Run: 2026-05-10-01KR93JMCXXAYVG9G4QX83SWYP

Run Details

Duration:
9.0s
Cost:
$0.002729
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver chain bit into Aurora’s neck as the Heartstone pendant grew scorching hot. Ahead, the air shivered, a translucent ripple in the fabric of the alleyway behind Silas’ bar. Nyx drifted beside her, their humanoid silhouette flickering like a guttering candle flame. The Shade’s violet eyes narrowed, scanning the tear in the Veil. Step through. The destination tastes of spoiled nectar and burnt sugar. Aurora gripped the hilt of the Fae-forged blade tucked into her belt. The moonsilver metal bit into her palm, a frigid contrast to the oppressive humidity radiating from the rift. She took a breath, the scent of charcoal and rotting fruit flooding her senses, and plunged into the shimmer. Gravity lurched. The asphalt of London vanished, replaced by the damp, spongey mulch of a forest floor. Aurora stumbled, catching herself against a tree with bark that felt like velvet. She stood in Dymas. The amber sky hung heavy above them, thick with clouds that swirled in slow, syrupy loops. Below, trees stretched toward the horizon, their branches heavy with fruits the size of boulders. A sprawling vineyard occupied the lower slopes, the vines pulsing with a rhythmic, bioluminescent glow. The sound of a thousand distant bells chimed in the wind, a low, melodic thrumming that vibrated in Aurora’s marrow. Nyx solidified next to her, their shadow-limbs trailing wisps of smoke that vanished into the warm, honeyed air. The Prince of Gluttony curates this theater well. Do not taste the fruit, Aurora. The hunger does not stop with your stomach. Aurora moved forward, her boots sinking into the loam. She pushed past a gargantuan hanging gourd that dripped a viscous, golden syrup. The sap sizzled where it touched the soil. The world felt over-saturated, the colors so vibrant they made her eyes ache. A flock of winged creatures, part bird and part insect, spiraled upward, leaving trails of iridescent dust in their wake. Look at the perimeter. The geometry is wrong. She squinted at the horizon. The trees didn't just end; they folded, the landscape curving upward like the interior of a bowl. Far off, a grand banquet hall carved from white marble sat perched atop a floating dais. Figures moved along the terrace, their silhouettes elongated and fluid. A cacophony of clinking crystal and joyous, discordant laughter drifted across the fields. The Heartstone pulsed against her collarbone. It wasn't just warm now; it burned. Something approaches from the orchard. Stay low. Aurora ducked behind a gnarled root, reaching for the Fae blade. As she drew it, the blade flared with a soft, pale luminescence, cutting through the amber gloom of the woods. A hulking creature lumbered into the clearing. It stood seven feet tall, its skin stretched tight over bloated muscle, veins throbbing like thick, purple cords. It held a silver platter overflowing with fruit that shrieked as the creature plucked segments from them. It doesn't see us. Its appetites consume its awareness. The creature’s breath puffed out in thick clouds of steam, smelling of scorched cinnamon. It paused, a pained expression flitting across its heavy, jowly face. It slumped against an ancient oak, dropping the platter. The fruit rolled away, burying itself into the soft ground, where roots immediately shot up to snatch them back into the earth. This place feeds on everything that enters it, not just the visitors. Aurora felt a gnawing void open in her own gut, a craving that had nothing to do with hunger. She wanted to dash toward those vines, to sink her teeth into the glowing rinds, to fill the exhaustion of her long journey with the sweet, liquid intensity of the Dymasian harvest. She tightened her grip on the moonsilver until her knuckles turned white. The cold of the blade acted as an anchor, drawing the heat out of her blood. We need the center. The portal back to the Veil should be near the source of the heat. They crept through the underbrush, avoiding the paths where the ground trembled with a rhythmic thudding. Every few yards, pools of dark, fragrant liquid bubbled, mirroring the amber sky above. Aurora glanced at her reflection in one; the girl staring back looked hollowed out, her blue eyes dimmed by the pervasive, sickly light of the realm. Stop. Look at the stones. Nyx gestured toward a clearing encased in obsidian pillars. They stood in a perfect circle, etched with runes that bled a faint, violet light. This was a rift anchor, a place where the barrier between realms stretched thin. It seemed far too quiet here. The ringing bells, the chattering fruit, the distant laughter—everything cut off at the edge of the obsidian boundary. A figure knelt in the center of the stones. She wore robes that shifted color like gasoline on water. As she turned, her face revealed a porcelain mask, cracked down the center, exposing skin that looked like shifting starlight. Isolde? The Half-Fae did not look up. She traced a finger along the base of a pillar, her hand passing through the solid rock as if it were smoke. The path you walk is a banquet for the damned. You seek the gate, yet you carry the key in your veins. Aurora stepped into the circle, the air suddenly turning crisp and thin. The warmth of the Heartstone vanished, replaced by an iciness that matched the blade in her hand. She watched the way the Fae woman’s silver hair hovered in the air, defiant of gravity, drifting against the stagnant breeze of the realm. The anchor is dying. Someone broke the seal. The woman stood, her movements disjointed, skipping frames of reality like a faulty film. She gestured toward the obsidian pillars, where deep, jagged lines now marred the stone. The light from the Veil leaked through these cracks, a jagged, weeping wound of raw, blinding white energy that tore through the amber haze of Dymas. The hunger is not external, Rory. It is a hunger for home. A low, resonant sound began to build from the ground beneath them, a bass note so profound it rattled Aurora’s teeth. The surrounding trees began to liquefy, dissolving into thick, golden sludge that pooled around their ankles. The creature they had seen earlier was now a puddle, its shape lost to the voracious demand of the land. We have to bind the rift before the whole field collapses. Nyx shifted, growing taller, their shadow sweeping out to form a protective canopy over the circle. Their violet eyes burned, cutting through the distortion. Aurora lunged toward the center of the pillars, slamming the moonsilver blade into the fissure in the rock. The metal shrieked—a sound of ice meeting hot iron—and the white light surged, grasping at her arm. She didn't let go. She pushed, the scar on her wrist throbbing in sympathy with the stone. The world around them buckled. The amber sky turned a violent, bruised purple. The bells silenced, replaced by the deafening roar of the Veil collapsing back upon itself. Aurora felt herself pulled, stretched thin, and shoved through the gap.
created_at"2026-05-10T14:10:06.885Z" 5/10/2026, 2:10:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"lurched"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"marble"
count1
8
word"cacophony"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"hulking"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"perfect"
count1
16
word"etched"
count1
17
word"porcelain"
count1
18
word"traced"
count1
19
word"warmth"
count1
20
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"oppressive"
2"lurched"
3"velvet"
4"rhythmic"
5"vibrated"
6"stomach"
7"marble"
8"cacophony"
9"crystal"
10"pulsed"
11"gloom"
12"hulking"
13"intensity"
14"trembled"
15"perfect"
16"etched"
17"porcelain"
18"traced"
19"warmth"
20"profound"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"g in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1176
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1174
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Heartstone3
Nyx4
Shade1
Veil4
Fae-forged1
London1
Dymas2
Prince1
Gluttony1
Fae4
Dymasian1
Half-Fae1
Rory1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Nyx"
3"Shade"
4"Gluttony"
5"Fae"
6"Half-Fae"
7"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Dymas"
globalScore0.946
windowScore0.833
55.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like velvet"
1"seemed far too quiet here"
2"looked like shifting starlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1176
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.64
std24.29
cv0.682
sampleLengths
054
111
249
334
466
518
622
763
88
961
1013
117
1273
139
1456
1512
1679
1718
1856
195
2062
2139
221
2328
2422
2553
268
2754
2812
2957
3011
3176
3239
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences97
ratio0.052
matches
0"The trees didn't just end; they folded, the landscape curving upward like the interior of a bowl."
1"It wasn't just warm now; it burned."
2"Aurora glanced at her reflection in one; the girl staring back looked hollowed out, her blue eyes dimmed by the pervasive, sickly light of the realm."
3"The ringing bells, the chattering fruit, the distant laughter—everything cut off at the edge of the obsidian boundary."
4"The metal shrieked—a sound of ice meeting hot iron—and the white light surged, grasping at her arm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount28
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.12
std6.28
cv0.518
sampleLengths
014
116
213
311
42
59
612
718
819
92
1015
1113
124
1316
1415
1515
1620
1718
188
196
208
219
2213
238
2413
2520
264
274
285
2917
3016
3110
3213
336
347
355
362
3711
3820
397
4018
4117
424
435
4414
4511
469
4722
4812
4919
39.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.27835051546391754
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences92
matches
0"She took a breath, the"
1"She stood in Dymas."
2"She pushed past a gargantuan"
3"She squinted at the horizon."
4"It wasn't just warm now;"
5"It stood seven feet tall,"
6"It held a silver platter"
7"It doesn't see us."
8"Its appetites consume its awareness."
9"It paused, a pained expression"
10"It slumped against an ancient"
11"She wanted to dash toward"
12"She tightened her grip on"
13"We need the center."
14"They crept through the underbrush,"
15"They stood in a perfect"
16"It seemed far too quiet"
17"She wore robes that shifted"
18"She traced a finger along"
19"You seek the gate, yet"
ratio0.293
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences92
matches
0"The silver chain bit into"
1"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
2"The Shade’s violet eyes narrowed,"
3"The destination tastes of spoiled"
4"Aurora gripped the hilt of"
5"The moonsilver metal bit into"
6"She took a breath, the"
7"The asphalt of London vanished,"
8"Aurora stumbled, catching herself against"
9"She stood in Dymas."
10"The amber sky hung heavy"
11"A sprawling vineyard occupied the"
12"The sound of a thousand"
13"Nyx solidified next to her,"
14"The Prince of Gluttony curates"
15"The hunger does not stop"
16"Aurora moved forward, her boots"
17"She pushed past a gargantuan"
18"The sap sizzled where it"
19"The world felt over-saturated, the"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The amber sky hung heavy above them, thick with clouds that swirled in slow, syrupy loops."
1"The sound of a thousand distant bells chimed in the wind, a low, melodic thrumming that vibrated in Aurora’s marrow."
2"Nyx solidified next to her, their shadow-limbs trailing wisps of smoke that vanished into the warm, honeyed air."
3"She pushed past a gargantuan hanging gourd that dripped a viscous, golden syrup."
4"She wore robes that shifted color like gasoline on water."
5"As she turned, her face revealed a porcelain mask, cracked down the center, exposing skin that looked like shifting starlight."
6"The light from the Veil leaked through these cracks, a jagged, weeping wound of raw, blinding white energy that tore through the amber haze of Dymas."
7"The surrounding trees began to liquefy, dissolving into thick, golden sludge that pooled around their ankles."
8"Nyx shifted, growing taller, their shadow sweeping out to form a protective canopy over the circle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.2135%