"The flat was a claustrophobic maze of Eva’s research—parchment scrolls, heavy grimoires, and loose-leaf notes stacked so high they threatened to block the grime-filmed windows."
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"But it was his eyes that caught the light—and Rory’s breath."
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"One was a deep, liquid black; the other, a bright, predatory amber."
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"She could hear his footsteps behind her—quiet, measured, the footsteps of a man who never stumbled."
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"It was this contrast that had ruined her for anyone else—the lethal weapon who handled her with reverence."
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"Lucien let out a low, ragged sound against her mouth—a sound that was entirely unpolished, entirely human—and wrapped his other arm around her waist, lifting her slightly off her feet."
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"Rory slid the top one back with a metallic screech that sounded far too loud in the cramped hallway."
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"He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his five-foot-eleven frame without a single crease, despite the damp London drizzle that slicked the streets outside."
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"But it was his eyes that caught the light—and Rory’s breath."
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"His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying the faint, polished cadence of his Marseille upbringing."
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"He had pulled her into an alleyway, his hands surprisingly warm when they gripped her jaw, his heterochromatic eyes burning with an intensity that had terrified…"
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"He had leaned in, his breath hot against her lips, whispering promises of safety, of a partnership that felt dangerously like something more."
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"And then, the next morning, he had sent an icy, professional text message terminating their arrangement, treating her like nothing more than a temporary liabili…"
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"For all his power, all his talent for violence and secrets, he held her as if she were made of spun glass."
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"But she found only a quiet, desperate sincerity that broke through her defenses."
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"Lucien’s hand slid into her hair, his fingers tangling in the black strands, pulling her impossibly closer."
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"He tasted of rain and something dark and sweet, a intoxicating heat that made her knees weak."
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"She clung to him, her other hand rising to touch his cheek, her thumb brushing past his temple."
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"Lucien let out a low, ragged sound against her mouth—a sound that was entirely unpolished, entirely human—and wrapped his other arm around her waist, lifting he…"