| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 89.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1438 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1438 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "spectral" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "symphony" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "crystalline" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1431 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1206 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Shade | 4 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 4 | | Aurora | 12 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "hum that seemed to vibrate within her very bones" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once" | | 2 | "appeared beside her in a sudden blur of darkness, their expressionless face turned toward a dense thicket of weeping willow-like trees" | | 3 | "sounded like a footstep" | | 4 | "looked like a trick of the light or a hea" | | 5 | "proportions that seemed to swallow the very light around it" |
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| 60.24% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.398 | | wordCount | 1431 | | matches | | 0 | "not the lush, vibrant colors of the Grove, but a suffocating, amber warmth" | | 1 | "not a whisper or a chime, but the heavy, wet sound of something large" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 26.02 | | std | 20.09 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 75 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 45 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 44 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "They didn't use a flashlight; the faint violet glow from their eyes acted as a dim, spectral lantern, casting long, distorted shadows that danced between the trees." | | 1 | "As they stepped past the final standing stone, the familiar sounds of London—the distant hum of traffic, the muffled sirens, the rhythmic pulse of the city—vanished." | | 2 | "The branches of these trees didn't hang; they drifted upward, defying gravity, swaying in an invisible current." | | 3 | "Within the shimmer, she caught glimpses of something else—not the lush, vibrant colors of the Grove, but a suffocating, amber warmth." | | 4 | "The fragrance of the wildflowers had changed from mint and ozone to something much more intoxicating—a heavy, nectar-like scent that made her head swim." | | 5 | "The wind smelled of spiced wine and roasting meat—a decadent, heavy scent that felt entirely out of place in the ethereal forest." | | 6 | "It didn't tear further; it dilated, like a pupil expanding in the dark." | | 7 | "From the center of the amber ripple, a sound emerged—not a whisper or a chime, but the heavy, wet sound of something large and soft sliding through a narrow opening." | | 8 | "Through the glare, a shape began to resolve—a mass of shifting, golden proportions that seemed to swallow the very light around it." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1218 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "garish, sun-drenched nightmare." |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.025451559934318555 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009852216748768473 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 14.45 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.518 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 41.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.30303030303030304 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, they expanded, their shadow" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "They didn't use a flashlight;" | | 1 | "She knelt beside a cluster" | | 2 | "She reached out, her hand" | | 3 | "It warped the view of" | | 4 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 5 | "They reached out a hand" | | 6 | "She watched the way the" | | 7 | "She wiped a bead of" | | 8 | "She noticed then that the" | | 9 | "They moved in geometric patterns," | | 10 | "She pointed to a patch" | | 11 | "They were tiny, perfect circles," | | 12 | "She drew the Fae-forged blade." | | 13 | "It didn't tear further; it" |
| | ratio | 0.184 | |
| 25.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora brushed a stray strand" | | 2 | "The crimson gem thrummed against" | | 3 | "Nyx drifted a few inches" | | 4 | "The Shade lacked a solid" | | 5 | "They didn't use a flashlight;" | | 6 | "Aurora gripped the hilt of" | | 7 | "The Fae-forged blade felt unnaturally" | | 8 | "Aurora inhaled deeply, her lungs" | | 9 | "The Fae Grove stretched out" | | 10 | "Flowers the size of dinner" | | 11 | "Nyx’s voice carried on a" | | 12 | "The Shade’s form elongated, stretching" | | 13 | "Aurora moved deeper into the" | | 14 | "She knelt beside a cluster" | | 15 | "She reached out, her hand" | | 16 | "The spores swirled in her" | | 17 | "Nyx appeared beside her in" | | 18 | "The branches of these trees" | | 19 | "Aurora stood, her eyes scanning" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Even though it was dusk," | | 1 | "To anyone else, it would" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem thrummed against her skin, a rhythmic, feverish heat that signaled something far more potent than the cooling evening air." | | 1 | "They didn't use a flashlight; the faint violet glow from their eyes acted as a dim, spectral lantern, casting long, distorted shadows that danced between the tr…" | | 2 | "In their place rose a symphony of impossible noises: the chime of glass leaves brushing together and a low, melodic hum that seemed to vibrate within her very b…" | | 3 | "Flowers the size of dinner plates bloomed in colors that defied the spectrum, their petals translucent and glowing with internal light." | | 4 | "She reached out, her hand hovering over a fern that shimmered with silver spores." | | 5 | "The sense of wonder that had initially gripped her began to fray at the edges, replaced by a prickle of unease at the base of her neck." | | 6 | "Aurora felt the Heartstone pulse violently, a sharp heat that made her wince." | | 7 | "The warmth spread through her torso, a localized fever that made her lightheaded." | | 8 | "The fragrance of the wildflowers had changed from mint and ozone to something much more intoxicating—a heavy, nectar-like scent that made her head swim." | | 9 | "They were tiny, perfect circles, as if someone had been tapping a cane in a rhythmic cadence." | | 10 | "The bell-shaped flowers began to pulse in unison, their light brightening and dimming like a collective heartbeat." | | 11 | "The wind smelled of spiced wine and roasting meat—a decadent, heavy scent that felt entirely out of place in the ethereal forest." | | 12 | "Instead, they expanded, their shadow spreading across the moss like an ink blot, widening to cover the space between Aurora and the puncture." | | 13 | "Through the glare, a shape began to resolve—a mass of shifting, golden proportions that seemed to swallow the very light around it." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |