Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TPWTJSDFP859SV2ZRP6BX

Run Details

Duration:
51.7s
Cost:
$0.100764
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest buzzed, a low, electric hum that vibrated through the damp windowpanes. Outside, Soho was a smear of yellow headlights and black asphalt. Inside, the pub smelled of spilled stout, old floorboards, and the faint, sweet scent of pipe tobacco from the leather booth near the back. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar. His auburn hair, streaked with silver, caught the warm light of the hanging lamps. He worked with a quiet, deliberate efficiency, his right hand—adorned with his heavy silver signet ring—polishing a tumbler. His left leg hitched slightly as he moved to fetch a fresh bottle from the lower shelf, the ghost of an old Prague winter still lingering in his joint. Rory sat in her usual corner, tucked beneath a framed topographical map of the Glamorgan coast. It was a cruel coincidence of Silas’s decor, but she rarely looked at it. Instead, she kept her focus on her hands. Her left thumb traced the crescent scar on her wrist. The scar was white and smooth, a relic of a childhood tumble down the slate steps of her grandmother’s garden in Cardiff. The brass bell above the heavy oak door jingled. A draft of wet air cut through the warm, beer-scented sanctuary. A man stepped in, shaking a black umbrella out onto the doormat. He wore a dark, tailored overcoat that screamed of Chancery Lane. His face was damp, his sandy hair styled to withstand the wind but ruined by the rain. He looked around the dimly lit room with a critical squint, the sort of look Rory’s father gave restaurants that lacked tablecloths. His eyes settled on her. The man’s posture shifted. The professional mask slipped, revealing something raw and familiar underneath. He walked toward her booth, his leather Oxfords squeaking against the polished wood. "Rory?" The Welsh lilt in his voice hit her like a physical blow, dragging up the damp salt-air of Cardiff, the cold stone corridors of the university, and everything she had spent three years running from. Rory looked up, her bright blue eyes narrowing. "Oliver." He stood over the table, his umbrella dripping onto the floorboards. "Jesus. It really is you. I heard... well, everyone said you’d gone north. Or overseas." "They guess because they don't know." Rory watched a drop of rain run down the window. "Sit down before you drown." Oliver slid into the booth across from her, his coat fabric rustling. He set his wet umbrella against the wall, where it began to form a dark puddle. He looked her over, his gaze lingering on her oversized, threadbare sweater, the raw cuticle of her thumb, and her unstyled hair. "You look different." "I grew up." Oliver rested his forearms on the sticky varnish of the table. "We all did. You vanished, Rory. No warning. Just an empty desk and a disconnected phone." "I had to leave." "But Cardiff? Your dad?" "Especially my dad." Silas approached the table, his limp more pronounced in the tight space between the booths. He laid a cardboard coaster in front of Oliver. "What can I get you, sir?" "A Penderyn, please. Neat." Oliver didn’t look at the barman, his eyes locked on Rory as if she might evaporate if he broke contact. Silas nodded once, his hazel eyes lingering on Oliver for an extra beat, assessing the cut of his coat, before turning back to the bar. "You're living here?" Oliver gestured vaguely toward the ceiling. "Above the bar. I deliver for the Golden Empress down the street." Oliver let out a short, breathy laugh, then stopped when he realized her face remained flat. "You're delivering Chinese food? Rory, you were the star of the department. Professor Vaughan used to use your essays as exemplar texts. You had Bristol, Cardiff, London... any firm you wanted." "I didn't want any of them." "That's rubbish. We spent three years sitting in the library until midnight, drinking training-cafe coffee and talking about how we were going to reform the legal aid system. We had plans." "Those were your plans, Oliver. Or rather, they were the plans my father made for me, and you were happy to tag along." Oliver winced. Silas returned, setting the Welsh whisky down. The amber liquid glowed in the low light. Silas lingered, adjusting a stack of napkins on the next table, his presence a quiet, steady weight in the background. Oliver took a sip of the whisky, closing his eyes briefly. "He's sick, you know." Rory's heart gave a single, hard thump against her ribs. She kept her face perfectly still. "Brendan?" "His heart," Oliver said, looking at his glass. "Had a double bypass in November. He lost a lot of weight. He doesn't go into the chambers anymore. He bought a cottage in Hay-on-Wye. Just sits there with his books." A vision of her father—once an imposing, fierce man who demanded silence when he entered a room—sitting quietly in a damp cottage made Rory's throat tight. She remembered the sound of his heavy tread on the stairs, the smell of his expensive cigars, his absolute refusal to listen when she tried to tell him what Evan was doing to her. He’s just a young man under pressure, Rory, her father had said, his voice booming over her tears. You have to support him. Don't make a scene. "He asks about you," Oliver said softly. "Not to me directly. But he asked Bethan if she'd heard anything. He's worried." "He's embarrassed." Rory’s voice was sharp as glass. "He spent twenty-two years building a perfect replica of himself, and I walked out of the gallery." "That's not fair. He QC'd some of the biggest cases in Wales. He wanted the best for you." "He wanted a legacy." The silence stretched between them, heavy and wet like the London air outside. Oliver looked down at his glass, tracing the rim with a manicured finger. "And Evan?" "What about him?" "He's in Bristol now. Partner track at a commercial firm. He married a girl from Swansea. A magistrate's daughter." Rory felt a sickening jolt in her stomach, but she forced her fingers to remain loose around her glass. "Good for him." "He told everyone you had a breakdown. That you couldn't handle the pressure of the exams." "And you believed him?" Oliver looked up, his eyes wide and filled with a sudden, painful sincerity. "At first? Yes. Because you weren't there to tell us otherwise. But then I saw him one night at a dinner. He got drunk. Really drunk. He started talking about how he had to 'manage' his new wife. The way he spoke... the look in his eyes. I realized then." He reached across the table, his hand hovering over hers, but she pulled her wrist back, shielding the crescent scar. "I felt