Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V39RB3WR6C4TNBTW6YKAC

Run Details

Duration:
39.4s
Cost:
$0.072077
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The wrought-iron gates of Richmond Park lay half a mile behind. Rory adjusted the strap of her satchel, her boots sinking into the saturated turf. Frost clung to the dead bracken of the heath, but the air ahead shivered with an unnatural, heavy warmth. She reached the perimeter. Ancient oak standing stones, grey and split by centuries of lightning, rose from the mist like a circle of decaying teeth. Beyond them, the darkness deepened into an impossible velvet black. The ambient rumble of London—the distant whisper of the A3, the drone of late-night flights into Heathrow—died instantly. It was as if someone had laid a giant palm over the earth, smothering every vibration. Rory gripped the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she hadn't broken since childhood. Beneath her coat, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem beat against her sternum, heat radiating through her thin cotton shirt. She fished it out, letting the silver chain swing. In the gloom, the stone pulsed with a low, internal light, casting bloody ripples across the grass. "Silas?" Her voice sounded flat, stripped of echo. The dense air swallowed the syllables before they could travel five paces. No one answered. She stepped past the first oak monolith. The temperature jumped ten degrees. The crunch of frozen grass gave way to the soft, spongy yield of damp peat. Beneath her boots, pale wildflowers bloomed in the dark—an impossible carpet of white wood anemones and bluebells, thriving without a sun. They smelled sweet, cloying, like rotting peaches left too long in a sealed drawer. Rory took a slow, deliberate breath. She had to locate the source of the heat. The pendant's pulse grew sharper, a rhythmic sting against her bare skin. A snap broke the quiet. She froze. Her eyes scanned the dark. The sound had come from her left, where a thicket of gnarled hazel-wood bent low over a trickling stream. The water ran black and silent, reflecting none of the starlight. "Who's there?" She dropped her hand to her pocket, fingers closing around her keys. She slid the brass spikes between her knuckles. The shadow between two hazel trunks shifted. It didn't step forward; it merely elongated, stretching upward until it touched the canopy. A trick of the low-frequency light from her pendant. Rory forced herself to believe that. She took three steps forward, her eyes locked on the spot. The air grew thicker. A wet, rhythmic clicking sound started up behind her. *Clack. Clack. Clack.* Like fingernails tapping against dry bone. She spun around, heels digging into the peat. The standing stones looked further away now, their massive shapes blurred by a sudden, rising ground fog. The wildflowers began to bow their heads, their petals curling shut as if a heavy footstep were pressing them down one by one, moving in a direct line toward her. Yet the grass remained empty. "I don't have time for games," Rory spoke to the dark, her voice tighter this time, the cool-headed pragmatism she prided herself on fraying around the edges. "Show yourself." Nothing. The silence returned, heavier than before. It pressed against her eardrums like deep water. The pendant burnt her skin. She winced, dropping the stone. It swung on its silver link, casting frantic red beams across the ancient bark of the oaks. The red light caught something. A pale face, suspended ten feet in the air, wedged in the fork of a massive branch. Rory’s breath hitched. She didn't scream. She stared. The face was wide, features dry and stretched, lacking any eyes—only deep, moss-lined hollows where eyelids should have been. It had no neck. It seemed to grow directly out of the wood, its bark-like skin peeling at the cheeks. As she watched, the mouth split open. It didn't speak with a voice. It leaked a sound—a high, vibrating hum, like a swarm of wasps trapped inside a hollow wall. Rory stepped backward. Her heel caught on a thick root, and she stumbled, her palms slapping into the wet earth. The scent of ozone and copper flooded her nose. When she looked up, the face in the tree was gone. The humming hadn't stopped. It had multiplied. It came from the left. From the right. From the roots beneath her fingers. The soil vibrated, sending tiny shivers up her arms. "Rory..." A whisper. This time, it was a voice. A familiar one. Rory scrambled to her feet, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. She wiped her muddy hands on her trousers. "Eva?" The voice had sounded exactly like her friend, but the cadence was wrong. The vowels were too long, drawn out into a mockery of human speech. "Rory... come back... the tea is... cold..." The voice drifted from a dense patch of ferns near the center of the grove. The ferns rustled, though there was no breeze. The air remained dead, suffocatingly warm. Rory took a step backward, toward the boundary stones. The pendant was now roaring hot, the silver chain searing her collarbone. She grabbed the metal with her sleeve-covered hand, trying to pull it away from her skin, but the heat penetrated the fabric. A silhouette emerged from the ferns. It was tall, impossibly thin, its limbs moving with the stuttering, liquid grace of an insect. It wore the shape of a person, but the proportions were warped. The arms hung past its knees, the fingers scraping the tops of the wildflowers. It moved without making a sound on the peat, gliding through the white blossoms. "Stay back." She pointed the brass keys at the shape. Her hand shook, just a fraction. The entity stopped. It tilted its head, a sharp, jerky movement that ended with its neck bent at an impossible ninety-degree angle. The face was a blank oval of grey skin, save for a single, horizontal slit where a mouth should be. It mimicked her voice. "Stay back... stay back..." The words tumbled out, layered over one another like an untuned radio. The pitch rose, mimicking her childhood Cardiff accent, then dropped into the deep, gravelly tone of Silas, then back to Eva's panicked gasps. The standing stones behind Rory seemed to recede further. The gap between them narrowed, the ancient oaks sliding together like teeth closing a mouth. The path she had taken into the grove was disappearing. She turned and ran. Her boots tore through the wildflowers. The cloying scent of decay grew overpowering, clawing at her throat, making her gag. The ground grew soft, mud suctioning her feet, trying to drag her down with every stride. Behind her, the clicking resumed. It wasn't one set of fingernails now. It was dozens. *Clack-clack-clack-clack.* They paced her on either side, invisible in the deep shadows of the undergrowth. Something pale and multi-jointed darted between two tree trunks to her right, gone before her eyes could focus on it. "Rory..." the choir of voices called from the dark, closer now, right at her shoulder. "Rory..." She reached the perimeter. The gap between the two central oak stones was barely two feet wide. She jammed herself into the crevice. The petrified wood was cold, a stark contrast to the stifling heat of the grove. It scraped against her shoulder blades, the rough bark tearing at her coat. Something tapped her ankle. A cold, damp grip, like wet leather, tightened around her boot. She cried out, kicking backward with her free leg. Her heel struck something dense and yielding. The grip loosened just enough. She lunged forward, throwing her weight through the narrow gap. She tumbled out onto the frozen heath of Richmond Park. The sudden cold slapped her face. She lay panting on the frosty turf, her breath blooming in the crisp, winter air. Above her, the orange glare of London’s light pollution stained the clouds. The distant, comforting rumble of a night bus echoed from the lane. She rolled over, looking back at the grove. The standing stones stood silent and motionless under the starlight. There was no fog. No hum. No tall, pale shapes. Just the dark, empty line of ancient trees. The Heartstone Pendant against her chest went cold, its crimson glow fading back into a dull, dormant red. She pushed herself up, her hands trembling as she brushed the dead grass from her knees, her eyes never leaving the dark space between the stones. This place wasn't finished with her. She knew it. She could still feel the warmth of the grove clinging to her coat like grease. Keep going, she told herself. Walk. Don't look back. A single white wildflower lay on the frozen ground just outside the stone boundary, its petals slowly blackening in the cold.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:23:42.224Z" 5/19/2026, 7:23:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1459
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1459
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count2
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"roaring"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"comforting"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"velvet"
2"whisper"
3"throbbed"
4"gloom"
5"pulsed"
6"echo"
7"pulse"
8"rhythmic"
9"scanned"
10"silence"
11"vibrated"
12"familiar"
13"roaring"
14"searing"
15"stark"
16"weight"
17"comforting"
18"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1454
ratio0.003
matches
0"Clack. Clack. Clack."
1"Clack-clack-clack-clack."
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Keep going, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1426
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
London2
Heathrow1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Like1
Cardiff1
Silas1
Eva1
Rory10
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was as if someone had laid a giant palm over the earth, smothering every vibration"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1454
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean22.03
std17.84
cv0.81
sampleLengths
044
14
265
366
41
519
63
77
855
927
105
1137
122
1320
1447
1513
163
176
1855
195
2029
2115
2232
2317
248
2539
267
2723
2840
297
3023
311
3211
3323
341
3526
367
3729
3843
396
4056
412
4214
4342
444
454
4635
4734
484
4936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs231
matches
0"were pressing"
1"was disappearing"
50.09% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences154
ratio0.032
matches
0"The ambient rumble of London—the distant whisper of the A3, the drone of late-night flights into Heathrow—died instantly."
1"Beneath her boots, pale wildflowers bloomed in the dark—an impossible carpet of white wood anemones and bluebells, thriving without a sun."
2"It didn't step forward; it merely elongated, stretching upward until it touched the canopy."
3"The face was wide, features dry and stretched, lacking any eyes—only deep, moss-lined hollows where eyelids should have been."
4"It leaked a sound—a high, vibrating hum, like a swarm of wasps trapped inside a hollow wall."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1441
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.0263705759888966
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006939625260235947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean9.44
std6.21
cv0.658
sampleLengths
011
114
219
34
421
510
618
716
818
97
1015
119
1217
131
147
1512
163
177
185
1915
2021
2114
226
239
2412
255
262
275
2819
2911
302
3112
328
337
3414
359
366
3711
384
399
401
411
421
436
448
4517
4630
475
4827
492
33.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.22727272727272727
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners35
24.69% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Just the dark, empty line"
ratio0.007
71.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences135
matches
0"She reached the perimeter."
1"It was as if someone"
2"She fished it out, letting"
3"Her voice sounded flat, stripped"
4"She stepped past the first"
5"They smelled sweet, cloying, like"
6"She had to locate the"
7"Her eyes scanned the dark."
8"She dropped her hand to"
9"She slid the brass spikes"
10"It didn't step forward; it"
11"She took three steps forward,"
12"She spun around, heels digging"
13"It pressed against her eardrums"
14"She winced, dropping the stone."
15"It swung on its silver"
16"She didn't scream."
17"It had no neck."
18"It seemed to grow directly"
19"It didn't speak with a"
ratio0.37
30.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences135
matches
0"The wrought-iron gates of Richmond"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"Frost clung to the dead"
3"She reached the perimeter."
4"The ambient rumble of London—the"
5"It was as if someone"
6"Rory gripped the small crescent-shaped"
7"The thumbnail-sized crimson gem beat"
8"She fished it out, letting"
9"Her voice sounded flat, stripped"
10"The dense air swallowed the"
11"She stepped past the first"
12"The temperature jumped ten degrees."
13"The crunch of frozen grass"
14"They smelled sweet, cloying, like"
15"Rory took a slow, deliberate"
16"She had to locate the"
17"The pendant's pulse grew sharper,"
18"A snap broke the quiet."
19"Her eyes scanned the dark."
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It was as if someone had laid a giant palm over the earth, smothering every vibration."
1"The wildflowers began to bow their heads, their petals curling shut as if a heavy footstep were pressing them down one by one, moving in a direct line toward he…"
2"It was tall, impossibly thin, its limbs moving with the stuttering, liquid grace of an insect."
3"It tilted its head, a sharp, jerky movement that ended with its neck bent at an impossible ninety-degree angle."
4"The ground grew soft, mud suctioning her feet, trying to drag her down with every stride."
5"She lay panting on the frosty turf, her breath blooming in the crisp, winter air."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.182
81.1978%