| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1075 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1075 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "glistening" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1075 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "snip" | | 1 | "Click." | | 2 | "Flash." | | 3 | "Flash." | | 4 | "Flash." | | 5 | "R-r-o-r-y..." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1050 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.29 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "London" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a chest taking a deep, shudde" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.93 | | wordCount | 1075 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the crisp cold of a London autumn, but a deep, drawing frost" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 20.67 | | std | 14.98 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 37 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 97.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.06% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't crawl; it slid back behind a massive oak trunk with a liquid, boneless grace." | | 1 | "The crimson light it emitted was no longer a soft pulse; it was a frantic, strobe-like flicker." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1054 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03320683111954459 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009487666034155597 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 11.81 | | std | 6.64 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 39.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.31868131868131866 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the heavy quiet answered." | | 1 | "Only the empty grove met" | | 2 | "Only, her shadow wasn't alone." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 85.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped between the two" | | 1 | "She touched the crescent scar" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 3 | "She reached into the neck" | | 4 | "It leaked a rhythmic red" | | 5 | "She walked deeper into the" | | 6 | "Her wristwatch had stopped, the" | | 7 | "It could have been midnight," | | 8 | "She turned her head, her" | | 9 | "She took three paces forward." | | 10 | "It wasn't the wind." | | 11 | "It was the distinct, rhythmic" | | 12 | "She spun around, raising her" | | 13 | "It was too tall to" | | 14 | "It didn't crawl; it slid" | | 15 | "She backed away from the" | | 16 | "Her breath began to mist" | | 17 | "She tilted her head back." | | 18 | "They shifted, knitting together and" | | 19 | "She wiped it away with" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory slipped past the rusted" | | 1 | "Mud clung to her boots." | | 2 | "The London wind howled behind" | | 3 | "She stepped between the two" | | 4 | "The wind died." | | 5 | "The silence hit like a" | | 6 | "The biting autumn chill vanished," | | 7 | "She touched the crescent scar" | | 8 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 9 | "She reached into the neck" | | 10 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson gem pulsed." | | 11 | "It leaked a rhythmic red" | | 12 | "A Hel portal lay nearby," | | 13 | "The silver chain rattled as" | | 14 | "The crimson light flared, casting" | | 15 | "The shadows bent at sharp," | | 16 | "She walked deeper into the" | | 17 | "The standing stones behind her" | | 18 | "Time behaved like grease here." | | 19 | "Her wristwatch had stopped, the" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The biting autumn chill vanished, replaced by a humid, stagnant warmth that smelled of split nectarines and damp earth." | | 1 | "Not the crisp cold of a London autumn, but a deep, drawing frost that smelled of copper and old rot." | | 2 | "They shifted, knitting together and pulling apart in a slow, rhythmic pattern that resembled a giant ribcage expanding and contracting with steady breaths." | | 3 | "The warm, leathery surface rippled, a slow movement that felt like a chest taking a deep, shuddering breath." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her teeth chattering from the sudden, marrow-deep cold" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |