| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1179 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1179 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "lurched" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "marble" | | 8 | "cacophony" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "hulking" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "etched" | | 17 | "porcelain" | | 18 | "traced" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "profound" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "knuckles turned white" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1176 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1174 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Shade | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | London | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Rory | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Gluttony" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Half-Fae" | | 7 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.946 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 55.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like velvet" | | 1 | "seemed far too quiet here" | | 2 | "looked like shifting starlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 35.64 | | std | 24.29 | | cv | 0.682 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 79 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 76 | | 32 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees didn't just end; they folded, the landscape curving upward like the interior of a bowl." | | 1 | "It wasn't just warm now; it burned." | | 2 | "Aurora glanced at her reflection in one; the girl staring back looked hollowed out, her blue eyes dimmed by the pervasive, sickly light of the realm." | | 3 | "The ringing bells, the chattering fruit, the distant laughter—everything cut off at the edge of the obsidian boundary." | | 4 | "The metal shrieked—a sound of ice meeting hot iron—and the white light surged, grasping at her arm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 28 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 12.12 | | std | 6.28 | | cv | 0.518 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 39.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.27835051546391754 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a breath, the" | | 1 | "She stood in Dymas." | | 2 | "She pushed past a gargantuan" | | 3 | "She squinted at the horizon." | | 4 | "It wasn't just warm now;" | | 5 | "It stood seven feet tall," | | 6 | "It held a silver platter" | | 7 | "It doesn't see us." | | 8 | "Its appetites consume its awareness." | | 9 | "It paused, a pained expression" | | 10 | "It slumped against an ancient" | | 11 | "She wanted to dash toward" | | 12 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 13 | "We need the center." | | 14 | "They crept through the underbrush," | | 15 | "They stood in a perfect" | | 16 | "It seemed far too quiet" | | 17 | "She wore robes that shifted" | | 18 | "She traced a finger along" | | 19 | "You seek the gate, yet" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 3.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 2 | "The Shade’s violet eyes narrowed," | | 3 | "The destination tastes of spoiled" | | 4 | "Aurora gripped the hilt of" | | 5 | "The moonsilver metal bit into" | | 6 | "She took a breath, the" | | 7 | "The asphalt of London vanished," | | 8 | "Aurora stumbled, catching herself against" | | 9 | "She stood in Dymas." | | 10 | "The amber sky hung heavy" | | 11 | "A sprawling vineyard occupied the" | | 12 | "The sound of a thousand" | | 13 | "Nyx solidified next to her," | | 14 | "The Prince of Gluttony curates" | | 15 | "The hunger does not stop" | | 16 | "Aurora moved forward, her boots" | | 17 | "She pushed past a gargantuan" | | 18 | "The sap sizzled where it" | | 19 | "The world felt over-saturated, the" |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber sky hung heavy above them, thick with clouds that swirled in slow, syrupy loops." | | 1 | "The sound of a thousand distant bells chimed in the wind, a low, melodic thrumming that vibrated in Aurora’s marrow." | | 2 | "Nyx solidified next to her, their shadow-limbs trailing wisps of smoke that vanished into the warm, honeyed air." | | 3 | "She pushed past a gargantuan hanging gourd that dripped a viscous, golden syrup." | | 4 | "She wore robes that shifted color like gasoline on water." | | 5 | "As she turned, her face revealed a porcelain mask, cracked down the center, exposing skin that looked like shifting starlight." | | 6 | "The light from the Veil leaked through these cracks, a jagged, weeping wound of raw, blinding white energy that tore through the amber haze of Dymas." | | 7 | "The surrounding trees began to liquefy, dissolving into thick, golden sludge that pooled around their ankles." | | 8 | "Nyx shifted, growing taller, their shadow sweeping out to form a protective canopy over the circle." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |