Run: 2026-05-10-01KR92YRTBKGJ88H1QAPDFHV3S

Run Details

Duration:
2m 41s
Cost:
$0.001350
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed, casting a rhythmic, sickly emerald glow over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Inside, the air carried the scent of peat smoke, old leather, and the metallic tang of a draft beer. Walls of mahogany held a gallery of yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs of cities that no longer existed in the form they were captured. Aurora sat on a high stool, her shoulder-length black hair shielding her face. She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a mindless habit that anchored her to the present. Beside her, Silas leaned against the bar, his grey-streaked auburn beard neatly trimmed. He rotated a silver signet ring on his right hand, his gaze drifting toward the door. The chime above the entrance rang. A woman stepped in, shaking a transparent umbrella. She wore a tailored charcoal wool coat that cost more than Aurora’s monthly rent. Her blonde hair, once a wild mane of curls in Cardiff, now sat in a disciplined, sleek bob. Aurora froze. The glass in her hand tilted. Eva scanned the room, her eyes landing on the bar. The recognition hit her like a physical blow. She stopped mid-stride, her designer heels clicking once against the floorboards before falling silent. "Rory?" Aurora didn't move. She stared at the polished surface of the mahogany. "I can't believe it. I actually found you." Eva approached, the scent of expensive lilies and cold rain following her. She stopped a few feet away, her expression a mask of controlled surprise. The girl who had once smuggled Aurora out of a locked house in the middle of the night was gone. In her place stood a woman who looked like she belonged in a boardroom in Canary Wharf. "You look... different." Aurora finally looked up, her bright blue eyes flat. "Ten years tends to do that." Eva let out a short, breathless laugh. She gestured to the dim lighting and the dusty maps. "This is where you've been? In a place like this?" "I live upstairs." Eva's eyebrows arched. She looked around the bar, her gaze lingering on a smudge of grime on a nearby table. "I thought you'd be in law school. Or at least working at a firm. Your father would have a heart attack if he saw you now." "My father's opinion stopped mattering the day I stopped answering his calls." Silas cleared his throat, his hazel eyes moving between the two women. He shifted his weight, his left leg giving a faint, audible pop. "I'll leave you two to catch up." He retreated toward the back room, the bookshelf sliding shut behind him with a muffled thud. Eva stepped closer, her hand reaching out as if to touch Aurora’s arm, then retracting. "I worried about you. For years. After the move, you just... vanished. I sent letters. I called." "I changed my number." "Because of him?" The mention of Evan brought a sudden, sharp silence to the room. Aurora’s grip tightened on her glass. The ice clinked against the rim. "He doesn't know where I am." "He's a ghost, Rory. I heard he went through a messy divorce three years ago. He's probably not even the same man." "That's the problem with ghosts. They don't change. They just haunt." Eva sighed, her posture sagging for a fleeting second. She leaned against the bar, the expensive fabric of her coat bunching. "I’m a senior partner now. At Sterling and Croft. I spent five years grinding through the associate program, sleeping four hours a night, fighting for every inch of ground." "Congratulations." "I wanted to tell you. I thought maybe we could have done it together. We were the smartest people in that entire godforsaken town." Aurora looked at the woman before her. The ambition in Eva's eyes was a hunger she recognized, but it was a hunger Aurora had starved out of herself. "I don't want the ground you're fighting for." "What do you want, then? Delivering food for a restaurant? Hiding in a basement bar in Soho?" Aurora set the glass down. The sound was a sharp crack in the quiet room. "I want to wake up without checking the locks on the door. I want to walk down the street without wondering if a specific car is following me. I have a life, Eva. It's small, and it's quiet, and it's mine." Eva’s face hardened. The softness of the old friend vanished, replaced by a polished, professional detachment. "You're playing the victim. You've been playing it for a decade. You fled the city, sure, but you never actually left the trauma. You're just orbiting it in a different zip code." Aurora stood up. She was shorter than Eva, but she held herself with a stillness that made the other woman seem frantic. "You saved me back then. I never forgot that. But you didn't save me so I could become a version of you." "I'm successful, Rory. I'm happy." "You're wearing a costume." Eva flinched. She looked down at her charcoal coat, then back at Aurora. Her eyes shimmered, the mask slipping for a heartbeat. "I had to change. If I stayed the person who helped you run away, I would have drowned in the guilt of everything I left behind. I couldn't carry your weight and mine." "I never asked you to carry me." "You didn't have to. We were seventeen. We didn't know how to set boundaries." Eva reached into her bag and pulled out a