Run: 2026-05-10-01KR93PQTGMQQTW6JNM5H5PFJT

Run Details

Duration:
9.0s
Cost:
$0.002739
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the abandoned Camden Town Tube station tasted of ozone and damp rot. Dust motes danced in the beam of Harlow Quinn’s flashlight, illuminating shards of ceramic tile and rusted tracks that disappeared into the suffocating dark. A low, rhythmic thrumming vibrated through the soles of her boots, a sound that didn't belong in a decommissioned tunnel. She stepped over a pile of sodden debris, the leather of her watch band creaking against her wrist. Ahead, the flickering beam picked out a man in a rumpled raincoat standing over a heap of discarded rags that might have once been a human being. "Careful with your footing, Detective. The floorboards in the third-rail trench are absolute sponges." Harlow aimed her light toward the source of the voice. It was Constable Miller, a man five years her junior with a penchant for jumping to the easiest conclusions. He stood tucked against the curved brick wall, his face pale under the harsh glare of the utility lamp he had set up. "Tell me why you called me instead of letting the local precinct handle a transient casualty, Miller." Miller gestured toward the pile of rags. "Look at the hands, Harlow. No dirt under the nails. No callouses. This wasn't a squatter." Harlow approached the body. The victim sat slumped against a support pillar, eyes wide and fixed on a spot miles away. On the floor beside his right hand lay a small brass object, its circular face etched with intricate sigils. The patina of verdigris clung to the casing like a disease. Her stomach tightened. This was no alleyway stabbing. "He looks like he’s staring at a ghost," Miller muttered, scribbling something into his notebook. "Stroke, maybe? Massive cardiac arrest induced by whatever toxic sewer gas is pocketed down here. I’ve already put in a call for the coroner to bring the hazmat unit." Harlow knelt, the rough grit of the station floor biting into her knees. She didn't look at the face. Instead, she focused on the brass instrument. The needle didn't point north. It shivered and spun, then locked firmly toward the tunnel deeper into the dark, where the thrumming grew louder. "Toxic gas doesn't leave runes burned into the floor tiles," Harlow said, sliding her light across the ground. Faint, silvery scuff marks radiated outward from the body in a perfect circle. They shimmered with an unnatural iridescent sheen that seemed to move when she blinked. The stone beneath the victim was scorched, not by heat, but by something that had sucked the color right out of the material. "I don't see anything but standard industrial grime," Miller said, moving closer and squinting at the tiles. "Probably just some graffiti from one of those urban exploration groups. They love this place." Harlow pulled a small evidence bag from her pocket. She reached for the brass compass, feeling a hum of static electricity crawl up her arm as her fingertips brushed the metal. "Graffiti artists don't use Shade-forged brass, and they certainly don't leave behind a path," she remarked. "Shade-forged?" Miller let out a sharp, dismissive laugh. "Listen, I respect your service record, Harlow, but you’ve been chasing shadows since Morris died. It’s a dead man in a hole. Let's call it a drug overdose and get out of this tomb before the structural integrity hits zero." Harlow stood, the compass cold and heavy in her palm. The needle suddenly whipped around, slamming into the glass casing as if trying to break free. The thrumming in the tunnel intensified, rising to a dissonant vibration that rattled her teeth. "Look at the victim’s coat, Miller," she commanded. "It’s just wool. High-end, maybe." "The pockets are empty. No wallet, no keys, no identification. A man dies in the middle of a black market transit point, and he’s carrying nothing but a compass that points toward the center of the earth. You really think this is a routine patrol stop?" Miller moved toward her, his expression hardening. "I think you’re seeing phantoms to justify the overtime. Look at the wall behind him. There’s no entry point. This station is sealed off with six inches of steel plating back at the Camden entrance. How does a victim get in here, let alone a killer?" Harlow ignored him. She turned the compass over in her hand, searching for a seam. Her thumb caught against a tiny, hidden lever disguised as a decorative notch. It gave way with a soft click. The compartment flipped open to reveal a single, translucent bone token stained with a drop of dried blood. "He wasn't murdered, Miller. He was sold." She stood up, her jaw tight, and aimed her flashlight toward the shadows hanging over the tracks. Footprints—not human, but deep, elongated indentations that looked like wet clay—led directly into the dark. "Everything in this station is a closed system," Miller said, his voice dropping an octave as he finally noticed the footprints trailing away from the body. "If he weren't in here, he would have tripped the motion sensors at the construction barrier. I checked the logs myself." "The logs are for things that hold mass, things that rely on the station's grid," Harlow said, stepping toward the tracks. "The things that trade here don't bother with the front door." She walked toward the tunnel, the compass light bleeding a soft, sickly violet hue into the darkness. Every step brought the thrumming into sharper focus. It sounded like voices overlapping, thousands of them whispering in a language that felt like jagged glass against her eardrums. "Harlow, stay back. That’s an unstable tunnel sector," Miller called out, his hand hovering over his holster. "I’m calling for backup. The tactical team needs to clear this properly." "You want to see why Morris never came home, Miller?" Harlow turned her head, her brown eyes cold and hard as iron. "Here it is. It’s not in the archives, and it’s not in the patrol reports. It’s in the quiet places, buried beneath the city where people think they’re safe." She held the compass out. The needle began to rotate with blurring speed, vibrating so violently the metal casing grew hot against her skin. A soft, circular distortion began to ripple in the air in front of them—a blur of light and shadow, warping the bricks behind it like heat rising off hot asphalt. Miller retreated a step, his breath coming in shallow, ragged bursts. "What is that? That’s not a projector. There’s nothing—there’s not even a lens." "It’s a door," Harlow said. She took another step forward, ignoring the way her own heartbeat seemed to sync with the chaotic, pulsing light. The smell of ozone was replaced by a strange, metallic scent, like ancient libraries and iron. She watched as a piece of debris, a jagged shard of concrete, caught the edge of the ripple. It didn't bounce off. It vanished, consumed by the folding space, leaving nothing but a lingering hum. "I need to know who he was," Harlow whispered, stepping into the edge of the distortion. "Get back here, Quinn!" Miller shouted, his voice cracking. He reached out as if to grab her shoulder, but his fingers slipped off a surface that felt like running water. Harlow didn't look back. She leaned into the cold, blinding pull of the rift, the compass burning a hole in her palm as the dark tunnel of the station dissolved into a cathedral of shifting, impossible stars.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.464
