Run: 2026-05-10-01KR93KEVRWR7HDGEVN3ERB6Y9

Run Details

Duration:
4m 53s
Cost:
$0.001090
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the Soho pavement, turning the asphalt into a black mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn lunged forward, her boots splashing through oil-slicked puddles. Twenty yards ahead, the suspect—a gaunt man in a grey duster—weaved through the midnight crowds. He didn't run with panic; he moved with a calculated, gliding efficiency that defied the slickness of the ground. Quinn’s chest burned. She tightened her grip on the handle of her flashlight, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her forehead. She didn't shout for him to stop. Breath was too precious. She tracked the sway of his coat, the way he banked around a street performer's amplifier without breaking stride. The man bolted left, diving into an alleyway that smelled of wet cardboard and old grease. Quinn pivoted, her military precision keeping her footing where another officer would have slipped. She rounded the corner just in time to see the duster vanish behind a heavy iron door. She slammed her shoulder into the metal. It didn't budge. Quinn stepped back, scanning the alley. A narrow ventilation grate leaned against the brickwork, its cover skewed. A faint, rhythmic thrumming vibrated through the concrete beneath her soles. She knelt, clicking her flashlight on. The beam cut through the gloom, revealing a set of muddy footprints leading straight down into the belly of the city. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 02:14. Quinn slid through the grate, descending a rusted ladder that groaned under her weight. The air shifted. The scent of rain vanished, replaced by something cloying—cinnamon, sulfur, and rotting lilies. She hit the bottom with a thud, her boots landing on a platform of cracked tiles. This wasn't a sewer. High above, the ceiling arched in a gothic curve of soot-stained stone. Before her stretched an abandoned Tube station, but it breathed with an unnatural life. Lanterns of floating violet flame drifted between makeshift stalls. Vendors with elongated fingers and eyes that reflected the light like cats hawked jars of shimmering mercury and scrolls of human skin. The Veil Market. Quinn froze. She had heard the whispers in the precinct—ghost stories told by veterans to scare rookies. They spoke of a place beneath Camden and Soho where the laws of physics took a holiday and the currency was paid in blood or bone. She thought of Morris. She thought of the vacant look in his eyes the day he died, the way he had pointed toward the ground before he stopped breathing. The suspect stood ten feet away. He hadn't run. He waited by a stall draped in velvet, talking to a creature whose skin looked like wet parchment. Quinn stepped out of the shadows, her hand hovering over her holster. "Hands where I can see them!" The man in the duster turned. He didn't look afraid. He looked bored. "You're a long way from the precinct, Detective." Quinn narrowed her eyes, her sharp jaw tightening. "Turn around. Now." The man glanced at the vendor, then back at Quinn. He stepped closer, the violet light casting long, distorted shadows across his face. "You don't have a token. You can't stay here. Not for long." "I don't need a ticket to make an arrest." The man chuckled, a dry sound like sandpaper on wood. He reached into his pocket and produced a small, bleached piece of bone carved with a spiraling rune. He held it up, the object humming with a low frequency that made Quinn's teeth ache. "The rules here aren't written in your handbook, Harlow." The use of her first name snapped her focus. She lunged, grabbing the lapel of his coat and slamming him against a stone pillar. The impact echoed through the market, silencing the nearby chatter. "Who are you working for? Where is the shipment?" The man grinned, revealing teeth filed to points. "Look around you. Do you really think the police have jurisdiction in a place that doesn't exist on a map?" A low growl erupted from the crowd. The vendors had stopped their trading. A circle of figures began to close in, their movements synchronized and predatory. They didn't carry guns; they carried jagged shards of obsidian and vials of swirling green gas. Quinn shifted her weight, her eyes scanning for an exit. The ladder was behind her, but the crowd now blocked the path. The air grew heavy, pressing against her lungs like deep water. The man in the duster leaned in, his voice a whisper. "If you walk away now, you might actually make it back to the surface. If you stay, you become part of the inventory." Quinn felt the cold press of a blade against the small of her back. She didn't flinch. She twisted, throwing an elbow into the attacker's throat and spinning back to pin the suspect against the pillar. "I'm not leaving without you." "Then you're a fool," the man said. He suddenly collapsed, not in surrender, but in a heap. He began to cough violently, a dark, viscous fluid leaking from his lips. The crowd surged forward, not to help him, but to reclaim something. Quinn shoved the man aside and drew her weapon. The click of the safety echoing through the cavern. "Back off!" The creatures didn't stop. They flowed like a tide of ink, their eyes glowing with a hunger that ignored the threat of lead. From the periphery of the market, a voice shouted. "Get her out of there!" A man burst through the throng, shoving a hulking creature aside with a shoulder. He wore a stained medical coat and a Saint Christopher medallion that swung wildly against his olive skin. Tomás Herrera grabbed Quinn by the arm, his grip firm and desperate. "Are you insane? You can't be here without a guide!" Quinn tried to shake him off, her eyes fixed on the suspect, who was now being dragged away by three of the parchment-skinned vendors. "He's a witness! Let me go!" Tomás hauled her backward, his boots skidding on the grime. "He's a sacrifice! Look at the moon, Detective!" Quinn looked up. Through a narrow fissure in the ceiling, a sliver of the full moon peered down. The violet flames of the lanterns suddenly flared, turning a violent, angry red. The humming in the air spiked into a scream. "The market is shifting," Tomás yelled over the noise. "If we aren't out in sixty seconds, the exit vanishes for another month!" The ground beneath them shuddered. A fissure cracked the tile floor, venting a cloud of freezing white mist. The vendors began to howl, a sound that tore through the silence of the underground. Quinn looked at the suspect, now disappearing into a curtain of black silk at the far end of the station. Then she looked at the crumbling ladder. She shoved Tomás aside and sprinted toward the silk curtain. "You idiot!" Tomás roared, sprinting after her. Quinn dove through the fabric, expecting another room. Instead, she found herself staring into a void of swirling grey smoke. A bridge of bone spanned a chasm of absolute darkness. On the other side, the suspect stood waiting, his bleeding mouth curved into a smile. "I knew you couldn't resist a lead." Quinn stepped onto the bone bridge. The surface felt warm, like living skin. With every step, the bridge groaned, tilting precariously over the abyss. "Get over here," she commanded, her voice echoing in the void. The man didn't move. He pointed behind her. Quinn turned. The curtain of silk had vanished. The entrance to the market was gone. Only the grey smoke remained, and within it, the shapes of things that had never seen the sun began to emerge. Tomás landed beside her, gasping for air. He looked at the bridge, then at the monsters circling in the mist. "We have to move. Now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"calculated"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"synchronized"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count2
11
word"hulking"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"silk"
count3
highlights
0"calculated"
1"scanning"
2"rhythmic"
3"vibrated"
4"gloom"
5"weight"
6"velvet"
7"echoed"
8"synchronized"
9"whisper"
10"echoing"
11"hulking"
12"silence"
13"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences106
matches
0"n with panic"
61.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1303
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1130
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn20
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Camden1
Morris1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
Tomás6
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Herrera"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Market"
globalScore0.615
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like wet parchment"
46.51% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.535
wordCount1303
matches
0"not in surrender, but in a heap"
1"not to help him, but to reclaim something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean21.02
std16.68
cv0.793
sampleLengths
057
150
247
310
455
511
646
74
857
93
1072
1127
1212
136
1413
158
168
173
1823
1912
209
2144
229
2334
249
258
2620
2742
2833
2911
3023
3136
325
337
3423
3512
3618
372
3823
399
405
4132
4212
4310
4424
456
4610
478
4840
4922
95.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences106
matches
0"was paid"
1"being dragged"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
27.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences124
ratio0.04
matches
0"Twenty yards ahead, the suspect—a gaunt man in a grey duster—weaved through the midnight crowds."
1"He didn't run with panic; he moved with a calculated, gliding efficiency that defied the slickness of the ground."
2"The scent of rain vanished, replaced by something cloying—cinnamon, sulfur, and rotting lilies."
3"She had heard the whispers in the precinct—ghost stories told by veterans to scare rookies."
4"They didn't carry guns; they carried jagged shards of obsidian and vials of swirling green gas."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1139
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, pressing against her"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.021949078138718173
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006145741878841089
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.51
std5.56
cv0.529
sampleLengths
012
111
215
319
43
517
67
74
819
916
1014
1117
127
133
146
1511
1611
176
1821
1910
201
2114
223
2313
2416
254
2612
2714
289
2922
303
312
3215
3326
344
3525
366
373
3818
3912
406
416
424
433
448
458
463
4710
4813
4912
36.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2845528455284553
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners35
97.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"Then she looked at the"
1"Instead, she found herself staring"
2"Only the grey smoke remained,"
ratio0.029
91.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences103
matches
0"He didn't run with panic;"
1"She tightened her grip on"
2"She didn't shout for him"
3"She tracked the sway of"
4"She rounded the corner just"
5"She slammed her shoulder into"
6"It didn't budge."
7"She knelt, clicking her flashlight"
8"She checked the worn leather"
9"She hit the bottom with"
10"She had heard the whispers"
11"They spoke of a place"
12"She thought of Morris."
13"She thought of the vacant"
14"He hadn't run."
15"He waited by a stall"
16"He didn't look afraid."
17"He looked bored."
18"He stepped closer, the violet"
19"He reached into his pocket"
ratio0.32
13.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences103
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn lunged forward,"
1"He didn't run with panic;"
2"Quinn’s chest burned."
3"She tightened her grip on"
4"She didn't shout for him"
5"Breath was too precious."
6"She tracked the sway of"
7"The man bolted left, diving"
8"Quinn pivoted, her military precision"
9"She rounded the corner just"
10"She slammed her shoulder into"
11"It didn't budge."
12"Quinn stepped back, scanning the"
13"A narrow ventilation grate leaned"
14"A faint, rhythmic thrumming vibrated"
15"She knelt, clicking her flashlight"
16"The beam cut through the"
17"She checked the worn leather"
18"Quinn slid through the grate,"
19"The air shifted."
ratio0.893
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Before her stretched an abandoned"
ratio0.01
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He didn't run with panic; he moved with a calculated, gliding efficiency that defied the slickness of the ground."
1"The man bolted left, diving into an alleyway that smelled of wet cardboard and old grease."
2"They flowed like a tide of ink, their eyes glowing with a hunger that ignored the threat of lead."
3"He wore a stained medical coat and a Saint Christopher medallion that swung wildly against his olive skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she commanded, her voice echoing in the void"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Tomás yelled (yell)"
1"Tomás roared (roar)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.182
78.1674%