Run: 2026-05-10-01KR930PXSG7BGVQ502DQNZRGX

Run Details

Model:
Gemma 4 31B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.000761
Provider:
DeepInfra

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
86.44% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
23.15% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
42.61% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
55.66% Name drop frequency (details)
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
99.11% Passive voice overuse (details)
52.94% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
50.26% Sentence opener variety (details)
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
54.34% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
11.28% Technical jargon density (details)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
68.9925% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the gap between the two ancient oak standing stones and felt a sudden, sharp pop in her ears, as if she had descended a thousand feet in a lift. The humid, heavy air of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a breeze that smelled of crushed mint and ancient ozone. She stopped dead, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in colors that didn't exist in London—shimmering iridescent violets and golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat. "Don't touch the blue ones," Isolde warned. The Half-Fae walked ahead of them, her silver hair trailing behind her like a fallen comet. Rory watched the grass; Isolde’s feet brushed the petals, yet she left no footprints, no crushed stems, nothing to mark her passage. "They remember everything you’ve ever forgotten, and they’ll try to give it all back at once. It’s a very noisy way to go mad." Rory instinctively tightened her grip on the strap of her bag, her thumb brushing the cold, moonsilver hilt of the leaf-shaped dagger Isolde had given her. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their form a flickering smudge of ink against the vibrant landscape. The Shade didn't walk so much as flow, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that seemed to absorb the light around them. "The air here tastes of old songs," Nyx whispered, the voice sounding like wind whistling through a graveyard. "And secrets that have forgotten their owners." "It's just a grove," Rory muttered, though her bright blue eyes were wide, scanning the canopy. Above them, the trees didn't have leaves so much as translucent shards of emerald glass that tinkled in the wind, creating a melodic, dissonant chime. As they pushed deeper into the Fae Grove, the sense of disorientation grew. Rory glanced back at the standing stones, but they had already vanished behind a curtain of weeping willows whose branches were draped in glowing, pearlescent moss. The geometry of the place felt wrong; a path that looked straight seemed to curve in ways that defied physics, and the light shifted from a pale morning glow to a deep, twilight indigo in the span of a few dozen paces. Rory felt a sudden, rhythmic thrum against her chest. She reached inside her collar and pulled out the Heartstone Pendant. The deep crimson gem was pulsing, a faint inner glow emanating from the stone. More concerning was the heat. It wasn't the gentle warmth of a sun-baked pebble; it was a demanding, insistent heat that radiated through her skin. "Isolde," Rory said, her voice tight. "The pendant is reacting. Why is it reacting here?" Isolde stopped and turned, her pale lavender eyes shimmering with a distant, knowing light. She didn't answer directly—she never did. "The river that flows beneath the roots does not carry water, little bird. It carries the echoes of every realm. Where the Veil is thin, the stone remembers the fire of its home." Rory frowned. She knew the pendant had come from Dymas, the realm of gluttony and excess, but she hadn't expected it to act like a compass in a Fae forest. "You're saying there's a rift here?" "The Veil is a garment, Aurora," Isolde replied, her voice melodic and cryptic. "And in this grove, the fabric has been worn thin by a thousand years of longing." Nyx suddenly surged forward, their shadowy form elongating, stretching toward a cluster of towering ferns that glowed with a sickly, pale light. "Something is leaking," the Shade hissed. Rory followed, her hand now firmly gripping the Fae-Forged Blade. As they cleared the ferns, the grove opened into a wide, circular clearing. In the center sat a pool of water so still it looked like a sheet of polished obsidian. But it wasn't reflecting the emerald sky or the glass trees. Instead, the surface of the water showed a sky of warm, oppressive amber. Rory recognized it instantly from the fragments of lore Isolde had shared—the sky of Dymas. The air around the pool shimmered with a faint distortion, a ripple in reality that looked like heat haze on a highway. "A tear," Rory whispered. "A doorway left ajar," Isolde corrected. As Rory stepped closer to the edge of the obsidian pool, the Heartstone Pendant began to vibrate violently against her skin. The heat was nearly searing now. She looked down into the amber reflection and saw a glimpse of something sprawling and opulent—vineyards of gold-leafed grapes and grand, towering kitchens that smelled, even from here, of cinnamon and roasted meats. It was an intoxicating scent, one that made her stomach ache with a sudden, ravenous hunger. "Don't look too long," Nyx warned, their voice now a sharp gust of wind. "The Gluttony of Dymas doesn't just hunger for food. It hungers for presence. For souls." Rory felt a tugging sensation in her gut, a magnetic pull drawing her toward the water. For a second, the delivery jobs in London, the suffocating memory of Evan, and the pressure of her father's legal expectations felt like a grey blur. The amber world offered warmth, indulgence, and a freedom that felt visceral. She leaned forward, the toe of her boot touching the edge of the obsidian water. The Fae-Forged Blade in her hand suddenly flashed with a cold, brilliant light, the moonsilver reacting to the proximity of the rift. The sudden chill snapped Rory back to herself. She gasped, stumbling backward, her heart hammering against her ribs. "It's like a vacuum," Rory breathed, wiping a bead of sweat from her forehead. She looked at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a grounding reminder of a childhood accident and a life lived in the tangible, messy world of humans. "The Veil is weakening," Isolde said, her expression unusually grave. "The winter solstice approaches. The barriers that keep the Prince of Dymas in his garden are fraying." Rory looked from the shimmering rift to the ethereal seer and the shadow-being at her side. She had come to the grove seeking answers, but as she stared at the amber sky trapped in a pool of black water, she realized she had only found a window into a much larger, more dangerous war. "If it's fraying," Rory said, her cool-headedness returning as she slipped the pendant back under her shirt, "then we need to figure out how to stitch it shut before something decides to walk through." Nyx merged with the shadow of a glass tree, their glowing violet eyes the only thing visible in the dark. "Some things," the Shade whispered, "prefer to walk. And some prefer to hunt."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.619
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"echoes"
count1
6
word"firmly"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"tangible"
count1
15
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"scanning"
2"sense of"
3"rhythmic"
4"warmth"
5"echoes"
6"firmly"
7"oppressive"
8"shimmered"
9"searing"
10"stomach"
11"magnetic"
12"chill"
13"reminder"
14"tangible"
15"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
42.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1102
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount901
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Half-Fae1
Isolde8
Nyx5
Shade3
Rory17
Fae5
Grove1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Dymas2
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Evan1
persons
0"Half-Fae"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Shade"
4"Rory"
5"Pendant"
6"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Dymas"
globalScore0.557
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat"
1"shadow that seemed to absorb the light around them"
2"looked like a sheet of polished obsidian"
3"looked like heat haze on a highway"
4"felt like a grey blur"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1102
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean44.08
std23.24
cv0.527
sampleLengths
086
169
263
325
441
581
659
715
853
936
1029
1128
1280
1322
144
156
1676
1729
1869
1940
2043
2127
2254
2334
2433
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"were draped"
52.94% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was pulsing"
1"wasn't reflecting"
2"was nearly searing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences65
ratio0.108
matches
0"She stopped dead, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in colors that didn't exist in London—shimmering iridescent violets and golds that seemed to pulse in time with her own heartbeat."
1"Rory watched the grass; Isolde’s feet brushed the petals, yet she left no footprints, no crushed stems, nothing to mark her passage."
2"The geometry of the place felt wrong; a path that looked straight seemed to curve in ways that defied physics, and the light shifted from a pale morning glow to a deep, twilight indigo in the span of a few dozen paces."
3"It wasn't the gentle warmth of a sun-baked pebble; it was a demanding, insistent heat that radiated through her skin."
4"She didn't answer directly—she never did."
5"Rory recognized it instantly from the fragments of lore Isolde had shared—the sky of Dymas."
6"She looked down into the amber reflection and saw a glimpse of something sprawling and opulent—vineyards of gold-leafed grapes and grand, towering kitchens that smelled, even from here, of cinnamon and roasted meats."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount914
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.028446389496717725
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01312910284463895
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean16.95
std8.97
cv0.529
sampleLengths
032
120
234
37
416
522
624
726
815
922
1018
117
1216
1325
1413
1526
1642
179
1811
1914
205
2120
226
239
2414
256
2633
272
2828
296
3013
3116
3222
336
3410
3513
3618
3711
3813
3915
4022
414
426
4321
446
4533
4616
4714
4815
4916
50.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3384615384615385
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"More concerning was the heat."
1"Instead, the surface of the"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences53
matches
0"She stopped dead, her boots"
1"She reached inside her collar"
2"It wasn't the gentle warmth"
3"She didn't answer directly—she never"
4"She knew the pendant had"
5"She looked down into the"
6"It was an intoxicating scent,"
7"She leaned forward, the toe"
8"She gasped, stumbling backward, her"
9"She looked at the small"
10"She had come to the"
ratio0.208
54.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences53
matches
0"Rory stepped through the gap"
1"The humid, heavy air of"
2"She stopped dead, her boots"
3"The Half-Fae walked ahead of"
4"Rory watched the grass; Isolde’s"
5"Rory instinctively tightened her grip"
6"The Shade didn't walk so"
7"Nyx whispered, the voice sounding"
8"Rory muttered, though her bright"
9"Rory glanced back at the"
10"The geometry of the place"
11"Rory felt a sudden, rhythmic"
12"She reached inside her collar"
13"The deep crimson gem was"
14"It wasn't the gentle warmth"
15"Rory said, her voice tight"
16"Isolde stopped and turned, her"
17"She didn't answer directly—she never"
18"She knew the pendant had"
19"Isolde replied, her voice melodic"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rory stepped through the gap between the two ancient oak standing stones and felt a sudden, sharp pop in her ears, as if she had descended a thousand feet in a …"
1"The humid, heavy air of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a breeze that smelled of crushed mint and ancient ozone."
2"She stopped dead, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in colors that didn't exist in London—shimmering iridescent violets and golds that…"
3"Above them, the trees didn't have leaves so much as translucent shards of emerald glass that tinkled in the wind, creating a melodic, dissonant chime."
4"It wasn't the gentle warmth of a sun-baked pebble; it was a demanding, insistent heat that radiated through her skin."
5"Nyx suddenly surged forward, their shadowy form elongating, stretching toward a cluster of towering ferns that glowed with a sickly, pale light."
6"She gasped, stumbling backward, her heart hammering against her ribs."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx whispered, the voice sounding like wind whistling through a graveyard"
1"Rory said, her voice tight"
2"Isolde replied, her voice melodic and cryptic"
3"Isolde said, her expression unusually grave"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Isolde warned (warn)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"the Shade hissed (hiss)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5"Isolde corrected (correct)"
6"Nyx warned (warn)"
7"Rory breathed (breathe)"
8"the Shade whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.619
leniency1
rawRatio0.692
effectiveRatio0.692
68.9925%