Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TJ2S6DAA8T9S71MD3KVFW

Run Details

Duration:
36.2s
Cost:
$0.066057
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the tarmac of Camden High Street, turning the neon storefronts into distorted streaks of pink and green. Harlow Quinn pulled her collar high, the damp wool scratching her throat. Up ahead, Tomás Herrera hurried through the crowd, his shoulders hunched against the downpour. He wore a heavy canvas jacket, the hood pulled low, but his olive skin and his sharp jawline stood out under the glare of the streetlights. A dark stain bloomed across the lower left side of his coat, spreading with every step. Quinn timed her strides, matching his pace from thirty yards back. Her boots made no sound on the wet pavement, a habit drilled into her through eighteen years of beat-walking and tactical sweeps. She reached down, checking the clasp on her utility belt, her fingers brushing the cold steel of her cuffs. Her worn leather watch read past midnight. Tomás glanced over his shoulder. His warm brown eyes locked onto hers through the curtain of rain. The former paramedic didn't hesitate. He veered left, darting into a narrow alleyway wedged between a grease-stained takeaway and a shuttered music venue. "Herrera! Police! Stop right there!" Quinn lunged into a sprint. Her boots splashed through a deep puddle, spraying oily water against the brick walls. The alley smelled of rotting rubbish and stale beer. Tomás was twenty paces ahead, his boots slipping on wet cardboard as he scrambled toward a dead end. Except the brick passage terminated at a rusted iron gate, the chain-link fence topped with barbed wire. A metal sign hung crookedly from the center: *Underground Property. No Entry.* Tomás grabbed the rusted chain, hauling himself upward. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck swung in violent arcs, catching the amber light of a distant streetlamp. "Don't do it, Tomás," Quinn yelled, skidding to a halt at the base of the gate. "That fence is half-rotted. You'll break your neck." Tomás reached the top, hoisted his leg over the barbed wire, and dropped down the other side with a heavy grunt. He stumbled, clutching his left forearm where a long scar puckered against his skin. "Go back to the station, Quinn," he gasped, his voice raspy from the sprint. "You're out of your depth." "You're a material witness in a triple homicide, Tomás. I'm not going back without you." Quinn grabbed the fence, her leather-gloved hands finding purchase on the cold metal. She climbed with military precision, vaulting the sharp wire. She landed hard on the tarmac on the other side, the impact rattling her teeth, but she kept her footing. Tomás was already descending a flight of crumbling concrete stairs that led into the darkness of an abandoned Tube station. The air rising from the stairwell felt warm and heavy, carrying a strange, metallic tang that made Quinn's nostrils flare. It did not smell like damp earth or old soot; it carried a heavy, cloying scent of dried lavender and copper. She flicked on her tactical torch. The bright LED beam sliced the dark, reflecting off damp, tiled walls where the white paint had peeled away like dead skin. "Stop!" The sound of retreating footsteps was her only answer. Quinn plunged down the stairs, her palm sliding along the rusted brass handrail. The temperature climbed with every level she descended. She counted the turns—three flights down, deep beneath the London clay, far past where the passenger platforms should have been. The stairs terminated in a wide, circular vault. The old Piccadilly line tiles were gone here, replaced by rough-hewn stone that looked ancient, dripping with thick, glowing moisture. At the far end of the chamber stood a massive, iron-studded door. Tomás stood before it, his back to her. A towering figure stood in his way, draped in a heavy, grease-stained greatcoat that hid its face in shadow. Quinn slowed her pace, raising her torch. "Step away from the door, Tomás. Both of you, hands where I can see them." The figure in the greatcoat turned its cowled head toward her. From the sleeve of the coat, a hand emerged—but the fingers were too long, ending in blunt, yellowed claws that looked more like bone than flesh. Tomás turned, holding out his left hand. In his palm lay a small, polished white object. He placed it in the creature's clawed hand. The gatekeeper brought the object to its face, sniffing it with a wet, snuffling intake of air. "The toll is accepted. Pass." The heavy iron door creaked open, revealing a sliver of brilliant, chaotic light. Quinn caught the sound of hummed chants, the clink of glass, and the smell of roasting meat and incense. Tomás stepped through the threshold, but paused, looking back at her. "They don't recognize your badge down here. This is the Veil Market. If you come in, you're just prey." "Step back through that door, Tomás," Quinn said, her voice dropping into a low, dangerous register. Her thumb unclipped the strap of her baton holster. The gatekeeper stepped into her path, blocking the doorway with its massive bulk. The heavy smell of wet earth and rot rolled off the creature. "The price of entry, seeker," the gatekeeper rumbled, its voice deep and vibrating in Quinn's chest. "A bone token. Or you turn back to the surface." Quinn's hand hovered near her utility belt. She could try to