Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TVKB8GVG6HQGYEXBQ5VKB

Run Details

Duration:
24.4s
Cost:
$0.040969
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The cold beneath Camden did not merely settle on the skin; it burrowed straight for the marrow, smelling of century-old soot, wet iron, and stagnant water. Harlow Quinn stood on the edge of the abandoned platform, her 5'9" frame held with a rigid, military precision that years of desk work had failed to erode. She checked her left wrist, pulling back her sleeve to reveal the worn leather strap of her watch. 03:14 AM. Down on the sleepers, illuminated by the harsh, twitching glare of a portable halogen rig, lay the body. "Squatter," DS Miller said, his breath blooming in pale, ragged ghosts as he spoke. He was shivering, his hands shoved deep into the pockets of a cheap wool overcoat. "Got in through the old ventilation shafts up on high street. Plentiful supply of cheap gin or bad gear, took a tumble off the ledge, broke his neck. Safe to call it misadventure, Quinn. Let's get the coroner's lads down here and go get a proper brew." Quinn did not answer. She jumped down from the platform, her boots landing with a heavy, dry crunch on the ballast. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close to her skull, gleamed pearlescent under the halogen flood light. She knelt beside the dead man, her brown eyes scanning the scene with a cold, practiced efficiency. "Look at his shoes, Miller," Quinn said, her voice low and gravelly, carrying the quiet authority of eighteen years on the force. Miller groaned, taking a cautious step closer to the platform edge. "What about them? They're shoes." "Hand-stitched Italian calfskin," she said, running a gloved finger along the welt. "Worth more than your monthly pay packet. And look at the soles." She tilted the dead man's foot. "Perfectly dry. No mud, no soot from the service shafts. If he walked down those tunnels to get here, he did it by floating." Miller frowned, his smug indifference faltering. "Maybe he was carried?" "Maybe." Quinn leaned over the corpse. The man was in his late thirties, his face twisted not in the slack release of an overdose, but in a frozen mask of absolute terror. His fingers were clawed, digging into the gravel. There were no tracks on his arms, no chemical scent on his breath. But on his lower lip, a faint, iridescent silver residue clung to the skin like crushed moth wings. She reached into the victim’s coat pocket. Her fingers brushed against something hard, small, and circular. She pulled it out. It was a token, roughly the size of a crown, carved from a porous, yellowed material that was unmistakably bone. Its surface was warm—unnaturally so, given the subterranean draft—and etched with a singular, jagged rune. Quinn’s chest tightened. She had seen carvings like this once before, three years ago, in the damp basement where her partner, DS Morris, had died with the same terrified expression on his face. The official report had called Morris’s death a heart attack. Quinn had spent thirty-six months knowing it was a lie. "What's that?" Miller asked, squinting down. "A coin?" "Nothing," Quinn said, slipping the bone token into her pocket. She didn't trust Miller, nor did she trust the Met's eagerness to sweep anything unusual under the nearest rug. As she withdrew her hand, her torch beam caught a glint of metal wedged between two wooden railroad ties, half-buried in the soot. She reached down and fished it out. It was a heavy brass pocket compass, its casing darkened by a thick green patina of verdigris. She rubbed her thumb across the lid. The brass was cold, etched with intricate, swirling sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the direct beam of her flashlight. She clicked the latch. The lid popped open. Inside, the needle wasn't behaving like any compass she had used in the army. It didn't point north. Instead, it spun in a frantic, wild circle, before snapping violently toward the dark, bricked-up archway at the far end of the station. "Miller," Quinn said, her sharp jaw tightening. "This station was sealed off in the sixties, correct?" "Yeah. Southern extension line. Bricked up and forgotten." "Then why does that archway have fresh scrape marks along the mortar?" Before Miller could answer, a sharp, metallic scrape echoed from the darkness of the spur tunnel. It was the distinct sound of a boot slipping on a loose iron grate. Quinn was on her feet in a fraction of a second. "Stay with the body," she ordered. "Quinn, wait—we don't have backup—" But she was already moving, her stride long and silent as she entered the unlit tunnel. She drew her baton, her thumb resting on the grip. The darkness here was absolute, swallowing the beam of her torch, but the compass in her left hand remained active, its needle trembling violently, pointing straight ahead. She walked twenty yards, her senses dialed to a razor's edge. The smell of wet soot gave way to something else—an impossible scent of crushed lavender, ozone, and sulfur. Another scrape. Closer this time, behind a rusted diesel generator left to rot in a recess of the tunnel wall. Quinn lunged around the generator, her torch beam flashing like a searchlight. "Police! Stand still!" The beam caught a young woman crouched in the shadows. She gasped, shielding her green eyes behind a pair of round, silver-rimmed glasses. Curly red hair spilled out from under a dark woolen cap, and she immediately reached up to tuck a stray lock behind her left ear—a nervous, frantic gesture. Clutched tightly against her chest was a worn leather satchel, bulging with the thick edges of old books. "Don't shoot!" the woman stammered, her voice echoing off the arched brickwork. "I'm not... I'm not doing anything wrong." Quinn kept the light trained on her. She took in the freckled complexion, the practical boots mud-splattered to the ankle, and the unmistakable scent of old parchment clinging to her. "You're trespassing in a closed Metropolitan police crime scene. Name." "Eva," the woman said, her voice shaking but her green eyes steadying as she looked at Quinn's badge. "Eva Kowalski. I’m a researcher. I work at the British Museum. The restricted archives." "At three in the morning, Miss Kowalski?" Quinn's voice was a low hook. She stepped closer, her military bearing imposing and unyielding. "In a sealed Tube station, next to a fresh corpse?" Eva’s gaze flicked down to Quinn’s left hand. Her eyes widened behind her round glasses as she spotted the brass casing. "You found the compass," she whispered. Quinn looked down at the instrument. The needle was vibrating so hard it was buzzing against the glass, pointing directly at Eva's leather satchel. "You know what this is." "It's a shadow compass," Eva said, her words tumbling out in a hurried rush, her hand returning to tuck her red hair behind her ear again. "It... it doesn't measure magnetism. It reacts to rifts. To portals. The Veil Market is supposed to open tonight. The full moon is at its peak. This station is where they gather." Quinn's mind flashed back to the bone token in her pocket. The warm bone. The strange runes. Three years ago, Morris had been babbling about a market, about things bought and sold in the dark, before his speech had degenerated into terrified screams. "What is the Veil Market?" Quinn demanded, her tone dropping to a dangerous whisper. "A black market," Eva said, taking a cautious step back, though there was nowhere to run. "For things that shouldn't exist. Enchanted goods. Alchemical compounds. The man back there—the one on the tracks—he was a buyer. He tried to enter without a bone token. The wards at the threshold... they don't kind to intruders who try to force their way in." Quinn stared at her. Every rational instinct she had honed over eighteen years of police service screamed that this girl was insane, a conspiracy theorist playing in the dark. But Quinn had seen Morris's body. She had seen the way the coroner had refused to meet her eyes. She knew the shape of a cover-up. She raised the compass between them. "How does it work?" Eva hesitated, glancing at the dark tunnel behind Quinn, where Miller's distant shouts were beginning to echo. "It points to the boundary. If you have the token, you can pass. If you don't, the threshold burns the life right out of you." Quinn reached into her pocket and produced the yellowed bone token. The moment it neared the compass, the vibrating needle stopped spinning and locked dead-center, pointing directly toward the bricked-up archway. A low, resonant hum vibrated through the brass casing, warming Quinn's palm. "You're coming with me, Miss Kowalski," Quinn said, her jaw set, her brown eyes burning with a cold, hard resolve. "We're going to find out exactly what killed that man. And what killed my partner."
created_at"2026-05-19T19:19:29.902Z" 5/19/2026, 7:19:29 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn lunged around [around]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0.036
effectiveRatio0.036
89.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"imposing"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"etched"
2"glint"
3"intricate"
4"echoed"
5"echoing"
6"imposing"
7"flicked"
8"whisper"
9"echo"
10"vibrated"
11"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen91
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1477
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1262
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn24
Miller7
Plentiful1
Morris4
Met1
Southern1
British1
Museum1
Eva5
Veil1
Market1
Enchanted1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Morris"
4"Met"
5"Eva"
places
0"British"
globalScore0.549
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the direct beam of her flashlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.677
wordCount1477
matches
0"not in the slack release of an overdose, but in a frozen mask of absolute terror"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean35.17
std21.19
cv0.603
sampleLengths
074
118
276
353
422
516
654
710
871
920
1088
118
1229
1347
1436
1541
1616
178
1812
1930
2017
215
2253
2329
2420
2515
2669
2719
2840
2932
3032
3127
3229
3358
3443
3514
3661
3755
3810
3942
4043
4135
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"were clawed"
1"is supposed"
20.63% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was shivering"
1"wasn't behaving"
2"was already moving"
3"was vibrating"
4"was buzzing"
5"were beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences73
ratio0.068
matches
0"The cold beneath Camden did not merely settle on the skin; it burrowed straight for the marrow, smelling of century-old soot, wet iron, and stagnant water."
