Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TJGC8GSRYNNJVMMH68CM9

Run Details

Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.033486
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rainwater channeled down Harlow’s collar, a freezing needle against her spine. She ignored the sting, keeping her focus locked on the bobbing figure fifty yards ahead. Tomás Herrera ran with a desperate, loose-limbed gait. He skidded around a stack of wooden crates outside a closed greengrocer, his trainers kicking up a spray of diesel-sheened water. The silver Saint Christopher medallion around his neck flew over his shoulder, catching the yellow glare of a flickering sodium streetlamp. Harlow adjusted her stride. Years on the beat had trained her muscles to find traction on the slickest tarmac. She did not slip. She did not slow. Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to her forehead in wet strands, framing a face set in hard, angular lines. She reached down, checking her left wrist by touch. The worn leather strap of her watch remained secure, the ticking hands invisible under the dark October sky. "Stop, Herrera!" Her voice cut through the steady hiss of the downpour, flat and commanding. The Spaniard didn't look back. He veered left, darting into a narrow brick alleyway that sloped sharply downward toward the canal. The passage was dark, a slot of shadow between two Victorian warehouses. The smell of wet brick and stagnant canal water rushed to meet her. Harlow pursued him into the dark. Her boots clattered against the uneven cobblestones. Up ahead, Herrera tripped, his hands scraping along the gritty wall. The sleeve of his jacket pulled back, revealing the jagged scar running along his left forearm—a pale reminder of a knife attack that had ended his medical career. He recovered his footing with a grunt, throwing himself forward. At the dead end of the alley stood a heavy iron hatch, set into the foundation of a defunct railway arch. It looked like an old substation entrance, rusted solid and choked with weeds. Herrera didn't hesitate. He fell to his knees, his fingers clawing at a iron ring half-buried in the mud. "Step away from the door, Tomás." Harlow stopped ten paces back, her right hand resting on the grip of the baton at her utility belt. Her chest rose and fell in controlled, deep breaths. Her military background anchored her, keeping her heart rate steady despite the adrenaline surging through her veins. Herrera got his fingers under the ring and pulled. With a heavy, metallic groan, the hatch swung upward, releasing a puff of air that smelled of copper, dried sage, and ozone. "You can't follow me down here, Quinn." Herrera stood, his back to the black square of the opening. Rain washed the sweat from his olive skin, tracing the hollows of his cheeks. He reached into his coat pocket. Harlow took a step forward, her hand tightening on her baton. "Keep your hands where I can see them." Herrera drew his hand out slowly. He held a small, polished piece of ivory between his thumb and forefinger. It was carved in the likeness of a human finger bone, yellowed with age and scored with faint, spiraling grooves. "This is as far as you go." He stepped backward into the gap. His boots found a flight of concrete stairs, and he vanished into the dark, his footsteps echoing down a long, hollow shaft. Harlow reached the edge of the hatch and peered down. A flight of steep, dripping steps descended into the bowels of Camden. The air rising from the depths was warm, carrying a faint hum that vibrated in her jaw. It was the rhythm of a crowd, a low murmur of voices mixed with the clink of metal and the smell of roasting meat. The abandoned Tube station beneath the streets harbored secrets the Metropolitan Police never put in their manuals, secrets the department preferred to ignore. She grasped the wet iron railing and took the first step down. The steps turned sharply, spiraling into the foundations of the city. The noise grew louder, resolved into the distinct sounds of a bustling marketplace. At the bottom of the stairs stood a heavy oak door, bound in black iron. A figure blocked her path. The guard stood over six feet tall, dressed in a heavy trench coat that smelled of damp wool and wet dog. His face remained shrouded in the shadow of a low-brimmed hat, but his chest was broad as a door frame. Herrera stood just behind him, already inside the warm, amber-lit cavern of the Veil Market. Beyond them, stalls stretched into the darkness of the old train tunnels, draped in rich silks and glowing with lanterns of colored glass. Merchants offered jars of dark liquid, bundles of dried roots, and items wrapped in oilskin that she didn't care to examine. The guard held out a massive, gloved hand, palm upward. "Token." The word was a low rumble that vibrated through the flagstones. Harlow met the guard's invisible gaze beneath the brim of his hat. Her hand drifted to her badge, but she stopped. In this place, the crest of the Crown held no authority. She looked past the giant's shoulder to Herrera, who was watching her with a mixture of pity and anxiety. "He's a suspect in an ongoing investigation, Harlow." "You have no business here, Officer." The guard’s fingers curled slightly, waiting. Harlow stood on the bottom step, the rain from her coat dripping onto the dust-covered concrete. The air here was heavy, thick with the scent of unwashed bodies and rare spices. It was a world she had spent three years trying to ignore, ever since her partner Morris had died in an alleyway with no external wounds and a throat full of black sand. She looked at Herrera’s St. Christopher medallion, catching the light of a nearby brazier. "He's coming back with me." "He has paid his entry." The guard shifted his weight, his boots creaking. He didn't draw a weapon, but the sheer mass of him made the narrow corridor feel like a vice. Behind them, the market hummed with life. A woman with eyes too wide and fingers too long glanced toward the doorway, then turned back to her stall, whispering to a customer. Harlow took a slow breath, her hand dropping from her belt. The cold water on her skin felt miles away. She had to make a choice. If she stepped past this threshold without a token, she would be completely exposed, deep in the territory of people who didn't recognize her law. If she turned back, Herrera would disappear into the crowd, and the trail to Morris’s killer would go cold again. She reached into her pocket, her fingers brushing against her notepad, her cuffs, and a small, heavy silver coin she had found in Morris's desk after his desk was cleared. She pulled the coin out, the silver tarnished black at the edges. She laid it in the massive gloved palm of the guard. The guard brought the coin to his face, sniffing it once. He stepped aside, his coat brushing against the damp brick wall. "Welcome to the Market, Detective."