like an idiot, Rory. A coward." "You were both." Rory ignored the sting of tears in the corners of her eyes. "But it doesn't matter now. It's done." "It doesn't have to be. You could come back. My firm is looking for researchers. You wouldn't even have to pass the bar right away. Just—get back into the world. You don't belong in a cellar in Soho." Rory looked around the Raven's Nest. She saw the old maps, the dark wood, the quiet safety of Silas's watch. She thought of her small flat upstairs, the radiator that clanked, the absolute freedom of having nothing but her own name and her own time. "I do belong here," she said. "This is the only place I've ever lived where nobody expects me to be anyone but myself." Oliver looked at his watch. The gold bezel gleamed. He sighed, a heavy, defeated sound, and drained his glass. He reached into his coat and produced a crisp twenty-pound note, laying it on the table. "My train is at nine," he said, sliding out of the booth. He stood there for a moment, looking tall and expensive and entirely foreign to her. "I'm glad you're alive, Rory. Truly." Rory didn't look up. "Have a safe trip back, Oliver." The bell chimed as he opened the door, a sudden gust of rain rustling the maps on the wall, and then he was gone. The door clicked shut. The silence returned, thick and settling. Silas limped over, his silver signet ring tapping the wood as he snatched up the twenty-pound note. He slid a fresh glass of dry cider in front of her. "He seemed nice," Silas said, hook-nosed and dry. "A bit shiny." Rory stared at her scar, the pale crescent of her childhood. "He was a friend." "The kind you keep, or the kind you bury?" "The kind that belongs in the past." Silas grunted, nodding as he wiped the table face. "Best leave them there, then. The soil's firmer." He limped back to his bar, leaving Rory alone with the hum of the green light and the rain washing the city clean.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:16:55.768Z" 5/19/2026, 7:16:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Oliver gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Oliver said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.078
79.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1499
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1499
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"imposing"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"vibrated"
2"traced"
3"sanctuary"
4"familiar"
5"lilt"
6"weight"
7"imposing"
8"silence"
9"perfect"
10"tracing"
11"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
68.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1494
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount995
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Oliver"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Prague1
Glamorgan1
Silas10
Cardiff2
Chancery1
Lane1
Rory15
Oxfords1
Welsh2
Oliver14
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Oxfords"
5"Oliver"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Glamorgan"
3"Cardiff"
4"Chancery"
5"Lane"
6"London"
globalScore0.746
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1494
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean24.9
std20.14
cv0.809
sampleLengths
053
167
270
320
462
55
627
71
835
98
101
1126
1221
1353
143
1527
164
174
183
1930
2024
2125
229
2312
2447
256
2631
2723
2837
2915
3017
3139
3287
3321
3425
3518
364
3728
383
3919
4022
4116
424
4391
4422
4538
4645
4723
4835
4933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"was doing"
94.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences117
ratio0.017
matches
0"He worked with a quiet, deliberate efficiency, his right hand—adorned with his heavy silver signet ring—polishing a tumbler."
1"A vision of her father—once an imposing, fierce man who demanded silence when he entered a room—sitting quietly in a damp cottage made Rory's throat tight."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1004
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"warm, beer-scented sanctuary."
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02390438247011952
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008964143426294821
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean12.77
std9.7
cv0.76
sampleLengths
018
111
224
36
414
518
629
716
814
98
1010
1122
129
1311
1412
1511
1617
1722
185
194
2010
2113
221
2335
248
251
2611
2715
2816
295
3012
3116
3222
333
343
3511
3616
374
384
393
4015
419
426
4324
4425
459
4612
4716
4831
496
41.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners36
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Instead, she kept her focus"
ratio0.013
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences75
matches
0"His auburn hair, streaked with"
1"He worked with a quiet,"
2"His left leg hitched slightly"
3"It was a cruel coincidence"
4"Her left thumb traced the"
5"He wore a dark, tailored"
6"His face was damp, his"
7"He looked around the dimly"
8"His eyes settled on her."
9"He walked toward her booth,"
10"He stood over the table,"
11"He set his wet umbrella"
12"He looked her over, his"
13"He laid a cardboard coaster"
14"She kept her face perfectly"
15"She remembered the sound of"
16"He’s just a young man"
17"You have to support him."
18"He reached across the table,"
19"She saw the old maps,"
ratio0.36
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
2"His auburn hair, streaked with"
3"He worked with a quiet,"
4"His left leg hitched slightly"
5"Rory sat in her usual"
6"It was a cruel coincidence"
7"Her left thumb traced the"
8"The scar was white and"
9"The brass bell above the"
10"A draft of wet air"
11"A man stepped in, shaking"
12"He wore a dark, tailored"
13"His face was damp, his"
14"He looked around the dimly"
15"His eyes settled on her."
16"The man’s posture shifted."
17"The professional mask slipped, revealing"
18"He walked toward her booth,"
19"The Welsh lilt in his"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The green neon of The Raven's Nest buzzed, a low, electric hum that vibrated through the damp windowpanes."
1"He wore a dark, tailored overcoat that screamed of Chancery Lane."
2"A vision of her father—once an imposing, fierce man who demanded silence when he entered a room—sitting quietly in a damp cottage made Rory's throat tight."
3"She thought of her small flat upstairs, the radiator that clanked, the absolute freedom of having nothing but her own name and her own time."
4"He limped back to his bar, leaving Rory alone with the hum of the green light and the rain washing the city clean."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.196
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.0275%