1"It was a token, roughly the size of a crown, carved from a porous, yellowed material that was unmistakably bone. Its surface was warm—unnaturally so, given the subterranean draft—and etched with a singular, jagged rune. Quinn’s chest tightened. She had seen carvings like this once before, three years ago, in the damp basement where her partner, DS Morris, had died with the same terrified expression on his face. The official report had called Morris’s death a heart attack. Quinn had spent thirty-six months knowing it was a lie."
2"She walked twenty yards, her senses dialed to a razor's edge. The smell of wet soot gave way to something else—an impossible scent of crushed lavender, ozone, and sulfur."
3"The beam caught a young woman crouched in the shadows. She gasped, shielding her green eyes behind a pair of round, silver-rimmed glasses. Curly red hair spilled out from under a dark woolen cap, and she immediately reached up to tuck a stray lock behind her left ear—a nervous, frantic gesture. Clutched tightly against her chest was a worn leather satchel, bulging with the thick edges of old books."
4"The man back there—the one on the tracks—he was a buyer."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount321
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.009345794392523364
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.012461059190031152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean20.23
std18.48
cv0.914
sampleLengths
026
148
218
340
417
56
613
753
822
914
102
1119
1213
138
1414
1510
1671
1720
1888
198
2029
2147
2236
2341
2416
251
263
274
2812
2930
3017
315
3253
3329
3420
3513
362
3769
3814
395
4039
411
4220
433
446
453
4632
4727
4829
4927
87.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5753424657534246
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences63
matches
0"she said, running a gloved"
1"She reached into the victim’s"
2"It was a token, roughly"
3"She rubbed her thumb across"
4"She walked twenty yards, her"
5"I'm not doing anything"
6"I’m a researcher."
7"I work at the British"
8"it doesn't measure magnetism."
9"It reacts to rifts."
10"He tried to enter without"
11"they don't kind to intruders"
12"She raised the compass between"
ratio0.206
86.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences63
matches
0"The cold beneath Camden did"
1"Harlow Quinn stood on the"
2"DS Miller said, his breath"
3"Quinn did not answer. She"
4"Quinn said, her voice low"
5"Miller groaned, taking a cautious"
6"she said, running a gloved"
7"Miller frowned, his smug indifference"
8"Quinn leaned over the corpse."
9"She reached into the victim’s"
10"It was a token, roughly"
11"Miller asked, squinting down"
12"Quinn said, slipping the bone"
13"She rubbed her thumb across"
14"Quinn said, her sharp jaw"
15"Quinn was on her feet"
16"She walked twenty yards, her"
17"Another scrape. Closer this time,"
18"Quinn lunged around the generator,"
19"The beam caught a young"
ratio0.746
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences63
matches
0"If he walked down those"
1"Before Miller could answer, a"
2"If you have the token,"
3"If you don't, the threshold"
ratio0.063
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was a token, roughly the size of a crown, carved from a porous, yellowed material that was unmistakably bone. Its surface was warm—unnaturally so, given the …"
1"She rubbed her thumb across the lid. The brass was cold, etched with intricate, swirling sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the direct beam of her flash…"
2"But she was already moving, her stride long and silent as she entered the unlit tunnel. She drew her baton, her thumb resting on the grip. The darkness here was…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"DS Miller said, his breath blooming in pale, ragged ghosts as he spoke"
1"Quinn said, her sharp jaw tightening"
2"the woman stammered, her voice echoing off the arched brickwork"
3"Quinn demanded, her tone dropping to a dangerous whisper"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Miller groaned (groan)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"the woman stammered (stammer)"
3"Quinn demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.2
79.0312%