Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V3TVDQCTKDPDYA5ZPVZ5D

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Duration:
34.5s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt groaned, a stubborn brass relic screeching in protest, before the heavy oak door swung inward. Rory stood frozen in the narrow entryway. Her knuckles clamped tightly around a heavy bronze candlestick she had snatched from the sideboard. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim light of the stairwell. Pristine, imposing, and entirely uninvited. The slicked-back platinum blond hair caught the dull yellow bulb of the hallway, casting sharp shadows across his face. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, appraised her with a cool, familiar intensity. He wore a tailored charcoal wool suit, immaculate despite the East London grime outside, and his gloved fingers rested on the superb slender old tapered ivory handle of his cane. "You changed the locks," Lucien said. "Not enough of them." "Evidently." He stepped past her, not waiting for an invitation. The tip of his cane clicked rhythmically against the warped floorboards. The pungent aroma of toasted cardamom and turmeric from the curry house downstairs drifted up through the floorboards, mingling with his faint scent of cedarwood and cold ash. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat, hissed from his perch atop a stack of dusty books and bolted behind a pile of yellowed scrolls. Rory shoved the door shut. She slid the deadbolts back into place, the metal sequence clattering like gunfire in the cramped room. "Eva isn't here." "I am not here for the scholar, Rory." He stopped in the centre of the small room, his gaze sweeping over the chaotic shelves, the scattered research notes, and finally settling on her. "Which means you want something from me. Again." She did not set the candlestick down. The bronze felt solid, a cold weight reassuring her trembling palm. Her fingers pressed against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood reminder of what happened when she let her guard down. "You left Marseille without saying goodbye." "I dislike long farewells. They lack efficiency." "You took my ledger." "I borrowed it." Rory stepped into the room, keeping the sturdy oak table between them. "And I returned it three days later via courier. Undamaged." "The leather spine was cracked." "You'll survive, Luc." He watched her, a slow, dangerous smile curving his lips. The amber eye seemed to capture the flickering light of the desk lamp, glowing with a soft, predatory warmth that made her pulse quicken. He did not look like a man who had spent the last month hunting for her, but she knew the fastidious nature of his patience. A half-demon from Avaros did not forget a debt, especially one of the heart. "You look well," he murmured, his voice a low baritone that vibrated in her chest. "Slightly pale. Perhaps the climate of East London disagrees with you." "The climate is fine. The company is what deteriorated." "Is that why you hid above a tavern? Quite a fall from the heights of Cardiff." He took a slow step forward. "My sources tell me you work for a noodle shop now. A delivery girl. Shocking waste of a brilliant legal mind." "It pays the rent. And humans don't ask me to translate forbidden infernal texts before breakfast." "A fair compromise, I suppose." He reached out, his leather-clad fingers brushing the cover of a thick leather-bound grimoire on the table. "Though I suspect the excitement is sorely lacking." "I like boring, Lucien. I spent three years with an abusive lunatic who thought tracking my phone was a hobby. Boring is a luxury." The humor vanished from his face, replaced by a cold, sharp stillness. "Evan is still in Wales, Rory. I checked." "I didn't ask you to." "I protect my investments." "I am not your investment." She set the candlestick on the table with a dull thud. "And I am not your chérie. We had a deal. I translated the ledger, you helped me disappear from Evan's radar. The transaction finished." "A transaction is complete when both parties agree on the terms." He closed the distance between them, his movements silent and fluid. The cane tap-tapped against the rug. He stopped just inches away, the heat radiating from his body defying the chilly draft of the flat. "We did not agree on the terms of your departure." Rory kept her chin high. She refused to shrink back, even as her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. Cool-headed. She needed to stay cool-headed. "There was nothing left to say." "There was an unpaid debt," he whispered. "Name your price, then. I don't have much money, but I can—" He reached out, his gloved fingers wrapping gently around her chin. He tilted her face upward, forcing her to meet his heterochromatic gaze. The leather felt cool against her skin, but the heat of his palm burned through the fabric. "Do not insult me with talk of coin, Rory." A shiver ran down her spine, a dangerous mix of apprehension and the dark, intoxicating thrill she had tried so hard to forget. Marseille had been a dream of rain, expensive wine, and the dangerous slide of his hands against her hips. She had fled because she recognized the trap. Lucien Moreau was a predator who customized his cages with gold and silk. "I don't have anything else to give you," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "You have your mind. And you have your loyalty, though you guard it like a miser." He leaned in closer, his breath warm against her ear. "The Golden Empress restaurant was hit tonight." Rory froze. The breath caught in her throat. "What?" "Two men. Armed with obsidian blades and wearing the crest of the Red Hand." He released her chin, his expression turning grim. "Your employer, Yu-Fei Cheung, is dead." The room seemed to tilt. Yu-Fei. The kind, elderly Welsh-Chinese woman who had given her a job when she arrived in London with nothing but a bruised rib cage and a fake name. The woman who made her hot ginger tea when the nightmares kept her awake. "No," Rory breathed, her voice cracking. "She was eighty. She had nothing to do with—" "They were not looking for her," Lucien interrupted. His voice was flat, devoid of emotion. "They found a translation of the Malphora sigil in her office drawer. Written in your distinct, elegant hand. You left a trail, Rory." "I didn't think..." She pressed her hands against her temples, the panic rising like a dark tide. "I thought it was just a local business group. She asked me to look at some documents." "She was laundering assets for the triads, chérie. Intelligent people often make the mistake of assuming everyone else is foolish." "Who did this?" Lucien reached into his breast pocket and produced a small folded square of black parchment. He opened it, revealing a crimson symbol comprised of jagged, intersecting lines. "This was pinned to her chest. It is a calling card from the Avaros Syndicate. They know the translator of the Malphora ledger is in London. They are purging anyone who has touched the text." "They're coming for me." "They are already here." A sudden sound shattered the heavy silence of the flat. It was the sharp, splintering crack of the front door downstairs being kicked off its hinges. Ptolemy let out a low yowl and vanished beneath the sofa. Rory looked at the door. Her breath came in short, jagged gasps. "Three deadbolts," Lucien remarked, his voice returning to its dry, elegant tone. He gripped the ivory handle of his cane and pulled. A hiss of steel echoed through the small room as a thin, brilliant silver blade slid from the sheath. "Let us see how well they hold."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"imposing"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"sturdy"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"apprehension"
count1
13
word"predator"
count1
14
word"silk"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"imposing"
2"familiar"
3"intensity"
4"chaotic"
5"weight"
6"reminder"
7"sturdy"
8"warmth"
9"pulse"
10"vibrated"
11"down her spine"
12"apprehension"
13"predator"
14"silk"
15"whisper"
16"shattered"
17"silence"
18"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1278
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount814
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
East1
London2
Eva1
Avaros1
Rory7
Welsh-Chinese1
Lucien6
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.782
wordCount1278
matches
0"not look like a man who had spent the last month hunting for her, but she knew the fastidious nature of his patience"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std19.93
cv0.764
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725
833
950
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145
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3815
3938
4034
4120
423
4362
444
454
4637
4712
4848
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"being kicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences101
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount824
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"thick leather-bound grimoire"
2"thin, brilliant silver blade"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.023058252427184466
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010922330097087379
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean12.65
std7.71
cv0.609
sampleLengths
018
17
215
310
45
519
614
730
86
94
1010
1111
1228
1323
145
1517
163
1733
1815
1911
2024
216
227
234
2415
2510
265
273
2810
2924
3025
3114
3215
3311
349
3522
3621
3716
3822
398
4024
4112
428
435
444
4516
4624
4722
486
4918
56.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38613861386138615
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her knuckles clamped tightly around"
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
2"He wore a tailored charcoal"
3"He stepped past her, not"
4"She slid the deadbolts back"
5"He stopped in the centre"
6"She did not set the"
7"Her fingers pressed against the"
8"He watched her, a slow,"
9"He did not look like"
10"he murmured, his voice a"
11"He took a slow step"
12"He reached out, his leather-clad"
13"She set the candlestick on"
14"He closed the distance between"
15"He stopped just inches away,"
16"She refused to shrink back,"
17"She needed to stay cool-headed."
18"He reached out, his gloved"
19"He tilted her face upward,"
ratio0.492
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences61
matches
0"The third deadbolt groaned, a"
1"Rory stood frozen in the"
2"Her knuckles clamped tightly around"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"The slicked-back platinum blond hair"
5"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
6"He wore a tailored charcoal"
7"He stepped past her, not"
8"The tip of his cane"
9"The pungent aroma of toasted"
10"Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat,"
11"Rory shoved the door shut."
12"She slid the deadbolts back"
13"He stopped in the centre"
14"She did not set the"
15"The bronze felt solid, a"
16"Her fingers pressed against the"
17"Rory stepped into the room,"
18"He watched her, a slow,"
19"The amber eye seemed to"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The amber eye seemed to capture the flickering light of the desk lamp, glowing with a soft, predatory warmth that made her pulse quicken."
1"He did not look like a man who had spent the last month hunting for her, but she knew the fastidious nature of his patience."
2"He stopped just inches away, the heat radiating from his body defying the chilly draft of the flat."
3"Lucien Moreau was a predator who customized his cages with gold and silk."
4"The kind, elderly Welsh-Chinese woman who had given her a job when she arrived in London with nothing but a bruised rib cage and a fake name."
5"The woman who made her hot ginger tea when the nightmares kept her awake."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"He stepped, not waiting for an invitation"
1"he murmured, his voice a low baritone that vibrated in her chest"
2"He closed, his movements silent and fluid"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"He leaned, his breath warm against her ear"
5"He released, his expression turning grim"
6"Rory breathed, her voice cracking"
7"She pressed, the panic rising like a dark tide"
8"Lucien remarked, his voice returning to its dry, elegant tone"
53.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory breathed (breathe)"
3"Lucien interrupted (interrupt)"
4"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.269
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.192
74.7461%