| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.397 | | leniency | 0.793 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1661 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1661 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "calculated" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "ensure" | | 13 | "peril" | | 14 | "magnetic" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1660 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1213 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 16 | | Moreau | 1 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | French | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Celtic | 1 | | Soho | 2 | | Rory | 16 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Soho" |
| | globalScore | 0.84 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1660 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 27.21 | | std | 17.47 | | cv | 0.642 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 68 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 53 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 51 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 57 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | 0 | "were already touching" | | 1 | "was burning" |
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| 94.84% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of him entered the room first—expensive French cologne, rainwater, and the faint, bitter tang of burnt sugar that always lingered on his skin." | | 1 | "The kiss was not soft; it was a battle of wills, teeth clashing, tongues tasting of rain and fire." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1223 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.023712183156173343 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004905968928863451 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 13.95 | | std | 7.13 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 44.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.29411764705882354 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "His tailored charcoal suit bore" | | 1 | "His voice carried that gravelly" | | 2 | "It was a voice designed" | | 3 | "It was the scent of" | | 4 | "He moved with calculated slowness," | | 5 | "She turned the three deadbolts" | | 6 | "He laid his cane across" | | 7 | "Her voice cracked, the raw" | | 8 | "He took two steps toward" | | 9 | "He stopped just short of" | | 10 | "They stood panting, the space" | | 11 | "His fingers hovered just above" | | 12 | "It clattered onto the kitchen" | | 13 | "His skin was burning hot," | | 14 | "He leaned in, his chest" | | 15 | "His voice dropped to a" | | 16 | "His hand slid up to" | | 17 | "She should push him away." | | 18 | "She should grab the heavy" | | 19 | "Her voice stripped of its" |
| | ratio | 0.357 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The solid brass of the" | | 1 | "Rory leaned her weight into" | | 2 | "The second deadbolt, a heavy" | | 3 | "A cold draft from the" | | 4 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s orange tabby, let" | | 5 | "Rory slid the latch of" | | 6 | "The bolt retreated." | | 7 | "The weight of the rain-slicked" | | 8 | "His tailored charcoal suit bore" | | 9 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 10 | "Lucien leaned his weight on" | | 11 | "His voice carried that gravelly" | | 12 | "It was a voice designed" | | 13 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 14 | "Lucien stepped forward, not waiting" | | 15 | "The scent of him entered" | | 16 | "It was the scent of" | | 17 | "Rory held her ground, her" | | 18 | "He moved with calculated slowness," | | 19 | "The brief contact sparked a" |
| | ratio | 0.94 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He stopped just short of her personal space, though the heat radiating from him made her feel as if he were already touching her." | | 1 | "His lips brushed hers, a tease of heat that made her whole body ache." | | 2 | "She locked her arms around his neck, pulling herself flush against his hard, unyielding form, her fingers digging into the short-cropped hair at the nape of his…" | | 3 | "His hands gripped her hips, lifting her slightly, pressing her weight against the edge of the kitchen counter." | | 4 | "He broke the kiss for a fraction of a second, his lips dragging across her cheek, down to the sensitive skin just below her ear, making her gasp." | | 5 | "He leaned back in, his mouth claiming hers once more, slower this time, a deliberate, burning promise that consumed the quiet of the small flat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien leaned, his posture deceptively relaxed" | | 1 | "Lucien stepped, not waiting for an invitation" | | 2 | "Lucien's hand moved, his fingers brushing the side of her neck" | | 3 | "Rory grabbed, her fingers bunching the expensive wool of his suit" | | 4 | "Lucien's hand slid, his fingers tangling in the dark strands" | | 5 | "She pulled, her eyes fierce despite the flush on her cheeks" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "He growled (growl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.034 | | leniency | 0.069 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |