| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's voice drifted like [like]" | | 1 | "Nyx's shadow pooled around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.523 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 90.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1619 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1619 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "shattered" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "absolutely" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "the last thing" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1617 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.15% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1223 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Carter | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | July | 1 | | London | 3 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "July" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.641 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 64.77% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like wading through a vertical she" | | 1 | "orchids that seemed to gently breathe—carpeted the forest floor" | | 2 | "as if drifting through water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1617 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 33.69 | | std | 17.26 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 63 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 72 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 62 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 57 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 56 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 44 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 188 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 20.76% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "For a terrifying beat, she couldn't breathe; the heavy, sweet scent of crushed flowers filled her lungs, thick as syrup." | | 1 | "Brilliant, oversized wildflowers—pale lavender lilies, blood-red primroses, and orchids that seemed to gently breathe—carpeted the forest floor." | | 2 | "She moved with an eerie, weightless grace; Rory watched her boots glide over the damp silver moss without bending a single blade of grass." | | 3 | "Her reflection didn't show her face; instead, the surface mirrored a sky filled with burning, amber clouds and the distorted silhouette of jagged stone spires." | | 4 | "The mercury river didn't flow like water; it slid." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1235 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger." |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.020242914979757085 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005668016194331984 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 13.82 | | std | 5.88 | | cv | 0.425 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 48.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.36752136752136755 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 34.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the pressure popped." |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent-shaped" | | 1 | "They slid along the wet" | | 2 | "It felt like wading through" | | 3 | "She stumbled onto a bed" | | 4 | "She reached into her collar" | | 5 | "Her waist-length hair was the" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 7 | "She moved with an eerie," | | 8 | "She left no footprints." | | 9 | "Her lavender gaze dropped to" | | 10 | "She slipped out a package" | | 11 | "Its metal was moonsilver, polished" | | 12 | "She gasped, her knuckles turning" | | 13 | "Her silver hair was the" | | 14 | "It felt damp, but unlike" | | 15 | "She scraped her fingernails against" | | 16 | "It ran like liquid mercury," | | 17 | "She looked down at the" | | 18 | "Her reflection didn't show her" | | 19 | "It moved with a heavy," |
| | ratio | 0.206 | |
| 27.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The colossal pillars of petrified" | | 1 | "Rain fell in a steady," | | 2 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent-shaped" | | 3 | "The skin there always throbbed" | | 4 | "The shadows beneath the gnarled" | | 5 | "They slid along the wet" | | 6 | "The Shade stood solid for" | | 7 | "Nyx's voice drifted like dry" | | 8 | "Rory stepped toward the shimmering" | | 9 | "The air between the stones" | | 10 | "Nyx hovered near her shoulder," | | 11 | "Rory took a deep breath," | | 12 | "A strange resistance met her" | | 13 | "It felt like wading through" | | 14 | "The light of London shattered" | | 15 | "She stumbled onto a bed" | | 16 | "The grey winter sky of" | | 17 | "The sky through the branches" | | 18 | "Rory unbuttoned her damp wool" | | 19 | "Nyx’s shadow flowed across the" |
| | ratio | 0.866 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Above her stretched a canopy of towering, silver-barked trees, their leaves shimmering with a pale, pearlescent gold." | | 1 | "Brilliant, oversized wildflowers—pale lavender lilies, blood-red primroses, and orchids that seemed to gently breathe—carpeted the forest floor." | | 2 | "Behind them, the petrified oak stones were gone, replaced by a wall of dense, thorned briars with black roses that bled red nectar down their stems." | | 3 | "The crimson gem hummed, pulsing with a deep, inner warmth that heated her fingertips." | | 4 | "Her waist-length hair was the color of liquid tin, and it flowed behind her as if drifting through water." |
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| 59.78% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped, her eyes tracking the woman's silver gown" | | 1 | "Rory gritted, her breath pluming into white mist" | | 2 | "Nyx's shadow stretched, a dark arrow pointing toward the sound of rushing water" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.023 | | leniency | 0.045 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |