Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TNN3CF28DGZP19W82G3P1

Run Details

Duration:
48.7s
Cost:
$0.095514
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The solid brass of the bottom lock resisted. Rory leaned her weight into the timber door, forcing the tumbler to click. The second deadbolt, a heavy iron relic from the previous tenant, yielded with a wet, grinding snap. A cold draft from the staircase landing stirred her straight, shoulder-length black hair. Ptolemy, Eva’s orange tabby, let out a demanding yowl, weaving a tight figure-eight through her shins. "Quiet." Rory slid the latch of the third and final deadbolt. The bolt retreated. The weight of the rain-slicked corridor outside pushed the heavy wood open before her fingers could even grasp the brass doorknob. Standing on the cramped landing, haloed by the flickering yellow light of a dying bulb, Lucien Moreau looked untouched by the East London downpour. His tailored charcoal suit bore no trace of dampness. The ivory handle of his cane caught the dim light, the carved detailing of a snarling beast gleaming like polished bone. "You took your time." Lucien leaned his weight on the cane, his posture deceptively relaxed. His voice carried that gravelly timbre that had haunted her sleep for the last ninety days. It was a voice designed to negotiate treaties in backrooms or whisper ruinous secrets in darkened corners. Rory gripped the edge of the door, her fingers digging into the chipped paint. "The locks are stiff." "And your hospitality remains non-existent." Lucien stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation. The scent of him entered the room first—expensive French cologne, rainwater, and the faint, bitter tang of burnt sugar that always lingered on his skin. It was the scent of his heritage, a subtle reminder of what lurked beneath the impeccably tailored exterior. Rory held her ground, her shoulder bracing against the doorframe to force him to squeeze past her. He moved with calculated slowness, the rough wool of his sleeve brushing against the bare skin of her forearm. The brief contact sparked a sudden, violent heat that made her breath hitch. Rory slammed the door shut, her palm stinging against the timber. "Eva isn't here." She turned the three deadbolts back into their sockets, the heavy clicks echoing like gunshots in the quiet room. "I am aware." Lucien surveyed the room. Eva's flat on Brick Lane was a logistical nightmare. Every flat surface groaned under the weight of leather-bound grimoires, rolled-up parchments, and half-empty mugs of cold tea. A stack of translation notes threatened to collapse near the edge of the coffee table. Lucien tapped the tip of his cane against a thick volume on Celtic protective wards. "The girl lives like a scavenger." "She's a researcher. And she let me stay here when I had nowhere else to go." Rory crossed her arms, defensive, her hands tucking into her armpits to hide her trembling fingers. On her left wrist, the small, crescent-shaped scar from her childhood throbbed. "Unlike some people, she doesn't demand a pound of flesh for a roof over my head." Lucien turned, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers. In the shadows of the flat, the contrast between them was starker than ever. The amber eye glowed with an amber light, while the black one remained an impenetrable void, absorbing the weak glow of the streetlamps filtering through the window. "A pound of flesh is a clumsy currency, Rory." Lucien's voice dropped, sliding through the shadows. He laid his cane across the back of the sagging armchair, then removed his gloves, pulling the dark leather from each finger with agonizing deliberation. "I have always preferred more... delicate transactions." "Like selling me out to the syndicate?" "I saved your life." "You locked me in a cellar!" Her voice cracked, the raw hurt of that night in Soho spilling over before she could stop it. "You left me in the dark while you went to strike a deal with the very creatures who wanted to tear my soul apart." Lucien's expression didn’t soften, but his jaw tightened, the muscle leaping beneath his pale cheek. "The cellar was protected. The wards were cast by my own hand. You were safe there." "I was a prisoner." "You were alive." He took two steps toward her, his movements fluid and dangerous. He stopped just short of her personal space, though the heat radiating from him made her feel as if he were already touching her. "Do you have any idea what they would have done to you? A Cardiff girl with no magic, no backing, and a mouth far too stubborn for her own good?" "I would have fought." "You would have died." They stood panting, the space between them charged with a current so thick Rory could taste it on her tongue. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa, his tail swishing as he watched them with wide, golden eyes. Rory looked away first, her gaze falling to his chest, where the silk tie was knotted with mathematical precision. "You shouldn't have come here. I told you we were done." "We are never done, Aurora." Lucien reached out. His fingers hovered just above her shoulder, close enough that she could feel the static electricity of his touch. "You left your keys at the townhouse." From his pocket, he produced a heavy silver keyring. It clattered onto the kitchen counter, the sound sharp and metallic. Rory stared at the keys. "They're just brass. I could have had new ones cut." "But you didn't." Lucien's hand moved, his fingers brushing the side of her neck. His skin was burning hot, a direct contrast to the damp chill of the room. "You wanted me to bring them to you. You wanted an excuse." "Don't flatter