leniency0.929
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1247
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"firmly"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"standard"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"vibrated"
2"etched"
3"intricate"
4"stomach"
5"firmly"
6"perfect"
7"shimmered"
8"standard"
9"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
31.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1243
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount820
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Tube1
Harlow13
Quinn1
Constable1
Miller10
Faint1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Constable"
3"Miller"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Tube"
globalScore0.707
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"sheen that seemed to move when she blinked"
1"as if trying to break free"
2"looked like wet clay—led directly into th"
3"sounded like voices overlapping, thousands"
4"felt like jagged glass against her eard"
5"felt like running water"
39.10% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.609
wordCount1243
matches
0"not by heat, but by something"
1"not human, but deep, elongated indentations"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
97.05% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean35.51
std17.39
cv0.49
sampleLengths
059
145
214
352
417
523
659
744
850
918
1050
1132
1231
1316
1448
1541
168
175
1846
1953
2053
217
2232
2347
2432
2545
2629
2751
2854
2924
305
3170
3216
3330
3437
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"was replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
70.52% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences79
ratio0.025
matches
0"Footprints—not human, but deep, elongated indentations that looked like wet clay—led directly into the dark."
1"A soft, circular distortion began to ripple in the air in front of them—a blur of light and shadow, warping the bricks behind it like heat rising off hot asphalt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount823
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.023086269744835967
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007290400972053463
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean15.73
std8.88
cv0.564
sampleLengths
015
124
220
318
427
514
610
719
823
917
107
1116
124
1317
1419
1511
163
175
1815
1929
2013
216
227
235
2419
2518
2613
2714
2823
2917
3015
319
3222
3316
348
3540
3610
3716
3815
398
405
4146
427
4346
443
4512
4613
477
4818
497
65.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4177215189873418
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners33
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Instead, she focused on the"
ratio0.016
82.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences61
matches
0"She stepped over a pile"
1"It was Constable Miller, a"
2"He stood tucked against the"
3"Her stomach tightened."
4"She didn't look at the"
5"It shivered and spun, then"
6"They shimmered with an unnatural"
7"She reached for the brass"
8"She turned the compass over"
9"Her thumb caught against a"
10"It gave way with a"
11"She stood up, her jaw"
12"She walked toward the tunnel,"
13"It sounded like voices overlapping,"
14"She held the compass out."
15"She took another step forward,"
16"She watched as a piece"
17"It didn't bounce off."
18"It vanished, consumed by the"
19"He reached out as if"
ratio0.344
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences61
matches
0"The air inside the abandoned"
1"Dust motes danced in the"
2"A low, rhythmic thrumming vibrated"
3"She stepped over a pile"
4"Harlow aimed her light toward"
5"It was Constable Miller, a"
6"He stood tucked against the"
7"Miller gestured toward the pile"
8"Harlow approached the body."
9"The victim sat slumped against"
10"The patina of verdigris clung"
11"Her stomach tightened."
12"This was no alleyway stabbing."
13"Miller muttered, scribbling something into"
14"Harlow knelt, the rough grit"
15"She didn't look at the"
16"The needle didn't point north."
17"It shivered and spun, then"
18"Harlow said, sliding her light"
19"They shimmered with an unnatural"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Dust motes danced in the beam of Harlow Quinn’s flashlight, illuminating shards of ceramic tile and rusted tracks that disappeared into the suffocating dark."
1"A low, rhythmic thrumming vibrated through the soles of her boots, a sound that didn't belong in a decommissioned tunnel."
2"Ahead, the flickering beam picked out a man in a rumpled raincoat standing over a heap of discarded rags that might have once been a human being."
3"They shimmered with an unnatural iridescent sheen that seemed to move when she blinked."
4"The needle suddenly whipped around, slamming into the glass casing as if trying to break free."
5"The thrumming in the tunnel intensified, rising to a dissonant vibration that rattled her teeth."
6"Footprints—not human, but deep, elongated indentations that looked like wet clay—led directly into the dark."
7"It sounded like voices overlapping, thousands of them whispering in a language that felt like jagged glass against her eardrums."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Miller called out, his hand hovering over his holster"
1"Harlow turned, her brown eyes cold and hard as iron"
2"Miller shouted, his voice cracking"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Miller muttered (mutter)"
1"Miller called out (call out)"
2"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
3"Miller shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.286
69.3280%