| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.053 | | leniency | 0.105 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1310 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1310 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "crystalline" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "charged" | | 18 | "searing" | | 19 | "magnetic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.74% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1307 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1210 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.674 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 23.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them" | | 1 | "felt like a lidless eye" | | 2 | "looked like heat haze rising from asphalt" | | 3 | "looked like a sheet of black obsidian" |
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| 46.98% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.53 | | wordCount | 1307 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a person, but as a tear in the fabric of the world" | | 1 | "not through the air, but as a vibration inside Rory’s skull, a whisper carried on a w" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 22.93 | | std | 18.15 | | cv | 0.792 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 48 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 68 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 94.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "being drifted" | | 1 | "were composed" | | 2 | "was covered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "The world didn't just change; it inverted." | | 1 | "The heavy, stagnant air of the park vanished, replaced by an atmosphere that tasted of ozone, crushed jasmine, and something ancient—like the scent of rain on hot stone." | | 2 | "They didn't walk; they flowed, the edges of their body fraying into smoke whenever they passed a glowing fern." | | 3 | "The trees didn't just stand; they watched." | | 4 | "It wasn't the absence of sound, but a presence of its own—a held breath." | | 5 | "Instead, the surface of the pool showed a different world entirely—a vast, amber-colored expanse of sprawling vineyards and golden orchards under a sky that burned with a constant, midday sun." | | 6 | "The chime of the flowers, the hum of the trees, the whisper of the wind—all of it vanished." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1219 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "vast, amber-colored expanse" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.02461033634126333 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005742411812961444 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 11.57 | | std | 6.76 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 36.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.23008849557522124 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the ground was covered" | | 1 | "Instead, the surface of the" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She wiped a bead of" | | 1 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 2 | "She moved with a terrifying" | | 3 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 4 | "They didn't walk; they flowed," | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 6 | "She reached out, her slender" | | 7 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 8 | "It didn't follow her movement." | | 9 | "It lingered a fraction of" | | 10 | "Their violet eyes flickered with" | | 11 | "It started beneath Rory's boots," | | 12 | "It looked like heat haze" | | 13 | "She pushed forward, her boots" | | 14 | "They drifted toward a massive," | | 15 | "She reached out to touch" | | 16 | "She didn't look surprised." | | 17 | "She looked expectant." | | 18 | "It didn't reflect the nebula" | | 19 | "It pulsed with a sickly," |
| | ratio | 0.217 | |
| 3.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy humidity of a" | | 1 | "She wiped a bead of" | | 2 | "A rhythmic, low-frequency vibration pulsed" | | 3 | "The bark looked charred, though" | | 4 | "Isolde glided toward the gap" | | 5 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 6 | "She moved with a terrifying" | | 7 | "Rory gripped the hilt of" | | 8 | "The metal bit into her" | | 9 | "Rory stepped over the threshold." | | 10 | "The world didn't just change;" | | 11 | "The heavy, stagnant air of" | | 12 | "The dim grey of dusk" | | 13 | "A swirling nebula of violet" | | 14 | "The trees here grew in" | | 15 | "Rory stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 16 | "Each step released a soft," | | 17 | "Rory took a breath, feeling" | | 18 | "A smudge of darkness drifted" | | 19 | "Nyx moved through the kaleidoscopic" |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 7.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair trailed behind her like a fallen comet, catching a light that didn't exist in the grey twilight of Richmond Park." | | 1 | "She moved with a terrifying grace, her feet pressing into the damp earth without leaving so much as a dent in the moss." | | 2 | "The heavy, stagnant air of the park vanished, replaced by an atmosphere that tasted of ozone, crushed jasmine, and something ancient—like the scent of rain on h…" | | 3 | "A swirling nebula of violet and amber bruised the horizon, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to move independently of the objects casting them." | | 4 | "The trees here grew in spirals, their bark etched with glowing, runic scars that bled a soft, bioluminescent blue." | | 5 | "It started beneath Rory's boots, a deep, tectonic thrum that made her teeth ache." | | 6 | "It looked like heat haze rising from asphalt, a ripple in reality that made the trees behind it appear warped and melted." | | 7 | "As they moved deeper, the terrain rose into a series of moss-covered mounds that resembled the spines of sleeping beasts." | | 8 | "The air near the tree felt freezing, a localized pocket of winter that made her breath mist in front of her face." | | 9 | "Instead, the ground was covered in a layer of fine, white ash that swirled in miniature cyclones, despite the lack of wind." | | 10 | "Instead, the surface of the pool showed a different world entirely—a vast, amber-colored expanse of sprawling vineyards and golden orchards under a sky that bur…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |