Run: 2026-05-10-01KR9388XWAZDYRTJ05BBYCQ98

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.002737
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts on Eva’s front door were a rhythmic, metallic stutter that Rory had grown accustomed to, but the knock that followed was unfamiliar. It was heavy, rhythmic, and possessed a deliberate, aristocratic cadence that had no business echoing through the cramped hallway above a curry house on Brick Lane. Rory wiped her hands on her jeans, leaving a faint smear of charcoal from the notes she’d been organizing, and glanced at Ptolemy, who was currently sprawled across a stack of brittle, parchment-bound scrolls. The cat didn't even twitch an ear. She swung the door open, her breath catching in a way that had nothing to do with surprise and everything to do with muscle memory. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, looking like a misplaced shard of polished glass in the grimy, paper-cluttered expanse of the hallway. He was draped in a tailored charcoal suit that made the dim, yellowed light of the landing seem somehow inadequate. His platinum-blond hair was slicked back, and his eyes—one amber, one flat, abyss-black—tracked the movement of her throat with predatory precision. He rested his hands on the ivory handle of his cane, the top of which caught the light. You look like you’re waiting for a raid, he said. His voice was accented, smooth as velvet dragged over gravel, and it vibrated in the small space between them. Rory didn't move to let him in. I’m waiting for peace and quiet, Lucien. Which you have rarely provided, in any city. He offered a thin, lopsided smile that didn't reach his eyes. May I? The stairwell is not exactly curated for my sensibilities. Rory stepped back, pulling the door wide. She didn't offer a chair, mostly because the only one not currently occupied by a stack of books had a broken leg held together by duct tape. She stayed near the threshold, her fingers unconsciously brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she had never managed to break, especially not around him. The flat smelled of old paper, rain, and the lingering spice of the curry shop downstairs. Lucien navigated the clutter with the grace of a predator who had mapped the terrain despite the chaos. He stopped by a pile of scrolls, his heterochromatic gaze lingering on the titles. You’re still digging, he noted, his tone shifting into something more dangerous. I’m working, Rory corrected, crossing her arms over her chest. It’s what I do. It’s what I did in London before you decided my business was your business. What are you doing here, Luc? We were very clear that the bridge was burned. It was never a bridge, Rory. It was a drawbridge. And you’ve kept it raised for three months. She felt the heat rise in her cheeks, a flush of irritation and something softer, something she had spent ninety days trying to scrub out of her internal landscape. After leaving Evan, after the mess in Cardiff, she had sought a clean slate. Lucien had been the complication she hadn't anticipated—a man who lived in the gray spaces where she was trying to find a footing. I raised it for a reason, she said, her voice steadier than she felt. You deal in information, and I deal in secrets. When they overlap, people get hurt. I’m done being the collateral damage in your reach for whatever piece of the underworld you’re trying to hoard this week. Lucien turned, his cane clicking sharply against the floorboards. He looked at her then, really looked at her, his expression stripping away the mask of the detached fixer. The amber eye swirled with a light that felt almost human, while the darker one remained a bottomless void. He closed the distance between them in two strides, invading her space until she could smell him—dry sandalwood and the faint, ozone scent of something not entirely of this world. I didn't come here to trade secrets, he murmured. He leaned in, and Rory could have moved; she could have stepped toward the kitchenette, but she stayed anchored to the spot, pinned by the intensity of his focus. You were reckless when you left. You didn't even check the wards on the safehouse. I’ve been tracking that low-level demon you crossed in Marseille. He’s in London, Rory. And he’s not looking for an apology. Rory felt a chill settle in the marrow of her bones, but she held his gaze. I can handle myself. I’ve been delivering orders for Yu-Fei for months without a scrape. Delivery work is a hobby for you, he countered dryly. Don't play the innocent with me, Laila. I know who you are. I know what you’re capable of when your back is to the wall. Don't call me that, she snapped. The name felt like a weight, a relic of a life she wasn't sure she wanted to resurrect, but the way he said it—as if it were a prayer and a curse bound together—made her knees turn to water. He reached out, his hand hovering just an inch from her shoulder, as if he expected her to bolt. He didn't touch her, but the air between them was electric, thick with the weight of the last three months of silence. I didn't come here to