Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V065YG5NVBQCYA9NQNDTZ

Run Details

Duration:
58.9s
Cost:
$0.125793
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the windowpane, distorting the Soho streetlights into running streaks of amber and crimson. The green neon sign above the entrance hummed, throwing an emerald wash over the dark oak of the bar. Rory sat in her corner stool, fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Condensation dripped down the side of her gin glass. Behind the bar, Silas moved with a heavy, rhythmic grace. His left leg lagged a fraction behind the right, a quiet souvenir from Prague. He polished a highball glass with a clean white cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. The brass bell above the door chimed. A gust of damp city air swept in, carrying the scent of wet asphalt and petrol. A man in a tailored charcoal overcoat stepped inside, shaking the rain from a black umbrella. He had a sharp, angular jaw and eyes that scanned the room with a restless, professional efficiency. It took Rory three seconds to recognize the posture, the slight tilt of his chin. Rhys. He looked like a page ripped from a London lifestyle magazine, a far cry from the boy who used to pull all-nighters in the Swansea library wearing mismatched socks and a moth-eaten Llanelli rugby jersey. He caught her eye. Recognition flared, sharp and sudden, cutting through his polished exterior. He walked over, his leather-soled shoes tapping a crisp rhythm on the floorboards. "Rory?" She tightened her grip on her glass, her bright blue eyes narrowing before she smoothed her expression into something resembling warmth. "Rhys. You’re a long way from the academic library." He pulled out the stool next to her, draping his coat over the back. The scent of expensive cologne and damp wool filled the gap between them. "And you're a long way from Cardiff." He gestured to the bartender. "A clean scotch, please." Silas gave a single, slow nod, his hazel eyes lingering on Rhys for a beat too long before he turned to reach for a bottle of single malt on the top shelf. Rhys leaned his elbows on the bar, looking at Rory. Under the warm lighting of the Nest, the lines around his eyes seemed deeper than a twenty-six-year-old’s had any right to be. "You disappeared, Aurora. Left your flat overnight. Your mum wouldn't tell anyone where you went." "London is large enough to get lost in. I like the noise." "You were going to be a barrister. Your dad had the chambers lined up in Cardiff." She took a slow sip of her gin, letting the juniper burn her throat before answering. "My father’s plans were never mine." Rhys picked up the scotch Silas slid toward him. He didn't drink right away, just swirled the amber liquid against the ice. "We thought you were dead. Or worse. With Evan." The name hung in the air, a cold, heavy weight. Rory's hand drifted to her left wrist, her sleeve sliding down to cover the crescent scar. "Evan is Cardiff news. I don't read the local papers anymore." Rhys took a sip, his shoulders dropping. This close, Rory could see the microscopic fraying at the collar of his pristine shirt, the dark circles under his eyes that no amount of expensive moisturizer could hide. "You look... different, Rhys. Polished. Like a marble monument." He let out a short, dry laugh that didn't reach his eyes. "Twelve-hour days at a magic circle firm will do that. I trade my life for six-minute billable increments." "And do you like the trade?" He stared into his glass. "It pays for the flat in Chelsea. It pays for the suits." "But not the sleep." "Sleep is overrated. You, on the other hand..." He looked her up and down, noting the simple black jumper, the practical boots, the lack of jewelry. "You look like a shadow, Rory. A quiet one." "I’m a delivery person for a Chinese restaurant. Golden Empress." Rhys paused, his glass halfway to his mouth. "A delivery driver? Aurora, you topped the class in constitutional law. You tore apart the mock trial judges." "I grew tired of arguing other people's lies. Now I just carry their dinner. It’s cleaner." Silas leaned against the back counter, folding his arms. He wasn't overtly listening, but Rory knew his trained ears caught every syllable. The old spymaster kept his face a blank slate, though the slight twitch of his auburn brow told her he was cataloging the information. "It's a waste." Rhys took a long drag of his scotch. "Your father was devastated. He retired early." "He retired because his liver gave out. Let's not rewrite history." "You always did have a sharp tongue. I missed it." He reached out, his hand hovering over hers on the bar, but Rory pulled her arm back, picking up her drink. "Did you?" "We were friends, Rory. Before you let him isolate you. Before you let him turn you into a ghost." The accusation hit like ice water. Rory's blue eyes flashed. "I chose to leave. Nobody turned me into anything." "Then why are you hiding in a Soho dive bar under an assumed name?" She froze. The green neon reflected in her glass seemed to flare. "What did you say?" "I ran into Eva last month at a gallery opening in Shoreditch." Rhys dropped his voice to a whisper, leaning closer. "She was drunk. She let slip that you were in London, going by Rory. Not Aurora. Not Laila. Just Rory. Living above a pub." Rory glared at him, her knuckles turning white around her glass. "Eva needs to keep her mouth shut." "She was worried about you. We all were. We still are." Rhys looked around the bar. His eyes took in the faded black-and-white photos of post-war Europe, the maps with borders that no longer existed, the heavy silence of the room. "This place... it feels like a graveyard for things that can't be buried." "It’s quiet. Silas keeps it that way." On cue, Silas stepped forward, using a damp rag to wipe down the bar three feet away from them. His presence was a subtle shield, an unspoken reminder that she wasn't alone. "Everything alright here, Rory?" Silas’s voice was a low, gravelly baritone. "Fine, Silas. Just catching up on old times." Rhys looked at Silas, his eyes narrowing as he studied the older man's military posture and scarred knuckles. He turned back to Rory. "You knew about the engagement, didn't you?" Her heart leaped into her throat. "What engagement?" "Mine." Rhys stared down at his drink. "I’m marrying Clara Hughes next spring." Clara Hughes. The name conjured a vivid memory of Cardiff—the golden-haired girl from the rowing team who used to laugh at Rhys’s jokes when Rory was too busy studying. "Congratulations." The word felt like dry sand in her mouth. "It was... expected. Her father is a senior partner at the firm. It makes sense." "You always liked things that made sense." "And you liked things that were complicated." Rhys stared at his scotch, his expression twisting into something raw, a brief fracture in his expensive veneer. "I wanted to find you, Rory. Before I signed the contract. Before I committed to the rest of my life." "Why?" "To see if you were still running. Or if you’d finally stopped." He looked at her wrist, where her sleeve had slid up again, exposing the crescent scar. Rory touched the rim of her glass. "I stopped running. I just started staying in one place." "This isn't a place, Rory. It's a hiding spot." "There's a difference?" Rhys leaned in closer, his voice cracking under the weight of years of unspoken words. "In university, we promised we’d never end up like our parents. We promised we’d build something real. Look at us. I’m a well-dressed hollow man, and you’re a ghost delivery driver." "I'm alive, Rhys. That's more than I would have been if I'd stayed." Rhys looked away, his jaw tightening. He took a slow, deliberate sip of his scotch, the ice clinking against the glass. The sound echoed in the quiet bar. "I still have the book you gave me. The annotated copy of *The Law of Nations*. The one with your coffee stains on the cover." "I don't read law anymore. I threw all my books in the River Taff the night I left." "Why did you leave like that? No note. No phone call. Just... gone." "Because if I had stopped to write a note, I would have stayed. And staying meant dying." "You could have reached out to me. I would have helped you." "No, you wouldn't have." Rory met his gaze, her blue eyes piercing and cold. "You were too busy climbing. You had the interview with the London firms. You were terrified of anything that might derail your perfect trajectory. If I had dropped my mess on your lap, you would have resented me." Rhys flinched. The hit landed exactly where she intended. He looked down at his shoes, then back at his hands, which were manicured, clean, devoid of the ink stains he used to carry. "Yes," he admitted, his voice barely a whisper over the hum of the neon. "But I would have done it anyway." "And we both would have ended up hating each other." "Instead, we just became strangers." Rhys smiled a sad, lopsided smile that Rory recognized from their student hall days. For a second, the mask of the successful London solicitor slipped entirely, revealing the boy who used to argue about philosophy over cheap cider. "Do you remember the bridge over the Taff? The one we walked across after the final exams?" "It was raining then, too." "You fell on the wet wooden planks. You swore like an Irish docker." "My father taught me those words." "And then we bought those awful chips from the greasy spoon down the road and ate them under a broken umbrella." Rhys's eyes softened, reflecting the amber light of the bar. "I thought... I thought we had all the time in the world to figure things out." "We did. Then the world caught up." "No. We let it catch us." Rhys drained his glass. He set it down with a sharp *clack* on the wooden bar. "I have to get back. Clara expects me at her parents' house in Belgravia for dinner." "Don't keep her waiting. Belgravia doesn't like to be kept waiting." Rhys stood up, pulling his charcoal coat over his shoulders. He adjusted his collar, the transitions back into the corporate armor almost seamless. Yet, there was a hesitation in his hands as he buttoned the wool. "Will you be here? If I come back?" Rory looked at her gin, now watered-down. "I live above the shop, Rhys. But I don't stay in one place long." "Take care of yourself, Aurora." "Rory. I'm Rory now." Rhys stared at her for a long moment, memorizing the sharp angles of her face under the green and amber light, before he turned and walked toward the exit. His leather shoes clicked against the floorboards, a rhythmic departure that grew fainter with every step. The brass bell above the door chimed, and then the heavy door shut, sealing out the damp London night and leaving the bar quiet once more. Silas appeared at her elbow, the empty scotch glass disappearing into his large hand. He picked up a fresh bottle of gin and poured a splash into her glass without her asking. "He's from the old country," Silas observed, his voice low and steady. "He's from the place I ran from." "He carries himself like a man who knows he's carrying too much." "He chose the weight." Rory picked up her glass and held it up to the light, watching the green neon glow through the clear liquid. "We all did." Silas grunted, a soft sound of agreement, and went back to his glasses.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:22:00.262Z" 5/19/2026, 7:22:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The word felt like [like]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.169
leniency0.337
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.024
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1990
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1990
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"marble"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count2
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"rhythmic"
2"scanned"
3"warmth"
4"weight"
5"pristine"
6"marble"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"unspoken"
10"reminder"
11"echoed"
12"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1989
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Law of Nations"
1"clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1149
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Rhys"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rhys"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Silas10
Prague1
Rory16
London3
Swansea1
Llanelli1
Rhys21
Nest1
Europe1
Clara1
Hughes1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Rhys"
3"Clara"
4"Hughes"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"London"
3"Swansea"
4"Europe"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.586
windowScore0.5
51.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a page ripped from a London l"
1"seemed deeper than a twenty-six-year-old’s had any right to be"
2"felt like dry sand in her mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1989
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs109
mean18.25
std13.46
cv0.738
sampleLengths
059
146
223
348
41
535
627
71
821
99
1027
1116
1232
1332
1415
1512
1616
1716
186
1922
209
2126
2211
2336
249
2512
2618
276
285
2912
304
3135
3210
338
3418
3516
3646
3718
3811
3910
4021
412
4219
4310
449
4514
4612
474
4845
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"were manicured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs180
matches
0"wasn't overtly listening"
1"was cataloging"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences155
ratio0.006
matches
0"The name conjured a vivid memory of Cardiff—the golden-haired girl from the rowing team who used to laugh at Rhys’s jokes when Rory was too busy studying."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1162
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.025817555938037865
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004302925989672977
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean12.83
std7.34
cv0.572
sampleLengths
015
119
216
39
410
514
622
77
816
916
1017
1115
121
1335
144
1510
1613
171
1821
199
2014
2113
2212
234
2432
2510
2622
2715
2812
2916
3016
316
329
3313
349
3510
3616
3711
387
3929
409
4112
4218
436
445
4512
464
4726
489
4910
50.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32903225806451614
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences83
matches
0"His left leg lagged a"
1"He polished a highball glass"
2"He had a sharp, angular"
3"It took Rory three seconds"
4"He looked like a page"
5"He caught her eye."
6"He walked over, his leather-soled"
7"She tightened her grip on"
8"He pulled out the stool"
9"He gestured to the bartender"
10"She took a slow sip"
11"He didn't drink right away,"
12"He let out a short,"
13"He stared into his glass."
14"He looked her up and"
15"He wasn't overtly listening, but"
16"He reached out, his hand"
17"His eyes took in the"
18"His presence was a subtle"
19"He turned back to Rory."
ratio0.349
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences83
matches
0"Rain lashed the windowpane, distorting"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"Rory sat in her corner"
3"Condensation dripped down the side"
4"His left leg lagged a"
5"He polished a highball glass"
6"The brass bell above the"
7"A gust of damp city"
8"A man in a tailored"
9"He had a sharp, angular"
10"It took Rory three seconds"
11"He looked like a page"
12"He caught her eye."
13"Recognition flared, sharp and sudden,"
14"He walked over, his leather-soled"
15"She tightened her grip on"
16"He pulled out the stool"
17"The scent of expensive cologne"
18"He gestured to the bartender"
19"Silas gave a single, slow"
ratio0.94
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Yet, there was a hesitation"
ratio0.012
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He looked like a page ripped from a London lifestyle magazine, a far cry from the boy who used to pull all-nighters in the Swansea library wearing mismatched so…"
1"She took a slow sip of her gin, letting the juniper burn her throat before answering."
2"He reached out, his hand hovering over hers on the bar, but Rory pulled her arm back, picking up her drink."
3"The name conjured a vivid memory of Cardiff—the golden-haired girl from the rowing team who used to laugh at Rhys’s jokes when Rory was too busy studying."
4"For a second, the mask of the successful London solicitor slipped entirely, revealing the boy who used to argue about philosophy over cheap cider."
5"His leather shoes clicked against the floorboards, a rhythmic departure that grew fainter with every step."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory met, her blue eyes piercing and cold"
1"Silas observed, his voice low and steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
1"Silas observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.048
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.048
81.7203%