force her way past, but looking at the creature's massive shoulders and the clawed hands, she knew the odds. Her mind flashed to DS Morris. Three years ago, he had chased a lead into a similar wet alleyway and never returned. His body had been found in the Thames, his eyes cloudy, his skin smelling of this exact, sulfurous incense. She could not let Tomás go. He was her only link to the truth. She reached into her breast pocket. Her fingers brushed against a small, velvet-lined pouch she carried everywhere—a collection of evidence from Morris's apartment that the brass had dismissed as junk. She pulled out a small, carved ivory die. It was yellowed with age, the pips carved deep into the bone. She held it out on her open palm. "Will this do?" The gatekeeper leaned down, its cowled face inches from her hand. Quinn held her breath, refusing to flinch as the cold, damp stench of the creature washed over her. The clawed hand reached out, taking the die. The creature rolled the bone die in its palm, then let out a low, raspy chuckle. "A dead man's play. Very well." The gatekeeper stepped aside, sweeping its arm toward the open doorway. Quinn took a deep breath, adjusting the worn leather strap of her watch. She stepped past the creature and crossed the threshold into the humid, shimmering heat of the subterranean market. The contrast was a physical jolt. The quiet dark of the abandoned station vanished, replaced by a suffocating wall of sound and color. The Veil Market stretched out inside a massive, vaulted cavern that seemed far too large to exist beneath the streets of Camden. Overhead, clusters of glowing blue crystals hung from the damp rock ceiling, casting a pale, underwater light over the crowded thoroughfares. Stalls made of dark wood and draped in heavy, purple silks lined the stone paths. Stallholders—some looking human, others with eyes too wide or skin too pale—hawked their wares in a dozen different tongues. Quinn saw shelves lined with jars of pickled organs, glowing vials of green liquid, and iron cages containing small, chirping creatures that looked like feathered lizards. The scent of roasted garlic, hot copper, and burning sage filled the air. She searched the crowd, her eyes scanning the sea of hooded cloaks and strange garments. Thirty yards down the main avenue, Tomás was navigating his way past a stall selling silver-leafed daggers. He checked behind him, his eyes widening as he spotted her civilian coat amidst the crowd. He ducked behind a tapestry of woven golden threads. Quinn pressed forward, her boots clicking against the uneven stone floor. A merchant with pale blue skin and three fingers on each hand leaned over his counter, offering her a silver bowl filled with writhing, translucent worms. "A taste for the newcomer?" he hissed, his teeth filed to sharp points. Quinn pushed past without answering, her gaze locked on the spot where Tomás had disappeared. The crowd thickened, a wall of cloaked figures muttering in hushed tones. She shoved through a pair of tall, robed men who smelled of stagnant pond water, ignoring their low growls of protest. She rounded the corner of the tapestry stall. Tomás stood near a deep stone well in the center of a small plaza, talking to a woman with silver-streaked hair and a long velvet coat. "She's right behind me, Vanessa," Tomás whispered, his hand clutching his wounded arm. "She had a token. She's Metropolitan Police." The woman turned her head, her sharp, intelligent eyes finding Quinn immediately. Quinn stopped ten feet away, her hand resting on the grip of her baton. "Tomás Herrera, you are coming with me. Stand down."
created_at"2026-05-19T19:14:18.027Z" 5/19/2026, 7:14:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1513
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1513
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"navigating"
count1
6
word"amidst"
count1
7
word"tapestry"
count2
highlights
0"flicked"
1"footsteps"
2"chaotic"
3"velvet"
4"scanning"
5"navigating"
6"amidst"
7"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1508
ratio0.003
matches
0"Underground Property. No Entry."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1369
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Quinn19
Tomás14
Herrera1
Property1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
London1
Piccadilly1
Morris2
Thames1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Morris"
6"Market"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
4"Thames"
globalScore0.806
windowScore0.833
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed far too large to exist beneath the streets of Camden"
1"looked like feathered lizards"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1508
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean30.78
std17.68
cv0.575
sampleLengths
087
159
217
323
45
546
656
724
835
919
1015
1142
1261
1328
141
1550
1628
1712
1827
1922
2037
2124
2222
2332
2430
2525
2625
2726
2871
2914
3050
3111
3237
3322
3411
3531
3645
3755
3839
3915
4042
4137
4213
4348
448
4526
4620
4712
4823
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"were gone"
1"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was already descending"
1"was navigating"
15.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences112
ratio0.045
matches
0"It did not smell like damp earth or old soot; it carried a heavy, cloying scent of dried lavender and copper."
