Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TP5WCVWT5FC43S208C83P

Run Details

Duration:
53.5s
Cost:
$0.104855
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pressed the phone to her ear, the cold plastic biting into her flesh. Her boots ground against the gravel of the Richmond Park trail, a sharp, repetitive crunch that grated against the heavy silence of the night. "I'm near the tree line, Eva." Rory stepped over a rotting log, keeping her voice low. "If you set this up to scare me, I'm taking your weekend shifts." Static hissed from the speaker. It did not sound like a bad connection; it sounded like a nest of hornets vibrating in a metal can. "Rory—get out—" Eva's voice cut through the dry rattle, fractured and thin. "The Richmond grove... Silas found the records. It's not a safe night." "The gates don't just open because the calendar says so." Rory pushed past a low-hanging birch branch. "I have the pendant. It is dead cold." The line died. The call screen vanished, replaced by a black pane of glass. Rory pressed the power button, but the phone remained dead, its battery drained in a single heartbeat. She shoved the device into her pocket and looked up. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead. They formed a rough, jagged circle at the edge of the woods, gray wood twisting toward the stars like skeletal fingers. Beyond them, the dense wild of the park resolved into a thick, swirling mist that clung to the earth. Rory hesitated. Her thumb found the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, tracing the slick tissue. She took a breath, stepped between the two largest oaks, and crossed the threshold. The autumn wind vanished. A stifling, humid heat engulfed her, thick with the scent of lilies and overripe peaches. Rory unzipped her jacket, her skin slick with sudden sweat. Under her shirt, her collarbone burned. She reached down, pulling the Heartstone Pendant from beneath the material. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem no longer lay dormant. It pulsed with a deep, liquid glow, casting red veins of light across her fingers. The silver chain felt hot enough to scald. Rory spat the words into the dark. "You're late." Her voice fell flat. No echo returned from the trees, the thick atmosphere swallowing the sound like wool. She walked deeper into the clearing. The ground beneath her felt strange—soft and springy, like stepping on damp moss, though the London dirt outside had been frozen solid. Pale wildflowers, violet and milk-white, carpeted the grove. They bloomed in perfect, concentric circles around the base of the trees, their petals pristine despite the late hour. Rory looked back over her shoulder. Her footprints had disappeared. The grass stood upright, untouched, as if she had drifted over the ground rather than walked. A soft, sharp sound echoed to her left. *Tick. Tick. Tick.* Rory spun toward a dry thicket. "Silas? This isn't funny." The branches of a weeping willow hung motionless. No breeze stirred the leaves, yet the ticking continued, moving in a slow circle around her. It sounded like hard fingernails tapping against a hollow gourd. The ticking stopped. In the sudden silence, she heard her own breathing—shallow, rapid, too loud. The Heartstone Pendant flared brighter, its crimson pulse matching the frantic rhythm of her heart. The shadows on the forest floor began to stretch. Though the moon remained directly overhead, casting vertical beams through the canopy, the shadows of the oaks crept sideways. They crawled across the pale wildflowers, long, black fingers of shade that did not align with the light. One shadow, thicker than the rest, detached itself from the base of a tree and slid toward her. Rory retreated three paces. Her heel hit a solid barrier. She spun around, expecting the low stone wall of the park boundary, but found herself staring at the massive trunk of a gnarled oak. It had not been there when she turned. The bark writhed with deep, knobby knots that formed the shape of wide, hollow eyes and a gaping mouth. Cold sweat ran down her spine. The air temperature plummeted. The humid heat dissolved in an instant, replaced by a frost that turned her breath into thick white plumes. Rory pressed her back against the oak tree, her voice barely a whisper. "Let me through." A low, wet sound answered from the darkness ahead. It sounded like a heavy sack of meat dragging across wet stones. The crimson light from her pendant illuminated the space between two silver birches. A shape hung there. It had no definite outline, appearing more like a hole in the night, a patch of blackness that devoured the moonlight. *Tick. Tick.* The sound came from the trunk right behind her ear. Rory gasped, leaping forward, her hands raised in a defensive stance. She spun to face the oak, her heart hammering against her ribs. The tree stood inanimate, but a fresh, dark line of sap trickled down the center of the bark. It curled into a perfect crescent—an exact mirror of the scar on her wrist. "Who's there?" Her throat felt dry, the words rasping. The dark patch between the birches rippled. A hand emerged from the shadow. It was long, the skin a translucent white that showed the dark, thin veins beneath. The knuckles bent backward, cracking with the sound of dry twigs. The long, square-tipped fingers tapped against the birch bark. Rory backed up, but her foot caught on a thick, coiled root. She tumbled backward, landing hard on the bed of wildflowers. The pale violet petals did not yield. They curled over her ankles like cold, damp fingers, pinning her legs to the earth. The thing in the shadows stepped forward. It had no face, only a smooth expanse of pale flesh where eyes and a nose should be, and a wide, lipless tear that stretched from ear to ear, revealing rows of small, pointed teeth. "Rory." The whisper did not come from a mouth. The sound came from the ground beneath her, vibrating up through her spine. "You brought the stone." She struggled, kicking against the strangling vines, but the wildflowers tightened their grip, the stems digging into her jeans. The Heartstone Pendant burned against her palm as she squeezed it, the crimson light blindingly bright, casting her struggle in stark red and black. "Leave me alone." Her fingers clawed at the damp earth. The creature tilted its head. The bones in its neck popped, a wet, rhythmic sound that echoed the ticking from before. It reached out with its long arm, the fingers stretching toward her face. The air grew so cold her eyelashes frosted. She could smell it now—not the sweet lilies, but the scent of old iron, dust, and deep, forgotten graves. Rory pulled her arms free from the clinging moss, but the roots around her legs bound her tight. She twisted, fighting to gain leverage, but the ground itself seemed to sink beneath her, cradling her body in a shallow depression that felt like a grave. "I didn't come for you." Rory forced her eyes to stay unlocked from the eyeless face of the thing. "I came for the one who sent the message." The entity paused. Its long, pale arm remained suspended in the frozen air, inches from her cheek. Cold radiated from its skin, a physical weight that made her nose bleed. A single drop of dark blood fell from her nostril, landing on a white wildflower. The flower turned black, shriveling into ash. "They are not here." The voice vibrated from the earth, shaking the loose dirt around Rory's shoulders. "Only us. Only the hunger." The lipless tear of its mouth stretched wider. Gray fluid, thick and smelling of zinc, dripped from the pointed teeth, sizzling against the frost-covered grass. Rory closed her fingers around the Heartstone. She squeezed until the silver edges of the casing bit deep into her palm, drawing her own blood. "Silas said this protects." She squeezed the pendant to her chest. "He said you couldn't touch me if I held it." The creature let out a sound. It was like a wet bellows rising and falling, a mockery of a laugh. It leaned closer, its head blocking out the stars, blocking out what little moonlight remained. "Silas lies to keep his kitchen clean." The voice rumbled, closer now, echoing not just from the ground but from inside Rory's own head. "The stone is not a shield, child of Cardiff. It is a key." The Heartstone flared, the heat turning agonizing. Rory gasped, her grip loosening. The pendant slipped from her bloodied fingers, dangling from its chain. It hung between them, a pulsing crimson heart in the freezing dark. The creature's long, pale finger touched the gem. A high-pitched scream rippled through the clearing, but it did not come from Rory. It came from the stone itself. The crimson light turned into a blinding, searing white flare. The roots holding her legs snapped back, breaking like dry rubber. Rory scrambled backward on her elbows, scraping her skin against the frozen earth. She did not look back. She stumbled to her feet, her legs shaking, her breath coming in ragged, painful gasps. The grove had changed again in her brief moment on the ground. The straight paths she had taken were gone. In every direction, the ancient oaks stood in dense, impenetrable walls, their branches interlaced like skeletal fingers locking a gate. The standing stones that marked the exit were nowhere to be seen. "Eva!" Her voice cracked under the strain. "Eva, help me!" The forest answered with absolute silence. The white light from the pendant died down, returning to its thick, heavy crimson pulse. But the creature was no longer in front of her. Rory spun in a circle, her boots slipping on the frosted grass. She was alone in the clearing. But she could hear it. Underneath the ground, beneath her soles, the wet, heavy sliding sound resumed. It moved as she moved, keeping pace with her staggering steps. *Tick. Tick. Tick.* The tapping came from the oak to her left. *Tick. Tick. Tick.* It came from the oak to her right. She looked down at her hands. The blood on her palms had frozen into dark, obsidian crusts. The silver chain of the pendant began to tighten around her throat, pulling itself short as if something was tugging on it from behind. "No." Rory choked, her fingers straining against the cold metal. "No, let go." The chain tugged harder, pulling her head back. Her eyes forced upward, she stared at the canopy. The stars were gone. In their place, giant, pale eyes, thousands of them, blinked down from the dark space between the dry leaves. They did not look hostile. They looked curious. Like a child watching an insect struggle in a jar.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:16:32.275Z" 5/19/2026, 7:16:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1795
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1795
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count2
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
15
word"grave"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
19
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"fractured"
2"loomed"
3"resolved"
4"tracing"
5"pulsed"
6"echo"
7"perfect"
8"pristine"
9"echoed"
10"pulse"
11"down her spine"
12"whisper"
13"stark"
14"rhythmic"
15"grave"
16"weight"
17"vibrated"
18"echoing"
19"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences155
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords11
totalWords1790
ratio0.006
matches
0"Tick. Tick. Tick."
1"Tick. Tick."
2"Tick. Tick. Tick."
3"Tick. Tick. Tick."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1655
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Static1
Rory23
Heartstone5
Pendant3
London1
Tick11
persons
0"Static"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.805
windowScore0.667
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like a nest of hornets vibrating i"
1"sounded like hard fingernails tapping agai"
2"sounded like a heavy sack of meat dragging"
3"felt like a grave"
88.27% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.117
wordCount1790
matches
0"not the sweet lilies, but the scent of old iron, dust"
1"not just from the ground but from inside Rory's own head"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean22.66
std14.5
cv0.64
sampleLengths
038
129
225
324
425
531
610
747
831
94
1031
1142
129
1318
1455
156
1620
178
183
1910
2034
213
2227
239
2455
254
2657
2729
2816
2921
3038
312
3210
3323
3432
359
367
3741
3822
3922
407
4135
4226
4343
4410
4534
4627
4745
4828
4952
98.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences155
matches
0"been frozen"
1"were gone"
2"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs265
matches
0"was tugging"
57.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences168
ratio0.03
matches
0"It did not sound like a bad connection; it sounded like a nest of hornets vibrating in a metal can."
1"The ground beneath her felt strange—soft and springy, like stepping on damp moss, though the London dirt outside had been frozen solid."
2"In the sudden silence, she heard her own breathing—shallow, rapid, too loud."
3"It curled into a perfect crescent—an exact mirror of the scar on her wrist."
4"She could smell it now—not the sweet lilies, but the scent of old iron, dust, and deep, forgotten graves."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1666
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"long, square-tipped fingers"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.01800720288115246
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0024009603841536613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean10.65
std6.21
cv0.583
sampleLengths
014
124
216
313
45
520
612
712
817
98
103
1111
1217
1310
147
1521
1619
172
1815
1914
204
2115
2210
236
2411
258
2615
278
287
292
304
3114
326
3322
348
3519
366
374
3816
398
401
411
421
436
444
458
4616
4710
483
4912
35.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.19047619047619047
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences143
matches
0"Her boots ground against the"
1"It did not sound like"
2"She shoved the device into"
3"They formed a rough, jagged"
4"Her thumb found the small"
5"She took a breath, stepped"
6"She reached down, pulling the"
7"It pulsed with a deep,"
8"Her voice fell flat."
9"She walked deeper into the"
10"They bloomed in perfect, concentric"
11"Her footprints had disappeared."
12"It sounded like hard fingernails"
13"They crawled across the pale"
14"Her heel hit a solid"
15"She spun around, expecting the"
16"It had not been there"
17"It sounded like a heavy"
18"It had no definite outline,"
19"She spun to face the"
ratio0.336
19.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount126
totalSentences143
matches
0"Rory pressed the phone to"
1"Her boots ground against the"
2"Rory stepped over a rotting"
3"Static hissed from the speaker."
4"It did not sound like"
5"Eva's voice cut through the"
6"Rory pushed past a low-hanging"
7"The line died."
8"The call screen vanished, replaced"
9"Rory pressed the power button,"
10"She shoved the device into"
11"The ancient oak standing stones"
12"They formed a rough, jagged"
13"Her thumb found the small"
14"She took a breath, stepped"
15"The autumn wind vanished."
16"A stifling, humid heat engulfed"
17"Rory unzipped her jacket, her"
18"She reached down, pulling the"
19"The thumbnail-sized crimson gem no"
ratio0.881
34.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"Though the moon remained directly"
ratio0.007
42.12% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Her boots ground against the gravel of the Richmond Park trail, a sharp, repetitive crunch that grated against the heavy silence of the night."
1"Beyond them, the dense wild of the park resolved into a thick, swirling mist that clung to the earth."
2"They crawled across the pale wildflowers, long, black fingers of shade that did not align with the light."
3"The bark writhed with deep, knobby knots that formed the shape of wide, hollow eyes and a gaping mouth."
4"The humid heat dissolved in an instant, replaced by a frost that turned her breath into thick white plumes."
5"It had no definite outline, appearing more like a hole in the night, a patch of blackness that devoured the moonlight."
6"It had no face, only a smooth expanse of pale flesh where eyes and a nose should be, and a wide, lipless tear that stretched from ear to ear, revealing rows of …"
7"She twisted, fighting to gain leverage, but the ground itself seemed to sink beneath her, cradling her body in a shallow depression that felt like a grave."
8"It leaned closer, its head blocking out the stars, blocking out what little moonlight remained."
9"She stumbled to her feet, her legs shaking, her breath coming in ragged, painful gasps."
10"The silver chain of the pendant began to tighten around her throat, pulling itself short as if something was tugging on it from behind."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Her throat felt, the words rasping"
1"Rory choked, her fingers straining against the cold metal"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory choked (choke)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.04
leniency0.08
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.08
78.3170%