Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TM9GDGE0G6MYYKTQB1480

Run Details

Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.064401
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the soot-stained brickwork of Camden High Street, turning the neon signage of the tattoo parlors and cheap clothes shops into a smeared kaleidoscope of pink and green. Harlow Quinn stood tucked inside the recess of an abandoned storefront, her hands shoved deep into her wax coat pocket. Water dripped from the brim of her flat cap, running down her sharp jawline. She checked her watch. The worn leather band was dark with moisture, the hands pointing to just past midnight. Under the flickering glow of a kebab shop sign across the road, a figure materialized. Tomás Herrera. He kept his hood pulled low, but his long-strided gait gave him away. As he stepped beneath a streetlamp, the collar of his jacket parted. A silver Saint Christopher medallion flashed against his olive skin, swinging like a pendulum in the wind. Quinn stepped out of the shadow. Wet gravel crunched under her boots. Herrera stopped. Through the driving rain, his warm brown eyes locked onto hers. For a fraction of a second, only the drone of a distant night bus broke the silence. Then, his face hardened. He spun on his heel and bolted down the pavement. "Police! Stop!" The shout tore from Quinn’s throat, swallowed almost instantly by the wind. She sprinted after him, her knees screaming at the sudden impact against the wet tarmac. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered itself to her forehead. She ignored the burn in her lungs, her gaze fixed entirely on the dark blue nylon jacket bobbing through the gloom ahead. Herrera was fast, fueled by the panic of a man who had already lost his career to the shadows. He veered left, darting into a narrow alleyway that ran parallel to the canal. The scent of stagnant water and rotting rubbish hit Quinn’s nose as she rounded the corner. Her boot skidded on a patch of wet moss. She slammed her shoulder against the damp brick wall to keep her footing, the rough masonry scraping through her sleeve. "You can't run forever, Tomás!" Herrera didn't answer. He leapt over a stack of waterlogged wooden pallets, his left sleeve catching on a splinter. The fabric tore back, revealing the thick, jagged scar running along his left forearm—the souvenir of a knife attack that had ended his mainstream medical career. He scrambled up a low iron gate, his boots clattering against the metal, and dropped down the other side. Quinn reached the gate a second later. Instead of climbing, she threw her shoulder against the rusted latch. The lock sheared off with a sharp metallic crack. She burst through, her military precision overriding the fatigue. Ahead lay the entrance to the old Camden deep-level shelter, an abandoned stub of a Tube station closed since the Blitz. The heavy iron doors, usually secured with massive padlocks, hung slightly ajar. A sliver of warm, unnatural light bled from the gap, slicing through the midnight gloom. Herrera didn't hesitate. He slipped through the gap and vanished into the earth. Quinn halted at the threshold. The rain drummed a frantic rhythm on her cap, but the air rising from the stairwell felt different. It was hot. It carried the scent of ozone, dried lavender, and something old and copper-like, like dried blood. She reached beneath her coat, her fingers wrapping around the familiar grip of her Glock. The cold steel offered some comfort, but she knew the rules changed once you went below the surface. This was Camden, but it wasn't London anymore. Not the one on the maps. She plunged down the steps. The concrete stairs were steep, slick with condensation and green slime. Far below, the sound of the rain died away, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through her teeth. The stairs turned sharply, descending deeper than any standard station. The standard-issue subway tiling on the walls gave way to rough-hewn stone, etched with faint, glowing sigils that pulsed like dying embers. "Go back, Quinn!" Herrera’s voice echoed up from the dark, distorted by the curved stone corridor. "I just want to talk, Tomás!" Quinn kept her pace steady, her boots making no sound on the wet stone. She held her weapon low, pressed against her thigh. "There's nothing to talk about! The Met won't help you down here. They don't even believe this place exists!" "I saw Morris's body, Tomás. I know what you did to him." Silence followed, save for the rhythmic thrumming of the deep earth. "I tried to save him." Herrera’s voice returned, lower this time, stripped of its panic. "But you can't stitch up a soul, Detective. Now turn around before they catch you." The corridor opened up, the ceiling soaring into a vast, vaulted cavern that stretched into the blackness. This was the Veil Market. Quinn stopped, her breath catching in her throat. The abandoned platform had been transformed. Rows of wooden stalls stretched along the defunct tracks, illuminated by floating glass lanterns filled with glowing green vapor. Figures in heavy cloaks and brass-masked merchants haggled over jars of shimmering dust, bundles of dried herbs that twitched in the draft, and silver-plated cages containing small, chittering skeletons. The air was thick with the smoke of exotic hookahs, smelling of cloves and hot metal. At the entrance to this subterranean bazaar stood a massive archway made of rusted train tracks. Guarding it was a figure whose size made Quinn’s hand tighten on her weapon. Well over seven feet tall, the gatekeeper wore a heavy apron of cured hide. His skin was the color of wet slate, his eyes solid black pools without whites or pupils. Herrera stood at the archway, his hand extended. In his palm sat a small, polished piece of ivory—a bone token. The giant leaned down, his flat nose sniffing the air near Herrera’s hand. Satisfied, he stepped aside, his massive