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Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TTZQTJPC88VEA8CJFC1B0
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 3.5 Flash (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
35.3s
Cost:
$0.071568
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
85.01%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
34.05%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
98.88%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
82.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
44.66%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
32.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
16.08%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
48.55%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
76.3973%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The bottom deadbolt screeched in
protest.
Rory kept her weight pressed
against the wooden panels of the door, her fingers white around the base of a heavy brass candlestick.
The rhythm of the knock
had belonged to no landlord. It was three slow thumps, a pause, then a final, decisive rap.
Only one person possessed that
exact, infuriating brand of arrogance.
Rory pulled the door open
a crack, keeping the brass security chain taut.
Lucien Moreau stood on the
narrow landing of the Brick Lane flat.
The dim bulb overhead caught
the slicked-back platinum blond of his hair, casting his sharp cheekbones into harsh relief.
He wore a tailored charcoal
wool suit, immaculate despite the London drizzle, and leaned
lightly
on his ivory-handled cane. "You changed the locks," Lucien said. His voice was a rich, low purr, the Marseille accent smooth as
silk
. "Not enough of them."
Rory stared at his heterochromatic
eyes, one amber, one pitch black. "Go away, Lucien." "We have past matters to
resolve
, ma chérie." "We
resolved
them when you left me in that warehouse in Southwark. Get off my step." She slammed the door.
The thick tip of his
cane wedged into the gap with a dull thud. Wood splintered. "A rude reception for an old partner." Lucien pushed.
The chain rattled, then the
brass bracket ripped from the frame with a sharp ping.
He stepped into the cramped
hallway. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat, emerged from the sea of books and research notes, heading straight for Lucien's trousers to rub against the premium wool. "Traitor,"
Rory muttered to the cat
.
She did not lower the
candlestick.
Lucien closed the door behind
him and turned the three remaining deadbolts with elegant,
practiced ease
. "You always did have a terrible temper, Rory." "You have ten seconds to explain why you are in my flat before I test the
weight
of this brass against your skull." "Technically, it is Eva's flat."
He walked past her into
the small sitting room, his leather Oxfords silent on the worn rug.
He paused by a stack
of ancient leather-bound journals. "And you have a leak." "What?" "The ceiling. Or perhaps you simply enjoy the drip-drop of water on your academic papers?" Rory marched after him, her eyes tracking his movements. "There is no leak. Why are you here, Lucien?" He turned to face her. The amber eye glinted under the low ceiling light. "I need your mind, Carter." "I don't work for you anymore. Find another broker." "There are no others. Not with your talents." He took a step closer, his cane clicking against the floorboards. "And certainly none who understand the Avaros dialect quite like you." The air in the flat grew thick. The scent of his
familiar
cologne, lavender mixed with dark, spicy black pepper, filled her nose. But beneath it lay something sharper. Something metallic. Copper. She looked down. A dark, spreading stain wet the left side of his charcoal jacket.
It looked almost black under
the dim lamp, but it clung to the fabric, heavy and wet. "You're bleeding," she said. "A minor disagreement in Soho. Nothing to concern yourself with." "You bled on Eva's rug." Rory stepped forward, her anger burning away her caution.
She grabbed his lapel, pulling
him down to her level. At five-foot-six, she had to crane her neck
slightly
to meet his height, but her grip was iron. "Who did it?" Lucien did not flinch.
He looked down at her
hand on his chest, then up at her face.
His gaze lingered on her
lips before returning to her bright blue eyes. "Does it matter?" "It matters if they followed you." "They did not."
He placed his cool, leather-gloved
hand over hers. The leather felt smooth against her skin, a
stark
contrast to her
racing
pulse
. "I am thorough, Rory. You know this." "I know you are a liar,"
she whispered, her voice tight
. "I know you leave people behind when the situation gets complicated." "I saved your life." "By leaving me to the Arbiters?"
Her left wrist throbbed
.
She ignored the phantom ache
of the crescent-shaped scar beneath her sleeve. "I spent three days in a cellar because of your thoroughness." "If I had stayed, they would have killed us both."
His voice lost its playful
edge, dropping into a harsh register that sent a shiver straight
down her spine
. He stepped closer, crowding her into a tall stack of books. A pile of papers slid to the floor, whispering against their legs. "I made a calculation." "I am not a number in your ledgers, Lucien." "No." His dark eye
seemed to
swallow the light. "You are the only
variable
I could never solve." He leaned in. The heat radiating from his body mocked the damp
chill
of the flat. He smelled of rain, blood, and the dark magic of his father's realm. Every instinct screamed at her to strike him with the candlestick, but her fingers remained coiled in his wool jacket. His breath brushed her cheek. "Tell me you hated the
silence
after I left." "I loved it," she lied. "It was quiet. Safe." "Safe is boring." Lucien’s hand drifted from her collarbone down to her wrist, his thumb pressing directly over her crescent scar. The contact felt like fire, burning through her sleeve. "You were never meant for safe, Rory. You Welsh barristers' daughters always seek the dirt." "Don't talk about my family." "Then let us talk about us." "There is no us. There is an information broker and a delivery girl." His lips curved into a cold, beautiful smile. "A delivery girl who translates ancient Avaros texts in her spare time. A delivery girl who knows exactly how many bones are in a demon's hand because she threatened to break every one of mine." "I should have done it," she muttered. "You had your chance." His face hovered inches from hers now. She could see the tiny gold flecks in his amber eye. "You still have the candlestick." She let the heavy brass weapon slip from her fingers. It landed with a dull thud on a soft
velvet
cushion nearby. She grabbed his collar with both hands instead, pulling him down into a fierce, angry kiss. It was not a gentle reunion. It was a clash of teeth and bruised lips, a desperate attempt to claw back some of the power he had stolen from her in that Southwark warehouse. Lucien groaned, his cane clattering to the floor as his hands found her waist. He pressed her hard against the wooden bookshelf. Books cascaded around them, a heavy dictionary hitting her shoulder, but she barely felt it. His mouth tasted of copper and dark wine. He kissed her with a ravenous hunger, his tongue
tracing
her lips before sliding past them. He was a creature of greed, an heir to Avaros, and right now, his focus was entirely on her. She pulled back, breathing heavily. A thin smear of his blood sat on her collarbone now, transferred from his jacket. "This changes nothing." "It changes your heart rate,"
Lucien murmured, his fingers digging into her hips
. "It is
racing
." "Adrenaline. Because I want to strangle you." "A tempting offer."
He shifted, a sudden wince tightening his features
. The black stain on his coat had expanded, soaking through his white shirt beneath. "Sit down before you collapse," Rory ordered, pushing him toward a faded green
velvet
armchair. "Eva has some medical supplies in the kitchen. Don't touch anything." "I will be good,"
Lucien said, though the smirk remained
. She walked into the tiny, narrow kitchen. The scent of curry from the restaurant downstairs
hung in the air
, mixing with the sharp smell of antiseptic she grabbed from under the sink. Her hands shook
slightly
as she grabbed a clean cloth. She hated how easily he got under her skin. She
hated that she
still wanted him, even when he brought nothing but blood and chaos to her doorstep. She returned to the sitting room. Lucien had shed his charcoal jacket, leaving it draped over a stack of old parchments. His white shirt
was soaked
in crimson on the left side, the fabric clinging to his lean, muscled torso. "Off," she said, gesturing to the shirt. He unbuttoned it
slowly
, his long fingers working the pearl buttons with deliberate, agonizing slowness. He knew she
was watching
. When he parted the linen, her breath caught. It was not a knife wound. Three jagged, black-rimmed claw marks ran from his ribcage down to his hip. The flesh
was puckered
and smoking
slightly
, a faint purple mist rising from the torn skin. "Avaros hounds," Rory whispered, kneeling beside his chair. "You said it was a minor disagreement in Soho." "The hounds belong to a business partner who disagreed with my terms." He tensed as she pressed the wet cloth to the wound. The antiseptic hissed against the demonic corruption, turning the purple mist into a foul-smelling white smoke. "You brought a pack of shadow beasts into East London?" "I lost them in the underground." "You never lose them, Lucien. They hunt by blood." Rory's
eyes widened
. "Where is your cane?" "On the floor." "The blade inside. Is it silver?" "Of course." She stood up, her heart dropping. "They didn't lose your scent. They let you lead them to me." A low, vibrating growl shook the floorboards. Ptolemy hissed, his back arching into a rigid U-shape before he bolted under the sofa. Outside the window, the fog of Brick Lane pressed against the glass. Something massive swung against the fire escape, the iron
structure
groaning under heavy
weight
. "Rory,"
Lucien said, his voice instantly losing its teasing tone
. He reached for his cane, but his wound flared, his face turning pale as he stumbled. The glass of the bay window
shattered
inward in a spectacular explosion of sharp shards. A massive, soot-black hound with eyes like burning coals lunged into the small room, its jaws snapping inches from Rory's face.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
26
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.377
leniency
0.754
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
85.01%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1668
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
3
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
34.05%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1668
totalAiIsms
22
found
0
word
"weight"
count
3
1
word
"silk"
count
1
2
word
"resolve"
count
1
3
word
"resolved"
count
1
4
word
"practiced ease"
count
1
5
word
"familiar"
count
1
6
word
"stark"
count
1