sleek, cream-colored business card. She slid it across the mahogany. "If you ever get tired of the rain and the neon, call me. I can get you a position. A real one." Aurora looked at the card. The gold embossed lettering caught the green light of the sign outside. "Why now? Why show up here after all this time?" Eva paused, her hand hovering over her bag. "I drove past a place in Cardiff yesterday. The old house. It's painted yellow now. Someone planted hydrangeas in the garden." "And?" "I realized I don't remember the color of the walls in our bedroom. I realized I've spent so much time building this life that I can't remember why I started building it in the first place." Aurora didn't pick up the card. She watched a drop of rain slide down the windowpane, carving a clear path through the grime. "The walls were pale blue," Aurora said. "With the peeling wallpaper in the corner where we used to hide the cigarettes." Eva closed her eyes. A single breath escaped her, trembling. "Pale blue." "You can't buy that back, Eva. No matter how many partners you make at the firm." Eva straightened her coat, the mask snapping back into place. She stepped back toward the door, her expression unreadable. "I suppose not." The chime rang as Eva exited. The door swung shut, leaving Aurora alone in the emerald glow. She looked at the cream-colored card on the bar. With a slow, deliberate motion, she pushed it toward the edge of the mahogany and let it flutter to the sawdust-covered floor.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.053
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1188
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1188
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"traced"
2"scanned"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"fleeting"
6"shimmered"
7"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1188
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount682
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.49
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Silas2
Aurora17
Cardiff1
Canary1
Wharf1
Evan1
Eva15
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Canary"
globalScore0.254
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like she belonged in a boardroom i"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1188
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean18.56
std14.63
cv0.788
sampleLengths
064
163
246
38
432
51
612
78
862
93
109
116
1217
1310
143
1520
1626
1712
1824
197
2016
2115
2217
234
243
2524
266
2722
2811
2921
3029
311
3224
3328
348
3517
3615
3741
3816
3932
4022
4122
425
434
4422
4533
467
4714
4819
4922
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"were captured"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences100
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount692
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sleek, cream-colored business"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.023121387283236993
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005780346820809248
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean11.88
std8.03
cv0.676
sampleLengths
021
119
224
313
421
513
616
76
88
914
1018
112
126
1310
148
1514
161
173
189
198
2012
2113
2220
2317
243
259
266
277
2810
2910
303
313
3217
3326
3412
3512
3612
377
3816
3915
4017
414
423
4312
446
456
466
4722
4811
499
46.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.27
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences60
matches
0"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
1"He rotated a silver signet"
2"She wore a tailored charcoal"
3"Her blonde hair, once a"
4"She stopped mid-stride, her designer"
5"She stared at the polished"
6"She stopped a few feet"
7"She gestured to the dim"
8"She looked around the bar,"
9"He shifted his weight, his"
10"He retreated toward the back"
11"She leaned against the bar,"
12"She was shorter than Eva,"
13"She looked down at her"
14"Her eyes shimmered, the mask"
15"She slid it across the"
16"She watched a drop of"
17"She stepped back toward the"
18"She looked at the cream-colored"
ratio0.317
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences60
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Walls of mahogany held a"
2"Aurora sat on a high"
3"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
4"He rotated a silver signet"
5"The chime above the entrance"
6"A woman stepped in, shaking"
7"She wore a tailored charcoal"
8"Her blonde hair, once a"
9"The glass in her hand"
10"Eva scanned the room, her"
11"The recognition hit her like"
12"She stopped mid-stride, her designer"
13"Aurora didn't move."
14"She stared at the polished"
15"Eva approached, the scent of"
16"She stopped a few feet"
17"The girl who had once"
18"Aurora finally looked up, her"
19"Eva let out a short,"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a mindless habit that anchored her to the present."
1"She wore a tailored charcoal wool coat that cost more than Aurora’s monthly rent."
2"Eva stepped closer, her hand reaching out as if to touch Aurora’s arm, then retracting."
3"She was shorter than Eva, but she held herself with a stillness that made the other woman seem frantic."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.053
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2490%