Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V2Y3DNAXZXTBW3W26ZZQM

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Duration:
19.4s
Cost:
$0.032085
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The smell of toasted cumin and fried garlic from the curry house downstairs always found its way through the floorboards of Eva’s flat, but tonight it was thick enough to taste. Rory sat on the edge of a sagging armchair, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. On the low table in front of her, Ptolemy the tabby cat was curled asleep on a stack of yellowed, leather-bound journals. The flat was a claustrophobic maze of Eva’s research—parchment scrolls, heavy grimoires, and loose-leaf notes stacked so high they threatened to block the grime-filmed windows. It was supposed to be a safe house, a quiet place to hide from the ghosts of Cardiff and the bruises Evan had left on her soul. Then came the knock. It wasn't the frantic, rhythmic tapping Eva used, nor was it the heavy, impatient thud of a delivery driver. It was three slow, deliberate strikes. Elegant, even in its execution. Rory froze. Ptolemy’s ears twitched, but the cat didn't wake. Slowly, Rory stood, her shoulder-length black hair brushing against her collarbone. She slipped her hand into her pocket, her fingers closing instinctively around her keys as she walked toward the door. Three deadbolts secured the thick oak frame. Rory slid the top one back with a metallic screech that sounded far too loud in the cramped hallway. She threw the second, then the third, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. She knew who it was before she even opened the door. The air in the hallway had already grown perceptibly cooler, carrying a faint, unmistakable trace of ozone and expensive cologne. She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing, framed by the dim light of a flickering bulb. He was, as always, impeccably presented. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his five-foot-eleven frame without a single crease, despite the damp London drizzle that slicked the streets outside. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. In his right hand, he held his ivory-handled cane, his long fingers resting casually over the carved grip. But it was his eyes that caught the light—and Rory’s breath. One was a deep, liquid black; the other, a bright, predatory amber. "Rory," he said. His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying the faint, polished cadence of his Marseille upbringing. "Lucien," she replied, keeping her voice as flat and level as she could. She gripped the edge of the door, refusing to step aside. "You're a long way from Mayfair." "It seems I am." The amber eye narrowed slightly, scanning her face, taking in the defensive set of her shoulders, the way she blocked the entrance. "May I come in?" "No." A faint, amused smile touched the corner of his mouth, though it didn't reach his eyes. "Always so hospitable. The rain in East London is particularly acidic tonight, Rory. Have pity on my tailoring." "Your tailoring can survive a drizzle, Moreau. Why are you here?" It had been three weeks. Three weeks since they had stood in the rain outside a derelict warehouse in Southwark, the adrenaline of a deal gone sideways still pounding in their veins. He had pulled her into an alleyway, his hands surprisingly warm when they gripped her jaw, his heterochromatic eyes burning with an intensity that had terrified her. He had leaned in, his breath hot against her lips, whispering promises of safety, of a partnership that felt dangerously like something more. And then, the next morning, he had sent an icy, professional text message terminating their arrangement, treating her like nothing more than a temporary liability. She had fled to Eva’s flat the same afternoon, determined to erase the memory of his touch. "We have business to discuss," Lucien said, his tone softening just enough to set off alarm bells in her mind. He didn't wait for her permission this time. He stepped forward, a fluid, graceful movement that forced her to step back or be pressed against him. She retreated, and he slipped into the flat, closing the door behind him and sliding the deadbolts back into place with practiced ease. The space immediately felt smaller, dominated by his presence. Ptolemy finally woke, lifting his head to blink lazily at the half-demon before stretching and settling back down. "Business," Rory scoffed, folding her arms. "Our business concluded three weeks ago when you decided I was a security risk. Or have you forgotten your own parting words?" Lucien leaned his cane against the stack of books by the door. He turned to face her, the amber eye catching the amber glow of the streetlamp outside the window. "I said you were a distraction. There is a difference." "Not to me." She walked past him, needing to put space between them. She stood by the window, looking out over the rain-slicked pavement of Brick Lane, where the neon signs of the curry houses bled pink and yellow into the puddles. She could hear his footsteps behind her—quiet, measured, the footsteps of a man who never stumbled. "You left," he said quietly. "You pushed me out." Rory turned to face him, her bright blue eyes fiercely bright in the dim room. "You don't get to play the broker by day and the savior by night, Lucien. I am not one of your chess pieces. I don't wait on a board until you decide you need a favor." Lucien stopped a few feet away. Close enough that she could smell the rain on his wool coat, close enough to see the slight, rare tension in his jaw. The cool, arrogant fixer was gone, replaced by something raw and unsettled. "I did what was necessary to keep you out of the crosshairs of Avaros," he said, his voice dropping an octave. "My father's associates do not play by the rules of the underworld, Rory. If they knew what you were to me—" "What I am to you?" she interrupted, her laughter sharp and devoid of mirth. "And what is that, Lucien? A delivery girl from Cardiff? A convenient distraction?" He closed the distance between them in a single, silent stride. Before she could step back, his hand came up, his fingers brushing against the side of her neck. His skin was always warmer than a human's, a subtle reminder of the demonic blood that flowed through his veins. Rory shivered, but she didn't pull away. "You know exactly what you are to me," he whispered. His thumb traced the line of her jaw, his touch incredibly light, almost hesitant. For all his power, all his talent for violence and secrets, he held her as if she were made of spun glass. It was this contrast that had ruined her for anyone else—the lethal weapon who handled her with reverence. "You walked away," she whispered, her voice cracking slightly. The anger was draining out of her, leaving only the hollow ache she had been nursing for twenty-one days. "You left me in that alley, and then you sent a cold little note. Do you have any idea how that felt?" "I do," he said. He tilted her head up, forcing her to look into his mismatched eyes. In the dark, the black eye seemed to swallow the room, while the amber one glowed like a dying ember. "It was the hardest thing I have ever done. I spent three weeks watching your flat from the shadow of the pub downstairs. I watched you leave for your shifts. I watched you come back. I wanted to come up every single night." "Why didn't you?" "Because as long as I am near you, you are in danger." His gaze drifted down to her lips, then back to her eyes. "But today, the threat was neutralized. The contract is off. And the first thing I did was come here." Rory’s heart gave a violent thud. She looked at his face, searching for the lie, the calculation she always looked for in his world. But she found only a quiet, desperate sincerity that broke through her defenses. "You're an idiot, Lucien Moreau," she breathed. "Undoubtedly," he murmured. Slowly, deliberately, he leaned down. Rory closed her eyes, her hand reaching out to grab the lapel of his charcoal suit, her fingers curling into the fine wool. When his lips met hers, the relief was so sharp it felt like pain. It wasn't the tentative kiss of their past near-misses. It was deep, hungry, and heavy with the weight of three weeks of silence. Lucien’s hand slid into her hair, his fingers tangling in the black strands, pulling her impossibly closer. He tasted of rain and something dark and sweet, a intoxicating heat that made her knees weak. She clung to him, her other hand rising to touch his cheek, her thumb brushing past his temple. Lucien let out a low, ragged sound against her mouth—a sound that was entirely unpolished, entirely human—and wrapped his other arm around her waist, lifting her slightly off her feet. The books, the curry house, the dangers of London’s supernatural underworld all faded into the background. There was only the heat of him, the scent of him, and the quiet, rhythmic sound of the rain against the glass.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:23:30.29Z" 5/19/2026, 7:23:30 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The amber eye narrowed slightly [slightly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
77.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1554
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"lazily"
3"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1554
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"determined"
count1
6
word"practiced ease"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"unsettled"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"rhythmic"
2"scanning"
3"pounding"
4"intensity"
5"determined"
6"practiced ease"
7"footsteps"
8"measured"
9"tension"
10"unsettled"
11"reminder"
12"traced"
13"weight"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1548
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1248
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Ptolemy3
Cardiff1
Evan1
Rory10
Moreau1
London2
Marseille1
Southwark1
Lucien6
Brick1
Lane1
Slowly2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Moreau"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"Southwark"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like pain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1548
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean36
std24.67
cv0.685
sampleLengths
031
193
24
330
410
531
674
75
860
941
1019
1130
1230
131
1434
1511
16107
1717
1846
1950
2028
2140
223
2355
245
2555
2641
2742
2827
2956
3010
3154
3250
3380
343
3543
3637
377
383
3942
4057
4148
4238
85.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences87
matches
0"was curled"
1"was supposed"
2"was slicked"
3"was gone"
4"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was draining"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences102
ratio0.059
matches
0"The flat was a claustrophobic maze of Eva’s research—parchment scrolls, heavy grimoires, and loose-leaf notes stacked so high they threatened to block the grime-filmed windows."