form clearing the path. Herrera didn't look back; he plunged into the swirling crowd of the market, his dark hood quickly blending with the cloaked shoppers. Quinn stepped out of the shadow of the tunnel. The giant’s head snapped toward her. A low rumble, like a diesel engine starting up, vibrated from his chest. He took a half-step forward, blocking the archway completely, his massive hand extending palm-up. "I don't have a token." Quinn kept her voice level, her eyes locked on his black pupils. The gatekeeper didn't move. He pointed a massive, thick finger toward the dark maintenance tunnel branching off to the left—a pitch-black corridor that bypassed the market but led deep into the unmapped, wild labyrinth of the London underground. Quinn looked from the giant to the dark tunnel, then back to the crowded market where Herrera’s jacket had just vanished behind a stall draped in blue silk. If she went back to the surface, the case died. The secrets of Morris's death would remain buried forever. If she went into the market without a token, she was a trespasser in a world that didn't play by her rules. The worn leather watch on her wrist ticked loudly in her ears. She released her grip on her weapon, keeping her hands visible. She took a step toward the giant. "Let's see if we can reach an agreement."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"quickly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1210
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"standard"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"kaleidoscope"
1"silence"
2"gloom"
3"familiar"
4"rhythmic"
5"vibrated"
6"standard"
7"etched"
8"pulsed"
9"echoed"
10"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1127
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden3
High1
Street1
Quinn12
Herrera11
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Blitz1
Glock1
London2
Veil1
Market1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
4"Market"
globalScore0.968
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean30.18
std23.49
cv0.779
sampleLengths
083
115
244
312
444
52
659
778
85
964
1036
1148
1213
1342
1447
155
1663
173
1813
196
2023
2119
2212
2311
2430
2522
268
2770
2861
2920
3045
319
3233
335
3412
3538
3669
3712
3818
398
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"The fabric tore back, revealing the thick, jagged scar running along his left forearm—the souvenir of a knife attack that had ended his mainstream medical career."
1"In his palm sat a small, polished piece of ivory—a bone token."
2"Herrera didn't look back; he plunged into the swirling crowd of the market, his dark hood quickly blending with the cloaked shoppers."
3"He pointed a massive, thick finger toward the dark maintenance tunnel branching off to the left—a pitch-black corridor that bypassed the market but led deep into the unmapped, wild labyrinth of the London underground."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1143
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"low, pressed against her"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.024496937882764653
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008748906386701663
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.57
std6.62
cv0.526
sampleLengths
030
120
214
34
415
515
62
713
812
917
106
116
122
1311
1417
154
1610
172
1812
1915
2010
2122
2219
2314
2416
259
2620
275
283
2916
3026
3119
327
3311
349
359
3621
3712
3815
393
4010
415
4218
433
4416
4515
4618
478
486
495
66.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then, his face hardened."
1"Instead of climbing, she threw"
2"Well over seven feet tall,"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences85
matches
0"She checked her watch."
1"He kept his hood pulled"
2"He spun on his heel"
3"She sprinted after him, her"
4"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
5"She ignored the burn in"
6"He veered left, darting into"
7"Her boot skidded on a"
8"She slammed her shoulder against"
9"He leapt over a stack"
10"He scrambled up a low"
11"She burst through, her military"
12"He slipped through the gap"
13"It was hot."
14"It carried the scent of"
15"She reached beneath her coat,"
16"She plunged down the steps."
17"She held her weapon low,"
18"His skin was the color"
19"He took a half-step forward,"
ratio0.271
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences85
matches
0"Rain lashed against the soot-stained"
1"Harlow Quinn stood tucked inside"
2"Water dripped from the brim"
3"She checked her watch."
4"The worn leather band was"
5"He kept his hood pulled"
6"A silver Saint Christopher medallion"
7"Quinn stepped out of the"
8"He spun on his heel"
9"The shout tore from Quinn’s"
10"She sprinted after him, her"
11"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
12"She ignored the burn in"
13"Herrera was fast, fueled by"
14"He veered left, darting into"
15"The scent of stagnant water"
16"Her boot skidded on a"
17"She slammed her shoulder against"
18"Herrera didn't answer."
19"He leapt over a stack"
ratio0.8
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"If she went back to"
1"If she went into the"
ratio0.024
82.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The fabric tore back, revealing the thick, jagged scar running along his left forearm—the souvenir of a knife attack that had ended his mainstream medical caree…"
1"Far below, the sound of the rain died away, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through her teeth."
2"The corridor opened up, the ceiling soaring into a vast, vaulted cavern that stretched into the blackness."
3"Figures in heavy cloaks and brass-masked merchants haggled over jars of shimmering dust, bundles of dried herbs that twitched in the draft, and silver-plated ca…"
4"He pointed a massive, thick finger toward the dark maintenance tunnel branching off to the left—a pitch-black corridor that bypassed the market but led deep int…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.3523%