Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TQBV2899VK96WSXWDECK3

Run Details

Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.035640
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast long, emerald ribbing across the rain-swept pavement of Soho, bleeding through the condensation on the tavern glass. Inside, the air smelled of cloves, old mahogany, and the damp wool of coats hung near the door. Silas Blackwood limped behind the bar, his left leg dragging with a familiar, rhythmic scuff. He polished a heavy tumbler with a linen cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low glow of the amber pendant lamps. Rory sat on the corner stool, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fell forward, shielding her face from the few patrons scattered among the leather booths. A half-empty pint of dark ale sat before her, untouched for twenty minutes. The brass bell above the heavy oak door chimed, letting in a gust of crisp autumn air and the hiss of tires on wet tarmac. Rory did not look up immediately. She knew the rhythm of the city, the cadence of the late-night seekers and the lost. But the footsteps that approached the bar lacked the tentative shuffle of a stranger. They were firm, leather-soled, expensive. The newcomer stopped three paces away. The scent of sandalwood cologne and fresh rain cut through the stale beer smell of the room. Rory turned her face up. Julian. He stood in a tailored charcoal overcoat, his hair immaculate despite the drizzle, though the lines around his eyes had deepened into deep, permanent trenches. He looked like the Cardiff courtroom sketches her father used to keep on the study wall. "Aurora?" The old name fell between them like a heavy coin dropped onto stone. Rory tightened her grip on her wrist, her thumb pressing into the childhood scar. "Julian." He stared, his eyes scanning her face, her simple canvas jacket, the faint shadows under her bright blue eyes. He didn't move to hug her. The space between them stretched, thick with the five years since she had boarded a midnight train to Paddington and never looked back. Julian slid onto the stool beside her, his movements stiff, as if his expensive suit restricted more than just his shoulders. He signaled to Silas. "Macallan. Neat." Silas gave a single, slow nod, his hazel eyes lingering on Julian for a fraction of a second too long before he turned to reach for the middle shelf. He poured the amber liquid, set the glass down with a heavy click, and retreated to the far end of the bar, picking up a fresh cloth. Julian picked up his glass, turning it in his hand. "Your father told everyone you were in London. He didn't mention where." "He doesn't know where." "He's a barrister, Rory. He makes it his business to know things." "Not my things." Julian took a slow sip, his throat moving as he swallowed. He looked around the bar, his gaze drifting over the faded maps of Europe and the black-and-white photographs of long-dead faces that lined the dark wood walls. "This is a long way from Cardiff Law." "The air is better here." "It smells like damp and diesel." "Exactly." Rory finally took a drink of her ale, the bitterness grounding her. "What are you doing in Soho, Jules?" "A merger," Julian said, his voice flat, stripped of the youthful enthusiasm that used to carry his debates in the university courtyards. "Some tech firm in Shoreditch. I’ve been living out of a suitcase at the Savoy for three days. I had some free time before the morning flight back. I wanted a quiet drink. I didn't expect..." He trailed off, looking at her again, really looking. "You're different." "I'm twenty-five." "It's more than that. You used to have... I don't know. A certain noise about you." He gestured with his glass. "You look like you've learned how to disappear." "It's a useful skill in a city of nine million." "Is it?" Julian set his glass down, the ice clinking against the sides. "Because from where I'm standing, it looks like a waste. Your father expected you to take over the chambers. We all did." "My father wanted a replica of himself," Rory said. The blue of her eyes hardened, reflecting the green neon from the window. "I preferred to keep my own shape." "And Evan?" The name hung in the damp air between them, sharp and jagged. Rory’s hand went still on her glass. She looked down at the dark wood of the bar, noting the fine scratches in the varnish, the rings left by decades of forgotten drinks. "What about him?" "He's partner now," Julian said softly. "At the firm in Newport. He bought a house in Pontcanna. He asks about you. Every time I see him at the club." Rory let out a short, humorless laugh. "Of course he does." "He was broken when you left, Rory. He looked for you for months." "He looked for his property, Julian. There's a difference." Julian frowned, a crease forming between his eyebrows that made him look exactly like his own father. "He loved you. We all saw it. You just... vanished. Left your flat, left the course, left your family. For what? This?" He gestured to her damp jacket, the dark corners of Silas' tavern. Rory looked toward the back of the bar, where the shadow of the bookshelf marked the entrance to the hidden room only a few people knew existed. She looked at Silas, who was currently wiping down a beer tap, his posture relaxed but his eyes never leaving the mirror behind the bottles. "You always did prefer the safe path, Jules," Rory murmured. "There's nothing wrong with safety. With structure." "There is when the structure is a cage." She turned her head, looking him dead in the eye. "Do you enjoy the merger work?" Julian opened his mouth to answer, the practiced executive response rising to his lips, but the words seemed to stick in his throat. He looked at his hands, at the manicured nails and the expensive watch that construct of his life had bought him. His shoulders sagged, just a fraction, the sharp lines of his coat losing their stiffness. "It pays the mortgage," he said, his voice dropping an octave, losing its professional sheen. "And the rest of it?" "There isn't much of a rest of it." He picked up his glass again, draining the whiskey in one swallow. "I spend eighty hours a week in a glass tower looking at spreadsheets. Sometimes I get home and I can't remember the drive. I look in the mirror and I don't recognize the man looking back. But it’s the path. We build the track and we stay on it." "I pulled up the spikes," Rory said. "And you're happy?" "I'm free." Julian looked at her, his eyes shining with a sudden, raw envy that made him look younger and far more fragile than his suit suggested. "I don't think I'd know what to do with freedom anymore, Rory. It would probably frighten me." "It does," she said, her voice softening for the first time. "Every single day." Silence settled between them, not the tense quiet of enemies, but the heavy, mournful silence of two travelers who had started at the same crossroads and chosen different continents. Julian checked his watch. The face glowed in the dim light of the Nest. "My cab will be outside." He stood, buttoning his charcoal coat. He hesitated, his hand hovering over the back of the stool. "Will you come back? Even just for a weekend? Your mother still keeps your room the same." Rory shook her head slowly, her hair swaying. "Tell her I'm well, Julian. But don't tell her where." Julian stared at her for a long moment, as if trying to memorize the sharp angles of her face, the quiet intensity that had replaced the restless girl he used to know. "Goodbye, Aurora." "Goodbye, Jules." He turned and walked toward the door, his leather soles clicking against the floorboards. The brass bell chimed, the door opened, and the Soho rain rushed in once more before the latch clicked shut. Silas limped over, carrying the bottle of Macallan. He poured a small splash into Julian's empty glass, then topped up Rory's ale. He didn't ask questions. He simply set the bottle down and rested his hand on the bar, the silver signet ring shining in the dark. Rory lifted her glass, the cold metal of the bar pressing against her palm, and watched the green neon light flicker outside in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Julian said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.04
89.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1434
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1434
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"structure"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"rhythmic"
2"tracing"
3"footsteps"
4"scanning"
5"structure"
6"silence"
7"intensity"
8"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1434
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1014
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Paddington1
Silas5
Julian14
Europe1
Rory14
Silence1
Macallan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Rory"
5"Silence"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Paddington"
3"Europe"
globalScore0.81
windowScore0.667
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like the Cardiff courtroom sketche"
1"as if trying to memorize the sharp angles of her face, the quiet intensity that had replaced the restless girl he used to know"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.697
wordCount1434
matches
0"not the tense quiet of enemies, but the heavy, mournful silence of two travelers who had started"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean24.31
std18.47
cv0.76
sampleLengths
044
141
248
325
441
523
65
71
841
91
1013
1115
1248
1327
1456
1522
164
1712
183
1946
205
216
2220
2369
242
2529
2610
2735
2829
292
3012
3135
3229
3311
3413
359
3651
3752
3810
397
4024
4159
4215
435
4469
457
463
472
4842
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was currently wiping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences106
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount760
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02631578947368421
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007894736842105263
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean13.53
std9.51
cv0.703
sampleLengths
026
118
215
326
416
519
613
725
86
916
1014
115
126
1317
145
151
1625
1716
181
1913
2014
211
2219
236
2423
2521
264
272
2829
2927
3010
3112
324
3312
343
3511
3627
378
385
396
4013
417
4222
4345
442
452
4621
478
4810
4913
46.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.33962264150943394
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences66
matches
0"He polished a heavy tumbler"
1"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
2"She knew the rhythm of"
3"They were firm, leather-soled, expensive."
4"He stood in a tailored"
5"He looked like the Cardiff"
6"He stared, his eyes scanning"
7"He didn't move to hug"
8"He signaled to Silas."
9"He poured the amber liquid,"
10"He looked around the bar,"
11"He trailed off, looking at"
12"He gestured with his glass"
13"She looked down at the"
14"He gestured to her damp"
15"She looked at Silas, who"
16"She turned her head, looking"
17"He looked at his hands,"
18"His shoulders sagged, just a"
19"he said, his voice dropping"
ratio0.424
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences66
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Silas Blackwood limped behind the"
2"He polished a heavy tumbler"
3"Rory sat on the corner"
4"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
5"A half-empty pint of dark"
6"The brass bell above the"
7"Rory did not look up"
8"She knew the rhythm of"
9"They were firm, leather-soled, expensive."
10"The newcomer stopped three paces"
11"The scent of sandalwood cologne"
12"Rory turned her face up."
13"He stood in a tailored"
14"He looked like the Cardiff"
15"The old name fell between"
16"Rory tightened her grip on"
17"He stared, his eyes scanning"
18"He didn't move to hug"
19"The space between them stretched,"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"But the footsteps that approached the bar lacked the tentative shuffle of a stranger."
1"Julian slid onto the stool beside her, his movements stiff, as if his expensive suit restricted more than just his shoulders."
2"He looked around the bar, his gaze drifting over the faded maps of Europe and the black-and-white photographs of long-dead faces that lined the dark wood walls."
3"Julian frowned, a crease forming between his eyebrows that made him look exactly like his own father."
4"She looked at Silas, who was currently wiping down a beer tap, his posture relaxed but his eyes never leaving the mirror behind the bottles."
5"Julian looked at her, his eyes shining with a sudden, raw envy that made him look younger and far more fragile than his suit suggested."
6"Silence settled between them, not the tense quiet of enemies, but the heavy, mournful silence of two travelers who had started at the same crossroads and chosen…"
7"Julian stared at her for a long moment, as if trying to memorize the sharp angles of her face, the quiet intensity that had replaced the restless girl he used t…"
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Julian set, the ice clinking against the sides"
1"he said, his voice dropping an octave, losing its professional sheen"
2"she said, her voice softening for the first time"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.28
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.04
75.5173%