1"But it was his eyes that caught the light—and Rory’s breath."
2"One was a deep, liquid black; the other, a bright, predatory amber."
3"She could hear his footsteps behind her—quiet, measured, the footsteps of a man who never stumbled."
4"It was this contrast that had ruined her for anyone else—the lethal weapon who handled her with reverence."
5"Lucien let out a low, ragged sound against her mouth—a sound that was entirely unpolished, entirely human—and wrapped his other arm around her waist, lifting her slightly off her feet."
90.99% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1266
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"yellowed, leather-bound journals."
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04344391785150079
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.018957345971563982
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean15.18
std8.07
cv0.532
sampleLengths
031
119
222
325
427
54
619
76
85
92
108
1111
1220
137
1419
1517
1611
1720
185
1916
206
2125
2213
2318
2411
2512
263
2716
2813
2911
306
3126
324
331
3416
3518
3611
375
3827
3927
4023
4125
4217
4320
448
4518
4623
479
4818
496
52.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37254901960784315
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then came the knock."
1"Slowly, Rory stood, her shoulder-length"
2"Slowly, deliberately, he leaned down."
ratio0.037
27.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences81
matches
0"It was supposed to be"
1"It wasn't the frantic, rhythmic"
2"It was three slow, deliberate"
3"She slipped her hand into"
4"She threw the second, then"
5"She knew who it was"
6"She pulled the door open."
7"He was, as always, impeccably"
8"He wore a tailored charcoal"
9"His platinum blond hair was"
10"His voice was a low,"
11"she replied, keeping her voice"
12"She gripped the edge of"
13"It had been three weeks."
14"He had pulled her into"
15"He had leaned in, his"
16"She had fled to Eva’s"
17"He didn't wait for her"
18"He stepped forward, a fluid,"
19"She retreated, and he slipped"
ratio0.481
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences81
matches
0"The smell of toasted cumin"
1"Rory sat on the edge"
2"The flat was a claustrophobic"
3"It was supposed to be"
4"It wasn't the frantic, rhythmic"
5"It was three slow, deliberate"
6"Ptolemy’s ears twitched, but the"
7"She slipped her hand into"
8"Rory slid the top one"
9"She threw the second, then"
10"She knew who it was"
11"The air in the hallway"
12"She pulled the door open."
13"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
14"He was, as always, impeccably"
15"He wore a tailored charcoal"
16"His platinum blond hair was"
17"His voice was a low,"
18"she replied, keeping her voice"
19"She gripped the edge of"
ratio0.778
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Before she could step back,"
ratio0.012
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Rory slid the top one back with a metallic screech that sounded far too loud in the cramped hallway."
1"He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his five-foot-eleven frame without a single crease, despite the damp London drizzle that slicked the streets outside."
2"But it was his eyes that caught the light—and Rory’s breath."
3"His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying the faint, polished cadence of his Marseille upbringing."
4"He had pulled her into an alleyway, his hands surprisingly warm when they gripped her jaw, his heterochromatic eyes burning with an intensity that had terrified…"
5"He had leaned in, his breath hot against her lips, whispering promises of safety, of a partnership that felt dangerously like something more."
6"And then, the next morning, he had sent an icy, professional text message terminating their arrangement, treating her like nothing more than a temporary liabili…"
7"For all his power, all his talent for violence and secrets, he held her as if she were made of spun glass."
8"But she found only a quiet, desperate sincerity that broke through her defenses."
9"Lucien’s hand slid into her hair, his fingers tangling in the black strands, pulling her impossibly closer."
10"He tasted of rain and something dark and sweet, a intoxicating heat that made her knees weak."
11"She clung to him, her other hand rising to touch his cheek, her thumb brushing past his temple."
12"Lucien let out a low, ragged sound against her mouth—a sound that was entirely unpolished, entirely human—and wrapped his other arm around her waist, lifting he…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
1"she interrupted, her laughter sharp and devoid of mirth"
2"she whispered, her voice cracking slightly"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she interrupted (interrupt)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.333
76.7688%