created_at"2026-05-19T19:14:31.95Z" 5/19/2026, 7:14:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
78.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"resolved"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"tracing"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"depths"
5"vibrated"
6"resolved"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1169
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1109
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Harlow9
Herrera10
Saint1
Christopher2
October1
Spaniard1
Victorian1
Camden1
Tube1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Veil1
Market1
Crown1
Morris3
St1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Spaniard"
4"Victorian"
5"Market"
6"Crown"
7"Morris"
places
0"St"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like an old substation entrance, r"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1169
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean26.57
std21.44
cv0.807
sampleLengths
026
150
272
32
413
546
662
734
819
96
1045
1131
127
1331
1411
158
1639
177
1828
1910
2076
2112
2239
235
2441
2559
2610
271
2811
2951
308
316
326
3364
3414
355
365
3727
3831
3971
4030
4123
4222
435
96.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"was carved"
1"was cleared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences92
ratio0.011
matches
0"The sleeve of his jacket pulled back, revealing the jagged scar running along his left forearm—a pale reminder of a knife attack that had ended his medical career."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1118
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"desperate, loose-limbed gait."
1"warm, amber-lit cavern"
2"small, heavy silver coin"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.022361359570661897
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004472271914132379
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean12.71
std6.72
cv0.529
sampleLengths
011
115
28
321
421
54
615
74
84
918
109
1118
122
1313
145
1516
1612
1713
186
197
2011
2128
2210
2321
2413
253
2616
276
2819
299
3017
319
3222
337
3411
3514
366
3711
388
396
4013
4120
427
436
4422
4510
4612
4717
4824
4923
43.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.31521739130434784
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences81
matches
0"She ignored the sting, keeping"
1"He skidded around a stack"
2"She did not slip."
3"She did not slow."
4"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
5"She reached down, checking her"
6"Her voice cut through the"
7"He veered left, darting into"
8"Her boots clattered against the"
9"He recovered his footing with"
10"It looked like an old"
11"He fell to his knees,"
12"Her chest rose and fell"
13"Her military background anchored her,"
14"He reached into his coat"
15"He held a small, polished"
16"It was carved in the"
17"He stepped backward into the"
18"His boots found a flight"
19"It was the rhythm of"
ratio0.395
21.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences81
matches
0"Rainwater channeled down Harlow’s collar,"
1"She ignored the sting, keeping"
2"Tomás Herrera ran with a"
3"He skidded around a stack"
4"The silver Saint Christopher medallion"
5"Harlow adjusted her stride."
6"Years on the beat had"
7"She did not slip."
8"She did not slow."
9"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
10"She reached down, checking her"
11"The worn leather strap of"
12"Her voice cut through the"
13"The Spaniard didn't look back."
14"He veered left, darting into"
15"The passage was dark, a"
16"The smell of wet brick"
17"Harlow pursued him into the"
18"Her boots clattered against the"
19"The sleeve of his jacket"
ratio0.877
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"If she stepped past this"
1"If she turned back, Herrera"
ratio0.025
81.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The sleeve of his jacket pulled back, revealing the jagged scar running along his left forearm—a pale reminder of a knife attack that had ended his medical care…"
1"With a heavy, metallic groan, the hatch swung upward, releasing a puff of air that smelled of copper, dried sage, and ozone."
2"The guard stood over six feet tall, dressed in a heavy trench coat that smelled of damp wool and wet dog."
3"She looked past the giant's shoulder to Herrera, who was watching her with a mixture of pity and anxiety."
4"If she stepped past this threshold without a token, she would be completely exposed, deep in the territory of people who didn't recognize her law."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.5865%