7
word
"racing"
count
2
8
word
"pulse"
count
1
9
word
"throbbed"
count
1
10
word
"down her spine"
count
1
11
word
"variable"
count
1
12
word
"chill"
count
1
13
word
"silence"
count
1
14
word
"velvet"
count
2
15
word
"tracing"
count
1
16
word
"structure"
count
1
17
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"silk"
2
"resolve"
3
"resolved"
4
"practiced ease"
5
"familiar"
6
"stark"
7
"racing"
8
"pulse"
9
"throbbed"
10
"down her spine"
11
"variable"
12
"chill"
13
"silence"
14
"velvet"
15
"tracing"
16
"structure"
17
"shattered"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
110
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
110
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
153
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
35
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1668
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
16
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
33
wordCount
1191
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.01
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Brick
2
Lane
2
London
1
Marseille
1
Eva
1
Lucien
12
Oxfords
1
Rory
10
Southwark
1
Avaros
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Eva"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Rory"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"London"
3
"Marseille"
4
"Avaros"
globalScore
0.996
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
90
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like fire, burning through her sle"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1668
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
153
matches
0
"hated that she"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
74
mean
22.54
std
15.58
cv
0.691
sampleLengths
0
29
1
32
2
13
3
50
4
19
5
18
6
8
7
16
8
20
9
24
10
31
11
12
12
24
13
23
14
36
15
1
16
15
17
18
18
19
19
9
20
30
21
31
22
1
23
32
24
4
25
10
26
45
27
34
28
6
29
32
30
22
31
4
32
33
33
56
34
9
35
18
36
49
37
14
38
9
39
45
40
5
41
6
42
13
43
43
44
7
45
27
46
38
47
71
48
43
49
23
98.88%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
110
matches
0
"was soaked"
1
"was puckered"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
192
matches
0
"was watching"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
153
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
82.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1201
adjectiveStacks
3
stackExamples
0
"ancient leather-bound journals."
1
"jagged, black-rimmed claw"
2
"massive, soot-black hound"
adverbCount
28
adverbRatio
0.02331390507910075
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.009991673605328892
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
153
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
153
mean
10.9
std
6.03
cv
0.554
sampleLengths
0
6
1
23
2
10
3
12
4
10
5
13
6
12
7
19
8
19
9
6
10
13
11
15
12
3
13
8
14
16
15
4
16
14
17
2
18
9
19
15
20
6
21
25
22
6
23
6
24
16
25
8
26
23
27
22
28
9
29
5
30
1
31
15
32
9
33
9
34
5
35
9
36
5
37
9
38
19
39
11
40
7
41
16
42
6
43
2
44
1
45
3
46
12
47
17
48
4
49
10
44.66%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
15
diversityRatio
0.32679738562091504
totalSentences
153
uniqueOpeners
50
32.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
102
matches
0
"Only one person possessed that"
ratio
0.01
16.08%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
52
totalSentences
102
matches
0
"It was three slow thumps,"
1
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
2
"His voice was a rich,"
3
"She slammed the door."
4
"He stepped into the cramped"
5
"She did not lower the"
6
"He walked past her into"
7
"He paused by a stack"
8
"He turned to face her."
9
"He took a step closer,"
10
"She looked down."
11
"It looked almost black under"
12
"She grabbed his lapel, pulling"
13
"He looked down at her"
14
"His gaze lingered on her"
15
"He placed his cool, leather-gloved"
16
"she whispered, her voice tight"
17
"Her left wrist throbbed"
18
"She ignored the phantom ache"
19
"His voice lost its playful"
ratio
0.51
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
96
totalSentences
102
matches
0
"The bottom deadbolt screeched in"
1
"Rory kept her weight pressed"
2
"The rhythm of the knock"
3
"It was three slow thumps,"
4
"Rory pulled the door open"
5
"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6
"The dim bulb overhead caught"
7
"He wore a tailored charcoal"
8
"His voice was a rich,"
9
"Rory stared at his heterochromatic"
10
"She slammed the door."
11
"The thick tip of his"
12
"The chain rattled, then the"
13
"He stepped into the cramped"
14
"Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat,"
15
"Rory muttered to the cat"
16
"She did not lower the"
17
"Lucien closed the door behind"
18
"He walked past her into"
19
"He paused by a stack"
ratio
0.941
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
102
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
54
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"He kissed her with a ravenous hunger, his tongue tracing her lips before sliding past them."
1
"A massive, soot-black hound with eyes like burning coals lunged into the small room, its jaws snapping inches from Rory's face."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
26
uselessAdditionCount
9
matches
0
"He walked, his leather Oxfords silent on the worn rug"
1
"He took, his cane clicking against the floorboards"
2
"Rory stepped, her anger burning away her caution"
3
"she whispered, her voice tight"
4
"Lucien’s hand drifted, his thumb pressing directly over her crescent scar"
5
"Lucien murmured, his fingers digging into her hips"
6
"He shifted, a sudden wince tightening his features"
7
"Lucien said, though the smirk remained"
8
"Lucien said, his voice instantly losing its teasing tone"
48.55%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1
"she whispered (whisper)"
2
"she lied (lie)"
3
"she muttered (mutter)"
4
"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
5
"Rory ordered (order)"
6
"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
69
tagDensity
0.174
leniency
0.348
rawRatio
0.583
effectiveRatio
0.203
76.3973%