fight, he said, his voice dropping into a register that made her head swim. I came here because when the wind shifts, I think of you. When the wards hum in the wrong key, I think of you. Rory let out a sharp, jagged laugh. That’s not an apology, Lucien. That’s a haunting. He stepped closer, his cane shifting to his left hand as he reached out to tuck a stray lock of black hair behind her ear. His fingers were cool, calloused, and they lingered against her skin, tracing the line of her jaw with a tenderness that hurt more than his sharp criticisms. Perhaps, he whispered. But even ghosts deserve a place to rest. Rory looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face, looking for the lie she knew was there—and the truth she was terrified to accept. She could see the fatigue in his posture, the strain beneath the impeccably tailored charcoal suit. He wasn't the invincible broker tonight; he was just a man with a heavy burden, standing in a cramped room with a woman who had tried to forget how it felt to be needed. She leaned into his touch, a betrayal of all her logic, but she didn't have the strength to fight the pull anymore. The room seemed to shrink, the stacks of books and the scratching of Ptolemy the cat fading into a dull hum compared to the sound of Lucien’s breathing. If you think coming here changes anything... she started, but the protest died in her throat as he moved, his hand shifting to the back of her neck, firmly, possessively. I’m counting on it, he replied. He didn't wait for her to bridge the distance. He tilted his head, his lips grazing hers—soft, then demanding, a collision of history and hunger. Rory let out a breath she felt she’d been holding since the day she climbed onto that train in Cardiff. She wrapped her hands into the lapels of his jacket, pulling him down, needing the friction of him, the reality of the man who had stalked her periphery for so long. He tasted like tea and something ancient, and as his free hand slid down to the small of her back, she realized the bridge wasn't just lowered—it was gone. And she was perfectly content to stay on this side of the water, no matter what shadows followed him through the door. Outside, the rain began to lash against the window of the Brick Lane flat, but in the center of the mess of paper and ink, the world had finally, dangerously, gone still.
created_at"2026-05-10T14:04:27.46Z" 5/10/2026, 2:04:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
84.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
2"really"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1326
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"tenderness"
count1
13
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoing"
2"velvet"
3"vibrated"
4"navigated"
5"predator"
6"intensity"
7"chill"
8"weight"
9"electric"
10"silence"
11"tracing"
12"tenderness"
13"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
95.93% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences86
matches
0"o with surprise"
1"felt a chill"
2"was terrified"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1317
ratio0
matches(empty)
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"I raised it for a reason, she said, her voice steadier than she felt."
1"Perhaps, he whispered."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1317
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Rory12
Brick2
Lane2
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
Lucien7
London2
Luc1
Evan1
Cardiff2
Marseille1
Yu-Fei1
Laila1
You5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Luc"
5"Evan"
6"Laila"
7"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Ptolemy"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
5"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a weight, a relic of a life s"
1"tasted like tea and something ancient, an"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1317
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
98.70% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean42.48
std21.05
cv0.495
sampleLengths
051
141
225
381
429
522
622
763
848
912
1043
1118
1266
1350
1477
1574
1631
1735
1845
1941
2043
2115
2252
2311
2477
2550
2630
276
2876
2951
3032
84.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences86
matches
0"was draped"
1"was slicked"
2"was accented"
3"was terrified"
4"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs244
matches
0"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences86
ratio0.116
matches
0"His platinum-blond hair was slicked back, and his eyes—one amber, one flat, abyss-black—tracked the movement of her throat with predatory precision."
1"She stayed near the threshold, her fingers unconsciously brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she had never managed to break, especially not around him."
2"Lucien had been the complication she hadn't anticipated—a man who lived in the gray spaces where she was trying to find a footing."
3"He closed the distance between them in two strides, invading her space until she could smell him—dry sandalwood and the faint, ozone scent of something not entirely of this world."
