| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde warned softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 83.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1230 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1230 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "searing" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "enigmatic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1223 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 959 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | British | 1 | | London | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "British" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Dymasian" |
| | globalScore | 0.822 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like liquid honey suspended over a" | | 1 | "void that seemed to absorb the warmth around them" | | 2 | "obsidian that seemed to weep a thick, golden sap" | | 3 | "looked like hand-blown glass ornaments, g" |
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| 36.47% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.635 | | wordCount | 1223 | | matches | | 0 | "not a leap, but a sickening slide" | | 1 | "not with heat like the pendant, but with a frigid, warning vibration" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.15% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 58.24 | | std | 22.63 | | cv | 0.389 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 102 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 80 | | 9 | 87 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 99 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 28 |
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| 93.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "were sank" | | 1 | "were drawn" |
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| 17.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "was currently feeling" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "was pulsing" | | 3 | "was sensing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "Through her thin t-shirt, the thumbnail-sized crimson gem was not just warm—it was pulsing with a vibrant, rhythmic heat that matched the drumming of her own heart." | | 1 | "Only their eyes—two pools of faintly glowing violet—offered any detail against the darkness of their shifting form." | | 2 | "Beneath the heavy scent of fruit and spices was a deeper, more primal aroma—something resembling searing meat and fresh-baked bread, a smell that made her stomach pinch with a sudden, violent spasm of hunger." | | 3 | "\"A fruit plucked in Dymas belongs to the throat that swallows it, and the throat that swallows it belongs to the soil that grew it. I cannot lie, Aurora; if you taste of Belphegor’s bounty, the Warden himself will not be able to pull you back to the mortal plane.\"" | | 4 | "\"Right. Look, but don't eat. I can do that. I survive on cold takeout and instant noodles; I think I can resist some fancy Fae-adjacent fruit.\"" | | 5 | "From this distance, Aurora could see massive aqueducts carrying liquids of various colors—some clear, some dark red like wine, others a thick, milky white—down the sides of the structure to feed the orchards below." | | 6 | "She looked at her companions—the ancient Half-Fae seer whose eyes saw things hidden from mortal sight, and the ageless spirit of shadow who had once been a man." |
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| 60.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 983 | | adjectiveStacks | 7 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "damp, mulch-heavy earth" | | 1 | "strange, violet-hued moss," | | 2 | "rich, golden-brown hue" | | 3 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 4 | "large, ruby-colored sphere" | | 5 | "heavy, sweet-scented blooms." | | 6 | "dense, amber-lit valley," |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.030518819938962362 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012207527975584944 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 18.25 | | std | 8.79 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 50 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 69.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.43283582089552236 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Only their eyes—two pools of" | | 1 | "Instead of normal leaves, the" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Her waist-length silver hair, usually" | | 1 | "It looked like liquid honey" | | 2 | "Her voice, melodic and eternal," | | 3 | "It was a fierce, living" | | 4 | "She touched the hilt." | | 5 | "She clenched her left fist," | | 6 | "They stood at the edge" | | 7 | "Their trunks were thick and" | | 8 | "Her eyes were drawn to" | | 9 | "It shimmered, its glass-like skin" | | 10 | "She drifted down the slope," | | 11 | "They followed Isolde deeper into" | | 12 | "It was a palace of" | | 13 | "She looked down at her" | | 14 | "It was sensing the sheer" | | 15 | "She looked at her companions—the" | | 16 | "They pressed on, leaving the" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 97.93% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was not a" | | 1 | "The next, the cold London" | | 2 | "Aurora gasped, her lungs protesting" | | 3 | "Isolde’s bare feet touched the" | | 4 | "Her waist-length silver hair, usually" | | 5 | "The sky was a vast," | | 6 | "It looked like liquid honey" | | 7 | "Her voice, melodic and eternal," | | 8 | "Aurora reached up, her fingers" | | 9 | "It was a fierce, living" | | 10 | "She touched the hilt." | | 11 | "The cold of the moonsilver" | | 12 | "a voice whispered" | | 13 | "Aurora didn't jump, though she" | | 14 | "Nyx coalesced beside her, their" | | 15 | "Nyx warned, their voice sounding" | | 16 | "Aurora took a shallow, careful" | | 17 | "Nyx wasn't wrong." | | 18 | "She clenched her left fist," | | 19 | "They stood at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.724 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The next, the cold London drizzle vanished, replaced by an immediate, oppressive wall of heat that smelled of caramelized sugar, roasted cloves, and the heavy, …" | | 1 | "It looked like liquid honey suspended over an impossible landscape, casting everything in a rich, golden-brown hue that felt both beautiful and utterly suffocat…" | | 2 | "Through her thin t-shirt, the thumbnail-sized crimson gem was not just warm—it was pulsing with a vibrant, rhythmic heat that matched the drumming of her own he…" | | 3 | "Standing over six feet tall, the Shade was a living tear in the amber light, a void that seemed to absorb the warmth around them." | | 4 | "Beneath the heavy scent of fruit and spices was a deeper, more primal aroma—something resembling searing meat and fresh-baked bread, a smell that made her stoma…" | | 5 | "They stood at the edge of a sprawling, terraced orchard that sloped down into a wide, hazy valley." | | 6 | "Their trunks were thick and gnarled, resembling columns of dark, porous obsidian that seemed to weep a thick, golden sap." | | 7 | "Hanging from these branches were clusters of fruits that looked like hand-blown glass ornaments, glowing internally with soft pinks, deep purples, and brilliant…" | | 8 | "It shimmered, its glass-like skin catching the amber light in a way that felt almost hypnotic." | | 9 | "She looked at her companions—the ancient Half-Fae seer whose eyes saw things hidden from mortal sight, and the ageless spirit of shadow who had once been a man." |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde warned softly, her lavender eyes fixed on the distant valley" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured, their shadowy form rippling as they walked" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Isolde warned softly (warn)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.556 | |