yourself." Rory tried to pull back, but the kitchen counter pressed against her spine, trapping her. Lucien closed the gap. He leaned in, his chest almost touching hers, trapping her between his body and the laminate counter. The faint scent of his cologne washed over her, thick and intoxicating. "I have spent three months trying to forget the way you look when you're angry." Lucien's breath warmed her ear. "It has been a failed endeavor." "You're a demon, Lucien. You don't have feelings to forget." "Half-demon." His voice dropped to a velvety growl. "The human half is the one that suffers, Rory. The half that remembers the taste of your mouth." His hand slid up to her jaw, his thumb tracing the sharp line of her chin. Rory's breath hitched. She should push him away. She should grab the heavy iron skillet on the stove and strike him. But her hands remained anchored to her sides, her fingers curling into fists against her thighs. "You left me." Her voice stripped of its anger, leaving only the hollow ache that had settled in her chest since the night in Soho. "I went to secure our future." Lucien's chin rose, his amber eye flaring. "I had to ensure my father's kin would not hunt you. It took time. It took bargains I would rather not speak of." "Why didn't you tell me?" "Because you would have stopped me." "Of course I would have!" Rory grabbed his lapels, her fingers bunching the expensive wool of his suit. "You went into the pit for me?" "I went for myself." Lucien's eyes betrayed him. "I cannot function when my most valuable asset is constantly putting herself in mortal peril." "An asset." Rory let out a dry, bitter laugh, her grip tightening on his lapels, pulling him down a fraction of an inch closer. "Is that all I am to you, Moreau? A line on a ledger?" "If you were a line on a ledger, I would have crossed you out months ago." Lucien's hand slid into her hair, his fingers tangling in the dark strands. He tilted her head back, forcing her to look at him. "You are a deficit I cannot afford, yet I keep investing." "Then stop." "I cannot." The distance between their lips was down to a breath. Rory could see the tiny flecks of gold in his dark eye, the minute tremor in his hand that he was trying so hard to hide. The raw, magnetic pull of him was overwhelming, erasing the cramped flat, the rain on the window, the stacks of books. "You are infuriating." She whispered against his mouth. His lips brushed hers, a tease of heat that made her whole body ache. "You are a distraction." Rory pulled him down, her lips meeting his in a collision of built-up frustration and desperate, lingering hunger. The kiss was not soft; it was a battle of wills, teeth clashing, tongues tasting of rain and fire. She locked her arms around his neck, pulling herself flush against his hard, unyielding form, her fingers digging into the short-cropped hair at the nape of his neck. Lucien groaned, a deep vibration in his chest. His hands gripped her hips, lifting her slightly, pressing her weight against the edge of the kitchen counter. A stack of mail slid onto the floor with a soft rustle, entirely ignored. He broke the kiss for a fraction of a second, his lips dragging across her cheek, down to the sensitive skin just below her ear, making her gasp. "Tell me to leave." He growled against her skin, his hands gripping her tighter, his fingers digging into the flesh of her hips. "Tell me now, Aurora, before I forget how to be a gentleman." Rory gripped his shoulders, her head tilting back as his mouth found the pulse point at her throat. "The door is locked." "I can break it." "Don't you dare." She pulled his face back to hers, her eyes fierce despite the flush on her cheeks. "If you run away again, Lucien..." "I am not running." His heterochromatic eyes went dark with an intensity that made her shiver. "I have nowhere left to go." He leaned back in, his mouth claiming hers once more, slower this time, a deliberate, burning promise that consumed the quiet of the small flat.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:16:15.088Z" 5/19/2026, 7:16:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.397
leniency0.793
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1661
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1661
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count5
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"ensure"
count1
13
word"peril"
count1
14
word"magnetic"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"gleaming"
2"whisper"
3"reminder"
4"calculated"
5"echoing"
6"throbbed"
7"charged"
8"silk"
9"could feel"
10"chill"
11"tracing"
12"ensure"
13"peril"
14"magnetic"
15"pulse"
16"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1660
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1213
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Lucien16
Moreau1
East1
London1
French1
Brick1
Lane1
Celtic1
Soho2
Rory16
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Soho"
globalScore0.84
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1660
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean27.21
std17.47
cv0.642
sampleLengths
051
116
211
324
454
515
633
718
813
943
1049
1114
1219
137
1442
1521
1660
1749
1848
197
204
2148
2231
234
2468
254
264
2736
2830
2934
3020
3115
3241
3318
3433
3526
3610
3726
3853
3925
4036
415
426
4325
4423
4537
4651
472
482
4957
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs183
matches
0"were already touching"
1"was burning"
94.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences119
ratio0.017
matches
0"The scent of him entered the room first—expensive French cologne, rainwater, and the faint, bitter tang of burnt sugar that always lingered on his skin."
1"The kiss was not soft; it was a battle of wills, teeth clashing, tongues tasting of rain and fire."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1223
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.023712183156173343
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004905968928863451
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean13.95
std7.13
cv0.511
sampleLengths
08
113
217
313
416
511
63
721
824
99
1021
1115
1216
1317
1414
154
1613
1725
1818
1917
2019
2113
2211
233
2419
257
269
2718
2815
2915
306
3132
3212
3316
348
3514
3627
3716
3825
397
407
414
4224
4324
4415
4516
464
4714
4824
4930
44.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences84
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit bore"
1"His voice carried that gravelly"
2"It was a voice designed"
3"It was the scent of"
4"He moved with calculated slowness,"
5"She turned the three deadbolts"
6"He laid his cane across"
7"Her voice cracked, the raw"
8"He took two steps toward"
9"He stopped just short of"
10"They stood panting, the space"
11"His fingers hovered just above"
12"It clattered onto the kitchen"
13"His skin was burning hot,"
14"He leaned in, his chest"
15"His voice dropped to a"
16"His hand slid up to"
17"She should push him away."
18"She should grab the heavy"
19"Her voice stripped of its"
ratio0.357
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The solid brass of the"
1"Rory leaned her weight into"
2"The second deadbolt, a heavy"
3"A cold draft from the"
4"Ptolemy, Eva’s orange tabby, let"
5"Rory slid the latch of"
6"The bolt retreated."
7"The weight of the rain-slicked"
8"His tailored charcoal suit bore"
9"The ivory handle of his"
10"Lucien leaned his weight on"
11"His voice carried that gravelly"
12"It was a voice designed"
13"Rory gripped the edge of"
14"Lucien stepped forward, not waiting"
15"The scent of him entered"
16"It was the scent of"
17"Rory held her ground, her"
18"He moved with calculated slowness,"
19"The brief contact sparked a"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He stopped just short of her personal space, though the heat radiating from him made her feel as if he were already touching her."
1"His lips brushed hers, a tease of heat that made her whole body ache."
2"She locked her arms around his neck, pulling herself flush against his hard, unyielding form, her fingers digging into the short-cropped hair at the nape of his…"
3"His hands gripped her hips, lifting her slightly, pressing her weight against the edge of the kitchen counter."
4"He broke the kiss for a fraction of a second, his lips dragging across her cheek, down to the sensitive skin just below her ear, making her gasp."
5"He leaned back in, his mouth claiming hers once more, slower this time, a deliberate, burning promise that consumed the quiet of the small flat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Lucien leaned, his posture deceptively relaxed"
1"Lucien stepped, not waiting for an invitation"
2"Lucien's hand moved, his fingers brushing the side of her neck"
3"Rory grabbed, her fingers bunching the expensive wool of his suit"
4"Lucien's hand slid, his fingers tangling in the dark strands"
5"She pulled, her eyes fierce despite the flush on her cheeks"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She whispered (whisper)"
1"He growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.069
79.3780%