Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0TYWKCS4WXE09X4BCV90E6

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Duration:
41.9s
Cost:
$0.077414
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third steel deadbolt slid back with a heavy, metallic scrape. Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles stark white against the chipped yellow paint of the frame. Her heart did a sudden, violent flip-flop against her ribs. "I didn't order curry," Rory said. Lucien Moreau leaned elegantly on his ivory-handled cane, his slicked-back platinum blond hair catching the dim, yellow glare of the stairwell bulb. His amber eye gleamed. His black eye, dark as an oil slick, swallowed the rest of the light. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that looked entirely untouched by the filthy London drizzle. "A poor reception for an old friend, Rory." "We aren't friends, Lucien. We never were." Lucien stepped past her. He didn't wait for an invitation. He never did. He brushed against her in the narrow passage, the rough wool of his sleeve scraping her bare arm. A jolt of static electricity, hot and sharp, jumped between them. Rory closed the door, sliding the three deadbolts back into place. Each turn of the key felt like sealing her own tomb. She followed his shadow into the flat. The cramped hallway smelled of old paper, damp floorboards, and the pungent aroma of cumin and turmeric rising from the curry house downstairs. Stacks of ancient leather-bound occult books lined the walls, threatening to topple at the slightest vibration. Near the entrance sat a magnificent tall old rectangular black French wooden wardrobe, blocking half the passage. It forced them close, their shoulders almost brushing in the tight gap. Lucien leaned his cane against the dark wood. The click-clack of the ivory handle hitting the timber echoed in the small space. On his pinky finger, he wore a beautiful small antique golden Irish signet ring, the metal catching the amber glow of the single hallway bulb. The main living area was a claustrophobic maze of Eva’s academic clutter. Notes on demonology, Aramaic translation transcripts, and dried herbs hung from the exposed ceiling beams. A hideous large modern blue plastic storage bin sat in the corner, overflowing with half-finished research on the regional gates of Avaros. Below, the muffled bass of the curry house's sound system vibrated through the floorboards, a rhythmic thudding that matched the frantic beating of Rory's heart. "The three deadbolts are a touch dramatic, don't you think?" Lucien asked, his French accent rolling over the syllables like heavy silk. "Particularly when the latch on the kitchen window is entirely broken." "How do you know about the kitchen window?" "I make it my business to know when you sleep in unsafe places." "Get out of my flat." "Eva's flat, actually," Lucien corrected, turning to face her. On a pile of yellowed ledger papers near the sofa, Ptolemy, Eva's ginger tabby cat, woke up. His back arched instantly into a sharp ridge. He let out a low, vibrating hiss, his green eyes locked on the half-demon. Animals always recognized the taint of the realm of Avaros. Lucien ignored the cat, his heterochromatic eyes scanning Rory's face. He stepped closer, domesticating the tiny space with his sheer presence. He smelled of expensive sandalwood, rain, and that faint, electric scent of ozone that always accompanied his true nature. "You look thin, Rory," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, smooth baritone. "The delivery job keeps me active." "And the pre-law degree? The brilliant mind Cardiff University raved about?" "Buried. Along with everything else from Wales." Rory crossed her arms, tucking her hands into the sleeves of her oversized woollen jumper. She wanted to hide the slight tremor in her fingers. She still carried the physical memory of his hands on her skin from that final, chaotic night in Cardiff. "You changed your name again," Lucien said. "People do that when they want to go unnoticed." "You chose Carter. Your mother's maiden name was Ellis. Not your most creative work, sweetheart." He reached out, his leather-gloved hand hovering just inches above her left wrist. The heat radiating from his palm penetrated her thick sleeve, warming the small crescent-shaped scar she had carried since childhood. She pulled back, her spine hitting the edge of the kitchen counter. The kitchen counter was a mish-mash of spices, empty mugs, and unanswered letters. "I liked Wales," Lucien said. "The constant rain suited your temperament." "The rain hid my tears. There is a distinction." "Did you cry for me, Rory?" "I cried for the expensive leather boots I ruined running away from your associates." Lucien laughed, a dark, rich sound that sent a shiver straight down her spine. He stepped into her personal space, trapping her against the counter. The gap between them shrank to a mere breath. "They were not my associates," Lucien murmured. "They were debt collectors from Avaros. If I had not arrived when I did, they would have taken more than your boots." "You should have let them." "And lose my most fascinating transaction? Never." "I am not your transaction, Lucien. I paid my debt." "Did you?" He leaned in, his amber eye burning with a sudden, predatory intensity. "Then why did you use my personal, private offshore account to finance the security system on this very door?" Rory stiffened. The heat of his body, the overwhelming density of his demonic aura, wrapped around her like a physical weight. "I plan to pay you back," she whispered. "I do not want your sterling, Rory." "What do you want, then?" "The truth." "About?" "Why you fled Cardiff the morning after we crossed the line." His gaze dropped to her lips, lingering there with agonizing slowness. "Why you chose to run to this miserable, damp city rather than face me." "We made a mistake," she said, her voice shaking despite her best efforts. "I was vulnerable. You were convenient." "Convenient?" Lucien's hand slammed onto the counter beside her hip. The wood groaned under the pressure. "A mistake that forced me to slaughter a dozen lesser fiends to keep your name out of their ledgers? A mistake that left the taste of copper and honey on my tongue for weeks?" He leaned closer, his chest almost brushing her breasts. "You wanted me then, Rory. You want me now. Your pulse is racing." Her heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. The air in the flat grew thick, suffocatingly hot. She could see the faint, dark veins of his demonic heritage pulsing beneath the pale skin of his temples. "You are a monster," she whispered, her hands blindly searching the counter behind her. "Only when you ask me to be." Her fingers brushed against the cold, familiar handle of a silver paring knife. She gripped it, bringing it up between them, pressing the sharp tip directly against his charcoal waistcoat, right over his heart. "Get back, Lucien. I mean it." He didn't flinch. Instead, he took a step forward, deliberately pressing his chest harder against the blade. The silver point pierced the expensive wool, biting into his flesh. A drop of dark, thick blood bloomed on the grey fabric. "Go on," he whispered, his heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers, devoid of fear. "Press harder. Let us see if I bleed like a man, or if I burn like a demon." "Don't tempt me." "I am always tempting you, Rory. That is our curse." Behind them, Ptolemy let out a sudden, blood-curdling screech. The ginger cat launched himself off the sofa, vanishing beneath the safety of the armchair. The yellowed glass of the sash window behind the kitchen counter shattered inward with a deafening crash. A shower of sharp glass fragments rained down, pelting their backs. The cold, damp night air rushed into the room, carrying the stench of rotting canal water and sulfur. A massive, ash-grey hand with razor-sharp black talons reached through the broken windowpane, grabbing Lucien violently by the collar of his suit jacket and dragging him backward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.298
leniency0.596
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"fascinating"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"echoed"
2"vibrated"
3"rhythmic"
4"silk"
5"scanning"
6"electric"
7"chaotic"
8"down her spine"
9"fascinating"
10"intensity"
11"weight"
12"pulse"
13"racing"
14"familiar"
15"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1312
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount924
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien13
Moreau1
London1
French2
Irish1
Eva2
Aramaic1
Avaros2
Rory7
Ptolemy2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.797
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like sealing her own tomb"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1312
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean21.51
std18.14
cv0.843
sampleLengths
011
129
26
355
48
57
613
751
875
947
1074
1133
128
1313
145
159
1649
1740
1814
196
2011
217
2244
237
249
2515
2658
2711
289
296
3014
3134
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335
347
3510
3633
3721
388
397
405
412
421
4336
4419
4550
469
4713
4838
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
60.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks7
stackExamples
0"ancient leather-bound occult"
1"magnificent tall old rectangular black French"
2"beautiful small antique golden Irish"
3"hideous large modern blue plastic storage"
4"small crescent-shaped scar"
5"massive, ash-grey hand"
6"razor-sharp black talons"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.026680896478121666
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008537886872998933
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean12.04
std6.03
cv0.501
sampleLengths
011
119
210
36
422
54
614
715
88
97
104
116
123
1318
1411
1511
1611
177
1823
1916
2017
2112
228
2314
2425
2512
2615
2722
2825
2922
3011
318
3213
335
349
3517
368
3714
3810
3910
4011
4119
4214
436
4411
457
4615
4710
4819
497
50.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3577981651376147
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners39
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Instead, he took a step"
ratio0.014
54.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her heart did a sudden,"
1"His amber eye gleamed."
2"His black eye, dark as"
3"He wore a tailored charcoal"
4"He didn't wait for an"
5"He never did."
6"He brushed against her in"
7"She followed his shadow into"
8"It forced them close, their"
9"His back arched instantly into"
10"He let out a low,"
11"He stepped closer, domesticating the"
12"He smelled of expensive sandalwood,"
13"She wanted to hide the"
14"She still carried the physical"
15"He reached out, his leather-gloved"
16"She pulled back, her spine"
17"He stepped into her personal"
18"He leaned in, his amber"
19"His gaze dropped to her"
ratio0.414
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences70
matches
0"The third steel deadbolt slid"
1"Rory gripped the edge of"
2"Her heart did a sudden,"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned elegantly on"
4"His amber eye gleamed."
5"His black eye, dark as"
6"He wore a tailored charcoal"
7"Lucien stepped past her."
8"He didn't wait for an"
9"He never did."
10"He brushed against her in"
11"A jolt of static electricity,"
12"Rory closed the door, sliding"
13"Each turn of the key"
14"She followed his shadow into"
15"The cramped hallway smelled of"
16"Stacks of ancient leather-bound occult"
17"It forced them close, their"
18"Lucien leaned his cane against"
19"The click-clack of the ivory"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Below, the muffled bass of the curry house's sound system vibrated through the floorboards, a rhythmic thudding that matched the frantic beating of Rory's heart…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Lucien asked, his French accent rolling over the syllables like heavy silk"
1"Lucien corrected, turning to face her"
2"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, smooth baritone"
3"He leaned in, his amber eye burning with a sudden, predatory intensity"
4"she said, her voice shaking despite her best efforts"
5"she whispered, her hands blindly searching the counter behind her"
43.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.234
leniency0.468
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.213
78.8017%