| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1150 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1150 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "synthetic" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "fleeting" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "glint" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "navigate" | | 12 | "firmly" | | 13 | "resonated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1145 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1005 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 20 | | Miller | 7 | | Metropolitan | 2 | | Police | 2 | | Morris | 2 | | North | 1 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Code | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Miller" | | 4 | "Police" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.505 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to twitch whenever Quinn shifted her gaze" | | 1 | "looked like liquid starlight, trapped in" | | 2 | "sigils that seemed to shift when she tilted the device" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.873 | | wordCount | 1145 | | matches | | 0 | "not touching the body, but leaning in to observe the man's face" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 30.95 | | std | 22.35 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 84 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 73 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 17 |
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| 76.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "was illuminated" | | 1 | "been ruined" | | 2 | "was sprawled" | | 3 | "been scrubbed" | | 4 | "was etched" | | 5 | "been harvested" | | 6 | "been scraped" |
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| 15.84% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "was swirling" | | 1 | "wasn't pointing" | | 2 | "was spinning" | | 3 | "wasn't following" | | 4 | "was following" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist; it was 3:14 AM." | | 1 | "No broken locks, no smashed vents, no footprints in the thick layer of dust that coated the platform—except for the victim’s." | | 2 | "She remembered the way his eyes had looked three years ago—that same impossible light, that same expression of profound, terrified confusion before he had vanished from a locked room." | | 3 | "But there were no chemical smells—only a faint, lingering scent of ozone and dried cinnamon." | | 4 | "Something caught the light—a glint of metal buried in a crack in the platform." | | 5 | "The face wasn't marked with cardinal directions; instead, it was etched with a series of intricate, interlocking sigils that seemed to shift when she tilted the device." | | 6 | "She had heard whispers of a place that didn't exist on any map—a market for the impossible, hidden in the veins of London." | | 7 | "He wasn't just dead; he looked emptied." | | 8 | "The \"drugs\" in his pocket weren't synthetics; they were likely alchemical reagents, banned substances from another realm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1013 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02665350444225074 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01678183613030602 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 12.05 | | std | 7.13 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 34.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.30526315789473685 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 41.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "More importantly, there was a" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 66.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a heavy, stagnant" | | 1 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 2 | "He was a man in" | | 3 | "He was sprawled on his" | | 4 | "He looked up as Quinn" | | 5 | "She stopped three feet from" | | 6 | "She didn't see a drug" | | 7 | "She saw a void." | | 8 | "It was a ghost, a" | | 9 | "She knelt, not touching the" | | 10 | "It wasn't blood." | | 11 | "It was something that looked" | | 12 | "Her mind drifted, for a" | | 13 | "She remembered the way his" | | 14 | "She had known there was" | | 15 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 16 | "It was a small brass" | | 17 | "It was heavy for its" | | 18 | "It was spinning violently, a" | | 19 | "She felt a cold prickle" |
| | ratio | 0.383 | |
| 27.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "It was a heavy, stagnant" | | 2 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 3 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 4 | "The crime scene was illuminated" | | 5 | "The white light bounced off" | | 6 | "He was a man in" | | 7 | "He was sprawled on his" | | 8 | "DS Miller was already there," | | 9 | "He looked up as Quinn" | | 10 | "Miller said, gesturing vaguely at" | | 11 | "Quinn didn't answer immediately." | | 12 | "She stopped three feet from" | | 13 | "She didn't see a drug" | | 14 | "She saw a void." | | 15 | "The station wasn't on any" | | 16 | "It was a ghost, a" | | 17 | "Quinn stepped closer, her sharp" | | 18 | "She knelt, not touching the" | | 19 | "Quinn said, her voice a" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, there were no signs" | | 1 | "As if whatever had been" | | 2 | "To enter, one needed a" | | 3 | "To navigate the rifts, one" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a rusted rail, her movements defined by a rigid, military precision that felt out of place in the decaying subterranean spra…" | | 1 | "The white light bounced off grime-streaked tiles, casting long, jagged shadows that seemed to twitch whenever Quinn shifted her gaze." | | 2 | "A faint, shimmering gold luminescence was swirling beneath the surface of the man's neck, moving in a slow, rhythmic spiral that defied the laws of circulation." | | 3 | "The face wasn't marked with cardinal directions; instead, it was etched with a series of intricate, interlocking sigils that seemed to shift when she tilted the…" | | 4 | "A black market for the supernatural that migrated every full moon, slipping through the cracks of reality." | | 5 | "She could almost feel a vibration in the air, a low-frequency hum that resonated in her teeth." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice a low, precise rasp" | | 1 | "Quinn ordered, her voice devoid of emotion" | | 2 | "Quinn said, her grip tightening on the brass compass" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Miller sighed (sigh)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Quinn ordered (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.3 | |