Run: 2026-05-10-01KR93PD7EB49XWGED1H6EBZJJ

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Duration:
3m 6s
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$0.000847
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed above the entrance to The Raven's Nest, casting a sickly emerald glow over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door, the scent of spilled gin and stale tobacco swirling to meet her. She shook her umbrella, droplets scattering across the floorboards like spilled ink. The bar breathed with a low, rhythmic pulse. Dim amber lights fought against the shadows that clung to the corners, where old maps of forgotten borders lined the walls. Aurora navigated the narrow aisle, her delivery bag heavy against her hip. She headed straight for the polished mahogany of the bar, her eyes scanning for Silas. A figure sat in the far corner, tucked into a booth shadowed by a faded black-and-white photograph of a London street from the forties. The stranger didn't look up from his drink. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that screamed of old money and expensive mistakes. His hands, large and steady, gripped a tumbler of amber liquid. Aurora froze. The rhythm of the room faltered in her chest. That posture—the slight, unconscious tilt of the head—tugged at a memory buried under years of London grime and delivery routes. "Julian?" The man stiffened. He turned his head, and the light caught the sharp line of a jaw that had lost its boyish softness. Gone was the lanky student with the perpetually messy curls and the infectious, gap-toothed grin. In his place sat a man with eyes like flint and skin that looked as though it had survived too many long nights. "Rory." He didn't stand. He merely watched her, his gaze traveling from her damp black hair down to the worn soles of her sneakers. Aurora pulled out the stool opposite him, the screech of wood on floorboards cutting through the low jazz. She didn't ask for permission. "You look like you died and decided to come back just to spite me." Julian let out a dry, hollow sound that might have been a laugh. He slid his glass an inch toward the center of the table. "And you look like you've been running. Even when you're sitting still." Aurora gripped the edge of the table. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom sensation from a childhood fall. "Running is easier than standing still. Standing still requires a foundation. I prefer the movement." "Is that what we're calling it now? Movement?" He leaned forward, the light revealing the fine lines etched around his eyes. They weren't the lines of someone who laughed often. They were the marks of someone who calculated every breath. "Last I heard, you were in Geneva. Working for the ministry. Living in a world of white marble and silent hallways." "The marble cracked. It turns out stone doesn't hold much warmth when the frost sets in." He took a slow sip of his drink, his eyes never leaving hers. "I saw your name in a report once. Not by name, of course. Just a mention of a logistics shift in South Wales. I wondered if it was you. I wondered if you'd finally stopped looking over your shoulder." "I stopped looking for the things I used to fear. Now I just look for the things I can use." She reached into her bag, pulling out a folded receipt to fiddle with. Her fingers moved with a restless, practiced precision. "You've changed, Rory. You used to talk about the law like it was a shield. Something to hold up against the chaos. Now you talk like it's just another tool in a kit." "The shield broke, Julian. It didn't just crack. It shattered. You can't fight a storm with a piece of polished metal." "So you became the storm instead?" "I became the person who knows how to navigate it. There's a difference." The silence stretched between them, heavy and thick as the London fog. It wasn't a comfortable silence. It carried the weight of the three years they hadn't spoken, the letters she hadn't sent, and the phone calls he never made. "Why are you here? In this hole?" Julian gestured vaguely toward the darkened corners of the bar, toward the shadows where Silas Blackwood sat watching the room with the predatory stillness of an owl. "It's a place where people go to be forgotten. Or to find things they lost. I find the atmosphere suits my current temperament." "Your temperament? You sound like a textbook. Whatever happened in Geneva, it didn't just take your idealism. It took your soul, too." Julian's jaw tightened. He set the glass down with a sharp *clack* against the wood. "Idealism is a luxury for people who don't have to see how the gears actually turn. You were always too bright, Rory. You glowed so much you couldn't see the shadows you were casting." "And you? You always wanted to be in the dark. You thought the shadows would protect you. You thought if you became part of the machine, it wouldn't crush you." "It didn't crush me. It just refined me." "Refined? Is that what they call it when you lose the ability to look someone in the eye without calculating their worth?" He leaned back, his silhouette merging with the darkness of the booth. "I don't calculate worth. I calculate risk. There's a distinction." "Not to me. To me, you're just another person who decided that being cold was safer than being hurt." Julian's gaze flickered, a momentary lapse in his composure. For a heartbeat, the mask slipped, and she saw the ghost of the boy who had once shared a cheap bottle of wine with her on a rooftop in Cardiff, dreaming of changing the world. "It's not about safety. It's about survival." "We weren't surviving back then. We were living. There's a difference." "Living is a temporary state. Survival is permanent." Aurora felt a sudden, sharp ache in her chest. She wanted to reach across the table, to grab his