| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.43% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "palpable" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "kaleidoscope" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "churn" | | 16 | "intensity" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "fleeting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1314 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1218 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 2 | | Veil | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Wardens | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Wardens" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.802 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "runes that seemed to shift when Rory tried to focus on them directly" | | 1 | "felt like a stage set where the dimensi" | | 2 | "luminescence that seemed to originate from nowhere and everywhere at once" | | 3 | "looked like oil swirling on water, a kale" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.761 | | wordCount | 1314 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer a silhouette but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 43.8 | | std | 22.43 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 65 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 24 |
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| 74.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "being watched" | | 1 | "being sucked" | | 2 | "were caught" | | 3 | "were locked" | | 4 | "being crushed" | | 5 | "being overwhelmed" | | 6 | "been stripped" |
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| 96.91% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "were vibrating" | | 1 | "was rapidly being" | | 2 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.131 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Richmond grove didn't just feel different; it felt heavy, saturated with the scent of crushed violets and damp earth that never seemed to dry." | | 1 | "The wonder of the place—the impossible blooms and the singing water—was rapidly being eclipsed by a mounting sense of vertigo." | | 2 | "It wasn't sunlight; it was too steady, too pure, a column of pale luminescence that seemed to originate from nowhere and everywhere at once." | | 3 | "As she crossed the threshold, the ambient noise of the grove—the humming water, the rustle of the wind—vanished." | | 4 | "The light wasn't just a pillar; it was a wound." | | 5 | "It looked like oil swirling on water, a kaleidoscope of colors that shouldn't exist in nature—deep magentas, bruised purples, and a gold so bright it hurt to look at." | | 6 | "She could feel the power radiating from the rift—it wasn't the cold, sterile magic of the Fae, but something heavier, richer, and infinitely more hungering." | | 7 | "If a portal to Hel opened here, in the heart of the Richmond grove, the Veil wouldn't just be thin—it would be shredded." | | 8 | "The crimson gem was no longer pulsing; it was glowing with a steady, frantic light, acting as a compass pointing directly into the heart of the chaos." | | 9 | "\"Rory, get back!\" Nyx’s voice was no longer a whisper; it was a command, sharp and urgent." | | 10 | "She wasn't just a delivery girl from London anymore; she was a woman standing on the edge of a precipice, holding a silver dagger against the hunger of an entire realm." |
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| 93.43% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1230 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04065040650406504 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00975609756097561 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 15.64 | | std | 7.67 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 45.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.32142857142857145 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 1 | "It was a warning." | | 2 | "Their voice was a dry" | | 3 | "They weren't alone." | | 4 | "She had felt the weight" | | 5 | "She did feel it." | | 6 | "It wasn't a sound, but" | | 7 | "She looked around, squinting." | | 8 | "It wasn't sunlight; it was" | | 9 | "It looked like oil swirling" | | 10 | "She watched, mesmerized and terrified," | | 11 | "She could feel the power" | | 12 | "It smelled of scorched sugar" | | 13 | "She stepped closer, driven by" | | 14 | "Her eyes were locked on" | | 15 | "It wasn't a person, nor" | | 16 | "It was beautiful." | | 17 | "It was decadent." | | 18 | "It was a trap." | | 19 | "They were no longer a" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped over a twisted" | | 2 | "Here, the colors were too" | | 3 | "Rory whispered, though the wind" | | 4 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 5 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 6 | "It was a warning." | | 7 | "The proximity to the Veil" | | 8 | "The Shade didn't walk so" | | 9 | "Their voice was a dry" | | 10 | "Rory added, her eyes scanning" | | 11 | "They weren't alone." | | 12 | "Rory gripped the hilt of" | | 13 | "The moonsilver was ice-cold against" | | 14 | "She had felt the weight" | | 15 | "A stream flowed uphill, its" | | 16 | "The trees grew in spiraling" | | 17 | "Nyx asked, stopping abruptly" | | 18 | "She did feel it." | | 19 | "It wasn't a sound, but" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dappled sunlight" | | 1 | "If a portal to Hel" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped over a twisted root, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in defiance of the London chill pressing against the Veil." | | 1 | "The proximity to the Veil was palpable here, a shimmering distortion in the periphery of her vision that made the ancient oak standing stones look like they wer…" | | 2 | "It wasn't sunlight; it was too steady, too pure, a column of pale luminescence that seemed to originate from nowhere and everywhere at once." | | 3 | "It looked like oil swirling on water, a kaleidoscope of colors that shouldn't exist in nature—deep magentas, bruised purples, and a gold so bright it hurt to lo…" | | 4 | "It smelled of scorched sugar and overripe fruit, a cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn." | | 5 | "For a fleeting second, the turbulence cleared, and she saw a sky the color of warm amber, sprawling vineyards that stretched into an endless horizon, and the si…" | | 6 | "She looked at the shimmering wound in reality, then at the ancient stones that marked the boundary of this pocket of existence." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory whispered, though the wind seemed to swallow her words before they could even reach the others" | | 1 | "Rory added, her eyes scanning the dense thicket" | | 2 | "Rory breathed, her breath hitching" | | 3 | "Nyx said, their voice strained" | | 4 | "Rory said, her voice steadying despite the frantic drumming in her chest" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory added (add)" | | 2 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |