Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V0Y9PYFZZCDYCRR13ST80

Run Details

Duration:
29.6s
Cost:
$0.052605
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Ptolemy was asleep on a stack of fifteenth-century translation notes when the heavy, deliberate knock sounded at the door. Three raps. Not the frantic pounding of a courier, nor the casual, erratic thump of Eva returning from her late-night archives. It was measured, rhythmic, and demanding. Rory paused, a mug of lukewarm black tea halfway to her lips. She set it down on a stack of yellowed parchments, pushing her straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ears. She crossed the cramped living room, navigating the labyrinth of books, scrolls, and research notes that littered every available surface of the Brick Lane flat. The rich, heavy aroma of cardamom and fried onions from the curry house downstairs drifted up through the floorboards—a permanent, comforting fixture of her existence here. She reached the door and paused, her hand hovering over the top lock. Her left wrist caught the amber light of the hallway lamp, the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood fall in Cardiff pale against her skin. Another three raps. Rory took a breath, steeling herself, and set to work on the security. She unlatched the first deadbolt with a metallic click. The second released with a heavier clack. The third yielded with a dull, final thud. Eva’s paranoia was exhaustively documented in these locks, but standing on the other side of the wood was someone who defied simple security. She turned the brass knob and pulled the door inward. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor. The flickering, yellow hallway bulb cast sharp, dramatic shadows across his face, highlighting the high cheekbones and the slicked-back platinum blond hair that looked silver in the half-light. He wore an impeccable, tailored charcoal suit that looked entirely dry despite the steady drizzle tapping against the iron fire escape outside. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his hands gloved in fine black leather. But it was his eyes that arrested her, stripping away her carefully constructed defenses in a single second. One amber, one black. They burned with a quiet, dangerous intensity that she had spent the last three months trying to forget. "Rory," he said. His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying the faintest, elegant trace of his Marseille upbringing. Her breath caught in her throat, but she forced her face into a mask of cool indifference. She was a Cardiff barrister’s daughter; she knew how to hide her hand. "Lucien. You’re a long way from Mayfair." "May I come in?" he asked. He didn't wait for her consent, stepping past her with a fluid grace that made the cane seem more like an accessory than a necessity. The tip of the ivory handle clicked softly against the linoleum. Ptolemy immediately woke, his tabby ears flattening as he sniffed the air. He let out a low, vibrating hiss before sliding off the research notes and darting beneath the heavy velvet fringe of Eva’s armchair. Lucien paid the cat no mind, though a faint, wry smile touched the corner of his lips. The flat was far too small for him. At five-feet-eleven, he wasn’t a giant, but his presence filled the cramped room, pushing out the smell of turmeric and replacing it with the scent of rain, expensive cedarwood cologne, and the faint, unmistakable trace of ozone and ash that belonged to his father’s realm of Avaros. Rory closed the door, turning the three deadbolts back into place one by one to buy herself time. Her hands shook slightly, a detail she hoped he didn't notice, though with those heterochromatic eyes, he rarely missed a thing. She turned around and crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe to ground herself. "You shouldn't be here," she said. "We agreed." "You agreed," Lucien corrected, turning to face her. He rested both hands on the silver-collared head of his cane, his posture relaxed but his gaze unyielding. "I merely capitulated to your desire for distance." "It wasn't a desire, Lucien. It was a necessity." She looked at him, desperately fighting the pull of the memory of their last night together—the desperate, rain-slicked kiss behind Silas’ bar, the terrifying heat of him, and the sudden realization of how easily she could lose herself in his chaotic world. "I fled Cardiff to get away from a man who wanted to control me. I didn't come to London to get caught in the crossfire of a half-demon information broker's turf wars." "I have never sought to control you, Rory." "No, you just kept me in the dark," she shot back, her voice rising slightly before she forced it back down. "You treated me like an asset. Or a liability. I never knew which. One day you’re saving my life, and the next you’re telling me that knowing your name is a death sentence. I can’t live like that. I have a normal life. I deliver food for Yu-Fei. I look after Eva's cat. I read law textbooks." Lucien took a step toward her. The distance between them shrank to less than a yard. The heat radiating off him was a physical force, a reminder of the half-demon blood running hotter than any human’s. Rory refused to back down, lifting her chin to meet his gaze, though her heart was hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. "You are many things, Aurora Carter, but you have never been normal," he murmured. He reached out, his gloved fingers stopping just inches from her cheek. He hesitated, then let his hand fall back to his side. "And you were never an asset. You were only ever a liability because you held my heart in your hands, and you had absolutely no idea what to do with it." The honesty of the statement knocked the wind of her. She stared at him, her bright blue eyes wide. She looked away, focusing on a stack of translation notes on the coffee table, her throat tight. "Don't do that," she whispered. "Don't come here and say things like that. Not after three months of absolute silence." "I stayed away because I wanted to give you the quiet life you claimed to want," Lucien said. He stepped closer still, the scent of him wrapping around her. "But the quiet is over, Rory. The ward on the Golden Empress was breached tonight." She looked up sharply, her eyes locking onto his. "Yu-Fei? Is she hurt?" "She is safe. I secured her before I came here," Lucien said. "But the thralls who broke the threshold weren't looking for her. They were looking for you." Cold dread pooled in her stomach, heavy and sharp. "Why me?" "Because they know you are my weakness," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a harsh, resonant whisper. He took the final step, eliminating the last barrier of space between them. He reached out again, and this time, he didn't hesitate. His leather-gloved hand gently cupped her jaw, his thumb brushing over the soft skin of her cheekbone. "They know that if they touch you, I will burn this city to ash. And they are foolish enough to want to see the fire." Rory's breath hitched. She should pull away. She should tell him to leave, to let her face whatever was coming on her own terms. But his touch was warm, and she was so incredibly tired of trying to stand alone against the dark. "You're a fool, Lucien Moreau," she breathed, her hand reaching up to grasp his wrist. Her fingers pressed against the black leather of his glove, right over his steady, heavy pulse. "Undoubtedly," he murmured, his amber eye reflecting the pale light of the room, while his black eye seemed to swallow it whole. "But I am a fool who has missed you beyond reason." She closed her eyes, leaning her head into his palm. The anger she had nursed for ninety days evaporated, leaving only the raw, aching truth of how much she had wanted him to find her. "If they're looking for me, we can't stay here. Eva's flat isn't safe." "It is not," he agreed. But he didn't move. He leaned down, his forehead resting against hers, his breath warm against her lips. "But we have a moment." "Lucien—" He cut her off, his lips meeting hers. It wasn't like the frantic, desperate collision behind the bar. This was slow, deliberate, and thick with all the unspoken apologies and longing of their separation. He tasted of rain and cedar, of danger and a deep, terrifying comfort that she had never found anywhere else. Rory's hands slid from his wrist up to his shoulders, her fingers gripping the fine wool of his charcoal suit, pulling him closer until she could feel the hard line of his chest against hers. The world outside Eva's cramped flat—the curry house, the rain, the looming threat in the London shadows—faded into background noise. For this moment, in the cluttered room surrounded by forgotten history, they were the only two things that mattered. When he finally pulled back, his breathing was as shallow as hers. He looked down at her, his heterochromatic eyes tracing every detail of her face, as if ensuring she was entirely real. "Are you ready?" he asked, his voice rough. Rory let out a breath, a small, genuine smile finally breaking through her guarded demeanor. She reached over to the table, grabbing her keys and her jacket from the back of the chair. "I suppose I am. Let's go make some trouble."
created_at"2026-05-19T19:22:24.962Z" 5/19/2026, 7:22:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1580
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"sharply"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1580
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"constructed"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"desire"
count2
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"absolutely"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"unspoken"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"looming"
count1
19
word"tracing"
count1
20
word"ensuring"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"measured"
2"rhythmic"
3"navigating"
4"comforting"
5"constructed"
6"intensity"
7"velvet"
8"desire"
9"chaotic"
10"reminder"
11"absolutely"
12"silence"
13"stomach"
14"whisper"
15"pulse"
16"unspoken"
17"could feel"
18"looming"
19"tracing"
20"ensuring"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1576
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1205
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick1
Lane1
Cardiff2
Moreau1
Marseille1
Avaros1
Lucien7
Cold1
London1
Rory7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"Marseille"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if ensuring she was entirely real"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1576
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean39.4
std23.73
cv0.602
sampleLengths
046
182
238
33
460
510
671
740
819
937
1042
1152
1255
1353
148
1534
1683
178
1878
1960
2068
2136
2220
2344
2413
2528
2611
2782
2843
2931
3033
3148
3228
331
348
3581
3639
3733
388
3942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs195
matches
0"was hammering"
1"was coming"
35.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences106
ratio0.038
matches
0"The rich, heavy aroma of cardamom and fried onions from the curry house downstairs drifted up through the floorboards—a permanent, comforting fixture of her existence here."
1"She was a Cardiff barrister’s daughter; she knew how to hide her hand."
2"\"It wasn't a desire, Lucien. It was a necessity.\" She looked at him, desperately fighting the pull of the memory of their last night together—the desperate, rain-slicked kiss behind Silas’ bar, the terrifying heat of him, and the sudden realization of how easily she could lose herself in his chaotic world."
3"The world outside Eva's cramped flat—the curry house, the rain, the looming threat in the London shadows—faded into background noise."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount922
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"desperate, rain-slicked kiss"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.024945770065075923
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01193058568329718
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean14.87
std9.57
cv0.644
sampleLengths
019
12
219
36
412
519
625
726
813
925
103
1113
129
137
148
1523
1610
177
1828
1922
2014
2118
224
2318
243
2516
2617
2713
287
296
3025
3111
3212
3323
3417
358
3647
3718
3821
3914
406
412
428
4318
448
4551
4632
478
4821
4957
44.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.32075471698113206
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences79
matches
0"It was measured, rhythmic, and"
1"She set it down on"
2"She crossed the cramped living"
3"She reached the door and"
4"Her left wrist caught the"
5"She unlatched the first deadbolt"
6"She turned the brass knob"
7"He wore an impeccable, tailored"
8"He leaned slightly on his"
9"They burned with a quiet,"
10"His voice was a low,"
11"Her breath caught in her"
12"She was a Cardiff barrister’s"
13"He didn't wait for her"
14"He let out a low,"
15"Her hands shook slightly, a"
16"She turned around and crossed"
17"He rested both hands on"
18"She looked at him, desperately"
19"she shot back, her voice"
ratio0.532
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"Ptolemy was asleep on a"
1"It was measured, rhythmic, and"
2"Rory paused, a mug of"
3"She set it down on"
4"She crossed the cramped living"
5"The rich, heavy aroma of"
6"She reached the door and"
7"Her left wrist caught the"
8"Another three raps."
9"Rory took a breath, steeling"
10"She unlatched the first deadbolt"
11"The second released with a"
12"The third yielded with a"
13"Eva’s paranoia was exhaustively documented"
14"She turned the brass knob"
15"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
16"The flickering, yellow hallway bulb"
17"He wore an impeccable, tailored"
18"He leaned slightly on his"
19"They burned with a quiet,"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Eva’s paranoia was exhaustively documented in these locks, but standing on the other side of the wood was someone who defied simple security."
1"The flickering, yellow hallway bulb cast sharp, dramatic shadows across his face, highlighting the high cheekbones and the slicked-back platinum blond hair that…"
2"He wore an impeccable, tailored charcoal suit that looked entirely dry despite the steady drizzle tapping against the iron fire escape outside."
3"But it was his eyes that arrested her, stripping away her carefully constructed defenses in a single second."
4"His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying the faintest, elegant trace of his Marseille upbringing."
5"He didn't wait for her consent, stepping past her with a fluid grace that made the cane seem more like an accessory than a necessity."
6"At five-feet-eleven, he wasn’t a giant, but his presence filled the cramped room, pushing out the smell of turmeric and replacing it with the scent of rain, exp…"
7"Rory's hands slid from his wrist up to his shoulders, her fingers gripping the fine wool of his charcoal suit, pulling him closer until she could feel the hard …"
8"For this moment, in the cluttered room surrounded by forgotten history, they were the only two things that mattered."
9"He looked down at her, his heterochromatic eyes tracing every detail of her face, as if ensuring she was entirely real."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien corrected, turning to face her"
1"she shot back, her voice rising slightly before she forced it back down"
2"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a harsh, resonant whisper"
3"she breathed, her hand reaching up to grasp his wrist"
4"he asked, his voice rough"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
5"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.394
leniency0.788
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.364
70.4968%