hand, to shake him until the polished stranger fell away and the boy remained. But she knew that man was gone. He had been traded away, piece by piece, for the suit and the silence and the steel in his eyes. "You didn't even call. When the firm collapsed. When my father lost the case." "I knew you wouldn't want to hear from me. I knew I would only remind you of a version of yourself you were trying to outrun." "You don't get to decide what I need, Julian. You don't get to decide who I am." "I don't decide anything. I just observe the patterns." He picked up his glass again, but he didn't drink. He just watched the liquid swirl. "The pattern for us was always going to be this. Two lines running parallel, never quite touching, until they eventually diverge into nothing." "That's a very poetic way of saying you're a coward." The word hung in the air, jagged and unforgiving. Julian didn't flinch. He didn't even blink. "Perhaps. But even cowards have their uses." "And what use is a man who has everything but nothing to believe in?" "He's a man who can't be disappointed." Aurora stood up. The movement was sudden, her stool scraping loudly against the floor. She felt the weight of the delivery bag, the weight of the city, and the sudden, crushing exhaustion of facing a ghost. "You're not a man, Julian. You're just a collection of well-calculated decisions." She turned away before he could respond, her boots thudding rhythmically against the floorboards. She didn't look back. She couldn't. If she looked back, she might see him reach out, or she might see him stay perfectly, terrifyingly still. The cool air of the street hit her face as she emerged from the bar, the rain turning into a fine, biting mist. She walked into the neon-lit chaos of Soho, the green glow of The Raven's Nest fading behind her, leaving only the cold, certain dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1331
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1331
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count2
6
word"marble"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"navigate"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"comfortable"
count1
12
word"carried the weight"
count1
13
word"calculating"
count1
14
word"calculate"
count2
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"navigated"
3"scanning"
4"etched"
5"calculated"
6"marble"
7"warmth"
8"shattered"
9"navigate"
10"silence"
11"comfortable"
12"carried the weight"
13"calculating"
14"calculate"
15"flickered"
16"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1329
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount769
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Silas2
London3
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Aurora7
Julian5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Julian"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1329
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"knew that man"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean22.53
std14.94
cv0.663
sampleLengths
053
156
257
331
41
561
61
723
823
914
1025
1112
1222
1315
148
1532
1621
1716
1813
1939
2020
2121
2233
2321
246
2513
2640
277
2827
2923
3022
3115
3234
3330
348
3522
3612
3710
3819
3944
407
4111
428
4360
4414
4526
4617
479
4816
4923
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"was gone"
1"been traded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences95
ratio0.011
matches
0"That posture—the slight, unconscious tilt of the head—tugged at a memory buried under years of London grime and delivery routes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount776
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.024484536082474227
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011597938144329897
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.99
std8.14
cv0.582
sampleLengths
022
119
212
38
421
512
615
724
88
914
1011
112
129
1320
141
153
1620
1715
1823
191
203
2120
2218
235
2414
2513
2612
2712
287
2915
3015
318
3213
339
3410
3521
3616
3713
3839
3920
4013
418
4233
4321
446
4513
4612
475
4823
497
50.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3473684210526316
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences57
matches
0"She shook her umbrella, droplets"
1"She headed straight for the"
2"He wore a tailored charcoal"
3"His hands, large and steady,"
4"He turned his head, and"
5"He didn't stand."
6"He merely watched her, his"
7"She didn't ask for permission."
8"He slid his glass an"
9"He leaned forward, the light"
10"They weren't the lines of"
11"They were the marks of"
12"He took a slow sip"
13"She reached into her bag,"
14"Her fingers moved with a"
15"It wasn't a comfortable silence."
16"It carried the weight of"
17"He set the glass down"
18"He leaned back, his silhouette"
19"She wanted to reach across"
ratio0.491
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences57
matches
0"The green neon hummed above"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"She shook her umbrella, droplets"
3"The bar breathed with a"
4"Aurora navigated the narrow aisle,"
5"She headed straight for the"
6"A figure sat in the"
7"The stranger didn't look up"
8"He wore a tailored charcoal"
9"His hands, large and steady,"
10"The rhythm of the room"
11"That posture—the slight, unconscious tilt"
12"The man stiffened."
13"He turned his head, and"
14"He didn't stand."
15"He merely watched her, his"
16"Aurora pulled out the stool"
17"She didn't ask for permission."
18"Julian let out a dry,"
19"He slid his glass an"
ratio0.895
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"If she looked back, she"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Dim amber lights fought against the shadows that clung to the corners, where old maps of forgotten borders lined the walls."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7947%