her head. Julian stood five feet away. The lean, awkward boy from her Pre-Law seminars had vanished. In his place stood a man with a jawline carved from granite and an air of polished authority. He looked like the brochures for the firms they had both once dreamed of joining. Rory slid off the stool, her delivery jacket rustling. "Julian." He stepped forward, his hand extending as if to touch her shoulder, then dropping back to his side. He scanned her—the faded jacket, the tired shadows beneath her bright blue eyes, the way she held herself as if expecting a blow. "I heard you vanished. No one knew where you went. Your father told the faculty you’d taken a leave of absence for health reasons." Rory leaned back against the bar, the cold mahogany pressing into her spine. "My father likes to curate the truth." Julian let out a sharp, mirthless laugh. He signaled Silas for a drink without looking away from her. "I spent six months checking the rolls. I thought you’d gone to the States. Or maybe hidden away in some cottage in Wales to write a manifesto on the failures of the judiciary." "I just wanted the noise to stop." Silas set a glass of neat scotch in front of Julian. The older man didn't speak, but his hazel eyes shifted between the two of them, reading the tension like a decrypted cable. He retreated to the far end of the bar, leaving a pocket of suffocating intimacy. Julian took a sip of the drink, his gaze narrowing. "You were the best of us, Rory. The professors used to use your memos as the gold standard. You had a mind that could dismantle a witness in three questions. Now you're... what? Living in Soho? Working in a bar?" Rory glanced at the door, then back to him. "I deliver food, Julian. I move things from point A to point B. It's a living." "It's a waste." He stepped closer, the scent of sandalwood and success radiating off him. It was a smell that belonged in a courtroom, not here. "Why did you do it? You were a heartbeat away from a First. You had the trajectory. You had everything mapped out." Rory's grip tightened on the edge of the bar. She thought of the shattered glass in a Cardiff kitchen. She thought of Evan’s voice, a low snarl that had slowly dismantled her confidence until she was a stranger in her own skin. She thought of the night she had driven south with nothing but a duffel bag and a crushing sense of relief. "The map was wrong." Julian sighed, the sound heavy with a misplaced kind of pity. "I missed you. We all did. The group chats went silent after the second year. We wondered who had won the rivalry. I spent three years trying to outpace your ghost in the rankings, only to find out the ghost was driving a moped in London." "Is that what this is? A victory lap?" Julian's expression flickered. The polish slipped, revealing a glimpse of the boy who used to share notes with her in the back of the library. "I wanted to find you. I wanted to know if it was worth it. The hours, the stress, the way we stop sleeping and start living on caffeine and ambition. I looked at my reflection in a partner's office last week and didn't recognize the man staring back. I thought maybe you'd found the secret." Rory looked at him—really looked at him. The expensive suit was a suit of armor. The sharp jaw was a mask. He was a mirror of the life she had fled, and he looked exhausted. "I didn't find a secret, Julian. I found a way to breathe." "At the cost of your mind. Your talent." "My talent didn't stop the bruising." The words hung in the air, stark and jagged. Julian stopped breathing for a second. His eyes dropped to her wrist, to the crescent scar she had spent the last hour hiding. The silence stretched, filling with the ghosts of things they hadn't said for years. The weight of the time they had lost pressed down on them, a physical force that made the room feel smaller. Julian reached out, his fingers grazing the sleeve of her jacket. "Who was he?" Rory pulled her arm away, the movement sharp. "He's a memory I paid a lot of money to forget." Julian stepped back, the distance between them widening. He looked around at the dim lighting, the peeling maps, and the quiet authority of Silas watching from the shadows. "You're not the girl I knew." "That girl was a performance. I'm the one who survived the closing night." Julian finished his drink in one swallow. The ice clinked against the glass, a final, punctuating sound. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a sleek, embossed business card, sliding it across the mahogany. "My firm is opening a London branch. We need researchers. People who can see the patterns others miss. I don't care about the gap in your CV." Rory didn't touch the card. She watched a bead of condensation roll down the side of his empty glass. "I like my life, Julian." "You're lying." "Maybe." He looked at her, a flicker of the old rivalry sparking in his eyes, mixed with a profound, unspoken regret. He realized that the gap between them wasn't just a matter of careers or cities. It was a canyon carved by experiences he couldn't imagine and losses she couldn't articulate. Julian straightened his coat, the armor clicking back into place. "You always were a terrible liar, Aurora." He turned toward the door. As he reached the exit, he paused, his hand on the brass handle. "I still have the notes from your third-year lecture on torts. I kept them. I thought they might be useful one day." He stepped out into the rain, the green neon sign flickering above him before the door swung shut. Rory stared at the business card. She didn't pick it up. Instead, she looked at Silas. The older man walked over, his limp slight but evident, and slid a glass of water toward her. "He had expensive shoes," Silas remarked. Rory finally looked at the card, then pushed it slowly toward the edge of the bar. "He always did like to show off."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.138
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"profound"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"traced"
2"silence"
3"echoing"
4"scanned"
5"tension"
6"standard"
7"shattered"
8"sense of"
9"flickered"
10"stark"
11"weight"
12"flicker"
13"profound"
14"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount902
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Soho1
Cardiff2
Pre-Law1
Silas6
Julian11
Evan1
Rory12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Julian"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.835
windowScore0.667
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like the brochures for the firms t"
1"as if expecting a blow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1305
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"realized that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21.75
std18.34
cv0.843
sampleLengths
060
160
261
310
416
51
628
748
89
91
1041
1124
1213
137
1418
1533
167
1748
1810
1940
209
2116
223
2323
2422
2563
264
2711
2846
298
3025
3155
3235
3312
348
356
3667
3711
383
398
4011
4128
426
4313
4435
4527
4619
475
482
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences98
ratio0.02
matches
0"He scanned her—the faded jacket, the tired shadows beneath her bright blue eyes, the way she held herself as if expecting a blow."
1"Rory looked at him—really looked at him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount465
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.02795698924731183
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002150537634408602
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.32
std9.28
cv0.697
sampleLengths
020
119
221
39
426
525
621
724
816
93
107
112
1214
131
1423
155
165
1710
1818
1915
209
211
2218
2323
2424
2513
267
277
2811
2933
307
3111
3222
3315
3410
3540
369
3716
383
3912
4011
4122
429
4310
4423
4521
464
4711
4846
498
40.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.23469387755102042
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners23
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Instead, she looked at Silas."
ratio0.015
67.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences68
matches
0"She traced the small crescent"
1"He wore a charcoal wool"
2"He stopped mid-stride, his gaze"
3"His eyes, a pale, searching"
4"She didn't look up, but"
5"He looked like the brochures"
6"He stepped forward, his hand"
7"He scanned her—the faded jacket,"
8"He signaled Silas for a"
9"He retreated to the far"
10"He stepped closer, the scent"
11"It was a smell that"
12"She thought of the shattered"
13"She thought of Evan’s voice,"
14"She thought of the night"
15"He was a mirror of"
16"His eyes dropped to her"
17"He looked around at the"
18"He reached into his pocket"
19"She watched a bead of"
ratio0.382
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences68
matches
0"Emerald light from the neon"
1"Shadows clung to the corners"
2"Silas polished a highball glass,"
3"Rory sat on a leather"
4"She traced the small crescent"
5"The scent of stale hops"
6"The door creaked open, admitting"
7"He wore a charcoal wool"
8"He stopped mid-stride, his gaze"
9"The man froze."
10"His eyes, a pale, searching"
11"She didn't look up, but"
12"The voice carried the cadence"
13"Rory finally turned her head."
14"Julian stood five feet away."
15"The lean, awkward boy from"
16"He looked like the brochures"
17"Rory slid off the stool,"
18"He stepped forward, his hand"
19"He scanned her—the faded jacket,"
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He stopped mid-stride, his gaze sweeping the room before locking onto the woman at the bar."
1"He stepped forward, his hand extending as if to touch her shoulder, then dropping back to his side."
2"He scanned her—the faded jacket, the tired shadows beneath her bright blue eyes, the way she held herself as if expecting a blow."
3"She thought of Evan’s voice, a low snarl that had slowly dismantled her confidence until she was a stranger in her own skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.6671%