4"He leaned in, and Rory could have moved; she could have stepped toward the kitchenette, but she stayed anchored to the spot, pinned by the intensity of his focus."
5"The name felt like a weight, a relic of a life she wasn't sure she wanted to resurrect, but the way he said it—as if it were a prayer and a curse bound together—made her knees turn to water."
6"Rory looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face, looking for the lie she knew was there—and the truth she was terrified to accept."
7"He wasn't the invincible broker tonight; he was just a man with a heavy burden, standing in a cramped room with a woman who had tried to forget how it felt to be needed."
8"He tilted his head, his lips grazing hers—soft, then demanding, a collision of history and hunger."
9"He tasted like tea and something ancient, and as his free hand slid down to the small of her back, she realized the bridge wasn't just lowered—it was gone."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1334
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"grimy, paper-cluttered expanse"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03223388305847077
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.013493253373313344
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean15.31
std9.1
cv0.594
sampleLengths
025
126
234
37
425
522
620
721
818
910
1019
117
127
138
1411
152
169
177
1827
1929
2016
2118
2214
2312
2410
254
2614
276
289
296
304
318
3229
3314
3423
3514
369
376
3821
399
4019
4119
4230
439
4429
456
469
4710
484
497
38.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.26744186046511625
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners23
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Perhaps, he whispered."
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences85
matches
0"It was heavy, rhythmic, and"
1"She swung the door open,"
2"He was draped in a"
3"His platinum-blond hair was slicked"
4"He rested his hands on"
5"You look like you’re waiting"
6"His voice was accented, smooth"
7"I’m waiting for peace and"
8"He offered a thin, lopsided"
9"She didn't offer a chair,"
10"She stayed near the threshold,"
11"He stopped by a pile"
12"You’re still digging, he noted,"
13"I’m working, Rory corrected, crossing"
14"It’s what I do."
15"It’s what I did in"
16"We were very clear that"
17"It was never a bridge,"
18"It was a drawbridge."
19"She felt the heat rise"
ratio0.588
42.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences85
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva’s"
1"It was heavy, rhythmic, and"
2"Rory wiped her hands on"
3"The cat didn't even twitch"
4"She swung the door open,"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"He was draped in a"
7"His platinum-blond hair was slicked"
8"He rested his hands on"
9"You look like you’re waiting"
10"His voice was accented, smooth"
11"Rory didn't move to let"
12"I’m waiting for peace and"
13"He offered a thin, lopsided"
14"The stairwell is not exactly"
15"Rory stepped back, pulling the"
16"She didn't offer a chair,"
17"She stayed near the threshold,"
18"The flat smelled of old"
19"Lucien navigated the clutter with"
ratio0.835
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"If you think coming here"
ratio0.012
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The three deadbolts on Eva’s front door were a rhythmic, metallic stutter that Rory had grown accustomed to, but the knock that followed was unfamiliar."
1"It was heavy, rhythmic, and possessed a deliberate, aristocratic cadence that had no business echoing through the cramped hallway above a curry house on Brick L…"
2"Rory wiped her hands on her jeans, leaving a faint smear of charcoal from the notes she’d been organizing, and glanced at Ptolemy, who was currently sprawled ac…"
3"You’re still digging, he noted, his tone shifting into something more dangerous."
4"Lucien had been the complication she hadn't anticipated—a man who lived in the gray spaces where she was trying to find a footing."
5"He reached out, his hand hovering just an inch from her shoulder, as if he expected her to bolt."
6"His fingers were cool, calloused, and they lingered against her skin, tracing the line of her jaw with a tenderness that hurt more than his sharp criticisms."
7"Rory looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face, looking for the lie she knew was there—and the truth she was terrified to accept."
8"He wasn't the invincible broker tonight; he was just a man with a heavy burden, standing in a cramped room with a woman who had tried to forget how it felt to b…"
9"He tilted his head, his lips grazing hers—soft, then demanding, a collision of history and hunger."
10"She wrapped her hands into the lapels of his jacket, pulling him down, needing the friction of him, the reality of the man who had stalked her periphery for so …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.3635%