1"She counted the turns—three flights down, deep beneath the London clay, far past where the passenger platforms should have been."
2"From the sleeve of the coat, a hand emerged—but the fingers were too long, ending in blunt, yellowed claws that looked more like bone than flesh."
3"Her fingers brushed against a small, velvet-lined pouch she carried everywhere—a collection of evidence from Morris's apartment that the brass had dismissed as junk."
4"Stallholders—some looking human, others with eyes too wide or skin too pale—hawked their wares in a dozen different tongues."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1384
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"massive, iron-studded door."
1"heavy, grease-stained greatcoat"
2"small, polished white object."
3"small, velvet-lined pouch"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.015895953757225433
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004335260115606936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean13.46
std5.86
cv0.435
sampleLengths
019
112
214
326
416
511
622
719
87
95
1012
115
1218
135
145
1514
169
1718
1817
1910
2010
2119
2216
238
2421
2514
2614
275
2815
2913
309
3120
3220
3320
3421
356
3622
371
389
3913
408
4120
428
4320
4412
458
4619
477
4815
4911
37.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2767857142857143
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences99
matches
0"He wore a heavy canvas"
1"Her boots made no sound"
2"She reached down, checking the"
3"Her worn leather watch read"
4"His warm brown eyes locked"
5"He veered left, darting into"
6"Her boots splashed through a"
7"He stumbled, clutching his left"
8"he gasped, his voice raspy"
9"She climbed with military precision,"
10"She landed hard on the"
11"It did not smell like"
12"She flicked on her tactical"
13"She counted the turns—three flights"
14"He placed it in the"
15"Her thumb unclipped the strap"
16"She could try to force"
17"Her mind flashed to DS"
18"His body had been found"
19"She could not let Tomás"
ratio0.333
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences99
matches
0"Rain lashed the tarmac of"
1"Harlow Quinn pulled her collar"
2"He wore a heavy canvas"
3"A dark stain bloomed across"
4"Quinn timed her strides, matching"
5"Her boots made no sound"
6"She reached down, checking the"
7"Her worn leather watch read"
8"Tomás glanced over his shoulder."
9"His warm brown eyes locked"
10"The former paramedic didn't hesitate."
11"He veered left, darting into"
12"Quinn lunged into a sprint."
13"Her boots splashed through a"
14"The alley smelled of rotting"
15"Tomás was twenty paces ahead,"
16"A metal sign hung crookedly"
17"The Saint Christopher medallion around"
18"Quinn yelled, skidding to a"
19"Tomás reached the top, hoisted"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She reached down, checking the clasp on her utility belt, her fingers brushing the cold steel of her cuffs."
1"Tomás was already descending a flight of crumbling concrete stairs that led into the darkness of an abandoned Tube station."
2"The air rising from the stairwell felt warm and heavy, carrying a strange, metallic tang that made Quinn's nostrils flare."
3"The old Piccadilly line tiles were gone here, replaced by rough-hewn stone that looked ancient, dripping with thick, glowing moisture."
4"A towering figure stood in his way, draped in a heavy, grease-stained greatcoat that hid its face in shadow."
5"The Veil Market stretched out inside a massive, vaulted cavern that seemed far too large to exist beneath the streets of Camden."
6"Quinn saw shelves lined with jars of pickled organs, glowing vials of green liquid, and iron cages containing small, chirping creatures that looked like feather…"
7"A merchant with pale blue skin and three fingers on each hand leaned over his counter, offering her a silver bowl filled with writhing, translucent worms."
8"She shoved through a pair of tall, robed men who smelled of stagnant pond water, ignoring their low growls of protest."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he gasped, his voice raspy from the sprint"
1"Quinn said, her voice dropping into a low, dangerous register"
2"the gatekeeper rumbled, its voice deep and vibrating in Quinn's chest"
3"Tomás whispered, his hand clutching his wounded arm"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn yelled (yell)"
1"he gasped (gasp)"
2"he hissed (hiss)"
3"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.421
73.5432%